Thanks to Phoenix and Cassie-bear01 for reviewind and being nice Raven
Yeah, now Ideas??? Talon
Come on, I'm helping you! Raven
Yah, like YOUR a great writer? Talon
GRRRRRRRRRR Raven
Chapter 9-
Thera's head buzzed and her heart seemed to pound, or at least, it would have had she still been whole. Around her, stars and dark matter blurred as she raced through existence. I need air, she told herself, though her lungs didn't ache at all. She seemed to be flying just above one swirling blue ribbon, and below an identical one.
Her heart seemed to leap up into her throat as a flash met her eyes, then dissolved into thousands of tiny specks. She swirled through, giving up trying to see the sights around her, then, it was over. She stepped onto a dusty, flat landscape, sparsely surrounded by plant life. Her stomach reeled. She gently placed one hand on her gut and another on her mouth.
"I think I'm going to be sick!" she choked.
"It happens to the best of us." Jack said, grinning. "First time's always the worst."
Thera weakly smiled, having trouble imagining what it would be like, going through that thing so often that person could actually get used to it. Suddenly, the men dressed in really weird clothes popped out of the barren dirt, pointing weapons at them, especially at Thera. She yelped, naturally. Somehow, people had seemed drawn to point weapons at her lately.
"Stand down!" a booming voice commanded, and a balding man stepped forth. "It is SG1."
"Hey dad." Sam said casually, draping her arms around the man's shoulders and giving him a hug. He, in turn, hugged her back.
"Hey honey." he replied coolly.
"Wow!" Thera exclaimed, drawing unwanted attention to her. "You're her dad? That is so freaky!"
"I believe this is Thera?" Jacob Carter said, releasing his daughter. "I see she's adjusted well over the past two years."
"You did get my transmission, right?" Sam asked. Her father nodded, and motioned for them to follow him into the base.
"You didn't think to mind your manners?" N'kiri hissed. "I don't think that was the best way to make a good first impression! By absorbing my memories you absorbed my knowledge! You should have known who he was!"
"Well excuse me for being awestruck! All I knew was that his goa'uld was Selnac!"
"There's another mistake! Never call a To'kra a goa'uld! Never! How would you like it if somebody called you one..."
Thera chose to ignore her simbeote's ramblings and scolding and instead chose to stare in awe around her. The walls were made completely out of a bluish crystal, and heaps of To'kra scurried to and fro.
"Welcome to your new home!" Jacob Carter said as cheerfully as he could. Thera knew he was faking it. "You're not the first teenager we've had. In fact, there's another, right over there."
A thin, handsome young man walked down the corridors. Her previous crush on Jonas was immediatly doused the second she laid eyes on him. Did he think the outfit she was wearing was cool? Or did he think she was just trying to look hot? Was the egyptian make-up N'kiri bullied her into wearing too much? Did she look ok? Did he like her? The boy stopped, looking them over.
"This is Tolm and Kajrenn."
The boy politely extended his hand.
"Tolm." he said politely. So, Kajren was the simbeote.
"Thera." Thera replied sweetly as she could, shaking his hand.
"Now." Selnac's echoing voice interrupted. "If you don't mind, I'd like to have a word with N'kiri. SG1." The To'kra signalled for them all to follow. N'kiri (much to Thera's displeasure) took control and followed.
"I think I'm going to like it here." Thera thought idly to herself, as N'kiri followed the others.
So, what'd ya think? Yes, we will be bringing Daniel in. Don't worry. Also, if you have any ideas, please tell. And don't be discouraged if we don't use them, because the plot is pretty well decided, but any new ideas would be nice. Please and thank-you Talon.
R&R! Or I'll reencarnate Ammonet and set her on you! Just cause Anubis is too busy destroying the cosmos with his little eye-thingy. Yeah, that's right. I'll set a dead goa'uld on you, unless you press that pretty blue button at the bottom of the screen and talk to us. Raven.
R&R
Yeah, now Ideas??? Talon
Come on, I'm helping you! Raven
Yah, like YOUR a great writer? Talon
GRRRRRRRRRR Raven
Chapter 9-
Thera's head buzzed and her heart seemed to pound, or at least, it would have had she still been whole. Around her, stars and dark matter blurred as she raced through existence. I need air, she told herself, though her lungs didn't ache at all. She seemed to be flying just above one swirling blue ribbon, and below an identical one.
Her heart seemed to leap up into her throat as a flash met her eyes, then dissolved into thousands of tiny specks. She swirled through, giving up trying to see the sights around her, then, it was over. She stepped onto a dusty, flat landscape, sparsely surrounded by plant life. Her stomach reeled. She gently placed one hand on her gut and another on her mouth.
"I think I'm going to be sick!" she choked.
"It happens to the best of us." Jack said, grinning. "First time's always the worst."
Thera weakly smiled, having trouble imagining what it would be like, going through that thing so often that person could actually get used to it. Suddenly, the men dressed in really weird clothes popped out of the barren dirt, pointing weapons at them, especially at Thera. She yelped, naturally. Somehow, people had seemed drawn to point weapons at her lately.
"Stand down!" a booming voice commanded, and a balding man stepped forth. "It is SG1."
"Hey dad." Sam said casually, draping her arms around the man's shoulders and giving him a hug. He, in turn, hugged her back.
"Hey honey." he replied coolly.
"Wow!" Thera exclaimed, drawing unwanted attention to her. "You're her dad? That is so freaky!"
"I believe this is Thera?" Jacob Carter said, releasing his daughter. "I see she's adjusted well over the past two years."
"You did get my transmission, right?" Sam asked. Her father nodded, and motioned for them to follow him into the base.
"You didn't think to mind your manners?" N'kiri hissed. "I don't think that was the best way to make a good first impression! By absorbing my memories you absorbed my knowledge! You should have known who he was!"
"Well excuse me for being awestruck! All I knew was that his goa'uld was Selnac!"
"There's another mistake! Never call a To'kra a goa'uld! Never! How would you like it if somebody called you one..."
Thera chose to ignore her simbeote's ramblings and scolding and instead chose to stare in awe around her. The walls were made completely out of a bluish crystal, and heaps of To'kra scurried to and fro.
"Welcome to your new home!" Jacob Carter said as cheerfully as he could. Thera knew he was faking it. "You're not the first teenager we've had. In fact, there's another, right over there."
A thin, handsome young man walked down the corridors. Her previous crush on Jonas was immediatly doused the second she laid eyes on him. Did he think the outfit she was wearing was cool? Or did he think she was just trying to look hot? Was the egyptian make-up N'kiri bullied her into wearing too much? Did she look ok? Did he like her? The boy stopped, looking them over.
"This is Tolm and Kajrenn."
The boy politely extended his hand.
"Tolm." he said politely. So, Kajren was the simbeote.
"Thera." Thera replied sweetly as she could, shaking his hand.
"Now." Selnac's echoing voice interrupted. "If you don't mind, I'd like to have a word with N'kiri. SG1." The To'kra signalled for them all to follow. N'kiri (much to Thera's displeasure) took control and followed.
"I think I'm going to like it here." Thera thought idly to herself, as N'kiri followed the others.
So, what'd ya think? Yes, we will be bringing Daniel in. Don't worry. Also, if you have any ideas, please tell. And don't be discouraged if we don't use them, because the plot is pretty well decided, but any new ideas would be nice. Please and thank-you Talon.
R&R! Or I'll reencarnate Ammonet and set her on you! Just cause Anubis is too busy destroying the cosmos with his little eye-thingy. Yeah, that's right. I'll set a dead goa'uld on you, unless you press that pretty blue button at the bottom of the screen and talk to us. Raven.
R&R