A.N I wrote this chapter for all of you to make sure that none of you feel the need to kidnap me...I was a tad afraid that one of you might get that idea and then pass it on to everyone else....*is scared* *hears noise* *jumps*
Disclaimer: I do not own anything you recognise. Period. End of discussion.
I know this chapter is much shorter and actually looks long, but, alas, it is not. You would be fooled by two chapters worth of thank yous...So many thank yous...Not that I mind!!!!
Alas, this is even shorter than Ch. 10. *is embarrassed* But, I'm sure most of you have been wondering what was about to commence at the end of the previous chapter, and this chapter, as short as it may be, tells you just that.
Also, I know many of you may note the fact that Alanna is often in a dress in this fic. Well, I don't know why, but maybe she's feels more feminine in a dress. I know I would...feeling masculine in a dress is wrong....If your wondering why this chapter and the next chapter are more depressing it is because I was listening to Edelweiss the ENTIRE time. I just kept playing it over and over again. Why Edelweiss you ask? One, Edelweiss is the song that my choir is singing for ISSMA contest. Two, Edelweiss is a slower, more sad song which helps me keep the mood. It just didn't help me keep the mood when A*Teens "Dancing Queen" which is perky and happy and fast starts playing. Bad things could've happened....Comical things might have happened where it should have been dead serious.
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Chapter 11
Alanna knew when she walked down the stairs to dinner that she would have to tell him. She just didn't know how to without breaking his heart.
Now, as she sat across from him at dinner and saw his eyes full of concern and love that it would be harder than she thought.
She had come to a conclusion during her nap. She loved Jonathan and that meant she had to tell him. She owed it to him to tell him. She owed it to herself. She didn't know how this would all work out, but Jon would help her figure it out. He always had before.
"George, I need to tell you something," she said, her voice trembling. She didn't realize how scared she looked to George or possibly how pathetic she looked. And right now she didn't care.
"Of course, anything, darling," he replied, leaning closer to her and taking her hands in his.
"George, I don't love you anymore," she said, clamping her eyes shut so she wouldn't have to see the hurt look on his face. When she didn't hear anything, she slowly opened her eyes to look at him: he was staring at her in disbelief.
"Alanna, I think I may have heard you incorrectly. It sound like you said you didn't love me anymore," he said, his voice soft and hurt.
"You heard me correctly," she said, tearing filling her eyes.
He looked down at his plate and pushed it away. Taking a deep breath, he said, "Shall I get divorce papers then?"
Now she was the one to stare. She had not been expecting him to give in so easily. She had thought thtat she would have to tell him everything. The entire story.
"I suppose..."
George stood up to leave.
"George, wait!"
He stopped.
"I'm so sorry, George."
He nodded at turned away. He left the hall and climbed up the stairs.
The ominous tears began to flow freely. It was so bad that Alanna fell to her knees on the marble floor, covered it tears.
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I hope you guys won't be too offended about how many times Alanna cries between now and the next chapter. She's like Niagra Falls, I'm telling you! It's the hormones..She must be having a hormonal imbalance.
Good news! I am ahead! I shall be starting Ch. 13 soon!!! This is amazing for me! I'm ahead!!!
Chapter 10 Thank yous:
kecharafaith4lyf: What exactly does your long name mean? Thank you! George has his life planned out. Don't worry; I don't kill him. *evil grin* We shall see about our dahling Jonathan and Alanna. Course, I don't even know. I was hoping, like Alanna, that Jonathan knew. Wow, good question about why Alanna is falling in love with Jon now. Maybe it was because she didn't feel like she loved George anymore and that Jon was the first man that made her feel special. Or, that he was the only one of their close group that was unhappy in his own marriage. I don't know. Alanna's strange like that though.
Shelly Salmalin: YAY!! I really AM doing MUCH better!! *is happy* *starts dancing* *boyfriend watches with a raised eyebrow* What????? *boyfriend shakes head* *gets mad* What? *folds arms across her chest* What? Tell me! What'd I do now?
Lady Lucy A/J 4ever: Is it really that complicated? I didn't think it was that complicated. You'll have to email me about what happens. Can't guarantee that I'll tell you seeing as I hardly know, but I can hint about Ch. 12 since it's written.
ask_my_mom: *looks at her like she's crazy* All right, little missy, you think you can waltz right into my review board and tell me what to write? Wrongo. If you want a A/G *says A/G like it's a cuss word* fic, you go look for another author. I don't have to be a good little queen. In fact, I usually am not. There is no way you could get me to write an A/G fic. And if that's what you want, get out of here. *glares fiercely*
All other readers: Please do not take offence to anything I said to "ask_my_mom." I was pissed. Venting my anger at her words.
Lord of the Rings luver: Yeah, sorry about that. Please pay not heed to the note above to ask_my_mom. K? Good. I did. Thanks!!!
White-wolf: Maybe you will. All I can say is "Poor George." Anyway, that is so kind of you!!! "And If you want me to live -I'm not sure which way you want it at the moment ;)- break it to George gently" LMAO!! LMFAO!!!!!!!! *hysterical laughter*
Chopstix*: Yes, poor George..He's fat! HEE!! Now, Jon on the other hand is still perfectly muscled and OO!!
a fan of ur fan fic: I'm working!!!! Here you go!! Be happy, little fan!! Thankees!!
Keita: *sadly* I wish I knew.....
veralidaine: Yeah, maybe the goddess could come and help. Not sure though. Course, we still have to get Alanna and her lazy bum out of Pirate's Swoop and back to her schnooky poo. I'm so glad someone is in character! Yay for George....What am I saying??? Have I cracked??? *panics* *has nervous breakdown*
Jossie: Yay! I'm forgiven!!! Woo!! The voice reminded me of Faithful too. I was going to add that Alanna felt like she was talking to Faithful, but it slipped my mind. I can't promise that because I already told you that it would be short in the previous chapter. LOL! Hee! Yea, we are so alike. I have a set date for this chapter and in order to stick to both a date and review schedule I must set a date, but cannot update until I get the required reviews and when I do, I must update on the date intended. Therefore, creating scarcity.
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I am going to ask for AT LEAST 220 reviews for this chapter.
~Queen of Fluff
Disclaimer: I do not own anything you recognise. Period. End of discussion.
I know this chapter is much shorter and actually looks long, but, alas, it is not. You would be fooled by two chapters worth of thank yous...So many thank yous...Not that I mind!!!!
Alas, this is even shorter than Ch. 10. *is embarrassed* But, I'm sure most of you have been wondering what was about to commence at the end of the previous chapter, and this chapter, as short as it may be, tells you just that.
Also, I know many of you may note the fact that Alanna is often in a dress in this fic. Well, I don't know why, but maybe she's feels more feminine in a dress. I know I would...feeling masculine in a dress is wrong....If your wondering why this chapter and the next chapter are more depressing it is because I was listening to Edelweiss the ENTIRE time. I just kept playing it over and over again. Why Edelweiss you ask? One, Edelweiss is the song that my choir is singing for ISSMA contest. Two, Edelweiss is a slower, more sad song which helps me keep the mood. It just didn't help me keep the mood when A*Teens "Dancing Queen" which is perky and happy and fast starts playing. Bad things could've happened....Comical things might have happened where it should have been dead serious.
*************
Chapter 11
Alanna knew when she walked down the stairs to dinner that she would have to tell him. She just didn't know how to without breaking his heart.
Now, as she sat across from him at dinner and saw his eyes full of concern and love that it would be harder than she thought.
She had come to a conclusion during her nap. She loved Jonathan and that meant she had to tell him. She owed it to him to tell him. She owed it to herself. She didn't know how this would all work out, but Jon would help her figure it out. He always had before.
"George, I need to tell you something," she said, her voice trembling. She didn't realize how scared she looked to George or possibly how pathetic she looked. And right now she didn't care.
"Of course, anything, darling," he replied, leaning closer to her and taking her hands in his.
"George, I don't love you anymore," she said, clamping her eyes shut so she wouldn't have to see the hurt look on his face. When she didn't hear anything, she slowly opened her eyes to look at him: he was staring at her in disbelief.
"Alanna, I think I may have heard you incorrectly. It sound like you said you didn't love me anymore," he said, his voice soft and hurt.
"You heard me correctly," she said, tearing filling her eyes.
He looked down at his plate and pushed it away. Taking a deep breath, he said, "Shall I get divorce papers then?"
Now she was the one to stare. She had not been expecting him to give in so easily. She had thought thtat she would have to tell him everything. The entire story.
"I suppose..."
George stood up to leave.
"George, wait!"
He stopped.
"I'm so sorry, George."
He nodded at turned away. He left the hall and climbed up the stairs.
The ominous tears began to flow freely. It was so bad that Alanna fell to her knees on the marble floor, covered it tears.
*********
I hope you guys won't be too offended about how many times Alanna cries between now and the next chapter. She's like Niagra Falls, I'm telling you! It's the hormones..She must be having a hormonal imbalance.
Good news! I am ahead! I shall be starting Ch. 13 soon!!! This is amazing for me! I'm ahead!!!
Chapter 10 Thank yous:
kecharafaith4lyf: What exactly does your long name mean? Thank you! George has his life planned out. Don't worry; I don't kill him. *evil grin* We shall see about our dahling Jonathan and Alanna. Course, I don't even know. I was hoping, like Alanna, that Jonathan knew. Wow, good question about why Alanna is falling in love with Jon now. Maybe it was because she didn't feel like she loved George anymore and that Jon was the first man that made her feel special. Or, that he was the only one of their close group that was unhappy in his own marriage. I don't know. Alanna's strange like that though.
Shelly Salmalin: YAY!! I really AM doing MUCH better!! *is happy* *starts dancing* *boyfriend watches with a raised eyebrow* What????? *boyfriend shakes head* *gets mad* What? *folds arms across her chest* What? Tell me! What'd I do now?
Lady Lucy A/J 4ever: Is it really that complicated? I didn't think it was that complicated. You'll have to email me about what happens. Can't guarantee that I'll tell you seeing as I hardly know, but I can hint about Ch. 12 since it's written.
ask_my_mom: *looks at her like she's crazy* All right, little missy, you think you can waltz right into my review board and tell me what to write? Wrongo. If you want a A/G *says A/G like it's a cuss word* fic, you go look for another author. I don't have to be a good little queen. In fact, I usually am not. There is no way you could get me to write an A/G fic. And if that's what you want, get out of here. *glares fiercely*
All other readers: Please do not take offence to anything I said to "ask_my_mom." I was pissed. Venting my anger at her words.
Lord of the Rings luver: Yeah, sorry about that. Please pay not heed to the note above to ask_my_mom. K? Good. I did. Thanks!!!
White-wolf: Maybe you will. All I can say is "Poor George." Anyway, that is so kind of you!!! "And If you want me to live -I'm not sure which way you want it at the moment ;)- break it to George gently" LMAO!! LMFAO!!!!!!!! *hysterical laughter*
Chopstix*: Yes, poor George..He's fat! HEE!! Now, Jon on the other hand is still perfectly muscled and OO!!
a fan of ur fan fic: I'm working!!!! Here you go!! Be happy, little fan!! Thankees!!
Keita: *sadly* I wish I knew.....
veralidaine: Yeah, maybe the goddess could come and help. Not sure though. Course, we still have to get Alanna and her lazy bum out of Pirate's Swoop and back to her schnooky poo. I'm so glad someone is in character! Yay for George....What am I saying??? Have I cracked??? *panics* *has nervous breakdown*
Jossie: Yay! I'm forgiven!!! Woo!! The voice reminded me of Faithful too. I was going to add that Alanna felt like she was talking to Faithful, but it slipped my mind. I can't promise that because I already told you that it would be short in the previous chapter. LOL! Hee! Yea, we are so alike. I have a set date for this chapter and in order to stick to both a date and review schedule I must set a date, but cannot update until I get the required reviews and when I do, I must update on the date intended. Therefore, creating scarcity.
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I am going to ask for AT LEAST 220 reviews for this chapter.
~Queen of Fluff