A.N Okay this is a poem I wrote, it literally came out of nowhere I was
just
writing a
book report for my English teacher on I never promised you a rose garden and
suddenly the words my long forgotten garden came to my head. anyway this
fic is about Snape thinking about a lot of things some being how he was starting
to loose it after so long, and after so much suffering and how he thinks it kind of
funny that the most simplest thing in the world brought him back. any way the
kid can be any one you want but I had a specific character in mind when I wrote
this tell my how you think it is and if you think this poem really doesn't fit
Severus I'll keep it in mind when I write the next thank you for you time and
please review!!!
My Long Forgotten Garden
I never said a garden would last forever
It will slowly fade away like some little daydream
When the flowers bloom in spring things seem so simple
Then the winter comes rolling in like a flood of water
It drowns away the sun it storms without a god
Things seem so simple on a summer day
Flowers will wither and die
Like a tragic fairytale
Has no one said yet that though may think life so simple and easy
Things will go
And
Things will die just like in that garden
I don't know how to explain what I mean
Once when I was younger I didn't care about a thing
Now I'm old and a bit wiser
But not old enough for you to see
The wisdom that falls at my feet
I have seen so much
Though my looks may be youthful
Things are not what they appear
At a fist look and glance
Sometimes I wonder why I bother to wait
For a forgotten garden
Things will never be the same
My garden has gone
Just a single rose petal that is all that is left
I am much smarter now but the price was my garden
My place of rest my tears of snow
That's all that remains
The roses would touch my cheek promising false lies
But who cares I now they lied with no trouble
But as for me you will see that's not the case.
So sad is the rose though they say it's happy
They are a show of love just like a red heart
But the thing no one knows they long for love still
Though they now they will not live once their stem is broken
But they don't care they still wish
To now love still
So sad is their fate
For that is they told me so
In my garden of simple things
Simple yet majestic
What beauty you will see lies with in broken fences
At the corner of every street there lies a flower fighting to survive
Look and then smile
For you see now
I know it's so simple
It took me many wanderings and my precious flowers
But I see now at last I see what I could not before
I see the beauty now as you sit and smile with a carefree look
Just an innocent child
How could you see beyond your walls
Of happy memories
Some you say are so sad
But every rose as its thorns now
So don't look at me as if I lost it all
You know I'm still here with my garden
I think I found mine
Just try not to lose
All that is precious
Keep it locked within your soul
A thing from happier days, isn't it so lovely?
Just another springtime of things lost long ago
Or maybe it's just that for us it seems like an eternity
But it will come back
Now you see me smile, for I saw my garden
There's only a little left of what once was
Many flowers, but don't you see?
It's my rose, my bushes of roses
They are what survived my fall
So I hope they last you
They are wild
Abandoned now I guess I should tend them
But there is a beauty now about the wild and free
Maybe I should leave it as it is
Sometimes things happen for some strange reason
But I guess in the end this is much better
So little child don't loose your garden
So you can smile still though all the years may pass
Still I now you might fall like the mightiest do
So sad is a garden lost and forgotten
I should know mine was lost
So long ago
Oh well this is my tale
Of my garden
And a part long lost to me
It's incredible what the simplest things can do
The simplest thing in the world brought back my garden
A smile
All it took was a smile from a child
A child that did not fear me
Nor knows any hate for me
A smile was all it took.
What an innocent child.
A.N So what do you think??? I know I wrote this poem but something about it makes
me feel so proud of it you now maybe I'm letting it get to my head but I think I
did really good on this one please review please I beg of you!!!!
writing a
book report for my English teacher on I never promised you a rose garden and
suddenly the words my long forgotten garden came to my head. anyway this
fic is about Snape thinking about a lot of things some being how he was starting
to loose it after so long, and after so much suffering and how he thinks it kind of
funny that the most simplest thing in the world brought him back. any way the
kid can be any one you want but I had a specific character in mind when I wrote
this tell my how you think it is and if you think this poem really doesn't fit
Severus I'll keep it in mind when I write the next thank you for you time and
please review!!!
My Long Forgotten Garden
I never said a garden would last forever
It will slowly fade away like some little daydream
When the flowers bloom in spring things seem so simple
Then the winter comes rolling in like a flood of water
It drowns away the sun it storms without a god
Things seem so simple on a summer day
Flowers will wither and die
Like a tragic fairytale
Has no one said yet that though may think life so simple and easy
Things will go
And
Things will die just like in that garden
I don't know how to explain what I mean
Once when I was younger I didn't care about a thing
Now I'm old and a bit wiser
But not old enough for you to see
The wisdom that falls at my feet
I have seen so much
Though my looks may be youthful
Things are not what they appear
At a fist look and glance
Sometimes I wonder why I bother to wait
For a forgotten garden
Things will never be the same
My garden has gone
Just a single rose petal that is all that is left
I am much smarter now but the price was my garden
My place of rest my tears of snow
That's all that remains
The roses would touch my cheek promising false lies
But who cares I now they lied with no trouble
But as for me you will see that's not the case.
So sad is the rose though they say it's happy
They are a show of love just like a red heart
But the thing no one knows they long for love still
Though they now they will not live once their stem is broken
But they don't care they still wish
To now love still
So sad is their fate
For that is they told me so
In my garden of simple things
Simple yet majestic
What beauty you will see lies with in broken fences
At the corner of every street there lies a flower fighting to survive
Look and then smile
For you see now
I know it's so simple
It took me many wanderings and my precious flowers
But I see now at last I see what I could not before
I see the beauty now as you sit and smile with a carefree look
Just an innocent child
How could you see beyond your walls
Of happy memories
Some you say are so sad
But every rose as its thorns now
So don't look at me as if I lost it all
You know I'm still here with my garden
I think I found mine
Just try not to lose
All that is precious
Keep it locked within your soul
A thing from happier days, isn't it so lovely?
Just another springtime of things lost long ago
Or maybe it's just that for us it seems like an eternity
But it will come back
Now you see me smile, for I saw my garden
There's only a little left of what once was
Many flowers, but don't you see?
It's my rose, my bushes of roses
They are what survived my fall
So I hope they last you
They are wild
Abandoned now I guess I should tend them
But there is a beauty now about the wild and free
Maybe I should leave it as it is
Sometimes things happen for some strange reason
But I guess in the end this is much better
So little child don't loose your garden
So you can smile still though all the years may pass
Still I now you might fall like the mightiest do
So sad is a garden lost and forgotten
I should know mine was lost
So long ago
Oh well this is my tale
Of my garden
And a part long lost to me
It's incredible what the simplest things can do
The simplest thing in the world brought back my garden
A smile
All it took was a smile from a child
A child that did not fear me
Nor knows any hate for me
A smile was all it took.
What an innocent child.
A.N So what do you think??? I know I wrote this poem but something about it makes
me feel so proud of it you now maybe I'm letting it get to my head but I think I
did really good on this one please review please I beg of you!!!!
