* Updated... I do appreciate the help but you were being ~ or sounding very
stuck up, and I don't take lightly to that. I would like some help, but I do
want to keep this, my own as well. I am sure you will understand this. If I was
being snotty to you, I'm SORRY but I was just sticking up for my self, as it did
sound like you were criticizing everything I was doing.
I know that it's not going to be the best fic, I am not a writer ~ this
was purely something I started for fun. And I know that it might not make sense
~ which is where the help is needed, if you tell me where its all mixed up, I
will re-write it.
Please don't freak out on me again, this is not being snotty and I'll
admit that I read your reviews the wrong way, but they are a little harsh. You
help is welcome, with the fic ~ the muddled up bits that to the readers don't
make sense, and if you want to help me with some of the punctuation, that is
fine, just if we start all over with out the snotty-ness from both of us.
And by the way, reading it again, I have spotted a few mistakes... so
thank-you for pointing them out! I am working on them now ~ which is a good
thing, because I have writers block! :o(*
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Second sorting
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The sorting ceremony had finished, and there was a good range of varieties
of new students in each house ~ the boy who Peeves pulled tongues at was in
Gryffindor; his name was Orli Enoch. (*He is a vital part in the story, that's
why he was the only one named.) He had short, strawberry blonde coloured hair,
blue eyes and was about 5ft tall. After he was put into Gryffindor he sat in
front of Harry, he blushed and looked past him.
"Welcome to another year at Hogwarts." said the head master, standing up.
The hall went quiet, and everyone looked up and the old, but caring man.
"Firstly I'd like to remind the first year students, and some of the older
pupils as well, as they don't seem to listen," he continued, looking over at the
Weasley twins - as he said the last bit.
"That the forbidden forest is out of bounds - hence the name. Secondly, I'd like
to thank Madam Hooch, for agreeing to start some night flying lessons, which
will start next week, for all you Quidditch fans, or all who want to learn how
to fly.
"And thirdly to our new Defence against the dark arts teacher ~ Professor
Kewley. Who has, by the way, also agreed to start a duelling-club, once term
starts properly!" everyone started clapping, and there were a few excited
whispers about the 'night flying lessons' and the 'duelling club'. Eventually
they died down again, after hearing the cough or their head master.
"And finally, I wish to tell you about two other students, who will be
Starting in fifth year. But before you meet them there are a few things I must
tell you. Kerlic and Magenta are the only two members of their family who got
away from Voldemort and his followers; they come from Italy but do speak
English. They have had a pretty hard time lately; they had to fight to save
their lives on the odd occasion, also, they have had to make their own way over
to England, from Italy with only a bit of money.
"You may have read about them in the 'Daily Prophet' a few times. But
please do not ask them about what they have just been through, one cannot
imagine the horror they have witnessed these last few weeks. " Dumbledore
trailed off standing there silent for a moment.
"They used to go to a magical school called - 'Magia Legno' in a little
small town in Italy (*yeah, I'm working on a small town. If any of you know
Italy, and know of a small town, feel free to help. Thanks!) Unfortunately, this
was one of many buildings that was destroyed buy Voldemort and his follows, so
that is why they are starting here. I hope you will make them feel welcome.
"So with out further a due, please welcome Kerlic and Magenta Ansonia."
The door to the Great Hall opened - standing there were two twin girls, of the
age 15. One had shoulder length straight brown hair, the underneath was a dark
blue ~ almost black and she had the most piercing baby blue eyes you could ever
imagine, this was Kerlic. The other twin had long black hair, that trailed most
the way down her back, her eye's where different to her sisters; she had big
chocolate coloured eyes, that made you want to melt - this was Magenta. They
both carried what looked like a purse attached to a strap, on their shoulders -
these contained their wands.
It was easy to make out which twin was who, because of the differences in
them. Harry like the rest of the hall was looking at the twins closely. He was
trying to tell them apart, making a mental note of what twins were like - their
characteristics, the way they presented them selves... he noticed that the twins
looked confident, but the one with the longer hair (*he doesn't know the names
yet) seemed more so than her sister. She seemed to be the more grown up one, and
the way she was linking her sisters' arm and looking at her - she gave off the
impression that she was over-protective of her sister, and if anyone should harm
her in any way - would pay!
The other twin was still confident looking, but something about those sad
baby blue eyes, told a different story.
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"Will everyone join me in giving Kerlic, and Magenta a true Hogwarts
welcome." Said Dumbledore, pointing at each of the twins as he said their names.
With that everybody in the hall stood up and started to clap, even the
Slytherins - as Professors Snape gave them one of his 'famous' looks. There were
'HEYS' and 'WELCOMES' and even the Ghosts came to join in. Nearly headless Nick
went up to them ~
"I hope to see you in Gryffindor fellow Hogwarts student." Then the other
ghosts, from the other houses did the same, first was the Grey Lady.
"Two smart looking girls like you're selves, bound to see you in
Ravenclaw." Then the Fat Friar came up he was so excited he float through them -
making them shiver.
"Hufflepuff is the house you want to be, work hard us Hufflepuffs!" he
said, floating off again. Then the Baron came up, he just floated round the
twins for a second then he floated off back to the Slytherin table.
As the twins started walking down through the hall, they heard little
whispers from the tables that made them laugh.
"They're fine." Said Dean Thomas.
"Wonder what house they'll be in?" Said Justin Finch Fletchley.
"They won't be in Slytherin, will they Draco?" said Pansy Parkinson, who
was sitting a few seats down from Malfoy Jnr. One of the twins stopped and
looked over at the Slytherin table.
"Why did you stop?" Kerlic looked at her sister, she was looking across
the hall, and staring hard the expression on her face was easy to make out -
pure hatred.
"Malfoy." Whispered Magenta. Kerlic looked behind her sister and was
shocked to see the boy with the white blonde hair, sitting there, looking amused
with something. She then turned to the front of the hall - straight at
Dumbledore.
"You never said we'd be schooling with a Malfoy, Dumbledore!" she said,
getting her wand out of her purse, she pointed it in Malfoy's direction. Magenta
followed.
"Kerlic, Magenta Ansonia, we do not disarm other students." Dumbledore
said in a worried tone.
"He's a MALFOY, Dumbledore." Said Magenta.
"Girls, I am well aware of who he is, being as he has been in this school
for 5 years. But I also know that he is innocent!" he replied with a look that
didn't believe what he was saying. Harry noticed Malfoy smirk - Dumbledore, who
was looking at the twins didn't. The new 5th years put their wands back into
their purses - making sure they didn't take their eyes off Malfoy. They stood
looking at him for a few more seconds then continued walking up to the top of
the hall.
McGonagall stood up, and walked over to the stool that was sitting neatly in the
middle of the platform. She then placed the old, tatty looking school hat on top
of it.
"As with any new students who arrive here at Hogwarts, the Ansonia's will
have to be sorted into a house. They will be doing this in exactly the same way
everyone else in this hall was sorted - via the Sorting Hat!" McGonagall said,
she waited for a minute - the twins just stared at it not expecting what it was
going to do.
Just when they thought it wasn't going to except them - it opened its
mouth and began to sing. The twins stared at the hat in amazement - They had
never seen a talking hat before, never mind a singing one.
"I normally sing, once a year,
To ickle firsties, from far and near,
But this is the second time, in one day,
For the Ansonia twins, so please make way,
So say hello to Magenta and Kerlic,
What house? Let me pick.
Where shall I put them? Let me see,
In which house, they will be,
Will they be in Gryffindor?
Slytherin? Hufflepuff? Or Ravenclaw?
There is nothing I can't see,
There is nothing you can hide from me.
Gryffindor's the brave kind,
Ravenclaw's have a ready mind,
Slytherin are cunning and buff,
And unafraid to toil, is Hufflepuff.
So put me on, over your eyes,
And I'll look, to see what lies,
For your future, at Hogwarts,
To see which way, you'll get taught.
There is no other hat like me,
Look near and far, and you will see,
'Cos I'm the only self-thinking kind,
The only one, who can read you're mind.
So welcome two 15 year olds,
Who are bubbly, loyal, and bold?
They have travelled from Italia,
Please welcome Kerlic and Magenta.
"Magenta, do you want to be sorted first?" McGonagall asked her, Magenta
nodded, and walked up and sat on the stool, McGonagall put the sorting hat on
her head.
"Better watch out of for that other one, Draco." Said Crabbe, turning to
Malfoy.
"She doesn't seem to like you much," he continued. Malfoy just shrugged
his shoulders, and turned back to face the front.
"Ooh you're are difficult, I see bits of every house in you! Hmm right
then, let's say ~ GRYFFINDOR!" the hat shouted. Magenta got up and walked over
to the Gryffindor table. Everyone clapped and cheered.
"Ay Draco, wouldn't it be funny if we got the other one, in our house?"
Said Goyle, laughing.
"Don't be stupid, you idiot. She won't be in Slytherin; she wouldn't act
like she just did if she were a true Slytherin. No, I'll say she'll be in
Gryffindor - all talk, no action. I mean, like they were going to curse me!" he
said laughing, Crabbe and Goyle laughed as well. They all looked forward at
Kerlic to see where her destiny lay.
She nervously sat down on the stool looking at all the faces looking back
at her. She saw Malfoy - the guy she hated. She also saw her sister - smiling up
at her, with a big Cheshire cat smile. And the last person she saw before the
hat went over her head, was a teenage boy, with jet black hair - messy, green
eyes, and if she was not mistaking, a lightening scar on the right side of his
forehead. She didn't have much chance to look, as Professor McGonagall had
placed the Sorting Hat over her head. The hat didn't say much ~
"GRYFFINDOR!" it shouted. The hall all cheered and clapped again.
McGonagall removed the hat from her head, and she went to sit next to her sister
at the Gryffindor table.
"Well that is everything of importance. Now the only thing left to do is
to eat." Said Dumbledore, and every single plate in the hall, filled up with
delicious food.
"I'm Seamus Finningan." Said Seamus, to Magenta and Kerlic.
"I'll show you around if ya want. Wouldn't want you to get lost now, would
we?" said Seamus.
"Ignore him." said Fred.
"Yeah, he'll get you lost, not on purpose of course. But let's just say,
our Seamus is a bit on the clumsy side." said George.
"Ha, Ha, very funny. You're only saying that because you want to show them
around." Said Seamus.
"I said it, because it's true." Said Fred, laughing.
"Yeah, and we want to show them around." Said George, smiling.
"What makes you think, they want you two? When they could have myself and
Neville here." Said Dean Thomas, and he and Neville, both smirked at the Weasley
twins.
"You two, I don't think so." Said George, and everyone started to laugh.
"Listen to you all, you talk as if they're not here." Said Hermione.
"Yeah, it's disgusting." Said Harry.
"Exactly, because we are going to show them around." Said Ron. He and
Harry started laughing.
"Ronald Weasley, Harry Potter... I didn't know you had it in you. Well
done." Said Dean.
"Excuse me." Said Magenta, looking over at the lads.
"Do you mind asking us, if we want you to show us around!!!" Said Kerlic.
"Oh forgive me, Madams. Vould you like a tour of 'Le Hogwarts' by deux
fine Monsieur's?" Said George.
"No." Said Kerlic, Fred and George's faces fell.
"From any of you." Said Magenta, all the other lads' faces fell as well.
"And by the way, we're Italian, not French." Said Kerlic
"Sì, ma noi ancora nonli desideri sono aiuto. Grazie!" Said magenta, and
her and Kerlic, got up and walked to the entrance of the Great hall.
"What did they just say?" Said George
"I dunno, but I liked it." Said Fred
"Oww, what was that for?" Said Fred, Angelina had just elbowed him in the
chest.
"Work it out." Angelina said, kind of annoyed
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*Blegh that sucked… :o(the bottom half hasn't been changed yet. I'm not in a
writing mood at the moment! But will change it soon! *
stuck up, and I don't take lightly to that. I would like some help, but I do
want to keep this, my own as well. I am sure you will understand this. If I was
being snotty to you, I'm SORRY but I was just sticking up for my self, as it did
sound like you were criticizing everything I was doing.
I know that it's not going to be the best fic, I am not a writer ~ this
was purely something I started for fun. And I know that it might not make sense
~ which is where the help is needed, if you tell me where its all mixed up, I
will re-write it.
Please don't freak out on me again, this is not being snotty and I'll
admit that I read your reviews the wrong way, but they are a little harsh. You
help is welcome, with the fic ~ the muddled up bits that to the readers don't
make sense, and if you want to help me with some of the punctuation, that is
fine, just if we start all over with out the snotty-ness from both of us.
And by the way, reading it again, I have spotted a few mistakes... so
thank-you for pointing them out! I am working on them now ~ which is a good
thing, because I have writers block! :o(*
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Second sorting
_~_~_~_~_~_~_~
The sorting ceremony had finished, and there was a good range of varieties
of new students in each house ~ the boy who Peeves pulled tongues at was in
Gryffindor; his name was Orli Enoch. (*He is a vital part in the story, that's
why he was the only one named.) He had short, strawberry blonde coloured hair,
blue eyes and was about 5ft tall. After he was put into Gryffindor he sat in
front of Harry, he blushed and looked past him.
"Welcome to another year at Hogwarts." said the head master, standing up.
The hall went quiet, and everyone looked up and the old, but caring man.
"Firstly I'd like to remind the first year students, and some of the older
pupils as well, as they don't seem to listen," he continued, looking over at the
Weasley twins - as he said the last bit.
"That the forbidden forest is out of bounds - hence the name. Secondly, I'd like
to thank Madam Hooch, for agreeing to start some night flying lessons, which
will start next week, for all you Quidditch fans, or all who want to learn how
to fly.
"And thirdly to our new Defence against the dark arts teacher ~ Professor
Kewley. Who has, by the way, also agreed to start a duelling-club, once term
starts properly!" everyone started clapping, and there were a few excited
whispers about the 'night flying lessons' and the 'duelling club'. Eventually
they died down again, after hearing the cough or their head master.
"And finally, I wish to tell you about two other students, who will be
Starting in fifth year. But before you meet them there are a few things I must
tell you. Kerlic and Magenta are the only two members of their family who got
away from Voldemort and his followers; they come from Italy but do speak
English. They have had a pretty hard time lately; they had to fight to save
their lives on the odd occasion, also, they have had to make their own way over
to England, from Italy with only a bit of money.
"You may have read about them in the 'Daily Prophet' a few times. But
please do not ask them about what they have just been through, one cannot
imagine the horror they have witnessed these last few weeks. " Dumbledore
trailed off standing there silent for a moment.
"They used to go to a magical school called - 'Magia Legno' in a little
small town in Italy (*yeah, I'm working on a small town. If any of you know
Italy, and know of a small town, feel free to help. Thanks!) Unfortunately, this
was one of many buildings that was destroyed buy Voldemort and his follows, so
that is why they are starting here. I hope you will make them feel welcome.
"So with out further a due, please welcome Kerlic and Magenta Ansonia."
The door to the Great Hall opened - standing there were two twin girls, of the
age 15. One had shoulder length straight brown hair, the underneath was a dark
blue ~ almost black and she had the most piercing baby blue eyes you could ever
imagine, this was Kerlic. The other twin had long black hair, that trailed most
the way down her back, her eye's where different to her sisters; she had big
chocolate coloured eyes, that made you want to melt - this was Magenta. They
both carried what looked like a purse attached to a strap, on their shoulders -
these contained their wands.
It was easy to make out which twin was who, because of the differences in
them. Harry like the rest of the hall was looking at the twins closely. He was
trying to tell them apart, making a mental note of what twins were like - their
characteristics, the way they presented them selves... he noticed that the twins
looked confident, but the one with the longer hair (*he doesn't know the names
yet) seemed more so than her sister. She seemed to be the more grown up one, and
the way she was linking her sisters' arm and looking at her - she gave off the
impression that she was over-protective of her sister, and if anyone should harm
her in any way - would pay!
The other twin was still confident looking, but something about those sad
baby blue eyes, told a different story.
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"Will everyone join me in giving Kerlic, and Magenta a true Hogwarts
welcome." Said Dumbledore, pointing at each of the twins as he said their names.
With that everybody in the hall stood up and started to clap, even the
Slytherins - as Professors Snape gave them one of his 'famous' looks. There were
'HEYS' and 'WELCOMES' and even the Ghosts came to join in. Nearly headless Nick
went up to them ~
"I hope to see you in Gryffindor fellow Hogwarts student." Then the other
ghosts, from the other houses did the same, first was the Grey Lady.
"Two smart looking girls like you're selves, bound to see you in
Ravenclaw." Then the Fat Friar came up he was so excited he float through them -
making them shiver.
"Hufflepuff is the house you want to be, work hard us Hufflepuffs!" he
said, floating off again. Then the Baron came up, he just floated round the
twins for a second then he floated off back to the Slytherin table.
As the twins started walking down through the hall, they heard little
whispers from the tables that made them laugh.
"They're fine." Said Dean Thomas.
"Wonder what house they'll be in?" Said Justin Finch Fletchley.
"They won't be in Slytherin, will they Draco?" said Pansy Parkinson, who
was sitting a few seats down from Malfoy Jnr. One of the twins stopped and
looked over at the Slytherin table.
"Why did you stop?" Kerlic looked at her sister, she was looking across
the hall, and staring hard the expression on her face was easy to make out -
pure hatred.
"Malfoy." Whispered Magenta. Kerlic looked behind her sister and was
shocked to see the boy with the white blonde hair, sitting there, looking amused
with something. She then turned to the front of the hall - straight at
Dumbledore.
"You never said we'd be schooling with a Malfoy, Dumbledore!" she said,
getting her wand out of her purse, she pointed it in Malfoy's direction. Magenta
followed.
"Kerlic, Magenta Ansonia, we do not disarm other students." Dumbledore
said in a worried tone.
"He's a MALFOY, Dumbledore." Said Magenta.
"Girls, I am well aware of who he is, being as he has been in this school
for 5 years. But I also know that he is innocent!" he replied with a look that
didn't believe what he was saying. Harry noticed Malfoy smirk - Dumbledore, who
was looking at the twins didn't. The new 5th years put their wands back into
their purses - making sure they didn't take their eyes off Malfoy. They stood
looking at him for a few more seconds then continued walking up to the top of
the hall.
McGonagall stood up, and walked over to the stool that was sitting neatly in the
middle of the platform. She then placed the old, tatty looking school hat on top
of it.
"As with any new students who arrive here at Hogwarts, the Ansonia's will
have to be sorted into a house. They will be doing this in exactly the same way
everyone else in this hall was sorted - via the Sorting Hat!" McGonagall said,
she waited for a minute - the twins just stared at it not expecting what it was
going to do.
Just when they thought it wasn't going to except them - it opened its
mouth and began to sing. The twins stared at the hat in amazement - They had
never seen a talking hat before, never mind a singing one.
"I normally sing, once a year,
To ickle firsties, from far and near,
But this is the second time, in one day,
For the Ansonia twins, so please make way,
So say hello to Magenta and Kerlic,
What house? Let me pick.
Where shall I put them? Let me see,
In which house, they will be,
Will they be in Gryffindor?
Slytherin? Hufflepuff? Or Ravenclaw?
There is nothing I can't see,
There is nothing you can hide from me.
Gryffindor's the brave kind,
Ravenclaw's have a ready mind,
Slytherin are cunning and buff,
And unafraid to toil, is Hufflepuff.
So put me on, over your eyes,
And I'll look, to see what lies,
For your future, at Hogwarts,
To see which way, you'll get taught.
There is no other hat like me,
Look near and far, and you will see,
'Cos I'm the only self-thinking kind,
The only one, who can read you're mind.
So welcome two 15 year olds,
Who are bubbly, loyal, and bold?
They have travelled from Italia,
Please welcome Kerlic and Magenta.
"Magenta, do you want to be sorted first?" McGonagall asked her, Magenta
nodded, and walked up and sat on the stool, McGonagall put the sorting hat on
her head.
"Better watch out of for that other one, Draco." Said Crabbe, turning to
Malfoy.
"She doesn't seem to like you much," he continued. Malfoy just shrugged
his shoulders, and turned back to face the front.
"Ooh you're are difficult, I see bits of every house in you! Hmm right
then, let's say ~ GRYFFINDOR!" the hat shouted. Magenta got up and walked over
to the Gryffindor table. Everyone clapped and cheered.
"Ay Draco, wouldn't it be funny if we got the other one, in our house?"
Said Goyle, laughing.
"Don't be stupid, you idiot. She won't be in Slytherin; she wouldn't act
like she just did if she were a true Slytherin. No, I'll say she'll be in
Gryffindor - all talk, no action. I mean, like they were going to curse me!" he
said laughing, Crabbe and Goyle laughed as well. They all looked forward at
Kerlic to see where her destiny lay.
She nervously sat down on the stool looking at all the faces looking back
at her. She saw Malfoy - the guy she hated. She also saw her sister - smiling up
at her, with a big Cheshire cat smile. And the last person she saw before the
hat went over her head, was a teenage boy, with jet black hair - messy, green
eyes, and if she was not mistaking, a lightening scar on the right side of his
forehead. She didn't have much chance to look, as Professor McGonagall had
placed the Sorting Hat over her head. The hat didn't say much ~
"GRYFFINDOR!" it shouted. The hall all cheered and clapped again.
McGonagall removed the hat from her head, and she went to sit next to her sister
at the Gryffindor table.
"Well that is everything of importance. Now the only thing left to do is
to eat." Said Dumbledore, and every single plate in the hall, filled up with
delicious food.
"I'm Seamus Finningan." Said Seamus, to Magenta and Kerlic.
"I'll show you around if ya want. Wouldn't want you to get lost now, would
we?" said Seamus.
"Ignore him." said Fred.
"Yeah, he'll get you lost, not on purpose of course. But let's just say,
our Seamus is a bit on the clumsy side." said George.
"Ha, Ha, very funny. You're only saying that because you want to show them
around." Said Seamus.
"I said it, because it's true." Said Fred, laughing.
"Yeah, and we want to show them around." Said George, smiling.
"What makes you think, they want you two? When they could have myself and
Neville here." Said Dean Thomas, and he and Neville, both smirked at the Weasley
twins.
"You two, I don't think so." Said George, and everyone started to laugh.
"Listen to you all, you talk as if they're not here." Said Hermione.
"Yeah, it's disgusting." Said Harry.
"Exactly, because we are going to show them around." Said Ron. He and
Harry started laughing.
"Ronald Weasley, Harry Potter... I didn't know you had it in you. Well
done." Said Dean.
"Excuse me." Said Magenta, looking over at the lads.
"Do you mind asking us, if we want you to show us around!!!" Said Kerlic.
"Oh forgive me, Madams. Vould you like a tour of 'Le Hogwarts' by deux
fine Monsieur's?" Said George.
"No." Said Kerlic, Fred and George's faces fell.
"From any of you." Said Magenta, all the other lads' faces fell as well.
"And by the way, we're Italian, not French." Said Kerlic
"Sì, ma noi ancora nonli desideri sono aiuto. Grazie!" Said magenta, and
her and Kerlic, got up and walked to the entrance of the Great hall.
"What did they just say?" Said George
"I dunno, but I liked it." Said Fred
"Oww, what was that for?" Said Fred, Angelina had just elbowed him in the
chest.
"Work it out." Angelina said, kind of annoyed
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*Blegh that sucked… :o(the bottom half hasn't been changed yet. I'm not in a
writing mood at the moment! But will change it soon! *