Sorry to all that my last chapter sucked and the fact that it was so short, I had only 15 minutes to right it and post it untill I had to go and catch my plane to mexico, a two week vacation that quite frankly was hell! then when I got back I had to go on another "vacation" for a week! and it wasnt fun at all! grr... well anyways..

I am going to completely revise chapter two, so its all nice, so it would be for a week, then I will let everyone know who wants to... just let me know if you review to send you an email... well anyways, please review on the really sucky chapter that is out at the current moment and give me suggestions... PLEASE!!! ... Thanks ALL!!!

tootles!