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Chapter 4
Turmoil at Flourish and Blotts
Harry walked into Flourish and Blotts and was amazed at what he saw. Everything was on the floor; the shelves had been toppled. It was a seen of mass chaos, people were running everywhere. They saw a death eater leave the seen of the crime; and when he ran past them they saw Lucius Malfoy's face inside the hood "Was that what I thought I saw?" Ron asked.
"If you mean Lucius Malfoy, I'm not sure," answered Hermoine. "But one thing I am sure about is that it was a death eater."
"Do you think that it was Lucius that did all of this?" Harry asked as he gestured at the destruction.
A few minutes later Healers started appearating all around them doing their best to heal the wounded. Ron saw Ginny with a head wound towards the back and he ran to her. Mrs. Weasley had seen the attack coming and had thrown Ginny to the ground and covered her in a desperate attempt to keep her safe. Mrs. Weasley was just a little bruised from a bookshelf that had fallen on her, but Ginny wasn't so lucky. The shelf had snapped in half and a nail had been drove into the back of her head. The healer's were working quickly but something like that is not easy so fix. They gave Ginny a blood- replenishing potion. Then stunned her so that it wouldn't hurt any more. Then two of the healer's got on broomsticks that held Ginny's stretcher between them and flew off toward St. Mungo's Hospital. Mrs. Weasley disappearated and appearated at St. Mungo's as soon as the healer's had made sure she was ok. Before she left she told them, "I will send Arthur as soon as I can get a hold of him and tell him to come here and take you three to St. Mungo's."
After she had left they heard a pop. They turned around and saw Cornelius Fudge standing there looking confused. "First Gringotts now this," said Fudge. "Will the madness ever cease?"
"Are you trying to say that Gringotts has been destroyed?" asked Harry.
"Well no," answered Fudge. "But it has been robbed." When he said this a bunch of people standing around them gasped and started to panic.
"How could it be?" asked one bystander.
"It's never happened before," said another.
"Sad, but true," answered Fudge "There are many that say that they saw Lucius Malfoy walk into Gringotts.
"Then that means that it was Lucius that did this," said Ron in an angry voice, his temper rising. "He's the one that hurt Ginny. I'm going to hunt him down and-."
"RON," Hermoine interrupted as he mad a violent gesture. "You can't just go hunt down a death eater. That's dangerous."
"I'll do WHAT I WANT," screamed Ron as tears started flowing down his cheeks. "If I want to hunt him down then I will."
"Tough luck Ron," said Harry seriously. "I'll bet your dad gets to him before you do." Hermoine had a fearful look on her face as Harry said this. "What's wrong?" Harry asked.
"I was just thinking," Hermoine replied. "If Lucius was here then he's not in Azkaban."
"Duh," replied Ron, steaming. "The Dementors have rebelled. Everyone knows that."
"That's why the Ministry is trying to come up with another way to imprison the death eater's that we catch so they can't escape," said Fudge. "But we've run out of ideas. We can't just lock them up, because they can just disappearate without the dementors there to drain their magical powers." After he said this Draco Malfoy walked in the store. Harry and Hermoine had to hold Ron back from attacking him, even though the Minister of Magic was standing beside him.
Draco upon seeing the Minister of Magic wiped his smirk of his face and asked him "What happened?" in a fake innocent voice.
"Your father has been believed to have robbed Gringotts and is responsible for the destruction of this store," Fudge answered in a don't lie to me kind of tone. "You wouldn't happen to know anything about that would you."
"Why do you want to know?" Malfoy said tauntingly. "Besides do you really think I care I've already got my school books. I just came to see who he had it in for."
"What do you mean Malfoy," Ron asked as he strained to get out of Harry and Hermoine's grip. "He hurt my sister!"
"Oh my," replied Malfoy in a sarcastic voice. "Do you really think he would be going after a meaningless little girl?" Are you even stupider than you look? Give me a break."
"I'll give you a break," answered Ron, tears running freely down his face. "I'll break your neck you.you.you." Ron obviously can't find the right words to say to Malfoy (ok if you've already read this chapter then you know I changed it to keep my reviews happy. Just so you know) "Ron Dropped to his knee's and continued to cry and rant on and on about what scum the Malfoy's were. About five minutes later Mr. Weasley appearated with a POP! right in front of Flourish and Blotts and walked inside.
"Good News," he said. "Ginny is going to be just fine."
Ron looked up and said "Really?"
"Really," Mr. Weasley replied. "So, is everybody done shopping?"
"All except our books," Hermoine answered as she nodded at the destruction.
"I see," said Mr. Weasley. "We'll have to get the books another day."
"Can we go see Ginny now?" asked Ron sadly.
"Yes, follow me." Mr. Weasley replied. They walked down to Madam Malkin's and Mr. Weasley asked. "Do you mind if we use your fireplace?"
"No, not at all," said the desk clerk.
"Thank you," said Mr. Weasley as he took out a bag of floo powder and held it out to Ron.
Ron took a pinch dropped it in the fire. The flames turned green and he walked into them, and said "St. Mungo's Hospital."
write a review now telling me whether you like it or not.
if you don't like the way the story is turning out then maybe you should write a review giving me some ideas to incorporate into my fanfic
I'm sorry if you're a Ginny fan, but I had to have something that grabbed the reader's attention.
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Special Thanks to my friends who are reading this and helping me come up with ideas for the story. You've been such a big help that I can't even describe it.
I not going to bore you with any more of my babbling right now, so here it is
Chapter 4
Turmoil at Flourish and Blotts
Harry walked into Flourish and Blotts and was amazed at what he saw. Everything was on the floor; the shelves had been toppled. It was a seen of mass chaos, people were running everywhere. They saw a death eater leave the seen of the crime; and when he ran past them they saw Lucius Malfoy's face inside the hood "Was that what I thought I saw?" Ron asked.
"If you mean Lucius Malfoy, I'm not sure," answered Hermoine. "But one thing I am sure about is that it was a death eater."
"Do you think that it was Lucius that did all of this?" Harry asked as he gestured at the destruction.
A few minutes later Healers started appearating all around them doing their best to heal the wounded. Ron saw Ginny with a head wound towards the back and he ran to her. Mrs. Weasley had seen the attack coming and had thrown Ginny to the ground and covered her in a desperate attempt to keep her safe. Mrs. Weasley was just a little bruised from a bookshelf that had fallen on her, but Ginny wasn't so lucky. The shelf had snapped in half and a nail had been drove into the back of her head. The healer's were working quickly but something like that is not easy so fix. They gave Ginny a blood- replenishing potion. Then stunned her so that it wouldn't hurt any more. Then two of the healer's got on broomsticks that held Ginny's stretcher between them and flew off toward St. Mungo's Hospital. Mrs. Weasley disappearated and appearated at St. Mungo's as soon as the healer's had made sure she was ok. Before she left she told them, "I will send Arthur as soon as I can get a hold of him and tell him to come here and take you three to St. Mungo's."
After she had left they heard a pop. They turned around and saw Cornelius Fudge standing there looking confused. "First Gringotts now this," said Fudge. "Will the madness ever cease?"
"Are you trying to say that Gringotts has been destroyed?" asked Harry.
"Well no," answered Fudge. "But it has been robbed." When he said this a bunch of people standing around them gasped and started to panic.
"How could it be?" asked one bystander.
"It's never happened before," said another.
"Sad, but true," answered Fudge "There are many that say that they saw Lucius Malfoy walk into Gringotts.
"Then that means that it was Lucius that did this," said Ron in an angry voice, his temper rising. "He's the one that hurt Ginny. I'm going to hunt him down and-."
"RON," Hermoine interrupted as he mad a violent gesture. "You can't just go hunt down a death eater. That's dangerous."
"I'll do WHAT I WANT," screamed Ron as tears started flowing down his cheeks. "If I want to hunt him down then I will."
"Tough luck Ron," said Harry seriously. "I'll bet your dad gets to him before you do." Hermoine had a fearful look on her face as Harry said this. "What's wrong?" Harry asked.
"I was just thinking," Hermoine replied. "If Lucius was here then he's not in Azkaban."
"Duh," replied Ron, steaming. "The Dementors have rebelled. Everyone knows that."
"That's why the Ministry is trying to come up with another way to imprison the death eater's that we catch so they can't escape," said Fudge. "But we've run out of ideas. We can't just lock them up, because they can just disappearate without the dementors there to drain their magical powers." After he said this Draco Malfoy walked in the store. Harry and Hermoine had to hold Ron back from attacking him, even though the Minister of Magic was standing beside him.
Draco upon seeing the Minister of Magic wiped his smirk of his face and asked him "What happened?" in a fake innocent voice.
"Your father has been believed to have robbed Gringotts and is responsible for the destruction of this store," Fudge answered in a don't lie to me kind of tone. "You wouldn't happen to know anything about that would you."
"Why do you want to know?" Malfoy said tauntingly. "Besides do you really think I care I've already got my school books. I just came to see who he had it in for."
"What do you mean Malfoy," Ron asked as he strained to get out of Harry and Hermoine's grip. "He hurt my sister!"
"Oh my," replied Malfoy in a sarcastic voice. "Do you really think he would be going after a meaningless little girl?" Are you even stupider than you look? Give me a break."
"I'll give you a break," answered Ron, tears running freely down his face. "I'll break your neck you.you.you." Ron obviously can't find the right words to say to Malfoy (ok if you've already read this chapter then you know I changed it to keep my reviews happy. Just so you know) "Ron Dropped to his knee's and continued to cry and rant on and on about what scum the Malfoy's were. About five minutes later Mr. Weasley appearated with a POP! right in front of Flourish and Blotts and walked inside.
"Good News," he said. "Ginny is going to be just fine."
Ron looked up and said "Really?"
"Really," Mr. Weasley replied. "So, is everybody done shopping?"
"All except our books," Hermoine answered as she nodded at the destruction.
"I see," said Mr. Weasley. "We'll have to get the books another day."
"Can we go see Ginny now?" asked Ron sadly.
"Yes, follow me." Mr. Weasley replied. They walked down to Madam Malkin's and Mr. Weasley asked. "Do you mind if we use your fireplace?"
"No, not at all," said the desk clerk.
"Thank you," said Mr. Weasley as he took out a bag of floo powder and held it out to Ron.
Ron took a pinch dropped it in the fire. The flames turned green and he walked into them, and said "St. Mungo's Hospital."
write a review now telling me whether you like it or not.
if you don't like the way the story is turning out then maybe you should write a review giving me some ideas to incorporate into my fanfic
I'm sorry if you're a Ginny fan, but I had to have something that grabbed the reader's attention.
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