Differences
Chapter 1: Prologue
The sun was slowly falling, signaling the day to come to an end. But the tiny hints of light that still shone would reflect against the clouds, and wave good-bye to the rest of the world before entering its peaceful slumber. Those small strips of light that reached across the sky, seemed as though they were arms of a loving mother reluctantly being pulled away from her young child. It was a scene that reminded you of suffering and grief, but at the same time, brought an enchanting smile to your face.
Jann Lee stood atop a high mountain cliff watching this wondrous scene unfold. In his eyes, he saw this as the most beautiful place on Earth. He felt, no, he was absolutely sure that all the peace and gentle emotions of the world was gathered in the exact, same spot in which he was standing.
As all of his attention was centered on the miraculous phenomenon occurring before him, two doves flew past him, scarring his view, and forcing him to lose concentration. He was almost angry by their interrupting disturbance, but as he watched them soar away together, his cold eyes turned soft. The pair, so musically in tune and in love, danced together through the winds and into the heavens. By watching this, he was compelled to think of a woman that had changed his life forever. He had allowed that woman, who had promised him an eternal life of happiness, to slip away. But back then, conceit and stupidity had almost fully engulfed his entire body so much that he was no longer able to think clearly, and see the brighter path.
It is only now that he realizes that there is more to life than being the best. Some of these include happiness, smiles, and never-ending true love. And so, the story begins...
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Author's Note: Hey Everyone! I hope you enjoyed the first chapter of my first fanfic. I would really appreciate reviews from anyone. I'm sorry this chapter was a little short, but since this was only a prologue, I figured that I didn't need to go too far into detail. I promise that my newest chapter will be much longer, and I'll try to post it as soon as I can. Bye!