Warnings:
1. This is a YAOI story meaning male + male relationships. Please do not read
if you're not comfortable with/into this.
2. There's probably some OCC in this too, so I'm warning just in case.
3. Things get a little heated in this chapter so a Lime warning is in effect.
No Lemon though.
Hiei's Surprise
By Yami Yue
Chapter Two
A week later as agreed I arrived at the park at noon with a small bag on my
shoulder. Hiei was waiting for me under a large cherry tree. "I trust you had
no problems." Hiei said as he approached me. "None at all." I replied. In fact
mother had been glad that I wanted to stay with Hiei for the week. To her the
fire apparition had become like a second son. Hiei in turn had become almost as
protective of my mother as me. "By the way, she sends her love and this." I
added as I handed him a small box containing his favorite variety of my
mother's homemade cookies, something Hiei liked almost as much as ice cream. He
smirked and took the package. "You'll have to thank her for me." He said as he
turned and began walking. "I will." I assured him as I followed.
We headed to the Makai and before long we reached a dense forest. Hiei led the
way from there. We traveled a short distance when suddenly he stopped. "Close
your eyes fox." Hiei instructed. I did as I was told, after all I didn't want
to ruin the surprise. Hiei took my hand and we continued walking. After a while
I detected a different scent than that of the pines and other evergreens around
us. "Roses?" I wondered. "What are roses doing in the forest?" The scent became
stronger as we walked on. Soon I could hear the faint sound of water rushing
and guessed that we were near a river. We kept moving and the sound grew
louder. Shortly, we came to a stop.
"Open your eyes." Hiei said. I did. Ahead of me was a clearing surrounded by
massive evergreens, forming a thick barrier. I turned to see that where we had
entered was the only way in or out. Hiei had chosen this spot well. In the
center of the clearing was a massive tree. In its thick boughs, well above
ground was a house. Rosebushes circled the treehouse like a fence. I noticed
that all of the rosebushes in sight bore red roses, except the two that grew
taller than the rest, forming an archway above the entrance. The roses on these
bushes were sky blue. "It's beautiful." I said as I walked up to the rosebush
fence. "Now when you want to get away from the human world you have someplace
to go." Hiei responded. "Just don't let all my hard work go to waste." I raised
an eyebrow. "You did this all by yourself?" I asked. Hiei nodded. "I'm
impressed." I said. "I thought you would be." He responded as we went through
the archway. The land at the back of the tree house was just as impressive as
the front. There was more than enough room to plant a large orchard (or two
small ones), and a garden or two. A river flowed nearby, providing plenty of
water. From there we went into the house itself. The house consisted of a
living room, kitchen, dining room, a large bedroom and bath. Each room had an
excellent view of the forest below. Needless to say I immediately fell in love
with the place.
That night I fought to stay awake waiting for Hiei to fall asleep. It seemed
like an eternity before his breathing was soft and deep. Carefully I got out of
bed and left the room. I barely made a sound as I made my way out of the house
and down to the ground. "I just hope he doesn't wake up before I get back." I
thought as I passed the rosebush fence. Slowly I made my way down the narrow
pathway until I reached the point where Hiei had me close my eyes. I marked the
way with a vine and made a mental note of where the pathway was. Swiftly I
continued on my way. I headed through the forest as quickly as I could, alert
for any dangers lurking nearby. Soon I reached my destination – a small cave.
The large plants concealing the entrance parted to let me pass as I approached.
I entered the cave, using the pale moonlight to see inside. Luckily the object
I wanted was close at hand. I picked up the sword and drew it from its sheath.
The katana's blade was in perfect condition, a wonder since it had been in this
cave over fifteen years. I sheathed the sword and inspected the hilt. The hilt
itself was made of metal, an intricately carved dragon with it's tail curled
around the base of the blade. Two rubies winked at me in the pale moonlight
from the dragon's eyes. "Hiei is going to love this." I thought with a smile. I
decided to come back later and gather the rest of my stored wealth. I planned
to move back to the Makai in the future and I didn't want someone else getting
their hands on it.
I left the cave and watched with satisfaction as the plants repositioned
themselves to conceal the entrance. I headed back to the treehouse as fast as I
could. I was relieved to find that Hiei was still fast asleep when I returned.
I used my shirt to clean the dust off the sword and held it up to the moonlight
once more for inspection. Once satisfied I hid it within reach of my side of
the bed. Careful not to disturb Hiei I climbed back into bed and made myself
comfortable. In no time I was asleep.
I awoke when the sun shone right into my eyes. With a groan of protest I rolled
over onto my side. "It's about time you woke up." Hiei said. Lazily I opened
one eye. It seemed he'd been up for a while, judging by the impatient
expression on his face. I closed my eye and yawned, intent on going back to
sleep. Hiei gently pushed me onto my back and drew me close to him, cradling my
head in his lap. He tugged lightly on one of my sidelocks and I opened my eyes.
His ruby red orbs locked onto my emerald green ones. The look in his eyes dared
me to close my eyes again. "Alright I'm up." I conceded. "Good." He said as he
placed a small box in my hands. "Happy anniversary fox." He said. I sat up and
opened the box. I reached inside and lifted out a silver necklace. At first
glance the pendant could be mistaken for a black pearl. I knew better. It was a
tear gem. I looked at Hiei and smiled. "Put it on me?" I requested. He took the
silver necklace from my hand and secured the chain around my neck. "Thank you
Hiei. It's beautiful." I said as I fingered the tear gem. His eyes shone
brightly, obviously pleased with my response. I moved over to my side of the
bed and retrieved Hiei's gift from its hiding place. "Happy anniversary Hiei."
I said as I presented the sword to him. Hiei's eyes widened as he took the
sword. He slowly unsheathed it, inspecting the blade carefully. He stood and
tested the weight of the sword before performing a few practice thrusts and
swings with it. I watched in fascination as he went through various exercises
with his new sword. He moved with the grace only an experienced swordsman could
achieve. I didn't tear my gaze away from my lover for a moment, watching as the
muscles of his bare upper torso shifted with each movement he made. All too
soon he sheathed the sword, looking quite pleased. I smiled.
"I take it you like my gift." I said. "I love it." He responded. "Where did you
get a sword of this craftsmanship?" he asked. "A minor Maki lord probably." I
answered. Hiei smirked. "I think it was meant for you love." I commented.
"Until recently I didn't know why I kept it." "You're probably right fox." He
responded as he set his new sword next to its predecessor. He rejoined me in
bed and kissed me. I eagerly returned the kiss as I ran my hands over the firm
muscles of his bare chest. He ran his hands over the thin shirt I wore, teasing
me with his touch. He caressed my back just as I had taught him. I quivered with
pleasure. "I think it's time for a more advanced lesson." He said softly, then
kissed me again. He released my lips and began his sweet torment on my neck. I
leaned down and nibbled on his ear as he brought his hands around to my chest.
"Let's see how well you've learned what I've taught you first." I responded.
"Hn." Hiei replied as he slid his hands under my shirt and began caressing my
stomach. "As you wish." He murmured huskily. I laid him onto his back and began
attacking his chest with my lips, tongue and lightly with my teeth. Hiei's eyes
darkened with passion and he tugged at my shirt. I sat back a little,
straddling his hips, straitening up just enough to allow him to remove my
shirt. It was gone in a flash landing out of sight somewhere to be forgotten
until later. Suddenly I was on my back. Hiei sat astride my hips looking down
at me with an impish grin. He continued his kisses and caresses with passion.
His fevered touch set my body afire with pleasure. "Inari Hiei." I thought. "Do
you know what you're doing to me?" I looked into his eyes. Oh yes, he knew.
I gasped as he found another sensitive spot and he grinned. He nibbled my ear
teasing the sensitive lobe with his tongue as his hands caressed my chest. I
moaned and closed my eyes. "So sensei has your student learned well?" he asked
in a sensual tone. "Yes." I murmured. "Very well." He brought his lips
teasingly against a sensitive spot just below my throat. "Then shouldn't you
get a reward for teaching me so well?" he continued, his warm breath teasing my
skin as he spoke. My breath caught in my throat as he gently grazed my skin
with his teeth. I moaned as he kissed me. "I think you do." He murmured as he
took my hands in his. I opened my eyes and watched with a half lidded gaze as
he placed my hands on the waistband of his boxers. I looked at him, completely
dazed. His eyes met mine and I could see the intense desire in his gaze.
Though we had been together a year now we had never gone further than kisses
and caresses. I'd vowed to myself that I'd do things right this time, take
things slow and wait until Hiei was ready before taking things further. Then of
course there was the problem with timing. We never knew when my mother would
come home or when Hiei would come to visit, so we just stuck with our usually
heavy make out sessions. I'd been careful in the past not to loose control and
seduce him into further pleasure. Hiei's seductive voice and sensuous touch
however, were steadily diminishing that control.
"What did you have in mind?" I asked, deciding to get him to tell me what he
was thinking. Hiei smiled enticingly as he rested his hands on top of mine. He
leaned forward and kissed me passionately. He broke the kiss and brought his
lips to my ear. "I want to make love to you fox." He murmured huskily. "Are you
sure?" I asked him. "Yes." He hissed in my ear. "I want you." Said a voice
tenderly in my mind. "I need you." I shivered. Hiei had never spoken
mind to mind like this with me before. "You told me that you wanted more than
just my body." He said softly. "You said you wanted my friendship….." He kissed
my cheek. "….my love…" He kissed my lips lovingly "….my heart…" he planted a
soft kiss on my chest. "I've given you these and you've given me the same."
"Now I'm offering you my body." He whispered sensually. "Are you willing to
accept?" I shivered. I could deny him nothing when he used that sexy tone of
his and he knew it. I leaned up and claimed his lips with my own. "I'm yours
Hiei." I responded once I broke the kiss. "Do with me as you please." Hiei
smiled. "Then teach me fox." He said. "Give me my next lesson." "As you wish."
I responded.
To Be Concluded . . .
Author's Note:
To reviewer Vindictive:
I thank you for pointing out my error without being rude or nasty about it. I
really appreciate that.
Thanks again,
-Yami Yue