Hay guys!!
As much as I wanted to update, I couldn't for a couple of days because I had this big major exam. But I'm back but I have decided to slow down the process of writing. The next chapter will come up in a month or so, just for me to have a 'reading break', a time where I just sit and read and refresh my mind. It's just a thing that I have.
I would just like to say something to HazeLavender though.
HazeLavender: Well, I am enjoying the story very greatly and I do believe flamers shouldn't post. However, constructive criticism is not the same as a flame and you shouldn't take it that way. For ex, I thought Snape was a little out of character in chapter four but for all I know that might change in the upcoming chapters. Overall, your writing is very good and I like how you describe Hermione's suffering - it rings very true. The only actual problem I have is the (tad) condescending tone you take with your readers. Knowing too much about the author and their emotions, affects the story and it's mostly in an adverse way. Just a suggestion (a personal opinion.) Plus stating that you might not update unless you ONLY get positive replies sounds just a little juvenile and bribery like that is never good, IMHO. So yeah, I enjoy this story, as long as I don't have to take into account the moods of the author.
The things you say are true, but I let my emotions go because no one knows who I am. :P And never did any bribery- I'm like WHATTHEHELL??!! I was just expressing my anger to flamers. I was also nervous about the 'Snape out-of-character' thing. I was scared someone might find out but it does sound a bit weird at the beginning but no one ever said that he wouldn't be nice to the people he cared for. I mean the Snape bonding process already happened. There you go. A part of the story revealed. Oh well, I hope that should stop the out of character thing though. It will be in the stories later on. BUT IF ANYONE SAYS ANYTHING BAD ABOUT THE CRANBERRRIES I REALLY WILL CUT THEIR FINGERS OFF AND SHOVE IT DOWN THEIR THROAT. Okay Dokay HazeLavender, KEEP READING AND REVIEWING!!!
Now that's sorted, I would like to write more in my Authors note. I don't know if that review goes under the category of emailing me but la, I'll let her get away. But really, please don't be lazy and email me if you want to make any complaints or suggestions or see some errors in my work. In case you are too lazy to go to my profile and find out what my email is, look here ====onesilentwriter@hotmail.com====
And I never thanked all my reviewers, I feel so bad. I love you's so much, I was going to send an e-card to all of you's but, two problems came up.
1. EXAMS
2. LAZINESS
Well, I'll finish this for now, and I hope I will return to the keyboard ASAP.
With love,
-SilentSoul
As much as I wanted to update, I couldn't for a couple of days because I had this big major exam. But I'm back but I have decided to slow down the process of writing. The next chapter will come up in a month or so, just for me to have a 'reading break', a time where I just sit and read and refresh my mind. It's just a thing that I have.
I would just like to say something to HazeLavender though.
HazeLavender: Well, I am enjoying the story very greatly and I do believe flamers shouldn't post. However, constructive criticism is not the same as a flame and you shouldn't take it that way. For ex, I thought Snape was a little out of character in chapter four but for all I know that might change in the upcoming chapters. Overall, your writing is very good and I like how you describe Hermione's suffering - it rings very true. The only actual problem I have is the (tad) condescending tone you take with your readers. Knowing too much about the author and their emotions, affects the story and it's mostly in an adverse way. Just a suggestion (a personal opinion.) Plus stating that you might not update unless you ONLY get positive replies sounds just a little juvenile and bribery like that is never good, IMHO. So yeah, I enjoy this story, as long as I don't have to take into account the moods of the author.
The things you say are true, but I let my emotions go because no one knows who I am. :P And never did any bribery- I'm like WHATTHEHELL??!! I was just expressing my anger to flamers. I was also nervous about the 'Snape out-of-character' thing. I was scared someone might find out but it does sound a bit weird at the beginning but no one ever said that he wouldn't be nice to the people he cared for. I mean the Snape bonding process already happened. There you go. A part of the story revealed. Oh well, I hope that should stop the out of character thing though. It will be in the stories later on. BUT IF ANYONE SAYS ANYTHING BAD ABOUT THE CRANBERRRIES I REALLY WILL CUT THEIR FINGERS OFF AND SHOVE IT DOWN THEIR THROAT. Okay Dokay HazeLavender, KEEP READING AND REVIEWING!!!
Now that's sorted, I would like to write more in my Authors note. I don't know if that review goes under the category of emailing me but la, I'll let her get away. But really, please don't be lazy and email me if you want to make any complaints or suggestions or see some errors in my work. In case you are too lazy to go to my profile and find out what my email is, look here ====onesilentwriter@hotmail.com====
And I never thanked all my reviewers, I feel so bad. I love you's so much, I was going to send an e-card to all of you's but, two problems came up.
1. EXAMS
2. LAZINESS
Well, I'll finish this for now, and I hope I will return to the keyboard ASAP.
With love,
-SilentSoul