A friend of mine told me that I should end this story almost like his original French version, so I decided to write two ends for it. Tell me which one you like!
Chapter 8
The Rightful King
"What do you mean you have already chosen a king?" said Vegeta angrily at the assembly of elite
"You know that you can't legally do that" said Yakusoku calmly arms crossed
"Yes, but at the time we didn't know that you and the prince were alive" explained a member of the elite
"Freeza had threaten to slaughter us we didn't have a choice than to make that decision" said another one
"Well whoever you had chosen he can no longer rule Vegeta-sei he had to step-down!" said Vegeta that had calmed down
"Well this won't be that easy!" said a man that just entered the room
"Who are you?" asked Vegeta
"Where are my manners I am Paragus the king's father" said the man,
"So tell me why your son won't step-down?" asked Vegeta
"Because the law said that only the most powerful heir of the throne will be crown king and Broli is the one of them"
"What? I beg to differ, can Broli turned into a ssj" asked Vegeta cockily
"Well yes since he was twelve" replied the man smirking, Vegeta jaw dropped by the chocking news
"Like you just said Paragus only an heir of the throne can be chosen and Broli isn't a member of Vegeta's royal family" said one of the elite member who were eager to repaired their fault or get the asses seriously kicked bye princess
"Yes I know, and Broli IS a member of Vegeta's royal family"
"That's impossible I am an only child?" said Vegeta suspicious
"Yes tell us Paragus how Broli got his share of royal blood we know that isn't from your side" asked an elite member
"Not mine alright but his mother"
"What are you accusing the deceased queen of having an affair with you! Are dare you make such accusation you son of a bitch?" barked Vegeta to him
"I never said such a thing" said Paragus serenely
"Who else in the royal family could possibly give birth to Broli" said Vegeta but when his eyes fell on Yakusoku that seemed to have shrunk on her seat and he said "No, no don't tell me Broli is your son!"
"I am sorry Vegeta!" she said faintly
"You bitch! You had set me up! I can't believe this, for all this years I thought you cared for me but you only wanted me out of the way so that your son can be king" said Vegeta
"How can you say that? I have been loyal to our family no matter what"
"Oh ya that's why you went sleeping with that low life second class warrior and got pregnant, and then you dared preach me about family ethics!"
"Vegeta listen to me I would never…"
"Save it I don't want to hear it, I am out of here!" said Vegeta leaving the room he didn't want the other to see how hurt he was about Yakusoku's betrayal
"I think that will meet again tomorrow at the same time for the decision of the princess" said Paragus while dismissing the assembly. Everyone left except the princess who was still seated. Vegeta went to his quarters where his friends were waiting for him.
Night had fallen over the county when Yakusoku finally decided to go and confront Paragus. She went to his quarters and said
"I told you to never come back! Why did you come back Paragus? Did you wanted to humiliate me?" asked upset woman
"So you are really ashamed of us!" replied the man sadly
"What?" she asked confuse
"You abandoned your own flesh and blood and the only person who truly loves you. You deprived us of your love when it was the only thing we wanted from you. You had rather be the princess of Vegeta-sei than to be the mother of your son and my wife!"
"So this is my fault!"
"I don't know is it?"
"How can you say that? You know if I went with you my brother would have us all killed!"
"And there you are caring of his son while he had tried to kill yours! Even dead he's still making you do what he wants"
Yakusoku was a pile nerves, it seemed that everything she tried to accomplish failed. She was tired of that mask she wear most of her life, the brave and stong Yakusoku the princess of Vegeta-sei, but inside of her was a frighten woman.
She had never showed it while she was living on Earth she was scared. She had felt trapped on a world that wasn't hers and have to survived by following it's rules because a she was to scare to be found, and then he had found them she got killed trying to defend his nephew and avenge a friend. She knew now that she was always leaving in fear since her parents had died, but at that time it wasn't Freeza that she was scared off but her own brother king Vegeta!
Her brother was twelve when she had been given life by her mother. She wasn't conceived synthetically like most of the children of this planet, the only problem was that she had been born with a power level grater than her brother at this day on she had become his rival for the throne.
She was love by her father even of the discoloration of her hair and eyes. She was not only gifted in strength but also in intelligence she was smart very smart. Her father had fought that she will help greatly because the planet needed people that can tame technology so they wouldn't have to depend of strangers to land them a hand in that direction. But when the king had died the queen had chosen Vegeta to be king and after she died also her brother the king had made her life a living hell.
She was confined to the castle, and the king scared away any eligible suitor, people said that the king was over protective of her sister, but the truth was the king was scared that her children would be more powerful than his and overthrown him. At a time she thought there was something wrong with her, that her appearance was in cause.
When he met Freeza the sent her in 'training' secretly wishing she won't came back, but while she was away she had met Paragus and they fell in love with him. Knowing that he would never accept him she kept her liaison secret. Everything went well until the day the king asked for the returned of her sister and to make matter worse she was pregnant. It was a question of time before the king found out. She had tried her best to hide her pregnancy and the new queen that had become her friend help, but one day the king had received the order of a new sophisticated scouter and was trying it when Yakusoku walked in. The scouter gave him two different readings.
"What's wrong?" she inquired
"Those things most be malfunctioning"
"Can I take a look?" she demanded
"Sure" he said and the woman checked it
"There is nothing wrong with it! It's working perfectly fine" she said and left, but the king was still receiving two different reading for one person, by that time the king had figured out what was the cause. Three weeks later while Yakusoku and the king Vegeta were walking around the palace the king entered a room and was soon followed by the princess. When she got in the king pushed her into a cell in closed the door behind her.
"What is this?" asked the woman surprised
"Your new home! You'll stay here until I got some answers" said the king, when she tried to forced the bars to get out she got chocked
"What's going on here?"
"I forgot to mention it that this cell have been made specially for you so you can't escaped"
"What? Have you gone mad Vegeta?"
"Shut up! Tell me who's the father of your child maybe I'll be kind enough to let you live!"
"You can't be serious! No you really are!" said the woman not at all surprised
"Tell me who the father is?"
"I am not telling you shit!"
"My patience is wearing thin Yakusoku, you better talk now!"
"You wouldn't dare kill me!"
"Believe me I can make you disappear more easily than you think! So what is his name?"
"Paragus!" The king checked him out on the scouter he was wearing
"You are a disgrace! A second class warrior! How lowly can you get?"
"Fuck you! I do what I want you have no right on telling me how to live my life Vegeta!"
"Yes I can! I am brother and your king you have to obey me!"
"You damn to serious for your own good you maniac! Now get me out of here before I kick your sorry ass you weakling!"
"Shut up you bitch! I don't want to hear it, you'll stay here until the child is born then I'll decided what to do with you" said the king
"You are not going to leave me here! Let me out you here me!"
"You are going to rot here!"
"Why do you hate me so? What did I ever do to you to deserve this?"
"You were born!" said the king and then left her alone on the dark
When she gave birth to Broli the king took him away from her and ordered that the baby and his father to be killed. The queen who didn't agree about the king behavior had saved their lives and had arranged a meeting between Yakusoku and her family for a last good bye. She had made Paragus swear to never set foot on Vegeta-sei, but now he had came back and wanted justice to be done.
"He had alienated you! Why do you take his son side?" asked Paragus
"Because Vegeta is the one who has to be king"
"If you choose Broli no one will doubt your choice and you'll get your revenge!"
"On whom he's dead Paragus! Freeza killed him! I let Freeza kill him!" the woman said crying. The man held her in his arms and said
"It wasn't your fault there is anything you could do about it!"
"Why? Why did he did this to me I didn't care that mom chose him over of me to rule Vegeta-sei, I didn't care about my son to be heir of the throne. I just wanted to be left alone"
"I know I know calm down its ok everything will be alright I promise!" said Paragus while kissing her tenderly, he undressed her and began to make love to her and she let him take her once again as she had abandoned herself to him a long time ago.
"I am sorry I didn't go with you" she said in her lover arms
"That's ok as long as you are here now, that's all that count!"
The next day Broli had step-down and Vegeta was going to be crown king in one week.
"I am sorry I doubted you, you have been like a mother to me all this time and I doubted your loyalty! Will you ever forgive me?" said Vegeta
"Yes I do, I just want you to e a good king to your people. I know you've learned a lot and I trust you on making wise decisions" said the woman
"What? You don't want to be my adviser!"
"No Vegeta I have a lot of family time to catch up" she said looking behind her where Broli and Paragus were waiting for her
"Well you deserve to have the life you wanted"
"And you yours, bye Vegeta you'll always be close to my heart" she said leaving with her husband and son.
"Bye Yakusoku thanks for everything" said Vegeta waving good bye to the leaving family.
Another Story is completed
Ok tell me what you think I know the end differ from the French version, but I got mushy review and tell me what you think!
Second Ending
The next day Yakusoku wake up quite happy for the first time in many year things seemed to have working out. She took a shower she found brand new attire waiting for her. She got dressed but suddenly she stopped has she sensed that someone was in the room with her.
"Show yourself!" she ordered as she took a fighting stance, a very tall young man get out of the shadow.
He was wearing the usual royal uniform but was wearing jewelry the complete set of gold plate chain with earrings and bracelet and on his forehead diadem that have a sapphire in the middle. When she saw him she felt her heart tighten, she slowly lower her arms and said in a trembling voice
"Broli"
The young man didn't answer he looked so sad and distant, she walked toward him and said softly "Broli my son" as he touch his face with both hands he slowly kneeled in front of her and laid his head on her stomach and passed his arms around her waist. They stayed like this for a minute, and then he stood up and said
"Bye mom!"
"What!?" she said, but before she could react Broli grabbed her neck and started choking her.
Paragus who came to check on her saw that Broli was killing her mother and tried to stop but only to receive a ki blast that threw him out of the palace not before he went thought the solid wall of the castle, Yakusoku used that little diversion to make him let go of her, but Broli fired another ki blast that made her follow the same path as her husband
Vegeta was standing on his room balcony watching the view; there he could see the entire kingdom that was lying below. He sighted as he left his post when he heard the commotion that the fight was causing. Vegeta and Gokou flied outside to see what was happening, and were stunned when they saw Paragus and Yakusoku going head to head with a younger fighter they didn't know. The two older saiya-jin were getting a beating that they won't forget soon if they survived it that is, but the princess was recovering from the surprised of the attack and now was fighting blow for blow with Broli, but they seemed to have no effect on the younger fighter crushed her to a near wall.
"What the hell!" said Vegeta not believing his eyes as he run toward the two fighters but Broli stopped him on his track with a power blast that sent him collide with Gokou that was following him, and they both fell on the ground. Paragus get on his feet and said
"What do you think you are doing? You only make matter worse!"
"I like my plan better kill the bitch and his nephew and there will be no one that can't stop me on being the king of this planet!" replied Broli
"Think again!" said Vegeta punching him on the face but it didn't faze him and he threw one at Vegeta that send him bounce to the other side of the battle field.
"So that's your plan! You want to kill me so you can rule this world, well I am not dead yet!" said Yakusoku firing many ki blast at him that make him hit the south part of the castle that he destroyed on his way down.
"Are you ok?" asked Paragus
"Oh yeah great! For the first time I saw my son in so many years and he tried to kill me!" shouted the princess at him
"The boy is too strong for his own good and kinda out of control" tried to explained the other saiya-jin
"He's kinda out of control! The damn kid is crazy!" she said angry, at this same moment Broli fired a powerful ki blast at her but Paragus put himself in front of her and took the hit but both of them fell on the ground, Vegeta and Gokou were already on Broli who had now transformed into a ssj.
"You are not the only one who can do that trick!" said Vegeta turning into a ssj. The fight between the two was phenomenal as the two fighters were inflicting serious damage at each other as the world around them crumbled.
The guards from the palace just watch the combat afar not dare to choose a side not knowing who had the authority. Yakusoku came out of the rumble and saw Paragus laying on the ground bleeding and she run toward him "Why did you do that for?" she said
"I have to protect my princess" he said smiling then cough out some blood
"I am stronger than you I could survive that blast!" she reproached him
"I wasn't ready to take that chance"
"Hush I am going to bring you the an hospital"
"Wait I have to tell you something!"
"We don't have time for this, you are gravely injured"
"Broli is much stronger than Vegeta he's going to kill him"
"The kid is tough he can take care of himself" she said while carrying him toward the palace where there was a medical facility.
"You don't understand Broli is the legendary ssj nothing can stop him!" wheezed the dying man
"You are kidding me!"
"As he gets stronger he loses control of himself and destroys everything on his path the planet his in great danger"
"Great I gave birth to a maniac, that's must be something that runs in the family!"
"He had destroyed countless planets while we were in exile but I was able to control him with this" he said giving her the object that was around his fist, Paragus didn't make it to medical facility he died on her arms. She went outside and looked at the fight for a moment it was cleared that Vegeta was no match for Broli as this one was enjoying the pain he was inflicting at the prince who could barely defend himself.
"I can't believe this, its all true. Broli is that powerful even as a ssj Vegeta can't stop him" she said then looked at the object in her hand, then flied away.
Bulma and Bruno were watching the fight in horror when Yakusoku grabbed the young woman and told her to come with her.
"I need your help!" said the princess, after explaining the situation and after Bulma too a good look at the object the young scientist said
"What is this?"
"This is some kind of remote of some sort, for a power neutralizer that only last for a short time"
"How did you know about this?"
"My brother Vegeta had one." She said sadly then added "But this is a more complicate model. I want you to help me modify it; I want it to be more powerful"
"This could be dangerous where the neutralizer is?"
"In Broli diadem"
"If we tamper with it could malfunctioning who knows what will be the outcome of the changes"
"Just do what I say, let me worried about the rest" said Yakusoku when they arrived on her lab and started working in the modification of the device.
Outside the battle was raging on as Gokou came in Vegeta help even he wasn't of great help the two friends were just trying to stay alive and that's all they could do. By that time the device was ready and Yakusoku flied outside to the battle field only to found Gokou unconscious and Broli ready to give the coup de grace to Vegeta. She decided then to activate the neutralizer with the remote, a blue light came out the sapphire and enveloped them, when it dissipated the two saiya-jins had power down and fell on the ground. But Broli didn't let go of Vegeta and was looking at Yakusoku
"So my dad gave you the power neutralizer"
"Yes, and now you better be a good boy and let Vegeta go before I get angry!" answered the woman but Broli just laugh and said
"I am still powerful enough to kill him" he said while making a ki blast on his hand near Vegeta's head that was so powerless that he couldn't even move.
"Don't force me to hurt you!" she said making her own attack
"You have no choice you have to kill me to save him"
"No stop it, don't make me choose between you two!"
"You have to; it's him or me your choice"
"Don't do this you are my son and I love you, I can make thing better for now on"
"No you can't and you don't love me. You had chosen him over me before, but now you've got to make up your mind! I swear that I am going to blow his head off!"
"I won't let you!"
"So you'll have to kill me then" he said getting ready to blew Vegeta's head, Yakusoku looked at the two men one after the other undecided
"Vegeta, Broli" she said softly then said "I do love you my son" and fired the ki blast that went right trough Broli's heart
"Mother!" he said before falling dead on the ground, the woman walked toward him and held him on her arms crying. Gokou helped Vegeta to get on his feet and they both watched the heart aching cries of a mother who just killed her son.
Three month later Vegeta and Bulma were kneeling on front of a pregnant Yakusoku while she was crowning them king and queen of Vegeta-sei.
Well this is almost the same ending at the French version (I couldn't stopped myself in modified it a little bit) ^_^ Please review and tell me which ending you like better.
