This is a miyako poem. I wrote it because I think she is sort of person
who would hide her problem than show it. Written in third person
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far past the happy face
past the mask put on in painful grace
a soul lies torn, bleeding, dieing
cos she smiles so happily you cant see her crying
the mask gives us hope, leaving us believing
yet the cost of ignorance is leaving her screaming
her mind is broken, she forces a smile
its only a while
'till she breaks deep completely,
truly and deeply.
Will we help a broken soul, or leave and disgrace ,
All by preferring the the masks happy face
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you've read it, now review it. Don't flames cos if this sucks then I can
only make it better with criticism I can use!
who would hide her problem than show it. Written in third person
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
far past the happy face
past the mask put on in painful grace
a soul lies torn, bleeding, dieing
cos she smiles so happily you cant see her crying
the mask gives us hope, leaving us believing
yet the cost of ignorance is leaving her screaming
her mind is broken, she forces a smile
its only a while
'till she breaks deep completely,
truly and deeply.
Will we help a broken soul, or leave and disgrace ,
All by preferring the the masks happy face
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
you've read it, now review it. Don't flames cos if this sucks then I can
only make it better with criticism I can use!
