Disclaimer: Nothing belongs to me except Rathena. Everything else belongs
to Tamora Pierce. And I like to point out that if everything did belong to
me I wouldn't be writing fan fiction now would I.
This story is dedicated to Sami. Always wear your seatbelt.
This chapter is dedicated to all the people that brought me to my senses and told me not to give up. I shouldn't stop because a couple people told me my story was bad (In different words) I should do it for all those that like my story and me. Also to Lady Arwen Evenstarand ahcool for adding me to their favorites list.
King Jonathan was sitting in the council room with his head in his hands. There had just been a meeting with the Carthaki ambassadors he could tell already; today was going to be a long day. Jonathan sat there a while longer and then he heard what sounded like a number of people running towards the room but it was coming from all different directions. For a second Jonathan thought he was hallucinating due to stress but then three people burst into the room panting. Then all at once they said,
"Daine."
Then it was a mixture of rambling that you couldn't hear because it was all said at once. Then they seemed to notice that there was more then one person in the room and they stopped talking. Then Jonathan seemed to let the words sink in.
"Wait, what about Daine?" He asked.
Then he began to recognize them. It was Numair, Evin Larse and Ouna.
Meanwhile.
Daine couldn't take it anymore. She couldn't stand being away from the people she loved. Daine loved being a goddess and she wanted to be with her ma and all the other gods and goddesses but she also wanted to be a mortal. She really wanted to have both, Goddess and mortal but she knew that was something she would never have. She almost wished she could be someone else entirely, not a goddess, not Daine, not even someone that would know Numair. What Daine didn't notice was that she was saying this aloud and someone with cruel intensions had heard her wish.
"Did you find anything out that will help us get ride of that annoying brat!" A lady with dark midnight hair barked. She could have been beautiful even more then Thayet, the peerless herself. She had long dark hair with a tall thin figure and flawless skin, but there was a cold air around her. Almost like an evil essence. Just by looking at her you could tell she did not mean you well. Then there were her eyes, a cold gray pair of eyes that could cause you to shiver in fear just by looking into them. There were no lines of mirth on her face just a stony set expression.
"Yes my lady, I have found some very valuable information." A thin short man hissed.
"The girl wishes to be someone else, an easy wish to grant by someone of your power don't you think even if you are in this wretched prison."
"Ah yes this prison, I will be here till the next star is born but not to worry, I am coming up with a plan at the moment. But that is not our aim at the moment. For now we have to get rid of that wretched girl. You say she wishes to be someone else, perfect, I know just how we can get her out of the way."
Meanwhile.
"You mean to tell me you saw Daine today all three of you! Not only that but you're telling me that she has become a goddess not just any goddess but the Patron goddess of Corus!" King Jonathan exclaimed. He was usually a very calm and poised person but the recent turn of events had taken quite a toll on him.
"Yes, that is exactly what we are saying." Numair replied. His face had regained a lot of its normal color and he looked much better now.
"Well, what do you want me to do about it, there is nothing I can do." Was all Jonathan said.
Numair just stood there speechless. "We must do something! We can't just sit here!"
"What do you propose we do? Daine chose to be a goddess of her own will, they are not holding her captive there isn't a thing we can do."
"We can. charge. or attack. we must get her back Jon! We must do something, we can't just sit here!" Numair sputtered.
"But just sit here we must." Was all Jon said and then he left leaving two confused people and one heartbroken man.
Okay I know it is really short in actuality but it took me forever to get this far so I decided instead of making you wait longer and have it not much longer to update now and write more latter. Thank you to all my reviewers and to Lady Arwen Evenstar and ahcool for adding me to their favorite's list. I hope you liked this chapter and I'll try to write more soon as hard as it is with school. Die school DIE!!!! Any way here are all the people that reviewed.
flare- Don't worry I will.
Leaena Cedarthorn- Yes it is but that's one reason while I'll finish this story out. Thank's for your review.
Clarylissa- Geesh you make me feel guilty. Ahh! *runs and hides* I'll be good I promise! Lol thanks if I ever need someone to slap someone I'll ask you.
Silver Mage- It's my party and I'll cry if I want to! Sorry that line just popped into my head.
Lady Arwen Evenstar- You added me to to your favorite's list! Awsome! This chapter is also dedicated to you!
Darkchaos- Don't worry I wont.
ahcool- Wow! I'm on your favorite's list too! Cool! This chapter is also dedicated to you!
something - Okay but only for you.
Threefrogz- I'm glad you think so.
Safiya-MARY SUES DON'T EXIST- Good you agree I think it's PATRON too. Lol
Kiri Keguatomi- lol I'm glad.
Salior Vamp a.k.a MidnightAngelGoddess- Don't worry I will.
Sivvus- lol I doubt it but maybe
Joanna- lol I'm glad you luv me Well, I'm hounoring your request
Mistress Sock- Oh yup someone said it was.
Chloe the Dragontamer- Thanks and I personnaly vote for the Black gods Kindom much more scary.
- I don't even know why I'm writing to this person because they'll never check it but yes, the good does outweigh the bad.
elisa fenning- I'm glad you love it.
Karen Keddle- Well if I must.*sigh*.
ShinigamiKarui- Yeah right insy winsy OOC, more like major OOC but don't worry I'll fix it the next time around.
Martini- I'm glad you like it.
Lydiby- I think I may do a revised copy so that may be a good place to start Thanks!
Lady Jen Wildmage- I think I just may.
Angel Of The Storms- Yeah it does but I decided to continue anyway.
Silva Sun- You know I never liked that guy.
Sarah Coldheart- Yeah, It doesn't happen often.
Alissa- I'm glad you like it so much.
Katie Carr-Thanks!
Karina- Yeah I know I think I may do a revised version after I finish.
Annakana- Don't worry I will.
Lilly-I'm glad you like it so much.
Dolphingurl- Thanks and I'm glad you think my story is so great.
Daemon- Your right I shouldn't stop because of some people that don't like it, I should continue it for the many people that like it.
Lisa. F- Thanks a lot for your suggestions they help a lot I really appriciate it.
Elena- Yeah me neither.
Thumpet.- Yes, some people have bad taste.
Demon Grey - lol Well at least now you don't have to go through all that trouble of stalking me.
Keziah- Look, I updated!
Clarylissa- You're right it was just there opinion.
Moi- I don't know where we would be and don't worry I'm defentialy continuing this story.
Angelina Weasley- I'm glad you think I should.
M-sama- I wish I could give you his name but he left it as an anonomus review under "YUCK!" so I don't think it will help much.
Dragonlady- Lol I'm glad your so certain I should, I wasn't.
Tal-Don't worry I will.
Vulpes Lapis- Don't worry I won't stop and I'm glad you have such very strong feelings about this fic.
Lady Alehanra A.K.A Medusagrrl- I'm honored that this is your favorite fic on ff.net and don't worry I wont end this story.
This story is dedicated to Sami. Always wear your seatbelt.
This chapter is dedicated to all the people that brought me to my senses and told me not to give up. I shouldn't stop because a couple people told me my story was bad (In different words) I should do it for all those that like my story and me. Also to Lady Arwen Evenstarand ahcool for adding me to their favorites list.
King Jonathan was sitting in the council room with his head in his hands. There had just been a meeting with the Carthaki ambassadors he could tell already; today was going to be a long day. Jonathan sat there a while longer and then he heard what sounded like a number of people running towards the room but it was coming from all different directions. For a second Jonathan thought he was hallucinating due to stress but then three people burst into the room panting. Then all at once they said,
"Daine."
Then it was a mixture of rambling that you couldn't hear because it was all said at once. Then they seemed to notice that there was more then one person in the room and they stopped talking. Then Jonathan seemed to let the words sink in.
"Wait, what about Daine?" He asked.
Then he began to recognize them. It was Numair, Evin Larse and Ouna.
Meanwhile.
Daine couldn't take it anymore. She couldn't stand being away from the people she loved. Daine loved being a goddess and she wanted to be with her ma and all the other gods and goddesses but she also wanted to be a mortal. She really wanted to have both, Goddess and mortal but she knew that was something she would never have. She almost wished she could be someone else entirely, not a goddess, not Daine, not even someone that would know Numair. What Daine didn't notice was that she was saying this aloud and someone with cruel intensions had heard her wish.
"Did you find anything out that will help us get ride of that annoying brat!" A lady with dark midnight hair barked. She could have been beautiful even more then Thayet, the peerless herself. She had long dark hair with a tall thin figure and flawless skin, but there was a cold air around her. Almost like an evil essence. Just by looking at her you could tell she did not mean you well. Then there were her eyes, a cold gray pair of eyes that could cause you to shiver in fear just by looking into them. There were no lines of mirth on her face just a stony set expression.
"Yes my lady, I have found some very valuable information." A thin short man hissed.
"The girl wishes to be someone else, an easy wish to grant by someone of your power don't you think even if you are in this wretched prison."
"Ah yes this prison, I will be here till the next star is born but not to worry, I am coming up with a plan at the moment. But that is not our aim at the moment. For now we have to get rid of that wretched girl. You say she wishes to be someone else, perfect, I know just how we can get her out of the way."
Meanwhile.
"You mean to tell me you saw Daine today all three of you! Not only that but you're telling me that she has become a goddess not just any goddess but the Patron goddess of Corus!" King Jonathan exclaimed. He was usually a very calm and poised person but the recent turn of events had taken quite a toll on him.
"Yes, that is exactly what we are saying." Numair replied. His face had regained a lot of its normal color and he looked much better now.
"Well, what do you want me to do about it, there is nothing I can do." Was all Jonathan said.
Numair just stood there speechless. "We must do something! We can't just sit here!"
"What do you propose we do? Daine chose to be a goddess of her own will, they are not holding her captive there isn't a thing we can do."
"We can. charge. or attack. we must get her back Jon! We must do something, we can't just sit here!" Numair sputtered.
"But just sit here we must." Was all Jon said and then he left leaving two confused people and one heartbroken man.
Okay I know it is really short in actuality but it took me forever to get this far so I decided instead of making you wait longer and have it not much longer to update now and write more latter. Thank you to all my reviewers and to Lady Arwen Evenstar and ahcool for adding me to their favorite's list. I hope you liked this chapter and I'll try to write more soon as hard as it is with school. Die school DIE!!!! Any way here are all the people that reviewed.
flare- Don't worry I will.
Leaena Cedarthorn- Yes it is but that's one reason while I'll finish this story out. Thank's for your review.
Clarylissa- Geesh you make me feel guilty. Ahh! *runs and hides* I'll be good I promise! Lol thanks if I ever need someone to slap someone I'll ask you.
Silver Mage- It's my party and I'll cry if I want to! Sorry that line just popped into my head.
Lady Arwen Evenstar- You added me to to your favorite's list! Awsome! This chapter is also dedicated to you!
Darkchaos- Don't worry I wont.
ahcool- Wow! I'm on your favorite's list too! Cool! This chapter is also dedicated to you!
something - Okay but only for you.
Threefrogz- I'm glad you think so.
Safiya-MARY SUES DON'T EXIST- Good you agree I think it's PATRON too. Lol
Kiri Keguatomi- lol I'm glad.
Salior Vamp a.k.a MidnightAngelGoddess- Don't worry I will.
Sivvus- lol I doubt it but maybe
Joanna- lol I'm glad you luv me Well, I'm hounoring your request
Mistress Sock- Oh yup someone said it was.
Chloe the Dragontamer- Thanks and I personnaly vote for the Black gods Kindom much more scary.
- I don't even know why I'm writing to this person because they'll never check it but yes, the good does outweigh the bad.
elisa fenning- I'm glad you love it.
Karen Keddle- Well if I must.*sigh*.
ShinigamiKarui- Yeah right insy winsy OOC, more like major OOC but don't worry I'll fix it the next time around.
Martini- I'm glad you like it.
Lydiby- I think I may do a revised copy so that may be a good place to start Thanks!
Lady Jen Wildmage- I think I just may.
Angel Of The Storms- Yeah it does but I decided to continue anyway.
Silva Sun- You know I never liked that guy.
Sarah Coldheart- Yeah, It doesn't happen often.
Alissa- I'm glad you like it so much.
Katie Carr-Thanks!
Karina- Yeah I know I think I may do a revised version after I finish.
Annakana- Don't worry I will.
Lilly-I'm glad you like it so much.
Dolphingurl- Thanks and I'm glad you think my story is so great.
Daemon- Your right I shouldn't stop because of some people that don't like it, I should continue it for the many people that like it.
Lisa. F- Thanks a lot for your suggestions they help a lot I really appriciate it.
Elena- Yeah me neither.
Thumpet.- Yes, some people have bad taste.
Demon Grey - lol Well at least now you don't have to go through all that trouble of stalking me.
Keziah- Look, I updated!
Clarylissa- You're right it was just there opinion.
Moi- I don't know where we would be and don't worry I'm defentialy continuing this story.
Angelina Weasley- I'm glad you think I should.
M-sama- I wish I could give you his name but he left it as an anonomus review under "YUCK!" so I don't think it will help much.
Dragonlady- Lol I'm glad your so certain I should, I wasn't.
Tal-Don't worry I will.
Vulpes Lapis- Don't worry I won't stop and I'm glad you have such very strong feelings about this fic.
Lady Alehanra A.K.A Medusagrrl- I'm honored that this is your favorite fic on ff.net and don't worry I wont end this story.
