Hello there (if any ones reading this) im glad to say that im finally writing the next chapter.

I wanna say thank you to:

Anime Gal4

Violet Doll

Peeps inferior (thanks for help with this chapter!)

IceBlade740

Chibi-anime-assassin

Thank you people! You gave me hope!

Anyway, here's the next chapter!

Ten minutes until they get here. Plenty of time. I hope. But I don't see how they know where I am… never mind I just have to get out of here. Alive.

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I was running along one of the winding, empty corridors in the now evacuated building (I couldn't decide what building so now its just an old, huge building like a hotel), the pictures on the walls were flashing by. I reached the end and had a decision: left or right? To the left I could suddenly hear a voice calling for help, I tiptoed warily down the left corridor and pulled my gun out. I looked around the corner to see… no one. I was confused, there was a voice this way, I was sure of it. Damn it! I was being hunted and there was a civilian in the building I rolled my eyes, just my luck, in 10 minutes or less the entire Sanq Kingdom would be here ready to blow me to pieces and I had to save an unsuspecting sucker….  My thoughts were cut off when I heard footsteps. It was a man of about 35-40. He looked like a rather nervous man, but then again it could have been the fact that I was pointing a gun at him.

"It's okay sir" I tried to say politely but it came out rather sharp.

"D-do you know what's going o-on?" 'yes' I thought grimly, but I never said this.

"If you just follow me and do as I say, you'll be just fine," I said reassuringly, it came out right this time. He just nodded and didn't ask any more questions, that was good. I didn't want to explain to him that there were over 500 men on their way here to kill me and there was only 8 minutes left to get out of the building.

"Do you know your way out of here?" I asked, silently praying

"Yes, I've worked here for 10 years" he answered my prayers

"Please! Lead the way!" I was so relieved " We have to get out of here fast!"

Then we were on our way, he led us down flights of stairs, through posh rooms, past some amazing things. I was already lost.

"We will go through the Front door" he said, I shook my head firmly

"No, the back door, it will be safer" yet again, he didn't question what I said, he just led me straight there.(in the kitchen)

I crouched down by the door and put my ear against it, I couldn't hear any movement. I whispered

"What's your name?"

"Jonathon, what's yours?" he asked as if he were a child making friends. I smiled gently

"My name's Deek, but if any one asks, you don't know who I am. Okay?" now I needed reassurance, but he just nodded.

I told him to wait just out side the room and to come when I called, but I gave him no reasons. He curiously obliged.

When he was safe I opened the door a crack and checked my watch

"Crap!" I muttered, 2 minutes left, I prepared my gun and slid outside. No one was around I sprinted the length of the back garden, which was the size of a field, into the cover of the trees.

Then I realised what wasn't right, I could hear something whirring……a helicopter! One that carries machinery, or WEAPONS!

Then it struck me, they were going to blow up the building, my body relaxed because I was safe but my mind was screaming at me, a name it was telling me a name…

"JONATHON!! NOW!! GET OUT HERE!! PLEASE!!...." It was no use I could barely hear myself; I knew I couldn't reach him in time and I couldn't put myself in danger any more than I was. So I stood there, watching the bombs go down and the building go up…

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The tears want to come but, they just won't. I turn to leave; I turn my back on one of the few in the world kind enough to help me, I stumble away through the trees, I cant go back to the safe house so I sit on the forest floor and imagine the tears flowing down my face. The imaginary me whispers

"I'm sorry Jonathon, I'm so sorry…"

Well, what do you think, okay, crap, good? Should I write the next chapter, which has some humour in it? Please review and tell me what you think.!!!