Author notes
*** Thanks to all who reviewed I'm glad so many liked it. ********
Paige Woods thanks for the lesson.
Here is a little about me. I have never been good with grammar or dialogue. You see I'm severely dyslexic. I'm sure you get the idea. It took me two days to actually sit down and write what you read; also this is my first time writing. Kind of a double whammy, and that's why I don't mind suggestions. There are more chapters; the plot is there we just haven't gotten to the heart of it yet. I just wanted to set a few things up.
P.S. If someone wants to edit my chapters before I post, or think they can have a better go at it I'll be glad to hand over my notes and give you the rains. so to speak. I'm really not all that comfortable writing dialogue. I just thought I would give it a go.
*** Thanks to all who reviewed I'm glad so many liked it. ********
Paige Woods thanks for the lesson.
Here is a little about me. I have never been good with grammar or dialogue. You see I'm severely dyslexic. I'm sure you get the idea. It took me two days to actually sit down and write what you read; also this is my first time writing. Kind of a double whammy, and that's why I don't mind suggestions. There are more chapters; the plot is there we just haven't gotten to the heart of it yet. I just wanted to set a few things up.
P.S. If someone wants to edit my chapters before I post, or think they can have a better go at it I'll be glad to hand over my notes and give you the rains. so to speak. I'm really not all that comfortable writing dialogue. I just thought I would give it a go.
