Allrighty... this chapter is compleatly rewritten because of my computer
crash down, and I know it's a little shorter then the other chapters but I
needed to give you something to read. And to prove that this story isn't
dead yet. And I have a lot of ideas, but it almost looks like I need a new
beta reader... But if Megumi mail me soon there won't be a need for one.
Oh well, I hope you liked this. The suspense!!! Or whatever. ^_~ Tell me what ya think.
Oh! And I just have to thank all of you who has reviewed my story. I'm so glad that V/H fans read this too.
And some special thanks to EVERYONE!!!! ^____^
PrincessButthead: WOW!! This story is really good! I'm usually completely stuckon Van and Hitomi fics, but the way your writing is, i can't stop reading it!! Ah,sorry about your computer. Mine done the same not too long ago. Evil. Anywayz, i'm looking forward to reading the next chapter! BYE!
~ *Blushes* I'm glad you're enjoying it. That's my goal. ^__^ And the next chapter was speeded on because of you. ^_^ ~
rose: hey wow that is awsome i think hitomai and allen as a couple is cool so dont stop if you want ideas or help or heck if u even want some one to take over writing it come to me
~ lol. I'll remember that, but like I said I'm not giving up on this yet. ^_^ ~
Angel: I really love what you have done so far. It's intersting with what you did with Kei, and I really want to find out what Hanna thinks of Van. Also, I would like to read more about C/V and H/A. The C/V combo in very intersting to me and I think that you could do alot with it in the background of the story. PLease continue to work on this, you really have a good story going.
~ Ahhh. That's a good idea, I'll remember that. I'm going to put more flashbacks in, I already have quite a lot of ideas. ~
Bloody Love: That was good. I was wondering when Van would show up but I didn't expect it to be like this. Well I hope you get the next chapter out soon.
~ It was the most interesting way I could intruduce him into the fic. Sorry it took so long to post this chapter though. Hope you like it. ~
Good Kitty: Please update soon, this is a good story.
~ lol. Thanks. ^_^ glad you like it. ~
jess131346: update soon!
~ I'm updating! I'm uppdating!! ^__^ ~
Xelena: i really liked this chapter. how hanna reacted to Allen's taunts and how well she fought... and i like the ending, with van coming to visit. please continue
~ Glad you liked it too. ^__^ I'm starting to runs short of things to write to everyone so it looks different. =P It was really fun to write that chapter, but a little harder to continue it. ~
Hikari Schezar: Please, please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please ,please,please, have a third chapter! This is one of my favourite stories(checks her favourites list) See? It's even on my list! Update son!
I can't wait to see what happens with Van!
~ Ok, ok, ok, ok, ok, ok, ok, ok, ok, ok, ok, ok, ok, ok!!! Lol Third chapter up! ^__^ And YAAAY! I'm on some ones favourite list! *does a little happy dance* ~
MegumiFuu: Dun dun dun! Here comes Van. I wonder what his reaction to all of this will be!
~ lol ^__^ Read and find out! ~
the original esca chick: it's actually nice to read a A/H fic for a change. I don't think I've ever really read one before or come across one. I like Hannah's character a lot. She almost reminds me of myself except I'm just a bit crazy from time to time, lol! Well I really can't wait till you update!
~e*c~
~ lol. I thought FF.net lacked A/H fics. ^__^ And what is it you're saying? That Hanna is crazy ALL the time? ^___^ ~
Mystic Fanel: Please post a third chapter!! I absolutely love this story! I haven't read many Hitomi/Allen fics and if I have they haven't been this good. I really like this fic, and Hanna is such a cool character, Kei is so cute too! Keep up the good work and I hope you update!
~ Awww! Thank you! ^___^ *huggles* Glad you like it! ~
Macky: Really unusual pairing youve chosen for the story. I like it. I wonder who Kei father is. I dont know why but i think it might be something odd like Dilandau but ill just have to wait till you write the third chapter to find out so update soon.
~ Actually, I wrote who's Kei's father in the second chapter. ^_^; But I'm glad you like it anyway. ~
Niffer: cool chapter! Can't wait for more!
~ ^___^ Well you don't have to wait any longer! Here's the third chapter! ~
Celestial Nymph: I really enjoyed reading this fic. I'm glad that it was a H/A pairing. There aren't that many, y'know? I'm thinking of writing one now!! ^_^;; Please try writing the next chapter as soon as you can! Ehm, keep up the great writing.
~ Yes I know! And it sucks! There should be more H/V fics!!! And I'm glad I inspired you! Do drop a note if you ever write one, I promise I'll read and review. ^___^ ~
Xelena: i love it! especially since it's so rare to see a H/A fic- they're overrun by H/V fics- argh! i mean, some of em are good, but some of the others are. well, bad. so keep on writing.
~ I totally agree with you! ^___^ And in most of them they make Allen look like the bad gigolo guy... *frowns* Oh well. ^__^ ~
watever: this is really, really great! please do continue!
~ Aww... thankies. And I will continue! I will write this until my ideas runs out or until I kill all of them... Just kidding. ^_~ ~
Fran: Finally! Another Allen/Hitomi Fan! Join the extreamly small club! And PLEAZ WRIGHT MORE!!
~ Hehe... Yes I'm a A/H fan too. And hey! You can join MY clubb. ^___^ I have one. =P ~
Niffer: I really liked this. I don't mind that it is an allen and hitomi fic either! Please keep writing
~ Yaaaaay! I will continue! ~
Mari-chan: Wait a minute. Did you say his name was Kai FANEL Shezar? As in Van married Celena? As in Van married DILANDAU!?! Okay, I get that this is alternate pairings and all but, Van and Dilandau?
(This is a little gross and rather disturbing thought but, would Celena scream his name during sex in the same insane bloodthirsty way she used to as Dilandau?)
~ *ROFLAMO* ^___^ I laugh every time I read this! Anyway, maybe a small explanation is in place, ne? First of all in my story Celena doesn't change back into Dilandu anymore. So no more Dilly in my story. Gomen. ^_^; That would be weird. :p
*Fwaps Mari-chan with a pillow*
And you have a disturbed mind! I didn't even think of the whole name shouting thing until you brought it up you lill pervert! ^_^;; ~
Mystic Fanel: That was actually a very good beginning to a story. I usually don't read fics with A/H pairings, but this is just really good. So. Dilandau is Kei's Father, ne? Is Dilandau gonna be in the story at all (if you continue it)? ^_^ That would be cool.
Please update soon!!
~ Thankies. ^__^ I'm so glad that H/V fans read this too! It makes me soooo happy! ~
veronica: that is truly an amazing start!! i strongly support the continuation of this story!! that is soo cool! AMAZING!
~ *glomps her first reviewer* thank you sooooo much! That's the best first review a writer can get! ^___^ ~
And now on with the fic!!!! And thank you ALL for reviewing! ^____^
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Hanna who had relaxed quite a bit after Kei bounded to the door jumped when the boy yelled out. Then the hairs on the back of her neck rose as she felt someone stare at her.
"Dad! Dad! You can't guess what's happened! That girl over there is from the mystic moon! Her name is Hanna! Hanna Kanzaki!" Van who had looked quite happy until Hanna's name was said, then his face turned hard and unreadable.
Hanna slowly stood, her blond bangs covering here eyes, and turned around to face the king. Kei who was oblivious to the tension in the room tugged on his father's shirt in an attempt to get his attention again, rambling on about how Hanna had fought with a Guymelef and how they met.
Van was just staring at Hanna, and started to feel angry for some reason. It was something with the girl's stance, and the colour of her hair that screamed familiarity. And he didn't like it one bit.
Hanna was feeling uneasy, but she didn't show it, you should never show your opponent any kind of weakness. But it was difficult. The man across the room had a posture that screamed authority and something else. He was tall and lean built, but you could see on his arms that he was in no way weak. And those eyes that almost glared at her, they showed that he had seen fare too much in his life.
The staring contest continued, and Kei fell silent. He was confused to no end. Finally Celena walked into the room, dusting some flower of her hands as she did so, and stopped dead in her tracks. She looked from Hanna to Van and then back again.
*Oh my... this isn't good.*
"Van, what a pleasant surprise!" Celena burst out, mainly to get the two from staring at the other that way.
Van jerked his head to look at Celena but the anger in his eyes didn't go away. The smile on Celena's face fell for a moment, but she forced it back into place.
"You're early, we weren't expecting you until tomorrow."
Van finally moved and closed to front door then turned back to look at her.
"I was able to get things done sooner then expected so I got here early..." He glanced over at Hanna again who twitched slightly at the gaze he was giving her.
"I hope you don't mind." He looked back at Celena and gave her a small and reserved smile.
"Oh not at all. It's just that today have been really eventful, I guess you haven't heard about Hitomi yet?" Celena asked Van, although she could already guess the answer. Then she put a hand on Kei's shoulder and smiled at him.
"Kei dear, go and wash up for dinner will you. And take Hanna with you I need to talk to Van." Kei nodded and ran over to Hanna and grabbed her hand and ran of with her. Hanna just let herself be lead, glad that she was out of reach from Van's looks.
Van let out a sigh and walked over to the couch and sat down. Celena took a seat across from him and put her hands on her lap, fiddling slightly with her skirt.
"So she's back... Has she changed?" Celena smiled a little, she knew that the dreaded question was going to come up sooner or later she just had to wait for it.
"Yes, but so has you. It's been fourteen years Van. Everyone changes."
"Is she still... beautiful?" Van had an almost sad look on his face at this point. But he could still feel a simmer of anger lure in him.
"I would say that she's even more beautiful then before. She was just a child then, and so were you. And you're really handsome yourself, you know."
Van went quiet and looked down at his hands as he sat hunched over, half resting his hands on his legs. Celena had a feeling what the next question would be, and she hated that it was she who had to tell him.
"...Is she..." Van couldn't even bring himself to ask. But Celena knew and drew a deep breath and let it out slowly before she started to speak.
"Yes, Hanna is Allen's and Hitomi's doughtier." Van's hands turned into fists and shook slightly, and his face was in shadows.
"...How old?..."
Celena bit her lower lip and then stood, feeling the sudden urge to move around.
"She's... fourteen..." Celena started to fidget more and looked over at Van to get any kind of reaction. She was expecting him to get all angry and yell and such. But he just looked broken. He sat with his arms resting on his knees while he rested his head in his hands.
"Van...?" Celena got a little closer and kneeled down besides the couch. Then his shoulders started to shake a little and Celena thought that he was holding back sobs, but just after a moment she could hear low laughter, not that happy laughter but a dry chuckle.
"I should have known..." he abruptly stood and looked at Celena. She got to her feet as well and gave the king of Fanellia a questioning look.
"How should you have known?"
"I saw then kissing... and then there was that marriage proposal. I should have known..." He walked over to the door and was about to open it, but someone opened if from the other side. Van took a step back so that the door wouldn't hit him as it opened.
And in came a laughing Hitomi and a smiling Allen. But the laughter soon died when they saw who was right in front of them. Hitomi just stared and Van was also staring, but they stared for two different reasons. Hitomi stared because she was surprised and was trying to think of something to say. And Van was staring at the mature and beautiful woman before him with longing and regret in his eyes.
"Van..." There was uncertainty in Hitomi's voice, manly because she had no idea at all what she was supposed to say.
"Hitomi..."
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In the next room Hanna was leaning against the wall, she had been listening to the whole conversation. And she was now listening to the lack of conversation between the grownups.
*What are they doing?*
She couldn't see them, so she was starting to get a bit nervous. It shouldn't be that quiet.
"Hanna, what are yo...mumgdy!" Hanna was quick to cover Kei's mouth with her hands.
"Quiet...!" She sharply whispered to him and waited for him to nod before removing her hands.
"What are you doing?" He said again but in a whisper this time. Hanna was about to tell him something when she saw Kei look behind her and she just knew that someone was standing there.
"Come now, lets go and get dinner ready children. Hurry up." Celena gave Hanna a small nudge and Kei was already on his way to the kitchen so he didn't see when Celena leaned over and spoke to Hanna.
"You shouldn't spy on people Hanna, you can get in trouble or in the middle of a fight. And you do not want to get involved right now dear."
Hanna just slumped her shoulders and rolled her eyes but didn't say anything she just walked into the kitchen leaving Allen, Van and Hitomi to deal with their problems.
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Oh well, I hope you liked this. The suspense!!! Or whatever. ^_~ Tell me what ya think.
Oh! And I just have to thank all of you who has reviewed my story. I'm so glad that V/H fans read this too.
And some special thanks to EVERYONE!!!! ^____^
PrincessButthead: WOW!! This story is really good! I'm usually completely stuckon Van and Hitomi fics, but the way your writing is, i can't stop reading it!! Ah,sorry about your computer. Mine done the same not too long ago. Evil. Anywayz, i'm looking forward to reading the next chapter! BYE!
~ *Blushes* I'm glad you're enjoying it. That's my goal. ^__^ And the next chapter was speeded on because of you. ^_^ ~
rose: hey wow that is awsome i think hitomai and allen as a couple is cool so dont stop if you want ideas or help or heck if u even want some one to take over writing it come to me
~ lol. I'll remember that, but like I said I'm not giving up on this yet. ^_^ ~
Angel: I really love what you have done so far. It's intersting with what you did with Kei, and I really want to find out what Hanna thinks of Van. Also, I would like to read more about C/V and H/A. The C/V combo in very intersting to me and I think that you could do alot with it in the background of the story. PLease continue to work on this, you really have a good story going.
~ Ahhh. That's a good idea, I'll remember that. I'm going to put more flashbacks in, I already have quite a lot of ideas. ~
Bloody Love: That was good. I was wondering when Van would show up but I didn't expect it to be like this. Well I hope you get the next chapter out soon.
~ It was the most interesting way I could intruduce him into the fic. Sorry it took so long to post this chapter though. Hope you like it. ~
Good Kitty: Please update soon, this is a good story.
~ lol. Thanks. ^_^ glad you like it. ~
jess131346: update soon!
~ I'm updating! I'm uppdating!! ^__^ ~
Xelena: i really liked this chapter. how hanna reacted to Allen's taunts and how well she fought... and i like the ending, with van coming to visit. please continue
~ Glad you liked it too. ^__^ I'm starting to runs short of things to write to everyone so it looks different. =P It was really fun to write that chapter, but a little harder to continue it. ~
Hikari Schezar: Please, please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please ,please,please, have a third chapter! This is one of my favourite stories(checks her favourites list) See? It's even on my list! Update son!
I can't wait to see what happens with Van!
~ Ok, ok, ok, ok, ok, ok, ok, ok, ok, ok, ok, ok, ok, ok!!! Lol Third chapter up! ^__^ And YAAAY! I'm on some ones favourite list! *does a little happy dance* ~
MegumiFuu: Dun dun dun! Here comes Van. I wonder what his reaction to all of this will be!
~ lol ^__^ Read and find out! ~
the original esca chick: it's actually nice to read a A/H fic for a change. I don't think I've ever really read one before or come across one. I like Hannah's character a lot. She almost reminds me of myself except I'm just a bit crazy from time to time, lol! Well I really can't wait till you update!
~e*c~
~ lol. I thought FF.net lacked A/H fics. ^__^ And what is it you're saying? That Hanna is crazy ALL the time? ^___^ ~
Mystic Fanel: Please post a third chapter!! I absolutely love this story! I haven't read many Hitomi/Allen fics and if I have they haven't been this good. I really like this fic, and Hanna is such a cool character, Kei is so cute too! Keep up the good work and I hope you update!
~ Awww! Thank you! ^___^ *huggles* Glad you like it! ~
Macky: Really unusual pairing youve chosen for the story. I like it. I wonder who Kei father is. I dont know why but i think it might be something odd like Dilandau but ill just have to wait till you write the third chapter to find out so update soon.
~ Actually, I wrote who's Kei's father in the second chapter. ^_^; But I'm glad you like it anyway. ~
Niffer: cool chapter! Can't wait for more!
~ ^___^ Well you don't have to wait any longer! Here's the third chapter! ~
Celestial Nymph: I really enjoyed reading this fic. I'm glad that it was a H/A pairing. There aren't that many, y'know? I'm thinking of writing one now!! ^_^;; Please try writing the next chapter as soon as you can! Ehm, keep up the great writing.
~ Yes I know! And it sucks! There should be more H/V fics!!! And I'm glad I inspired you! Do drop a note if you ever write one, I promise I'll read and review. ^___^ ~
Xelena: i love it! especially since it's so rare to see a H/A fic- they're overrun by H/V fics- argh! i mean, some of em are good, but some of the others are. well, bad. so keep on writing.
~ I totally agree with you! ^___^ And in most of them they make Allen look like the bad gigolo guy... *frowns* Oh well. ^__^ ~
watever: this is really, really great! please do continue!
~ Aww... thankies. And I will continue! I will write this until my ideas runs out or until I kill all of them... Just kidding. ^_~ ~
Fran: Finally! Another Allen/Hitomi Fan! Join the extreamly small club! And PLEAZ WRIGHT MORE!!
~ Hehe... Yes I'm a A/H fan too. And hey! You can join MY clubb. ^___^ I have one. =P ~
Niffer: I really liked this. I don't mind that it is an allen and hitomi fic either! Please keep writing
~ Yaaaaay! I will continue! ~
Mari-chan: Wait a minute. Did you say his name was Kai FANEL Shezar? As in Van married Celena? As in Van married DILANDAU!?! Okay, I get that this is alternate pairings and all but, Van and Dilandau?
(This is a little gross and rather disturbing thought but, would Celena scream his name during sex in the same insane bloodthirsty way she used to as Dilandau?)
~ *ROFLAMO* ^___^ I laugh every time I read this! Anyway, maybe a small explanation is in place, ne? First of all in my story Celena doesn't change back into Dilandu anymore. So no more Dilly in my story. Gomen. ^_^; That would be weird. :p
*Fwaps Mari-chan with a pillow*
And you have a disturbed mind! I didn't even think of the whole name shouting thing until you brought it up you lill pervert! ^_^;; ~
Mystic Fanel: That was actually a very good beginning to a story. I usually don't read fics with A/H pairings, but this is just really good. So. Dilandau is Kei's Father, ne? Is Dilandau gonna be in the story at all (if you continue it)? ^_^ That would be cool.
Please update soon!!
~ Thankies. ^__^ I'm so glad that H/V fans read this too! It makes me soooo happy! ~
veronica: that is truly an amazing start!! i strongly support the continuation of this story!! that is soo cool! AMAZING!
~ *glomps her first reviewer* thank you sooooo much! That's the best first review a writer can get! ^___^ ~
And now on with the fic!!!! And thank you ALL for reviewing! ^____^
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Hanna who had relaxed quite a bit after Kei bounded to the door jumped when the boy yelled out. Then the hairs on the back of her neck rose as she felt someone stare at her.
"Dad! Dad! You can't guess what's happened! That girl over there is from the mystic moon! Her name is Hanna! Hanna Kanzaki!" Van who had looked quite happy until Hanna's name was said, then his face turned hard and unreadable.
Hanna slowly stood, her blond bangs covering here eyes, and turned around to face the king. Kei who was oblivious to the tension in the room tugged on his father's shirt in an attempt to get his attention again, rambling on about how Hanna had fought with a Guymelef and how they met.
Van was just staring at Hanna, and started to feel angry for some reason. It was something with the girl's stance, and the colour of her hair that screamed familiarity. And he didn't like it one bit.
Hanna was feeling uneasy, but she didn't show it, you should never show your opponent any kind of weakness. But it was difficult. The man across the room had a posture that screamed authority and something else. He was tall and lean built, but you could see on his arms that he was in no way weak. And those eyes that almost glared at her, they showed that he had seen fare too much in his life.
The staring contest continued, and Kei fell silent. He was confused to no end. Finally Celena walked into the room, dusting some flower of her hands as she did so, and stopped dead in her tracks. She looked from Hanna to Van and then back again.
*Oh my... this isn't good.*
"Van, what a pleasant surprise!" Celena burst out, mainly to get the two from staring at the other that way.
Van jerked his head to look at Celena but the anger in his eyes didn't go away. The smile on Celena's face fell for a moment, but she forced it back into place.
"You're early, we weren't expecting you until tomorrow."
Van finally moved and closed to front door then turned back to look at her.
"I was able to get things done sooner then expected so I got here early..." He glanced over at Hanna again who twitched slightly at the gaze he was giving her.
"I hope you don't mind." He looked back at Celena and gave her a small and reserved smile.
"Oh not at all. It's just that today have been really eventful, I guess you haven't heard about Hitomi yet?" Celena asked Van, although she could already guess the answer. Then she put a hand on Kei's shoulder and smiled at him.
"Kei dear, go and wash up for dinner will you. And take Hanna with you I need to talk to Van." Kei nodded and ran over to Hanna and grabbed her hand and ran of with her. Hanna just let herself be lead, glad that she was out of reach from Van's looks.
Van let out a sigh and walked over to the couch and sat down. Celena took a seat across from him and put her hands on her lap, fiddling slightly with her skirt.
"So she's back... Has she changed?" Celena smiled a little, she knew that the dreaded question was going to come up sooner or later she just had to wait for it.
"Yes, but so has you. It's been fourteen years Van. Everyone changes."
"Is she still... beautiful?" Van had an almost sad look on his face at this point. But he could still feel a simmer of anger lure in him.
"I would say that she's even more beautiful then before. She was just a child then, and so were you. And you're really handsome yourself, you know."
Van went quiet and looked down at his hands as he sat hunched over, half resting his hands on his legs. Celena had a feeling what the next question would be, and she hated that it was she who had to tell him.
"...Is she..." Van couldn't even bring himself to ask. But Celena knew and drew a deep breath and let it out slowly before she started to speak.
"Yes, Hanna is Allen's and Hitomi's doughtier." Van's hands turned into fists and shook slightly, and his face was in shadows.
"...How old?..."
Celena bit her lower lip and then stood, feeling the sudden urge to move around.
"She's... fourteen..." Celena started to fidget more and looked over at Van to get any kind of reaction. She was expecting him to get all angry and yell and such. But he just looked broken. He sat with his arms resting on his knees while he rested his head in his hands.
"Van...?" Celena got a little closer and kneeled down besides the couch. Then his shoulders started to shake a little and Celena thought that he was holding back sobs, but just after a moment she could hear low laughter, not that happy laughter but a dry chuckle.
"I should have known..." he abruptly stood and looked at Celena. She got to her feet as well and gave the king of Fanellia a questioning look.
"How should you have known?"
"I saw then kissing... and then there was that marriage proposal. I should have known..." He walked over to the door and was about to open it, but someone opened if from the other side. Van took a step back so that the door wouldn't hit him as it opened.
And in came a laughing Hitomi and a smiling Allen. But the laughter soon died when they saw who was right in front of them. Hitomi just stared and Van was also staring, but they stared for two different reasons. Hitomi stared because she was surprised and was trying to think of something to say. And Van was staring at the mature and beautiful woman before him with longing and regret in his eyes.
"Van..." There was uncertainty in Hitomi's voice, manly because she had no idea at all what she was supposed to say.
"Hitomi..."
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In the next room Hanna was leaning against the wall, she had been listening to the whole conversation. And she was now listening to the lack of conversation between the grownups.
*What are they doing?*
She couldn't see them, so she was starting to get a bit nervous. It shouldn't be that quiet.
"Hanna, what are yo...mumgdy!" Hanna was quick to cover Kei's mouth with her hands.
"Quiet...!" She sharply whispered to him and waited for him to nod before removing her hands.
"What are you doing?" He said again but in a whisper this time. Hanna was about to tell him something when she saw Kei look behind her and she just knew that someone was standing there.
"Come now, lets go and get dinner ready children. Hurry up." Celena gave Hanna a small nudge and Kei was already on his way to the kitchen so he didn't see when Celena leaned over and spoke to Hanna.
"You shouldn't spy on people Hanna, you can get in trouble or in the middle of a fight. And you do not want to get involved right now dear."
Hanna just slumped her shoulders and rolled her eyes but didn't say anything she just walked into the kitchen leaving Allen, Van and Hitomi to deal with their problems.
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