New chapter ( Anyways, I always welcome constructive criticism, but I got
reviews from people who didn't understand what was going on in the story
who only read several chapters and gave up. Please guys, to understand the
story, you have to read ALL of the chapters. And some questions have not
been answered yet. I made it that way! And once again, Sarah's sisters
name is pronounced Mee-Chell. Sorry to vent like this, but this what you
need to do to understand the story. Oh, and the map is finished, but I
need to get it on my site. I know it is a little hard without it, but I
know you guys are creative enough to imagine the Underground ;-)
I don't own the Labyrinth, Jareth, or Sarah. But I own everything else. The song is Don't Fear the Reaper by the Blue Oyster Cult.
All our times have come
Here but now they're gone
Seasons don't fear the reaper
Nor do the wind, the sun or the rain
We can be like they are
Amberle woke with a start. Something was wrong. She didn't know what, but something was wrong. Amberle got out of her tent. It was around midnight. The moon was high in the sky, and the fire was smoldering. She looked around, her Cetra senses alert. Something moved to her left. She drew out her bow and arrow and waited. Out of the shadows, jumped a bunny rabbit. She smiled to her self, mentally slapping herself for being foolish. She turned around and saw black....
Adam laughed as he saw in his crystal what happened to the red haired girl. The Reaper had knocked her out and was dragging her away. He knew they were coming for Sarah. But they wouldn't make it. Not without the two Cetras. Anthony was next. He heard footsteps, and turned around. It was Sarah, how the hell did she get out?
"Sarah my love, what are you doing out of your room?" He asked.
But was surprised when she just smiled at him and climbed on his lap. She kissed him fiercely and straddled his hips. He kissed back passionately. When they broke he leaned back and closed his eyes.
"Adam my dear, you never enjoyed a kiss that much when it was me."
Adams eyes snapped open, that wasn't Sarah. He looked up. It was Shanna, a friend of his father's daughter. He scowled and pushed her off.
"I thought I said you weren't allowed in my castle Shanna."
"Well I heard about your new little plaything and I came to give my congratulations"
She fluttered her eyelashes and smiled. She had long dark purple hair, and gold eyes. Her face was articulate in its points and she had full lips. She had been trying to get Adams's affection for years, but never successful. Shanna was a shape shifter, and played a lot of pranks around the castle.
"Well thanks Shanna, now leave!" Adam commanded.
She smiled and turned away, gold eyes flashing.
Come on baby... Don't fear the Reaper
Baby take my hand... Don't fear the Reaper
We'll be able to fly... Don't fear the Reaper
Baby I'm your man...
Jareth awoke with the sun shining and birds chirping. He rose from his tent just as everyone else was. But Amberle was missing. He looked around, with no sign of her. She must have gone looking for wood or breakfast, no reason to worry. But after 2 hours, the company did worry.
"Jareth, this isn't right, she has been gone for far too long." Anthony said with concern.
"You're right, I-"
Jareth was cut off by Amberle collapsing into camp, and passing out. She was cut, bruised, and battered. Anthony was the first to reach her. Jareth looked at the marks on her body, they were all the same shape. Every bruise, every cut. They were the same shape. The marks were all identical.
"What could have done this?" whispered Isabella.
"The Reaper." Replied Jareth.
Everyone looked at him as if he had two heads, except for Anthony. Anthony knew. The Reaper was a demon feared by all Cetra. Amberle started to awake, crying out in pain. She clasped her arm fiercely. Sirus, who was the medical assistant in the company, pried her hand away from her arm and observed. The jagged cut on her arm was glowing green.
"She has been poisoned. The water of the Sachiel Lake is the only thing that can cure it. Its waters are so pure and clean that it obliterates the poison. But if we do not make it in time, she will be killed." He said, looking defeated.
"Well this is going to be a good trip. We haven't even started out yet and already one of the company is poisoned!" Jason exclaimed.
"How long does she have?" Jareth asked, ignoring Jason's outburst.
"A couple of days at the most." Sirus said quietly.
"OK, then we will skip Yuno Falls, and go straight across the Tagg plains to Sachiel Lake. Let's move!" Jareth said, and with that the company packed their things and ran into the forest.
Valentine is done
Here but now they're gone
Romeo and Juliet
Are together in eternity...
Romeo and Juliet 40,000 men and women everyday... Like Romeo and Juliet
40,000 men and women everyday... Redefine happiness
Another 40,000 coming everyday...We can be like they are
Sarah wandered the castle gardens. One of her servants had been kind enough to show her around the gardens, with the Prince Adams permission of course. The gardens were nothing like she had ever seen before. All kinds of flowers, each flower more beautiful the next. She walked to edge of the gardens, which looked over the city. She had looked at the city for hours on end everyday, and still its beauty fascinated her. She felt a slight thump in her stomach. The baby was kicking. She smiled to herself, then a tear rolled down her cheek. She missed Jareth so much. She knew Adam would get his, someday when Jareth came to her and the baby..
Love of two is one
Here but now they're gone
Came the last night of sadness
And it was clear she couldn't go on
Then the door was open and the wind appeared
The candles blew and then disappeared
The curtains flew and then he appeared
Saying don't be afraid
The Reaper looked at the woman in the gardens. She started to cry silent tears. He made no move, showed no emotion. But inside, he was hurting..
Come on baby... And she had no fear
And she ran to him... Then they started to fly
They looked backward and said goodbye
She had become like they are
She had taken his hand
She had become like they are Don't fear the reaper
And so ends another chapter. Any ideas for a boy or girl baby? Any names? Any ideas send to Pheonixflame15@yahoo.com Thank you guys!!
I don't own the Labyrinth, Jareth, or Sarah. But I own everything else. The song is Don't Fear the Reaper by the Blue Oyster Cult.
All our times have come
Here but now they're gone
Seasons don't fear the reaper
Nor do the wind, the sun or the rain
We can be like they are
Amberle woke with a start. Something was wrong. She didn't know what, but something was wrong. Amberle got out of her tent. It was around midnight. The moon was high in the sky, and the fire was smoldering. She looked around, her Cetra senses alert. Something moved to her left. She drew out her bow and arrow and waited. Out of the shadows, jumped a bunny rabbit. She smiled to her self, mentally slapping herself for being foolish. She turned around and saw black....
Adam laughed as he saw in his crystal what happened to the red haired girl. The Reaper had knocked her out and was dragging her away. He knew they were coming for Sarah. But they wouldn't make it. Not without the two Cetras. Anthony was next. He heard footsteps, and turned around. It was Sarah, how the hell did she get out?
"Sarah my love, what are you doing out of your room?" He asked.
But was surprised when she just smiled at him and climbed on his lap. She kissed him fiercely and straddled his hips. He kissed back passionately. When they broke he leaned back and closed his eyes.
"Adam my dear, you never enjoyed a kiss that much when it was me."
Adams eyes snapped open, that wasn't Sarah. He looked up. It was Shanna, a friend of his father's daughter. He scowled and pushed her off.
"I thought I said you weren't allowed in my castle Shanna."
"Well I heard about your new little plaything and I came to give my congratulations"
She fluttered her eyelashes and smiled. She had long dark purple hair, and gold eyes. Her face was articulate in its points and she had full lips. She had been trying to get Adams's affection for years, but never successful. Shanna was a shape shifter, and played a lot of pranks around the castle.
"Well thanks Shanna, now leave!" Adam commanded.
She smiled and turned away, gold eyes flashing.
Come on baby... Don't fear the Reaper
Baby take my hand... Don't fear the Reaper
We'll be able to fly... Don't fear the Reaper
Baby I'm your man...
Jareth awoke with the sun shining and birds chirping. He rose from his tent just as everyone else was. But Amberle was missing. He looked around, with no sign of her. She must have gone looking for wood or breakfast, no reason to worry. But after 2 hours, the company did worry.
"Jareth, this isn't right, she has been gone for far too long." Anthony said with concern.
"You're right, I-"
Jareth was cut off by Amberle collapsing into camp, and passing out. She was cut, bruised, and battered. Anthony was the first to reach her. Jareth looked at the marks on her body, they were all the same shape. Every bruise, every cut. They were the same shape. The marks were all identical.
"What could have done this?" whispered Isabella.
"The Reaper." Replied Jareth.
Everyone looked at him as if he had two heads, except for Anthony. Anthony knew. The Reaper was a demon feared by all Cetra. Amberle started to awake, crying out in pain. She clasped her arm fiercely. Sirus, who was the medical assistant in the company, pried her hand away from her arm and observed. The jagged cut on her arm was glowing green.
"She has been poisoned. The water of the Sachiel Lake is the only thing that can cure it. Its waters are so pure and clean that it obliterates the poison. But if we do not make it in time, she will be killed." He said, looking defeated.
"Well this is going to be a good trip. We haven't even started out yet and already one of the company is poisoned!" Jason exclaimed.
"How long does she have?" Jareth asked, ignoring Jason's outburst.
"A couple of days at the most." Sirus said quietly.
"OK, then we will skip Yuno Falls, and go straight across the Tagg plains to Sachiel Lake. Let's move!" Jareth said, and with that the company packed their things and ran into the forest.
Valentine is done
Here but now they're gone
Romeo and Juliet
Are together in eternity...
Romeo and Juliet 40,000 men and women everyday... Like Romeo and Juliet
40,000 men and women everyday... Redefine happiness
Another 40,000 coming everyday...We can be like they are
Sarah wandered the castle gardens. One of her servants had been kind enough to show her around the gardens, with the Prince Adams permission of course. The gardens were nothing like she had ever seen before. All kinds of flowers, each flower more beautiful the next. She walked to edge of the gardens, which looked over the city. She had looked at the city for hours on end everyday, and still its beauty fascinated her. She felt a slight thump in her stomach. The baby was kicking. She smiled to herself, then a tear rolled down her cheek. She missed Jareth so much. She knew Adam would get his, someday when Jareth came to her and the baby..
Love of two is one
Here but now they're gone
Came the last night of sadness
And it was clear she couldn't go on
Then the door was open and the wind appeared
The candles blew and then disappeared
The curtains flew and then he appeared
Saying don't be afraid
The Reaper looked at the woman in the gardens. She started to cry silent tears. He made no move, showed no emotion. But inside, he was hurting..
Come on baby... And she had no fear
And she ran to him... Then they started to fly
They looked backward and said goodbye
She had become like they are
She had taken his hand
She had become like they are Don't fear the reaper
And so ends another chapter. Any ideas for a boy or girl baby? Any names? Any ideas send to Pheonixflame15@yahoo.com Thank you guys!!
