Chapter two



As the sun was rising in New Mecca, they were arriving at that so longing place. It was incredible, the big trees filling the atmosphere with green and fresh air, nothing compare to that dark planet, animals running free through the streets and little kids laughing chasing them. Riddick was the first one to leave the ship, followed by Iman and Jack at last. The three of them noticed the yellow sky above them, crying out a new beginning, which cover the entire planet.

"We need to find supplies and a place to stay for a while" Said Iman taking the lead.

"I don't know about you, but I'm not planning staying to long"

"What do you mean Riddick?" Replied a scared Jackie, she didn't want to be left alone again.

"What I mean is that this place is too shiny for me, I don't like it, my eyes hurt"

"We can find someone to help you with your problem"

"Look Iman I don't want to sound like a pessimist, but there's not turning back, I made a choice and there is no way to undo it"

"That's not true, you already have" Said Jackie, Riddick smile at her.

"We'll see what we can do, ok?" Riddick assured her, now she smiled back.

They kept walking through the promised planet, until suddenly Riddick stopped.

"What is it?" Asked Iman very concerned.

"We've been followed"

"What?" Jackie was getting scared, she knew for experience that couldn't be a good thing.

"I don't know, yet"

They got to a store, by the main avenue, it had a big sign "EATEN", a perfect name for a perfect state of mind and... stomach. The three entered and approached to a black lady with the name tag "To be ask for". This place was definitively service aproppiate, no wonder there were so many people around them.

Once they were done, they went to look for a place to spend the night, the lady had recomended Rossario's, she had said everybody should have a good sleep for once, and that all the outsiders went there for at least the first week. So now, the new family was walking straight to the building wanting nothing but be able to sleep without been scared.

Riddick didn't quite understand, but he had the strange feeling something was wrong, something was not right. It was like he was been followed all the time, but when he turned around nobody was there. Maybe it was his imagination, he thought and without giving it more importance, he went to sleep.



*** Riddick, Riddick, I'm here

Carolyn?

It's me Riddick

Oh Carolyn, I'm so sorry 'sobs', I'm so sorry

It's ok, it all ok

No it's not I...I , there are so many things to tell, and now you're gone, you changed my life

Riddick, what are you talking about, I'm right here

No you're not, this is just a fucking wonderful dream, you're death

Death? 'laughs' you'd wish, you're not looking what's true, I'm right here, Riddick, I didn't have to die for them, for no on. They saved us, find them, they saved us

Who saved you?

They saved us

Tell me who fucking did it!!!

The fates*** -------------------------

Abruptly Riddick woke up sweating

"Carolyn?"





I know it might sound lame, but I'm working on it, What do you think???