Sorry about the demands for reviews, but I'm feeling kinda rejected, and
kinda like a really bad writer. This story will get better (I think, I
guess I can rewrite it if I decide it is truly bad), but you just have to
trust me for the moment, okay?
Sam, thanks for the review. It made me feel so happy when I saw I had seven reviews instead of six. Happy birthday.
Chapter 5
Phoebe came into the bedroom.
"What happened?"
"The demon hit her with an energy ball." Paige placed her hands over Leona's chest and tried to heal her.
"It's not working," Paige admitted. "I can't heal her."
"Leo!" Phoebe called. The whitelighter orbed into the room.
"What happened?" Leo asked.
"She's been poisoned by a darklighter and hit with an energy ball," Paige said.
"Shouldn't she have her own whitelighter?" Phoebe asked.
"She does, but her whitelighter is pretty new, and she's having a hard time adjusting to her new powers and her new role in the scheme of things." Leo replaced Paige's hands with his. "You can't heal her?" he asked Paige.
"No," Paige said. "There isn't even anything in the Book of Shadows."
"Are you sure you looked properly?" Phoebe asked. "There should be at least one healing spell in there."
"You may need the Power of Three to heal her," Leo said. "She's been spelled so that she can't be healed with magic."
"What?!" Phoebe exclaimed. "They can do that?"
"Something's blocking me from healing her. It's the only possible explanation," Leo said. "I haven't heard of anything like this before either, but we don't know everything evil's capable of."
"Well, that's helpful," Paige said sarcastically, making a face. "Do you think there might be a spell in the Book of Shadows to undo the blocking spell?"
"I don't know," Phoebe said. "There are a few spells that will undo other spells, but a blocking spell sounds pretty powerful."
"Where is Piper?" Leo asked.
"Working," Phoebe answered. "It's the busiest night of the week and there's no one else to work the shift, blah, blah, blah."
Leo looked down at the innocent.
"Paige, get Piper. She's stopped breathing. Your best bet now is the Power of Three."
"I'll get paper and a pen," Phoebe said, leaving the room.
"I guess I'll go get Piper, then," Paige said.
"Hurry," Leo told her as she orbed out of the room.
~ * ~ * ~
Sorry for the short chapter. The next one's still being typed up, but I've written up to chapter 8. I'm also tossing around other fanfics (Final Fantasy 7 and Tamora Pierce, no Charmed, sorry), but none of them are anywhere as long as this one. But both of them are written much better than this one.
Please review. I'll review back anyone who reviews me. I'd like at least 2 more reviews before I post the next chappie, but knowing my luck, no-one will. Please review!!!!
Sam, thanks for the review. It made me feel so happy when I saw I had seven reviews instead of six. Happy birthday.
Chapter 5
Phoebe came into the bedroom.
"What happened?"
"The demon hit her with an energy ball." Paige placed her hands over Leona's chest and tried to heal her.
"It's not working," Paige admitted. "I can't heal her."
"Leo!" Phoebe called. The whitelighter orbed into the room.
"What happened?" Leo asked.
"She's been poisoned by a darklighter and hit with an energy ball," Paige said.
"Shouldn't she have her own whitelighter?" Phoebe asked.
"She does, but her whitelighter is pretty new, and she's having a hard time adjusting to her new powers and her new role in the scheme of things." Leo replaced Paige's hands with his. "You can't heal her?" he asked Paige.
"No," Paige said. "There isn't even anything in the Book of Shadows."
"Are you sure you looked properly?" Phoebe asked. "There should be at least one healing spell in there."
"You may need the Power of Three to heal her," Leo said. "She's been spelled so that she can't be healed with magic."
"What?!" Phoebe exclaimed. "They can do that?"
"Something's blocking me from healing her. It's the only possible explanation," Leo said. "I haven't heard of anything like this before either, but we don't know everything evil's capable of."
"Well, that's helpful," Paige said sarcastically, making a face. "Do you think there might be a spell in the Book of Shadows to undo the blocking spell?"
"I don't know," Phoebe said. "There are a few spells that will undo other spells, but a blocking spell sounds pretty powerful."
"Where is Piper?" Leo asked.
"Working," Phoebe answered. "It's the busiest night of the week and there's no one else to work the shift, blah, blah, blah."
Leo looked down at the innocent.
"Paige, get Piper. She's stopped breathing. Your best bet now is the Power of Three."
"I'll get paper and a pen," Phoebe said, leaving the room.
"I guess I'll go get Piper, then," Paige said.
"Hurry," Leo told her as she orbed out of the room.
~ * ~ * ~
Sorry for the short chapter. The next one's still being typed up, but I've written up to chapter 8. I'm also tossing around other fanfics (Final Fantasy 7 and Tamora Pierce, no Charmed, sorry), but none of them are anywhere as long as this one. But both of them are written much better than this one.
Please review. I'll review back anyone who reviews me. I'd like at least 2 more reviews before I post the next chappie, but knowing my luck, no-one will. Please review!!!!
