DISCLAIMER: I do not own anything here.. (I wish I could own George
Eads!!)..I just write this for fun..I've just made a story with the people
in CSI the best show of all time!! #:·P.
*I don't speak a very good English because I'm from Puerto Rico and I've just been living here in USA a few years so I've made a big effort to write this. I hope you enjoy this story
*Chapter 3:
(Two days later)
'Sara!, Sara!.. 'Monica shouted from the opposite side of the corridor. 'I'm going to examine the clothes of the victim. Maybe I find something out. OK?.' Sara nodded.
She went to the lab but she stopped because she heard her name. She hid in the corridor behind the lab's door so none inside it could see her.
'Monica is like.. Jennifer Lopez and Einstein' Greg voice said. 'You know.. she's the perfect example of 'healthy mind in healthy body'.
She smiled.
'No.. No man.. she's a very good professional. She's here just because she does an excellent job' That was Nick's voice.
'C'mon Nicky.. Are you going to tell me that she hasn't got a perfect body.. perfect face, perfect hair style.. '
'Yeah.. she's pretty.. Well she's very pretty. And very intelligent. And she has an amazing smile.. But.. Look. You're not right in everything!! You haven't seen her hair style. She always wears something that covers her hair .. You only can see braids!.' Nick said laughing.
'Yeah..We'll see' Greg said.
She entered the lab with a smile.
'Hi guys.. How are you doing? Nice day..Huh?' she said.
'Mmhh.. Yeah' Greg said. 'Monica, can you take off your scarf?' he asked
'What?' she said surprised.
'You know..The scarf. I want to see your braids.' He said looking at Nick.
'Oh..Sure..Well' she took off the scarf showing a very complex mix of braids making a labyrinth.
'Wow, cool' Nick said 'It hurts, doesn't it?'
'When I made them for the first time it hurt, but now it doesn't.' she explained.
'Well guys.. I got to go.. And by the way Nick. You are the first person that has ever told me that I've got an amazing smile' She went out laughing inside her because she wanted to know how Nick would react if he found out that she heard them talking.
'Hey Monica..' Nick told her. He had followed her through the corridor. 'Have you got plans for tonight?'
'Mmnn.. No, why?'
'Well.. Can I invite you to a restaurant tonight?' Nick asked waiting for her answer
'Oh.. Yeah.. ' Monica answered.
'Where's your house? I mean, I'll pick you up.'
'Ah.. ' She wrote her address on a paper. 'that's my address and my phone number. Phone me if you've got any problem.' She said
'OK.. Thanks..' Nick said.
'You are welcome' She said. 'When are your going to come?'
'Half past eight, I gotta work till eight but we always stay a bit more.'
'OK..See you tonight'
'See you'.
'Oh.. That thing about your teeth.. I really mean it.. They are perfect'
She felt the blood going to her cheeks. She prayed that her black skin could hide her red cheeks.
'Oh.. Mmm.. Ok.. Thank you'
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HEEEEYYYY PEOPLEEEE!!!
How are you doing?!! TELL ME, TELL ME, TELL ME!!! What do you think about the fic???!!!! A lot of mistakes (I know guys..I know..:-P).. Soo... REVIEW plsss!!! I really need them to continue the story!!
Thanks a lot to:
-McKenna
-8)
for your reviews.. THAAAAAAANK UUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!
*I don't speak a very good English because I'm from Puerto Rico and I've just been living here in USA a few years so I've made a big effort to write this. I hope you enjoy this story
*Chapter 3:
(Two days later)
'Sara!, Sara!.. 'Monica shouted from the opposite side of the corridor. 'I'm going to examine the clothes of the victim. Maybe I find something out. OK?.' Sara nodded.
She went to the lab but she stopped because she heard her name. She hid in the corridor behind the lab's door so none inside it could see her.
'Monica is like.. Jennifer Lopez and Einstein' Greg voice said. 'You know.. she's the perfect example of 'healthy mind in healthy body'.
She smiled.
'No.. No man.. she's a very good professional. She's here just because she does an excellent job' That was Nick's voice.
'C'mon Nicky.. Are you going to tell me that she hasn't got a perfect body.. perfect face, perfect hair style.. '
'Yeah.. she's pretty.. Well she's very pretty. And very intelligent. And she has an amazing smile.. But.. Look. You're not right in everything!! You haven't seen her hair style. She always wears something that covers her hair .. You only can see braids!.' Nick said laughing.
'Yeah..We'll see' Greg said.
She entered the lab with a smile.
'Hi guys.. How are you doing? Nice day..Huh?' she said.
'Mmhh.. Yeah' Greg said. 'Monica, can you take off your scarf?' he asked
'What?' she said surprised.
'You know..The scarf. I want to see your braids.' He said looking at Nick.
'Oh..Sure..Well' she took off the scarf showing a very complex mix of braids making a labyrinth.
'Wow, cool' Nick said 'It hurts, doesn't it?'
'When I made them for the first time it hurt, but now it doesn't.' she explained.
'Well guys.. I got to go.. And by the way Nick. You are the first person that has ever told me that I've got an amazing smile' She went out laughing inside her because she wanted to know how Nick would react if he found out that she heard them talking.
'Hey Monica..' Nick told her. He had followed her through the corridor. 'Have you got plans for tonight?'
'Mmnn.. No, why?'
'Well.. Can I invite you to a restaurant tonight?' Nick asked waiting for her answer
'Oh.. Yeah.. ' Monica answered.
'Where's your house? I mean, I'll pick you up.'
'Ah.. ' She wrote her address on a paper. 'that's my address and my phone number. Phone me if you've got any problem.' She said
'OK.. Thanks..' Nick said.
'You are welcome' She said. 'When are your going to come?'
'Half past eight, I gotta work till eight but we always stay a bit more.'
'OK..See you tonight'
'See you'.
'Oh.. That thing about your teeth.. I really mean it.. They are perfect'
She felt the blood going to her cheeks. She prayed that her black skin could hide her red cheeks.
'Oh.. Mmm.. Ok.. Thank you'
-------
HEEEEYYYY PEOPLEEEE!!!
How are you doing?!! TELL ME, TELL ME, TELL ME!!! What do you think about the fic???!!!! A lot of mistakes (I know guys..I know..:-P).. Soo... REVIEW plsss!!! I really need them to continue the story!!
Thanks a lot to:
-McKenna
-8)
for your reviews.. THAAAAAAANK UUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!
