DISCLAIMER: I do not own anything here. (I wish I could own George
Eads!!).I just write this for fun.I've just made a story with the people in
CSI the best show of all time!! #:·P.
*I don't speak a very good English because I'm from Puerto Rico and I've just been living here in USA a few years so I've made a big effort to write this. I hope you enjoy this story
*Chapter 4:
Nick knocked at the door and he heard the steps inside.
Monica opened the door. She was extremely pretty. She was wearing a black dress and high heeled shoes.
'Wow!!, You're very pretty tonight!' Nick told her
'Thank you' she said shyly. 'So you are!. But please come in. Let's have a drink'. She said.
'Thank you' he entered the house 'Hey, your house is great! Wow! You are very tidy!'
Monica laughed
'Ha!! This is only the living room. I've tidied it up because you are here. You should see my bedroom.' Nick laughed
'I'm sure that it will be tidier than my house!' Nick told her.
Monica brought the drinks and she gave a cup to Nick. They sat down on the sofa.
'So.. you are from Texas, right?' Monica asked
'Yeah.. how d'you know it?'
'Nick..'
'My accent'
'Yeah..' she laughed.
They stood there. Nick moved his lips closer to hers.
She cough. Nick realised what he was doing.
'Oh.. We'd better go.' Nick said embarrassed.
'Yeah.Leave the cup there on the table'
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They arrived the restaurant..
It was very big and everybody seemed to be rich there.
'But Nick.. This is too expensive' she whispered.
'Don't worry. I've come here and it's not as expensive as it looks.'
They sat down.
'Nicky, This is not right. This restaurant is very expensive and you won't let me pay.'
'Monica relax. I told you is not very expensive.' He tried to make her feel comfortable. 'now don't think about it'.
'Tell me. You where born in Chicago?' he asked
'No.I was born in New York. I studied there. And I moved to Chicago for work.'
'Really? Where in New York?' He asked
'Brooklyn. I've got a lot of bad memories about it. My high school years where hell.'
'Why?!'
'Because. Well.Maybe you think I'm vain but I've always caught boy's attention.' Nick laughed. 'And the girls in my class didn't like it very much. I didn't like that. You know. Every guy just looked at me like if I were an object. I mean.. They never talked to me.. So once I was walking home. The girls in my class were waiting for me..They started to insult me and they hit me. Look at his scar' she showed her arm. 'they did that to me with a cissors. they didn't stop till I went to university'
'God, that's cruel.' Nick told her.
'I'm sure you were the. "Girl's man' in your class"' Monica said
'No.No.' nick laughed
'But you're blushing!!' Monica pointed at his cheeks.
'OK.But I wasn't the posh one that was sending love letters in class.You understand me?'
'Yeah.But tell me.You've never said to a girl.You know, something more posh than romantic' Monica asked.
'No.' he told her
'You are blushing again!!'
'Oh god..'
'Don't worry. I like that' she told him.
'You like what?'
'You know.shy men. They are lovely. So you are lovely'.
'I think I'm blushing again' Said Nick.
'Yes you are!!'
They started eating.
'Oh! I love this song. Well I love everything by Mary J. Blige but this song is wonderful. I gotta buy her new CD.' Monica told him.
They finished and they went out.
'Let's have a walk. There is a beautiful park right there.' Said Nick.
'OK'
They walked there for a long time.
'Nicky can we sit in that bench. These shoes are killing me.' Said Monica.
'Yeah.Of course.' They sat down 'Nicky, thank you very much for this night. I've loved it. Really. Thanks.' 'Don't mention it.'
'Uf!! It's cold!!' Said Monica crossing her arms.
Nick took off his jacket and he put it on Monica's shoulders.
'Thank you'. She placed a hand on Nick's shoulder and she kissed his cheek (NOTE: Remember Kristy's kiss? Just like that!! A lovely kiss ;-P). She looked at him and she tried not to laugh because Nick was blushing again.
Nick looked at her. She was so.Innocent. Always showing that smile with those perfect teeth.
'So.We must go...' She said.
Nick drove Monica back home.
'Are you sure you don't want to come in?'
'Yeah. It's late and we have to work tomorrow.' He told her
'You're in love with your work,'
'Just like Grissom. Bye!'
'oh..And about what happened in the lab this morning.. I heard what you were saying.. Thanks for all the good things you told me. Bye'
When she closed the door Nick touched the cheek where Monica had kissed him..
'Wow' he though.'Great!'
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Hiiiii!!!
Have you liked this chapter..
I hope you have!!! ;)) So.CYA!!
LOVE
Miss. Mary-J
*I don't speak a very good English because I'm from Puerto Rico and I've just been living here in USA a few years so I've made a big effort to write this. I hope you enjoy this story
*Chapter 4:
Nick knocked at the door and he heard the steps inside.
Monica opened the door. She was extremely pretty. She was wearing a black dress and high heeled shoes.
'Wow!!, You're very pretty tonight!' Nick told her
'Thank you' she said shyly. 'So you are!. But please come in. Let's have a drink'. She said.
'Thank you' he entered the house 'Hey, your house is great! Wow! You are very tidy!'
Monica laughed
'Ha!! This is only the living room. I've tidied it up because you are here. You should see my bedroom.' Nick laughed
'I'm sure that it will be tidier than my house!' Nick told her.
Monica brought the drinks and she gave a cup to Nick. They sat down on the sofa.
'So.. you are from Texas, right?' Monica asked
'Yeah.. how d'you know it?'
'Nick..'
'My accent'
'Yeah..' she laughed.
They stood there. Nick moved his lips closer to hers.
She cough. Nick realised what he was doing.
'Oh.. We'd better go.' Nick said embarrassed.
'Yeah.Leave the cup there on the table'
---
They arrived the restaurant..
It was very big and everybody seemed to be rich there.
'But Nick.. This is too expensive' she whispered.
'Don't worry. I've come here and it's not as expensive as it looks.'
They sat down.
'Nicky, This is not right. This restaurant is very expensive and you won't let me pay.'
'Monica relax. I told you is not very expensive.' He tried to make her feel comfortable. 'now don't think about it'.
'Tell me. You where born in Chicago?' he asked
'No.I was born in New York. I studied there. And I moved to Chicago for work.'
'Really? Where in New York?' He asked
'Brooklyn. I've got a lot of bad memories about it. My high school years where hell.'
'Why?!'
'Because. Well.Maybe you think I'm vain but I've always caught boy's attention.' Nick laughed. 'And the girls in my class didn't like it very much. I didn't like that. You know. Every guy just looked at me like if I were an object. I mean.. They never talked to me.. So once I was walking home. The girls in my class were waiting for me..They started to insult me and they hit me. Look at his scar' she showed her arm. 'they did that to me with a cissors. they didn't stop till I went to university'
'God, that's cruel.' Nick told her.
'I'm sure you were the. "Girl's man' in your class"' Monica said
'No.No.' nick laughed
'But you're blushing!!' Monica pointed at his cheeks.
'OK.But I wasn't the posh one that was sending love letters in class.You understand me?'
'Yeah.But tell me.You've never said to a girl.You know, something more posh than romantic' Monica asked.
'No.' he told her
'You are blushing again!!'
'Oh god..'
'Don't worry. I like that' she told him.
'You like what?'
'You know.shy men. They are lovely. So you are lovely'.
'I think I'm blushing again' Said Nick.
'Yes you are!!'
They started eating.
'Oh! I love this song. Well I love everything by Mary J. Blige but this song is wonderful. I gotta buy her new CD.' Monica told him.
They finished and they went out.
'Let's have a walk. There is a beautiful park right there.' Said Nick.
'OK'
They walked there for a long time.
'Nicky can we sit in that bench. These shoes are killing me.' Said Monica.
'Yeah.Of course.' They sat down 'Nicky, thank you very much for this night. I've loved it. Really. Thanks.' 'Don't mention it.'
'Uf!! It's cold!!' Said Monica crossing her arms.
Nick took off his jacket and he put it on Monica's shoulders.
'Thank you'. She placed a hand on Nick's shoulder and she kissed his cheek (NOTE: Remember Kristy's kiss? Just like that!! A lovely kiss ;-P). She looked at him and she tried not to laugh because Nick was blushing again.
Nick looked at her. She was so.Innocent. Always showing that smile with those perfect teeth.
'So.We must go...' She said.
Nick drove Monica back home.
'Are you sure you don't want to come in?'
'Yeah. It's late and we have to work tomorrow.' He told her
'You're in love with your work,'
'Just like Grissom. Bye!'
'oh..And about what happened in the lab this morning.. I heard what you were saying.. Thanks for all the good things you told me. Bye'
When she closed the door Nick touched the cheek where Monica had kissed him..
'Wow' he though.'Great!'
------
Hiiiii!!!
Have you liked this chapter..
I hope you have!!! ;)) So.CYA!!
LOVE
Miss. Mary-J
