I'm thinking about starting Exploding Bottle of Wine up again soon. would
someone please tell me if I should. I got so few reviews on it that I
assumed everyone hated it?????
Summary ~ Trunks screwed practically every girl in school, but has never been satisfied until he hears people talk about it. Will Pan finally quench his thirst or does he have someone else on his mind?
Ages: Bura - 18 Pan - 19 Trunks - 22 Goten - 20 All the sluts - range from ages 18 - 23 Fende - 21 Suzan - 19 Carla - 18 (Once again.These are all the characters that I will be working with in the first few chapters. And trust me when I say the first few because there will be a lot. that's why the chapters will always be so short.Sorry)
Oh and sorry because my computer keeps screwing up so I can't get on the internet.. That's why it takes so so so long to get these chapters up!!
Ok I'm going to say this for the last time ~ Trunks is a player and he wants Pan (That's that!!) and Pan is not a player ok!!?? I dunno why so many of you think that. the only reason she hugs all her friends is because they are just her friends. I do that with my friends. don't any of you??
OK so I'm wondering who Pan should be paired up with. This is what it might be so far.
Pan/Trunks (Don't get your hopes up though)
Pan/Goten (Incest is gross so I doubt it, but they are a cute couple no the less)
Pan/Bra (Ooo I don't mean to be homophobic at all, but I just don't see that going anywhere.)
Pan/Marron (I like how Pan always looks up to her and maybe she might (I said might!!) have a crush on her. just a teeny one, but still I just don't want Pan to be gay/lesbian. but she might be slightly bi. I dunno. Feedback please!!)
Pan/Fende (My own character, but he's cool.)
Pan/Vegeta (LOL I just had to put that up.)
Pan/Krillin (This one too.LOL)
Pan/? (Hmmm maybe I'll create some special character.)
Pan/nobody (This might be the case in the end because of something that is going to happen.)
The Jealous Beast is Never Satisfied
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Chapter 3: Chibi Land
"Where am I?"
"Well honey, you're in this here hospital, I reckon," said (what Pan imagined, for at the moment she couldn't see, or think straight) an extraordinarily small green-haired woman, with a western accent. The lady's voice was so small and Pan's brain was so scrambled that the words sounded fuzzy.
"Am I in Chibi Land Hospital?" Pan questioned, as she was slowly lifting her eyelids open. Quickly she slammed them back shut to shield her sore eyes from the intensely bright light.
"Chibi land? Now what in tar-nation is that, darlin'?"
Suddenly she sounded more like a boy than a girl. Pan quickly caught on to that and whished she could open her eyes to make sure.
"Well I was in Chibi land. " she whispered, as she once again bravely tempted to open her eyes. Light red painted eyelids slowly slid upward as the person gently came into view. "Goten?"
"Yes it's me, Pancakes!"
"What are you doing here!?" She yelled out of excitement as her weak arms tried to hoist her body up so she could give him a hug. Unfortunately the attempt failed because presently Pan's body felt like a cloud that was slowly drifting away from her.
"I came down to visit you."
"Why am I here? And where is the western green-haired lady?"
"Western green-haired lady?" He questioned, rather confused. "Oh do you mean the nurse? She's down the hall and you are here because-" He began to say, but was cut short.
"Well I guess you'll have to ask me that," A violet-haired boy with strong, blazing, cobalt eyes said as his muscular back leaned softly against the doorpost.
Pan could swear that she knew him from somewhere, but wasn't sure exactly who he was. Bending her hand in a cup shape she brought it to her face, leaned into Goten's ear and whispered, "Goten, who is he?"
Goten jumped back. "What do you mean, 'Who is he'? That's Trunks!" He stammered.
"Trunks?"
"Yes, I am Trunks," announced the rather confused "mystery" boy.
Suddenly it hit her. "No you're not Trunks," she casually remarked. "You're my Uncle, Frusko; the prince of Chibi Land!"
"What?"
"Don't be silly, Frusko! Remember? King Vegeta said we have to find you a wife. We must hurry! Servant boy! Come Quick. You need to bring me to my carriage for I am incapable of walking!"
Trunks poked Goten in the stomach, "Man, I think she's talking to you!"
Goten, like Trunks, was so confused that he scooped up Pan in his arms and began to walk toward the door. Trunks, during the whole dilemma had fallen to the ground. His knees bent his long legs underneath him as he clenched his stomach and roared with laughter.
"I can't help it I cannot walk right now!" Snapped a red-faced Pan. "Hurry along, Uncle Frusko! We have no time to spare!"
As Pan and her "servant", Goten, walked down through the hall and out the front doors, Trunks stopped laughing and questioned himself. "What the hell is Chibi Land and why am I always her Uncle?"
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"Pan what's with you?" Goten questioned, as he struggled to carry her to the car through the heavy winds that were beginning to slink through the air.
"Oh Goten, silly, I'm sorry!"
"Sorry for being crazy?"
"Crazy? What do you mean- Oh never mind! I know how much it bothers you when I call you servant, but you know the rules! Daddie told me that whenever I am in front of my uncle, aunt or grandparents I must refer to my servants as servant and maids as maid." She shouted, "I'm so sorry my Gotie! You know I love ya." Her tiny arms wrapped themselves around his waist, giving him a tight squeeze.
"Gotie?" He whispered, more questioning himself then her. Goten was so lost in thought, that he didn't realize what Pan was about to do. She through her arms around his neck and pulled him in close. "Pan what are you doing?"
"What do you mean, silly? I'm giving you a kiss! Duh!"
Suddenly it hit him. "Pan we're not... What exactly do we do in Chibi Land?"
"Oh Goten! What don't we do?" She whispered seductively in his ear.
Upon this happening, confirming what Goten thought, he dropped her on the ground.
"GOTEN! WHAT WAS THAT FOR?" She screamed, reaching her hand around the bottom of his foot and yanking him down with her.
Scooting away from her sudden angry sobs, he yelled, "I-I-I can't do this Pan! We-we can't see each other any more! Pan you're really starting to freak me out!"
As he began to fly off into the air, Pan screamed, "Oh fuck you Goten! I'll find someone better than you anyway!" Then her shouts turned into a quiet drifting blubbering. "How could you break up with me?"
Pulling her long legs into her chest, she rested her head on top of her throbbing scratched knees (from being dropped to the ground) and let the tears flow down.
^~,~^
Well that's not a cliff hanger is it? Ok well tell me what you think! Like I said in the author's note it is VERY IMPORTANT!!! THANXS FOR REVIEWING! (^.^)
Oh and P.S. ~ Anything can happen when crazy people are on the loose (~.o)
Summary ~ Trunks screwed practically every girl in school, but has never been satisfied until he hears people talk about it. Will Pan finally quench his thirst or does he have someone else on his mind?
Ages: Bura - 18 Pan - 19 Trunks - 22 Goten - 20 All the sluts - range from ages 18 - 23 Fende - 21 Suzan - 19 Carla - 18 (Once again.These are all the characters that I will be working with in the first few chapters. And trust me when I say the first few because there will be a lot. that's why the chapters will always be so short.Sorry)
Oh and sorry because my computer keeps screwing up so I can't get on the internet.. That's why it takes so so so long to get these chapters up!!
Ok I'm going to say this for the last time ~ Trunks is a player and he wants Pan (That's that!!) and Pan is not a player ok!!?? I dunno why so many of you think that. the only reason she hugs all her friends is because they are just her friends. I do that with my friends. don't any of you??
OK so I'm wondering who Pan should be paired up with. This is what it might be so far.
Pan/Trunks (Don't get your hopes up though)
Pan/Goten (Incest is gross so I doubt it, but they are a cute couple no the less)
Pan/Bra (Ooo I don't mean to be homophobic at all, but I just don't see that going anywhere.)
Pan/Marron (I like how Pan always looks up to her and maybe she might (I said might!!) have a crush on her. just a teeny one, but still I just don't want Pan to be gay/lesbian. but she might be slightly bi. I dunno. Feedback please!!)
Pan/Fende (My own character, but he's cool.)
Pan/Vegeta (LOL I just had to put that up.)
Pan/Krillin (This one too.LOL)
Pan/? (Hmmm maybe I'll create some special character.)
Pan/nobody (This might be the case in the end because of something that is going to happen.)
The Jealous Beast is Never Satisfied
^~,~^ ^~,~^
Chapter 3: Chibi Land
"Where am I?"
"Well honey, you're in this here hospital, I reckon," said (what Pan imagined, for at the moment she couldn't see, or think straight) an extraordinarily small green-haired woman, with a western accent. The lady's voice was so small and Pan's brain was so scrambled that the words sounded fuzzy.
"Am I in Chibi Land Hospital?" Pan questioned, as she was slowly lifting her eyelids open. Quickly she slammed them back shut to shield her sore eyes from the intensely bright light.
"Chibi land? Now what in tar-nation is that, darlin'?"
Suddenly she sounded more like a boy than a girl. Pan quickly caught on to that and whished she could open her eyes to make sure.
"Well I was in Chibi land. " she whispered, as she once again bravely tempted to open her eyes. Light red painted eyelids slowly slid upward as the person gently came into view. "Goten?"
"Yes it's me, Pancakes!"
"What are you doing here!?" She yelled out of excitement as her weak arms tried to hoist her body up so she could give him a hug. Unfortunately the attempt failed because presently Pan's body felt like a cloud that was slowly drifting away from her.
"I came down to visit you."
"Why am I here? And where is the western green-haired lady?"
"Western green-haired lady?" He questioned, rather confused. "Oh do you mean the nurse? She's down the hall and you are here because-" He began to say, but was cut short.
"Well I guess you'll have to ask me that," A violet-haired boy with strong, blazing, cobalt eyes said as his muscular back leaned softly against the doorpost.
Pan could swear that she knew him from somewhere, but wasn't sure exactly who he was. Bending her hand in a cup shape she brought it to her face, leaned into Goten's ear and whispered, "Goten, who is he?"
Goten jumped back. "What do you mean, 'Who is he'? That's Trunks!" He stammered.
"Trunks?"
"Yes, I am Trunks," announced the rather confused "mystery" boy.
Suddenly it hit her. "No you're not Trunks," she casually remarked. "You're my Uncle, Frusko; the prince of Chibi Land!"
"What?"
"Don't be silly, Frusko! Remember? King Vegeta said we have to find you a wife. We must hurry! Servant boy! Come Quick. You need to bring me to my carriage for I am incapable of walking!"
Trunks poked Goten in the stomach, "Man, I think she's talking to you!"
Goten, like Trunks, was so confused that he scooped up Pan in his arms and began to walk toward the door. Trunks, during the whole dilemma had fallen to the ground. His knees bent his long legs underneath him as he clenched his stomach and roared with laughter.
"I can't help it I cannot walk right now!" Snapped a red-faced Pan. "Hurry along, Uncle Frusko! We have no time to spare!"
As Pan and her "servant", Goten, walked down through the hall and out the front doors, Trunks stopped laughing and questioned himself. "What the hell is Chibi Land and why am I always her Uncle?"
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"Pan what's with you?" Goten questioned, as he struggled to carry her to the car through the heavy winds that were beginning to slink through the air.
"Oh Goten, silly, I'm sorry!"
"Sorry for being crazy?"
"Crazy? What do you mean- Oh never mind! I know how much it bothers you when I call you servant, but you know the rules! Daddie told me that whenever I am in front of my uncle, aunt or grandparents I must refer to my servants as servant and maids as maid." She shouted, "I'm so sorry my Gotie! You know I love ya." Her tiny arms wrapped themselves around his waist, giving him a tight squeeze.
"Gotie?" He whispered, more questioning himself then her. Goten was so lost in thought, that he didn't realize what Pan was about to do. She through her arms around his neck and pulled him in close. "Pan what are you doing?"
"What do you mean, silly? I'm giving you a kiss! Duh!"
Suddenly it hit him. "Pan we're not... What exactly do we do in Chibi Land?"
"Oh Goten! What don't we do?" She whispered seductively in his ear.
Upon this happening, confirming what Goten thought, he dropped her on the ground.
"GOTEN! WHAT WAS THAT FOR?" She screamed, reaching her hand around the bottom of his foot and yanking him down with her.
Scooting away from her sudden angry sobs, he yelled, "I-I-I can't do this Pan! We-we can't see each other any more! Pan you're really starting to freak me out!"
As he began to fly off into the air, Pan screamed, "Oh fuck you Goten! I'll find someone better than you anyway!" Then her shouts turned into a quiet drifting blubbering. "How could you break up with me?"
Pulling her long legs into her chest, she rested her head on top of her throbbing scratched knees (from being dropped to the ground) and let the tears flow down.
^~,~^
Well that's not a cliff hanger is it? Ok well tell me what you think! Like I said in the author's note it is VERY IMPORTANT!!! THANXS FOR REVIEWING! (^.^)
Oh and P.S. ~ Anything can happen when crazy people are on the loose (~.o)
