At the request of Kutie-Pan I am adding Juunana-gou(17) to my list of
possible partners for Pan. This is about the only person that gave me any
feedback. please someone. anyone! I beg you-
Trunks - Ha! She's begging you!
Me - *In a quiet, but angry voice* Trunks!
Trunks - Look! She's down on her knees and everything! *Gets down on knees and says in a mock voice* "I beg you!"
Me - Trunks I'm going to turn you into a frog *Waves hands in the air and says a bunch of strange chants*
Trunks - Ribbit! *Hops away*
Well anyway. Also a lot of you (okay basically all of you) were confused about this chapter (-.-) I'm very sorry, but that chapter had to be done. Pan is kind of crazy because now that she has amnesia (From hitting her head on the "Finish" post sign) she thinks Trunks is her Uncle, Goten is her servant and secret boyfriend and they all live in Chibi Land. That's just the way it is (^.^) I'm glad some of you like it!!!
Oh and thank you ~ (^.^) Vegetpart9 - for giving me your opinion (Trunks and Pan) Kutie-Pan - for, of course, saying Juunana-gou(17) and Pan Bella - Trunks and Pan chibigoten124/SSJ3MysticPan - For Trunks and Pan GothicAngel - A DEFFINITE T/P Anyone else... sorry if I didn't mention you
So I guess majority vote wins... maybe??
Summary ~ Trunks screwed practically every girl in school, but has never been satisfied until he hears people talk about it. Will Pan finally quench his thirst or does he have someone else on his mind? Pan, meanwhile, is freaking everyone out. Why?
Ages: Bra - 18 Pan - 19 Trunks - 22 Gotten - 20 All the sluts - range from age 18 - 23 Fende - 21 Suzan - 19 Carla - 18 Juunana-gou(17) - 19 (Who I might. MIGHT. put in) (Once again, these are the main characters. It's still undecided who will be with who.except for Pan I guess... Carla and Susan are finally coming in the story and Fende is going to be in it a lot more as well (he was only in the first chapter for a few seconds) oh and if I use Juunana-gou(17) in the story then it wont be until much later)
The Jealous Beast is Never Satisfied
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Chapter 4: Let's Go Home
Susan pulled into the trashed old parking lot, blinked in shock and slammed her foot on the breaks. Jumping out the car, she stared at the pitiful image in front of her. A tiny girl sat there, hunched over, with her wild raven-colored hair whipping her water soaked body, from the rain that had only begun to fall, moments before.
"Hey what's your problem?" Susan roared as her arms waved wildly through the air, giving emphasis to her question.
Looking up the long raven haired beauty tried to crack a smile, but it only led to more tears easily slipping down her lubricated face.
"Pan? Is that you?" Susan questioned, as she sat down near the assumed Pan.
As Susan, the long silver haired teenager, threw her arm around the little girl, Pan whimpered, "Gotie broke up with me!"
"What? Who is Gotie?"
"G-G-GOTEN!" She sobbed.
"WHAT!?" Susan yelled, stumbling back away from Pan. "Your Uncle goes out with you?? You go out with your Uncle? Your Uncle, PAN!"
"What are you talking about, Princess Deangeli?"
"Princess Deangeli?" Susan thought to herself. "Pan how hard did you hit your head?"
Pan brushed the large bump on her head and started telling Susan about her day, "Well Princess Deangeli, I woke up in the hospital, but it didn't look like Chibi Land Hospital. Then Goten, my Gotie..." She drifted off at the sound of that name and forced back her cries to work her way through the rest of the story. "Well first I guess I was talking to a green- haired nurse, but I think she left so then I was talking to Goten. He came to see me, and he was smiling so much. I thought I would give him a big hug, but I couldn't move. Then this strange person, who turned out to be my Uncle Frusko, came in and said he knew why I was here. He never told me why though because then I realized that I had to help him find a wife. Grandpa Vegeta is getting very upset at Trunks because he doesn't have a wife yet! Uncle Trunks asked for my help. So my servant, Goten, carried me out here and I was gunna give him a kiss, when he... he... he dumped me!!" This, once again, led to more crying.
"Oh! Pan-chee! You have amnesia. Well at least, I think you do." She said, for Susan was a nurse at the Hospital Pan had only come out of moments before. "Get in my car! Okay sweetie?" The silver-haired girl asked, as she gently hoisted Pan up from the ground. Letting Pan lean on her shoulder, Susan opened the car door and helped the weeping child-like girl get all settled. "Lets go back home."
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Sneak preview - Trunks, slammed the hospital doors, and searched for his best friend Gotten and the crazy, black eyed beauty, Pan.
Well guys... I'm VERY SORRY THIS TOOK SO LONG!!! And it's so short too! I've been very, very busy and I was about to give up on this story, but for now... here's this chappie! Until next time, Later!
Trunks - Ha! She's begging you!
Me - *In a quiet, but angry voice* Trunks!
Trunks - Look! She's down on her knees and everything! *Gets down on knees and says in a mock voice* "I beg you!"
Me - Trunks I'm going to turn you into a frog *Waves hands in the air and says a bunch of strange chants*
Trunks - Ribbit! *Hops away*
Well anyway. Also a lot of you (okay basically all of you) were confused about this chapter (-.-) I'm very sorry, but that chapter had to be done. Pan is kind of crazy because now that she has amnesia (From hitting her head on the "Finish" post sign) she thinks Trunks is her Uncle, Goten is her servant and secret boyfriend and they all live in Chibi Land. That's just the way it is (^.^) I'm glad some of you like it!!!
Oh and thank you ~ (^.^) Vegetpart9 - for giving me your opinion (Trunks and Pan) Kutie-Pan - for, of course, saying Juunana-gou(17) and Pan Bella - Trunks and Pan chibigoten124/SSJ3MysticPan - For Trunks and Pan GothicAngel - A DEFFINITE T/P Anyone else... sorry if I didn't mention you
So I guess majority vote wins... maybe??
Summary ~ Trunks screwed practically every girl in school, but has never been satisfied until he hears people talk about it. Will Pan finally quench his thirst or does he have someone else on his mind? Pan, meanwhile, is freaking everyone out. Why?
Ages: Bra - 18 Pan - 19 Trunks - 22 Gotten - 20 All the sluts - range from age 18 - 23 Fende - 21 Suzan - 19 Carla - 18 Juunana-gou(17) - 19 (Who I might. MIGHT. put in) (Once again, these are the main characters. It's still undecided who will be with who.except for Pan I guess... Carla and Susan are finally coming in the story and Fende is going to be in it a lot more as well (he was only in the first chapter for a few seconds) oh and if I use Juunana-gou(17) in the story then it wont be until much later)
The Jealous Beast is Never Satisfied
^~,~^ ^~,~^
Chapter 4: Let's Go Home
Susan pulled into the trashed old parking lot, blinked in shock and slammed her foot on the breaks. Jumping out the car, she stared at the pitiful image in front of her. A tiny girl sat there, hunched over, with her wild raven-colored hair whipping her water soaked body, from the rain that had only begun to fall, moments before.
"Hey what's your problem?" Susan roared as her arms waved wildly through the air, giving emphasis to her question.
Looking up the long raven haired beauty tried to crack a smile, but it only led to more tears easily slipping down her lubricated face.
"Pan? Is that you?" Susan questioned, as she sat down near the assumed Pan.
As Susan, the long silver haired teenager, threw her arm around the little girl, Pan whimpered, "Gotie broke up with me!"
"What? Who is Gotie?"
"G-G-GOTEN!" She sobbed.
"WHAT!?" Susan yelled, stumbling back away from Pan. "Your Uncle goes out with you?? You go out with your Uncle? Your Uncle, PAN!"
"What are you talking about, Princess Deangeli?"
"Princess Deangeli?" Susan thought to herself. "Pan how hard did you hit your head?"
Pan brushed the large bump on her head and started telling Susan about her day, "Well Princess Deangeli, I woke up in the hospital, but it didn't look like Chibi Land Hospital. Then Goten, my Gotie..." She drifted off at the sound of that name and forced back her cries to work her way through the rest of the story. "Well first I guess I was talking to a green- haired nurse, but I think she left so then I was talking to Goten. He came to see me, and he was smiling so much. I thought I would give him a big hug, but I couldn't move. Then this strange person, who turned out to be my Uncle Frusko, came in and said he knew why I was here. He never told me why though because then I realized that I had to help him find a wife. Grandpa Vegeta is getting very upset at Trunks because he doesn't have a wife yet! Uncle Trunks asked for my help. So my servant, Goten, carried me out here and I was gunna give him a kiss, when he... he... he dumped me!!" This, once again, led to more crying.
"Oh! Pan-chee! You have amnesia. Well at least, I think you do." She said, for Susan was a nurse at the Hospital Pan had only come out of moments before. "Get in my car! Okay sweetie?" The silver-haired girl asked, as she gently hoisted Pan up from the ground. Letting Pan lean on her shoulder, Susan opened the car door and helped the weeping child-like girl get all settled. "Lets go back home."
^o,o^ ^o,o^
Sneak preview - Trunks, slammed the hospital doors, and searched for his best friend Gotten and the crazy, black eyed beauty, Pan.
Well guys... I'm VERY SORRY THIS TOOK SO LONG!!! And it's so short too! I've been very, very busy and I was about to give up on this story, but for now... here's this chappie! Until next time, Later!
