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A/N: Hey everybody! Thanks for the people who reviewed. It was the fastest time three people reviewed after I posted my story. Unfortunately, I had to prepare (and go) to school, so I had a large lag. I'll be posting later because of school nowadays. So, enjoy the story! :D
~~Reviving a 13~~
~Chapter 4~
"Owww..."
Zidane felt his nose slowly.
"Ow..."
"Ow..."
"Ow..."
"Ow..."
"Ow..."
"Ow..."
"Ow..."
"Ow..."
"Ow..."
"Oh, stop saying ow or I'll ow you!"
Dagger was getting impatient as she and Eisia wiped off some more blood on Zidane's face.
You see, Amarant was a foster child and did not care much about anyone except his foster parents and Queenie. When 'challenged' by Eiko, his unquestionably stupid mind decided to 'take Eiko down,' or otherwise considered as to knock Eiko out with a punch. Instead of Amarant punching the baby, Zidane launched himself in front of Eiko and got punched instead. Poor Zidane.
However, if Eiko got punched, then it would be poor Eiko.
"Zidane, you really need to save yourself and Eiko next time." Fratley, who was standing by Freya, had no intention of helping Zidane or being mean to him.
"That was one great advice, Frat the brat!" Zidane, on the other hand, had no intention of being nice to anyone, especially the very annoying asshole.
"Zidane, be nice! If you had taken care of Eiko, you wouldn't have gotten in this mess!" Eisia, who was red, had no intention of letting Zidane getting away with accusing people.
"Bwut it washn't Zidane's fault, he saved me. And if I dwidn't go up to shing Barney Loves Youw, then none of this would have happened." Eiko was beginning to hate herself.
"Eiko, honey, don't blame yourself for nothing you've done. Now I'm going to tell your mom and Zidane will be grounded big time." Eisia grabbed Zidane's arm and before pulling him out the door she announced, "Everyone have fun. Zidane will not be attending this party anymore!"
Kuja snickered and sneered.
Eiko watched with those bored baby blue 'demon-made' eyes, as Zidane used to call them. What had she done? Something horrible. No one seemed to like what had happened except for some, like Kuja and his gang. And that included Amarant. Dagger seemed to be a little quieter than before when the party continued on. In fact, everyone seemed that way. No one was talking freely; all they would do was eat or drink something and say, "Give me another one of those..."
Eiko wanted to cheer everyone up. A song would be good.
"Hey, why don't we shing 'Barney Woves Youw?' maybe it could cheer us up a little mwore."
Clara was furious.
"A song?! Who wants a song when Ariel is off with Kuja and Zidane's gone and Hilda is our enemy now and-"
Ruby put her hand over Clara's mouth and gave Eiko a kind face.
"Pardon her Eiko darlin,' but with or without a song is just not fine both ways."
"Oh."
Okay, so maybe Eiko's first plan didn't work, but she wasn't just about to give up. And this time, the plan was related to Zidane.
"Clawa, we all miss Zidane. Let's shee if we can get him back to the party."
Clara calmed down and grabbed her strawberry milkshake.
"How about it Dagger? Sounds good?"
Dagger stood up, pushed Blank and Cinna aside (and off their seats), and took Eiko's hand.
"Duh. Let's roll."
~_~~_~
Dagger stopped Eisia before entering her car.
"Mrs. Tribal, I am Garnet Alexandros and did you know, you are a really fine mother. Taking Zidane to the car to punish and all, I mean, that's hard. My mother would never have the guts for that. You should really win a contest on the best moms for life. I would choose you as the one and only best mom. Even though we want Zidane back, we know that what you're doing is the best for him." Dagger talked in her sweetest voice and gave Zidane a please-don't-say-a-word-and-leave-it-to-me look.
Eisia gave Dagger one look and said, "OkayDaggerwhatdoyouwant?"
"Mrs. Tribal, you see, uh, OKAY! We know it was all Zidane's fault yeah, but hey, I mean what's the big deal? Eiko doesn't even care! So why don't you rescue all of us and give us back Zidane?"
Dagger was pleading.
Eisia didn't fall for it.
"Miss Alexandros, you look pretty and talk smart, but you will not lure me and that is final."
"But Eisia..."
"That's it! Zidane Tribal! Go! Go and play now, but you will not be able to play for the rest of the weekend with anyone! Understand?! Good! As for you Eiko honey, Zidane will not be playing with you for 3 weeks, okay? I'm sorry."
Eiko was shocked.
"Shree weeks! Bwut... bwut I'm moving in shree weeks!"
"I'm sorry Eiko, but I'm sure your parents can take care of you. They won't be working all the time for 3 weeks, you know."
Eisia went into her car and drove away. Zidane went off to play with his friends, happy for now.
And there was Eiko...
"You've done so much, Zidane, I need to do shomeshing in weturn."
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A/N: What do you think about this chappie? Tell me by reviewing. Come on people! REVIEW!!!!! I'd appreciate it!
I'm still going to be doing the number system, so include one of those numbers from the last chapter! Here's a recap! 5) It's excellent! I love this story! Continue as soon as possible! 4) It's really good! Continue! 3) It's ok, but I still think there should be some improvements. [Please specify] 2) I don't like it, but continue. 1) I hate it! You should have never been a writer! Stop this story immediately!
Again tell me what you think! And don't forget... REVIEW NOW!!! Or you'll know what will happen!! MWAHAHA- *mouth gets taped up by someone*
A/N: Hey everybody! Thanks for the people who reviewed. It was the fastest time three people reviewed after I posted my story. Unfortunately, I had to prepare (and go) to school, so I had a large lag. I'll be posting later because of school nowadays. So, enjoy the story! :D
~~Reviving a 13~~
~Chapter 4~
"Owww..."
Zidane felt his nose slowly.
"Ow..."
"Ow..."
"Ow..."
"Ow..."
"Ow..."
"Ow..."
"Ow..."
"Ow..."
"Ow..."
"Oh, stop saying ow or I'll ow you!"
Dagger was getting impatient as she and Eisia wiped off some more blood on Zidane's face.
You see, Amarant was a foster child and did not care much about anyone except his foster parents and Queenie. When 'challenged' by Eiko, his unquestionably stupid mind decided to 'take Eiko down,' or otherwise considered as to knock Eiko out with a punch. Instead of Amarant punching the baby, Zidane launched himself in front of Eiko and got punched instead. Poor Zidane.
However, if Eiko got punched, then it would be poor Eiko.
"Zidane, you really need to save yourself and Eiko next time." Fratley, who was standing by Freya, had no intention of helping Zidane or being mean to him.
"That was one great advice, Frat the brat!" Zidane, on the other hand, had no intention of being nice to anyone, especially the very annoying asshole.
"Zidane, be nice! If you had taken care of Eiko, you wouldn't have gotten in this mess!" Eisia, who was red, had no intention of letting Zidane getting away with accusing people.
"Bwut it washn't Zidane's fault, he saved me. And if I dwidn't go up to shing Barney Loves Youw, then none of this would have happened." Eiko was beginning to hate herself.
"Eiko, honey, don't blame yourself for nothing you've done. Now I'm going to tell your mom and Zidane will be grounded big time." Eisia grabbed Zidane's arm and before pulling him out the door she announced, "Everyone have fun. Zidane will not be attending this party anymore!"
Kuja snickered and sneered.
Eiko watched with those bored baby blue 'demon-made' eyes, as Zidane used to call them. What had she done? Something horrible. No one seemed to like what had happened except for some, like Kuja and his gang. And that included Amarant. Dagger seemed to be a little quieter than before when the party continued on. In fact, everyone seemed that way. No one was talking freely; all they would do was eat or drink something and say, "Give me another one of those..."
Eiko wanted to cheer everyone up. A song would be good.
"Hey, why don't we shing 'Barney Woves Youw?' maybe it could cheer us up a little mwore."
Clara was furious.
"A song?! Who wants a song when Ariel is off with Kuja and Zidane's gone and Hilda is our enemy now and-"
Ruby put her hand over Clara's mouth and gave Eiko a kind face.
"Pardon her Eiko darlin,' but with or without a song is just not fine both ways."
"Oh."
Okay, so maybe Eiko's first plan didn't work, but she wasn't just about to give up. And this time, the plan was related to Zidane.
"Clawa, we all miss Zidane. Let's shee if we can get him back to the party."
Clara calmed down and grabbed her strawberry milkshake.
"How about it Dagger? Sounds good?"
Dagger stood up, pushed Blank and Cinna aside (and off their seats), and took Eiko's hand.
"Duh. Let's roll."
~_~~_~
Dagger stopped Eisia before entering her car.
"Mrs. Tribal, I am Garnet Alexandros and did you know, you are a really fine mother. Taking Zidane to the car to punish and all, I mean, that's hard. My mother would never have the guts for that. You should really win a contest on the best moms for life. I would choose you as the one and only best mom. Even though we want Zidane back, we know that what you're doing is the best for him." Dagger talked in her sweetest voice and gave Zidane a please-don't-say-a-word-and-leave-it-to-me look.
Eisia gave Dagger one look and said, "OkayDaggerwhatdoyouwant?"
"Mrs. Tribal, you see, uh, OKAY! We know it was all Zidane's fault yeah, but hey, I mean what's the big deal? Eiko doesn't even care! So why don't you rescue all of us and give us back Zidane?"
Dagger was pleading.
Eisia didn't fall for it.
"Miss Alexandros, you look pretty and talk smart, but you will not lure me and that is final."
"But Eisia..."
"That's it! Zidane Tribal! Go! Go and play now, but you will not be able to play for the rest of the weekend with anyone! Understand?! Good! As for you Eiko honey, Zidane will not be playing with you for 3 weeks, okay? I'm sorry."
Eiko was shocked.
"Shree weeks! Bwut... bwut I'm moving in shree weeks!"
"I'm sorry Eiko, but I'm sure your parents can take care of you. They won't be working all the time for 3 weeks, you know."
Eisia went into her car and drove away. Zidane went off to play with his friends, happy for now.
And there was Eiko...
"You've done so much, Zidane, I need to do shomeshing in weturn."
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A/N: What do you think about this chappie? Tell me by reviewing. Come on people! REVIEW!!!!! I'd appreciate it!
I'm still going to be doing the number system, so include one of those numbers from the last chapter! Here's a recap! 5) It's excellent! I love this story! Continue as soon as possible! 4) It's really good! Continue! 3) It's ok, but I still think there should be some improvements. [Please specify] 2) I don't like it, but continue. 1) I hate it! You should have never been a writer! Stop this story immediately!
Again tell me what you think! And don't forget... REVIEW NOW!!! Or you'll know what will happen!! MWAHAHA- *mouth gets taped up by someone*
