ch15: The End of the Phoenix...
Can someone tell me to stop?*wails and falls on a keyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy*
Sorry, Desert Lynx, I took out the romantic rating because I SUCK AT WRITING ROMANCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you, Jade130, Chochanger, Desert Lynx, and Lady Lanet for continuing to review. NO, THIS IS NOT THE LAST CHAPTER!!!!!! That's what's wrong with me...I just don't know when to stop...
Disclaimer:See previous 14 chapters for details. And I own Tiria.
(Onthe-)
AIGH! I forgot!
Cupil owns all.
(NOW on the Phoenix...)
Vyse looked up at the bird's nest, where Tiria was. She had joined the crew a week before, and every day she climbed up there at the crack of dawn for meditating. She came down only for meals. She claimed she was concentrating on the "Aika" case, so everyone belived her.
Now, Vyse hit harsh winds. The ship rocked and he spun the wheel. Fina ran to check on everyone else. Vyse glanced up at the crow's nest and saw Tiria wasn't at all flinched by the sudden wind. He was amazed. Then rain began pelting down.
Fina came back to the bridge followed by everone else. The ship rocked again and the whole ship flipped 90 degrees. Everyone except Vyse and Fina slammed into the wall. Fina held on to the table and Vyse grasped the wheel. Then-
Clouds! He couldn't see a thing!
"Vyse, we need to head back!" Fina shouted as a window broke.
Vyse gritted his teeth. No choice, I guess, he thought and spun the wheel again, making the ship return to normal.
"Hans!"
"Yes?"
"Head to the engines, and run a full system check!"
"Aye aye!" Hans disappeared below deck.
Fina poked her head out a window.
"VYSE!"
Vyse leaned over and gasped.
The crow's nest was gone.
"Gilder!" Vyse kept a firm grip on the wheel.
"What is it?"
"While I concentrate on keeping us steady, go find-"
"Who, me?" Tiria's head poked in the window. Fina backed up in shock and Tiria flipped, landing in front of Gilder. "Hi. No need. I'll go look for myself."
Vyse loosened his grip on the wheel. "then in that case...HOLD ON!" He spun the wheel yet again, causing the creaking ship to do a hairpin turn, while all fell against the wall, which resulted to no wall..
Tiria slipped of her hold from the table adn was quickly snatched by Gilder, who was holding onto a console.
(Do I sense a reLAtionship? Better than Clara...)
Fina screamed as Everyone started slipping toward the opening.
Schluuuuuuup! Lawrence slipped out(Too bad, I didn't like him anyway...)
Schluuuuuuup! Enrique slipped out.
"Enrique!" Moegi tried to hold on to him, but she fell too.
B-B-B-B-B-B-BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM! The Arcadia population witnessed a sonic wave in the atmosphere. The precious old Phoenix exploded, while Vyse, holding onto Marco and Fina jumped out, and Gilder and Clara and Tiria following.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!"
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAH!"
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!"
"GILDERHONEYSAVEMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!"
"IMTOOBUSYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!"
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!"
They broke the cloud layer and saw sand. Hey, you'd be scared out of your pants too if you jumped out of an exploding ship above the clouds. Just picture this: You are headed to LA from Newark, and the plane explodes, leaving you to leap out, and fall to die on impact in Death Valley. You might get a fraction of a feeling of what is happening now...
The voices joined in unison as they saw their deaths rise up to meet them...
AN: I know, cliffhanger, cliffhanger. But I like this, cause I don't have to write for a REALLY long time to torment you! Heck, maybe I'll write again after my birthday! December 20! R&R, and I MIGHT, I just MIGHT update earlier. ^_^
Can someone tell me to stop?*wails and falls on a keyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy*
Sorry, Desert Lynx, I took out the romantic rating because I SUCK AT WRITING ROMANCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you, Jade130, Chochanger, Desert Lynx, and Lady Lanet for continuing to review. NO, THIS IS NOT THE LAST CHAPTER!!!!!! That's what's wrong with me...I just don't know when to stop...
Disclaimer:See previous 14 chapters for details. And I own Tiria.
(Onthe-)
AIGH! I forgot!
Cupil owns all.
(NOW on the Phoenix...)
Vyse looked up at the bird's nest, where Tiria was. She had joined the crew a week before, and every day she climbed up there at the crack of dawn for meditating. She came down only for meals. She claimed she was concentrating on the "Aika" case, so everyone belived her.
Now, Vyse hit harsh winds. The ship rocked and he spun the wheel. Fina ran to check on everyone else. Vyse glanced up at the crow's nest and saw Tiria wasn't at all flinched by the sudden wind. He was amazed. Then rain began pelting down.
Fina came back to the bridge followed by everone else. The ship rocked again and the whole ship flipped 90 degrees. Everyone except Vyse and Fina slammed into the wall. Fina held on to the table and Vyse grasped the wheel. Then-
Clouds! He couldn't see a thing!
"Vyse, we need to head back!" Fina shouted as a window broke.
Vyse gritted his teeth. No choice, I guess, he thought and spun the wheel again, making the ship return to normal.
"Hans!"
"Yes?"
"Head to the engines, and run a full system check!"
"Aye aye!" Hans disappeared below deck.
Fina poked her head out a window.
"VYSE!"
Vyse leaned over and gasped.
The crow's nest was gone.
"Gilder!" Vyse kept a firm grip on the wheel.
"What is it?"
"While I concentrate on keeping us steady, go find-"
"Who, me?" Tiria's head poked in the window. Fina backed up in shock and Tiria flipped, landing in front of Gilder. "Hi. No need. I'll go look for myself."
Vyse loosened his grip on the wheel. "then in that case...HOLD ON!" He spun the wheel yet again, causing the creaking ship to do a hairpin turn, while all fell against the wall, which resulted to no wall..
Tiria slipped of her hold from the table adn was quickly snatched by Gilder, who was holding onto a console.
(Do I sense a reLAtionship? Better than Clara...)
Fina screamed as Everyone started slipping toward the opening.
Schluuuuuuup! Lawrence slipped out(Too bad, I didn't like him anyway...)
Schluuuuuuup! Enrique slipped out.
"Enrique!" Moegi tried to hold on to him, but she fell too.
B-B-B-B-B-B-BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM! The Arcadia population witnessed a sonic wave in the atmosphere. The precious old Phoenix exploded, while Vyse, holding onto Marco and Fina jumped out, and Gilder and Clara and Tiria following.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!"
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAH!"
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!"
"GILDERHONEYSAVEMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!"
"IMTOOBUSYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!"
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!"
They broke the cloud layer and saw sand. Hey, you'd be scared out of your pants too if you jumped out of an exploding ship above the clouds. Just picture this: You are headed to LA from Newark, and the plane explodes, leaving you to leap out, and fall to die on impact in Death Valley. You might get a fraction of a feeling of what is happening now...
The voices joined in unison as they saw their deaths rise up to meet them...
AN: I know, cliffhanger, cliffhanger. But I like this, cause I don't have to write for a REALLY long time to torment you! Heck, maybe I'll write again after my birthday! December 20! R&R, and I MIGHT, I just MIGHT update earlier. ^_^
