Thanks to everyone who reviewed! I hope you like this chapter next chapter
will be the one where you get to choose what happens next!
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Chapter 8:
Cindy started to shiver! It was the middle of October, not the best time to be in a halter-neck top even if it wasn't still full daylight.
She heard the town clock chime 4:30. When would he get here. Was she being stood up. Possible terrible things that could happen flooded into my mind. Cindy took a deep breath. He's only 30 seconds late, he just wants to make you sweat a bit. Stay calm he'll come, she thought to herself.
There was a noise in the trees behind her. She jumped, a twig snapped somewhere in the forest. You're being stupid. Cindy thought to herself, there's nothing there.
Just then Cindy saw I figure turn into the park and walk straight towards her. It was him, Jimmy was here. She breathed a sigh of relief and went over what she was going to say in her mind one last time.
Jimmy: Vortex. What a surprise to see you here. He said coolly. Cindy smiled
Cindy: Hi Jimmy, thanks for coming. Jimmy smiled too.
Jimmy: Anything for my favourite enemy. How could he be so calm, Cindy thought.
Cindy: I needed to tell you something. Cindy had to force herself to say every syllable.
Jimmy: Ok shoot. Cindy sighed and started to talk, hoping that Jimmy wouldn't interrupt, or do anything to put her off.
Cindy: Well before I left I should have told you this but I just didn't have the guts. Then when I came back it was even harder because you were so popular and you really hated me. Which I kinda don't blame you for cos I was a bitch to you. But it became so hard to live without telling you so I'd know I'd at least tried. She paused not sure what to say now.
Jimmy: Well spit it out! What d'you wanna say. Cindy took a deep breath.
Cindy: I.....I....I love you Jimmy. Cindy gasped. She'd meant to say I like you but the words had come out with 'I love you' She looked at Jimmy to see his reaction. Jimmy raised one eyebrow. He had expected this.
Jimmy: Oh Vortex you're so sweet. My own enemy loves me. He said pityingly.
Cindy: Well there you go I told you I----- but she was cut off by Jimmy.
Jimmy: Hang on before you do anything else. Maybe I like you too. Cindy stopped in her tracks her face frozen.
Cindy: Really. She breathed.
Jimmy: NO! he scoffed. Cindy struggled to hold back tears how could be so cruel.
Cindy: F...F...Fine! just leave me alone! P..p...please don't tell anyone. That's all I ask.
Jimmy: Oh I won't have to tell anyone. Jimmy took a small device out of his pocket. He pointed it at the air just behind Cindy and pressed a green button. Sheen appeared out of no-where he immediately collapsed on the ground in a laughing fit. Tears of laughter poured from his eyes. Jimmy smiled and pressed the button again. Carl appeared next to Sheen and also collapsed wheezing and spluttering in hysterics. Cindy watched horrified as Jimmy pressed the button 8 more times and Gary, Jack, Chris, Nicky, Mark, Dale, Liam and Josh (all Jimmy's friends) appear from no-where. All in hysteric laughing fits. Jimmy's smile grew with each figure that was revealed.
Jimmy wasn't the type to collapse on the floor laughing, he kept his cool and just smiled at Cindy.
Jimmy: Have a good evening Vortex! Love you loads. He said very sarcastically. Cindy ran tears pouring from her eyes from the park and all the way home.
Jimmy's friends eventually calmed down and they walked laughing from the park all either quoting Cindy or congratulating Jimmy over and over on his brilliant plan. Sheen walked back to Jimmy's house. (they were staying over)
Sheen: People are going to be laughing about this for years.
Jimmy: I've got one more surprise for her. He pulled a small tape recorder out of her pocket. I got every word on tape. All three cracked up laughing again and went into Jimmy's house.
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Well was it ok! Jimmy was extremely evil in this chapter I know. Next chapter you get to choose. Was this chapter good or bad please review. I know it's kinda long compared to my other chapters, but I wanted it all in one chappie. I want your coments!
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Chapter 8:
Cindy started to shiver! It was the middle of October, not the best time to be in a halter-neck top even if it wasn't still full daylight.
She heard the town clock chime 4:30. When would he get here. Was she being stood up. Possible terrible things that could happen flooded into my mind. Cindy took a deep breath. He's only 30 seconds late, he just wants to make you sweat a bit. Stay calm he'll come, she thought to herself.
There was a noise in the trees behind her. She jumped, a twig snapped somewhere in the forest. You're being stupid. Cindy thought to herself, there's nothing there.
Just then Cindy saw I figure turn into the park and walk straight towards her. It was him, Jimmy was here. She breathed a sigh of relief and went over what she was going to say in her mind one last time.
Jimmy: Vortex. What a surprise to see you here. He said coolly. Cindy smiled
Cindy: Hi Jimmy, thanks for coming. Jimmy smiled too.
Jimmy: Anything for my favourite enemy. How could he be so calm, Cindy thought.
Cindy: I needed to tell you something. Cindy had to force herself to say every syllable.
Jimmy: Ok shoot. Cindy sighed and started to talk, hoping that Jimmy wouldn't interrupt, or do anything to put her off.
Cindy: Well before I left I should have told you this but I just didn't have the guts. Then when I came back it was even harder because you were so popular and you really hated me. Which I kinda don't blame you for cos I was a bitch to you. But it became so hard to live without telling you so I'd know I'd at least tried. She paused not sure what to say now.
Jimmy: Well spit it out! What d'you wanna say. Cindy took a deep breath.
Cindy: I.....I....I love you Jimmy. Cindy gasped. She'd meant to say I like you but the words had come out with 'I love you' She looked at Jimmy to see his reaction. Jimmy raised one eyebrow. He had expected this.
Jimmy: Oh Vortex you're so sweet. My own enemy loves me. He said pityingly.
Cindy: Well there you go I told you I----- but she was cut off by Jimmy.
Jimmy: Hang on before you do anything else. Maybe I like you too. Cindy stopped in her tracks her face frozen.
Cindy: Really. She breathed.
Jimmy: NO! he scoffed. Cindy struggled to hold back tears how could be so cruel.
Cindy: F...F...Fine! just leave me alone! P..p...please don't tell anyone. That's all I ask.
Jimmy: Oh I won't have to tell anyone. Jimmy took a small device out of his pocket. He pointed it at the air just behind Cindy and pressed a green button. Sheen appeared out of no-where he immediately collapsed on the ground in a laughing fit. Tears of laughter poured from his eyes. Jimmy smiled and pressed the button again. Carl appeared next to Sheen and also collapsed wheezing and spluttering in hysterics. Cindy watched horrified as Jimmy pressed the button 8 more times and Gary, Jack, Chris, Nicky, Mark, Dale, Liam and Josh (all Jimmy's friends) appear from no-where. All in hysteric laughing fits. Jimmy's smile grew with each figure that was revealed.
Jimmy wasn't the type to collapse on the floor laughing, he kept his cool and just smiled at Cindy.
Jimmy: Have a good evening Vortex! Love you loads. He said very sarcastically. Cindy ran tears pouring from her eyes from the park and all the way home.
Jimmy's friends eventually calmed down and they walked laughing from the park all either quoting Cindy or congratulating Jimmy over and over on his brilliant plan. Sheen walked back to Jimmy's house. (they were staying over)
Sheen: People are going to be laughing about this for years.
Jimmy: I've got one more surprise for her. He pulled a small tape recorder out of her pocket. I got every word on tape. All three cracked up laughing again and went into Jimmy's house.
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Well was it ok! Jimmy was extremely evil in this chapter I know. Next chapter you get to choose. Was this chapter good or bad please review. I know it's kinda long compared to my other chapters, but I wanted it all in one chappie. I want your coments!
