Since everyone seems to have a problem with the way that I type and phrase my story, to THEIR convenience I'll change. Just to make you all happy. Although I see no problem in the way that I choose to write my own fic. But since I want everyone to enjoy my fic and to tell me what they think of it (other than their complaints of my grammar) I'm changing. Okay?! Good. Now stop complaining

But I have to tell you that I wrote more chapters before this. and I don't wanna go back and change every single thing. So wait until the 11th chapter of my story and then things will be 'normal' as you might put it. So sorry if you still don't like reading it that way,but I already wrote most of it.