Heya ppl,
I have only just started riting on fanfic so. obviously, this is my first.
I am a bit strange but I am sure you will get used to my weird ways! lol.
Btw, u don't have to read this since it has no relevance whatsoever to my
story! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee review me cz I wanna
no what u think. Gd/bad, w/e. I just wanna no! so.now I'v made all points I
cud possibly make im really just ritin this 2 scare u! well, lyk I sed b4,
u don't HV 2 read dis, its not lyk im making u! but if any person is
reading this total crap plz tell me, so I no wevva 2 bovva ritin a load of
crap in da nxt chappy (if I eva get round 2 ritin it.) well I am now gonna
go cz I have been ritin nuttin 4 da last few lines of ne relevance
whatsoever, I find I am quite good at doin dat sorta thing, its one of my
specialities. I am proud of my specialities bcz (being blonde) they r v.
limited. vvvvvv limited. Well. its not like I can help being blonde.
Another blonde thing is forgetting stuff, lyk I just forgot (but obviously
remembered again) that I was gonna shut up lyk 5 mins ago. So.. I'll go
now,
Sophy
Xox
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FLASHES OF THE FUTURE
*****
Lily Evans struggled along platform 9 at Kings Cross Train station with a heavy suitcase and a kitten, obediently trotting along beside her. She received many strange and questioning looks from others around her. Lily, being a very attractive girl, was unused to this. Boys would often whistle at her, or walk past several times eyeing her up.but never had she had people looking at her in this way. Assuming her kitten was the reason for all this uncalled-for attention, she scooped up her only family and gave her a gentle push into a cat-basket strapped to her suitcase.
Hesitantly, Lily sauntered towards the pillar that would gain her entrance to platform 9¾. Lily gasped as Kings Cross Station faded away to reveal a smaller, more packed platform with an old fashioned steam train. At her other wizarding school, transport mode had been quite different, definitely more modern, yet; to Lily this looked cosy and homely. Maybe this time would be different, she already had a positive feeling about it. Lily stepped back into the present with a heavy heart, she hated watching all the children being kissed, hugged and bid goodbye from their families. She had always been self-conscious about the fact that no one was ever there for her. Now was no exception. The only goodbyes Lily had received was a note from her old school class that she had been sealed so it was unopenable until she was on the train. Lily had nervously accepted the note. If didn't look like a howler. but after past experiences she knew a howler was not always red!
Lily decided with a sigh that the best thing to do at this moment would be to get on the train and forget about her past, and concentrate on the future. Deep in her concentration on the future Lily approached the train without noticing everyone turning their heads in her direction. She had expected a few looks, as she was too tall and developed to be a first year. Anxious thoughts danced across her mind 'I knew it, I should never have swopped schools after 2nd year,' 'they will all have friends already,' 'you'll never fit in, nomatter where you go.' Lily snapped out of her thoughts when her kitten began stuggling to get out of Lily's arms.
"Shhhhhh. I'm sorry, I'll put you down on the train, I know you don't like being held.
Dragging her suitcase through the train Lily realized almost every pair of eyes on the platform was upon her. Holding her head high and giving dirty looks to those starring at her with a mixture of amusement and shock, she walked along the train.
Lily entered the nearest empty compartment and dumped her belongings, and wizarding robes on a table surrounded by 4 chairs and lightly placed Totsie (A/N pronounced toot-see), her kitten on the opposite chair. Slumping back in a chair in relief, Lily felt a wet, sticky substance clinging to her back. Scowling, she removed her t-shirt and saw the black paint reading "touch the whore." Lily's scowl deepened as her eyes scanned over this message left by one of the boys in her previous wizarding school. She wasn't quite sure which of the boys had left the message so hurried to rip open the envelope from her foster family which she hoped would give a hint of who she was going to be sending death threats to.
First was a short note from her class.
Bye Evans,
Hope you make lotsa new friends at your darling 'snogwarts.' You
betrayed us, how could you go THERE? Of all the schools! You know what
it's like there, we wanted you out, but I mean! How could you? Well,
Make friends (lots) to make up for your lack of them here. Lily sighed heavily and audibly and slumped further into her seat. It wasn't fair! She was almost positive what she had heard about Hogwarts was a lie, of all the narrow minded. Lily stopped abruptly noticing the untidy scrawl of the biggest bastard in the world. Chris!
Negative response from the t-Shirt? Sorry. No offence meant, 'whore.'
Don't bother coming back here, we don't want to see you freak face or
your short skirts ever again!
Tears welled in her eyes, yet the tears mustn't come, she knew that. Too wrapped up in forcing back her tears she didn't notice a short, skinny girl with long locks of auburn hair dancing around her shoulders slip into the room as the train began to move.
"Hi, I'm Solo, can I sit in here, only. my brothers didn't want me to sit with them and I couldn't find my friends anywhere. "
"Sure" Lily wiped a stray tear from her cheek.
"you 'k? Only.you look like you've been crying."
"Yes, really, I'm fine! Thanks for asking. Do you know how long the journey takes?"
"Can't be exact but. not too long! I'm in Gryffindor, I'm pretty sure I've never seen you before, which house are you?
"Sorry, I don't understand. I'm new here, I don't know what you're talking about?"
"New, o." the girl wore a puzzled expression which Lily did not read as she was sorting out her rather muddled brain. "Haven't you heard about the houses??" Lily shook her head with an inquisitive look. "Are you muggle born? I am but I have elder brothers who attend here, so I'm not as cut off from the wizards as most muggles."
"No, we didn't have houses there, but I know a little about the system here? I'm not sure whether I'm muggle or not, I don't know my family but I have been going to a wizard school for a few years. 2 actually."
"Cool, I'm in third year too! For a moment there, I thought you were in first year!" Both girls laughed at this.
Solo sat beside Lily and explained about all the houses and the sorts of people to be sorted into them while Lily gave confused nods and asked many questions through lack of understanding the whole idea.
"So.we can choose? Then, in that case, I'd like to be a Gryffindor too!"
"No, well. I dunno about you because you've come at a weird time. Hmmmmmmmm," A grin spread across the girls face. "Well. usually this singing hat thingy chooses for us."
Lily giggled at the thought of a hat choosing for her. Solo soon was giggling too, just thinking about the thoughts that might be passing through Lily's head at this moment. They where in fits for ages and only ceased they're uncontrollable giggling when a prefect came round and told them to change into they're wizarding robes. Solo left to collect her robes and suitcase so she could join Lily in the compartment for the remainder of the journey without having to go back and get her stuff at the end.
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Lily changed quickly into her robes. She felt odd wearing them; they fell loosely around her slender body and made her feel like she was at a Halloween party! She sat down to read just as three boys entered.
"Loved your top, hun," one rather arrogant-looking boy said.
"Suited you, we've just come down to check out the whore." Lily blushed a deep shade of crimson as the boys sneered at her.
"Leave me alone, *I* didn't know it was there, I didn't see you sparing me the embarrassment by telling me!" Lily said shortly as a deep shade of crimson exchanged itself for her usual pale complexion.
"Ha, like we would end our fun by doing *that!*" Another boy scoffed.
"Leave her alone now, sorry about these two, Sirius and James (the boy indicated to his two friends as he spoke) get bored easily."
"Oh, that explains it then, I can fully understand them wanting to take piss out of me... because they're bored! HOW ABSOLUTLY STUPID OF ME TO MISS IT!" Lily shouted sarcastically, boring her eyes into Sirius, who had started the whole conversation. "Right, so these two *prats* are Sirius and James, and this prat would be." (Lily indicated to Remus)
"Remus! This *prat* is Remus," Remus replied equally sarcastically wishing he had never met James and Sirius.
"And who's the whore Remus? Ask the whore who she is?"
"I'm Lily *actually.* So, we're acquainted now, so I guess you'll be on you're way. Bye!" Lily smiled sweetly at the boys and they in turn scowled back at her. Remus looked shifty and headed for the door but James was quick to pull him back with a smirk.
"Actually, I think we better start over. I mean, we have sorta got off on the wrong foot, c'mon guys, she's new," James said pointedly as he put his arm around Lily and pulled her into a reluctant hug. Sirius and Remus found this wholely amusing and stifled laughs.
"Hey, I'll tell you what. wanna see a spell? All it does is make a flash really, here, lemme show you!" Sirius exchanged a knowing look with Remus as he spoke. Remus returned a slightly worried glance in reply and made a small step towards the door, now wishing more than ever that he had nothing ot do with these ill-mannered boys yet also not wanting to miss out on the fun and the 'flash'.
Lily was now totally unsure of what to think of these boys, apart from prats! She was pretty certain they had no intention of being friendly. She hesitantly agreed with a slightly reluctant nod of her head. She watched as the boy muttered something under his breath and pointed his wand at her chest which omitted a bright white flash.
"Now, you have a go, point your wand and say 'imperessera'" Sirius said with an 'I-know-something-you-don't-know' grin.
James and Remus were falling over themselves in silent laughter and eyeing Lily up rather a lot, which she was very aware of, and very unhappy about. She bore her eyes into the boys with a flat expression thinking 'boys'.
"Maybe they think I'm not capable of doing the spell," Lily thought to herself, "I'll show them."
Getting out her wand she flicked it she muttered 'imperessera.' Again, the bright white flash lit the room
James and Remus now were laughing uncontrollably, falling over themselves in hysterics. Lily looked up and gasped. Sirius' private area was visible to all and nomatter how he tried to cover it up with bags, hands and body you could still see right through. Lily stared in total shock, Sirius clearly had a problem down below! There was an unmissable scar right in the middle of it! Lily stopped staring and moved her eyes up to meet Sirius's. Sirius went bright red and turned to face the wall. Lily allowed her eyes to wander down her body where her boobs were on full view for all!
"You bastards came in here purely to get a look at my boobs?" Lily fumed in a temper unlike one she had ever been in before. "You.you.SICK BASTARDS."
"And very nice tits they are too, love! We just loveeee flashes!" James replied in between his fits.
"Well, Sirius.looks like the jokes on you, and your bloody mutated dick!! I'll get you back for this you bastards; I am not finished with you!"
"Ooooooooooooooooooo! Scary! Listen to that James, she's threatening us!" Sirius said from his corner will a slight trace of amusement back in his voice having just got over the initial shock of his prank backfiring and his scar on full view for all.
"Shit Sirius, the whore's right, that is one fucked up dick you have there! What happened to that!? James asked in-between his laughs. Remus (once again) wore a disapproving look and was trying to force his eyes to look elsewhere!
"Dog bite. Bad stitches." Sirius murmured almost inaudibly. James and Remus cracked up once again, falling over themselves in hysterics. Sirius groaned loudly. "Shutup you prats!"
"Mind you Sirius... the whore's tits were more interesting! No offence, I mean, your dog bite was really . "
James trailed off as Lily spun Sirius around and slapped him full across the face before turning to James and Remus who's eyes immediately fell to her upper chest. Bastards!
Tears now streaming down her cheeks Lily fled from the compartment leaving the boys in a mixture of total shock and fits of laughter from her outburst and Sirius's dick. *How could so much go wrong in one day?*
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Like it or loathe it? It is my first fanfic so please review! I want to hear all comments, good and bad! So hurry up and review so I can see if it's worth updating. I hope to carry on riting this fic but I am havig a writers bloc so bear with me and I'll defin8ly have upd8ed b4 octoba.
*****
FLASHES OF THE FUTURE
*****
Lily Evans struggled along platform 9 at Kings Cross Train station with a heavy suitcase and a kitten, obediently trotting along beside her. She received many strange and questioning looks from others around her. Lily, being a very attractive girl, was unused to this. Boys would often whistle at her, or walk past several times eyeing her up.but never had she had people looking at her in this way. Assuming her kitten was the reason for all this uncalled-for attention, she scooped up her only family and gave her a gentle push into a cat-basket strapped to her suitcase.
Hesitantly, Lily sauntered towards the pillar that would gain her entrance to platform 9¾. Lily gasped as Kings Cross Station faded away to reveal a smaller, more packed platform with an old fashioned steam train. At her other wizarding school, transport mode had been quite different, definitely more modern, yet; to Lily this looked cosy and homely. Maybe this time would be different, she already had a positive feeling about it. Lily stepped back into the present with a heavy heart, she hated watching all the children being kissed, hugged and bid goodbye from their families. She had always been self-conscious about the fact that no one was ever there for her. Now was no exception. The only goodbyes Lily had received was a note from her old school class that she had been sealed so it was unopenable until she was on the train. Lily had nervously accepted the note. If didn't look like a howler. but after past experiences she knew a howler was not always red!
Lily decided with a sigh that the best thing to do at this moment would be to get on the train and forget about her past, and concentrate on the future. Deep in her concentration on the future Lily approached the train without noticing everyone turning their heads in her direction. She had expected a few looks, as she was too tall and developed to be a first year. Anxious thoughts danced across her mind 'I knew it, I should never have swopped schools after 2nd year,' 'they will all have friends already,' 'you'll never fit in, nomatter where you go.' Lily snapped out of her thoughts when her kitten began stuggling to get out of Lily's arms.
"Shhhhhh. I'm sorry, I'll put you down on the train, I know you don't like being held.
Dragging her suitcase through the train Lily realized almost every pair of eyes on the platform was upon her. Holding her head high and giving dirty looks to those starring at her with a mixture of amusement and shock, she walked along the train.
Lily entered the nearest empty compartment and dumped her belongings, and wizarding robes on a table surrounded by 4 chairs and lightly placed Totsie (A/N pronounced toot-see), her kitten on the opposite chair. Slumping back in a chair in relief, Lily felt a wet, sticky substance clinging to her back. Scowling, she removed her t-shirt and saw the black paint reading "touch the whore." Lily's scowl deepened as her eyes scanned over this message left by one of the boys in her previous wizarding school. She wasn't quite sure which of the boys had left the message so hurried to rip open the envelope from her foster family which she hoped would give a hint of who she was going to be sending death threats to.
First was a short note from her class.
Bye Evans,
Hope you make lotsa new friends at your darling 'snogwarts.' You
betrayed us, how could you go THERE? Of all the schools! You know what
it's like there, we wanted you out, but I mean! How could you? Well,
Make friends (lots) to make up for your lack of them here. Lily sighed heavily and audibly and slumped further into her seat. It wasn't fair! She was almost positive what she had heard about Hogwarts was a lie, of all the narrow minded. Lily stopped abruptly noticing the untidy scrawl of the biggest bastard in the world. Chris!
Negative response from the t-Shirt? Sorry. No offence meant, 'whore.'
Don't bother coming back here, we don't want to see you freak face or
your short skirts ever again!
Tears welled in her eyes, yet the tears mustn't come, she knew that. Too wrapped up in forcing back her tears she didn't notice a short, skinny girl with long locks of auburn hair dancing around her shoulders slip into the room as the train began to move.
"Hi, I'm Solo, can I sit in here, only. my brothers didn't want me to sit with them and I couldn't find my friends anywhere. "
"Sure" Lily wiped a stray tear from her cheek.
"you 'k? Only.you look like you've been crying."
"Yes, really, I'm fine! Thanks for asking. Do you know how long the journey takes?"
"Can't be exact but. not too long! I'm in Gryffindor, I'm pretty sure I've never seen you before, which house are you?
"Sorry, I don't understand. I'm new here, I don't know what you're talking about?"
"New, o." the girl wore a puzzled expression which Lily did not read as she was sorting out her rather muddled brain. "Haven't you heard about the houses??" Lily shook her head with an inquisitive look. "Are you muggle born? I am but I have elder brothers who attend here, so I'm not as cut off from the wizards as most muggles."
"No, we didn't have houses there, but I know a little about the system here? I'm not sure whether I'm muggle or not, I don't know my family but I have been going to a wizard school for a few years. 2 actually."
"Cool, I'm in third year too! For a moment there, I thought you were in first year!" Both girls laughed at this.
Solo sat beside Lily and explained about all the houses and the sorts of people to be sorted into them while Lily gave confused nods and asked many questions through lack of understanding the whole idea.
"So.we can choose? Then, in that case, I'd like to be a Gryffindor too!"
"No, well. I dunno about you because you've come at a weird time. Hmmmmmmmm," A grin spread across the girls face. "Well. usually this singing hat thingy chooses for us."
Lily giggled at the thought of a hat choosing for her. Solo soon was giggling too, just thinking about the thoughts that might be passing through Lily's head at this moment. They where in fits for ages and only ceased they're uncontrollable giggling when a prefect came round and told them to change into they're wizarding robes. Solo left to collect her robes and suitcase so she could join Lily in the compartment for the remainder of the journey without having to go back and get her stuff at the end.
*****
Lily changed quickly into her robes. She felt odd wearing them; they fell loosely around her slender body and made her feel like she was at a Halloween party! She sat down to read just as three boys entered.
"Loved your top, hun," one rather arrogant-looking boy said.
"Suited you, we've just come down to check out the whore." Lily blushed a deep shade of crimson as the boys sneered at her.
"Leave me alone, *I* didn't know it was there, I didn't see you sparing me the embarrassment by telling me!" Lily said shortly as a deep shade of crimson exchanged itself for her usual pale complexion.
"Ha, like we would end our fun by doing *that!*" Another boy scoffed.
"Leave her alone now, sorry about these two, Sirius and James (the boy indicated to his two friends as he spoke) get bored easily."
"Oh, that explains it then, I can fully understand them wanting to take piss out of me... because they're bored! HOW ABSOLUTLY STUPID OF ME TO MISS IT!" Lily shouted sarcastically, boring her eyes into Sirius, who had started the whole conversation. "Right, so these two *prats* are Sirius and James, and this prat would be." (Lily indicated to Remus)
"Remus! This *prat* is Remus," Remus replied equally sarcastically wishing he had never met James and Sirius.
"And who's the whore Remus? Ask the whore who she is?"
"I'm Lily *actually.* So, we're acquainted now, so I guess you'll be on you're way. Bye!" Lily smiled sweetly at the boys and they in turn scowled back at her. Remus looked shifty and headed for the door but James was quick to pull him back with a smirk.
"Actually, I think we better start over. I mean, we have sorta got off on the wrong foot, c'mon guys, she's new," James said pointedly as he put his arm around Lily and pulled her into a reluctant hug. Sirius and Remus found this wholely amusing and stifled laughs.
"Hey, I'll tell you what. wanna see a spell? All it does is make a flash really, here, lemme show you!" Sirius exchanged a knowing look with Remus as he spoke. Remus returned a slightly worried glance in reply and made a small step towards the door, now wishing more than ever that he had nothing ot do with these ill-mannered boys yet also not wanting to miss out on the fun and the 'flash'.
Lily was now totally unsure of what to think of these boys, apart from prats! She was pretty certain they had no intention of being friendly. She hesitantly agreed with a slightly reluctant nod of her head. She watched as the boy muttered something under his breath and pointed his wand at her chest which omitted a bright white flash.
"Now, you have a go, point your wand and say 'imperessera'" Sirius said with an 'I-know-something-you-don't-know' grin.
James and Remus were falling over themselves in silent laughter and eyeing Lily up rather a lot, which she was very aware of, and very unhappy about. She bore her eyes into the boys with a flat expression thinking 'boys'.
"Maybe they think I'm not capable of doing the spell," Lily thought to herself, "I'll show them."
Getting out her wand she flicked it she muttered 'imperessera.' Again, the bright white flash lit the room
James and Remus now were laughing uncontrollably, falling over themselves in hysterics. Lily looked up and gasped. Sirius' private area was visible to all and nomatter how he tried to cover it up with bags, hands and body you could still see right through. Lily stared in total shock, Sirius clearly had a problem down below! There was an unmissable scar right in the middle of it! Lily stopped staring and moved her eyes up to meet Sirius's. Sirius went bright red and turned to face the wall. Lily allowed her eyes to wander down her body where her boobs were on full view for all!
"You bastards came in here purely to get a look at my boobs?" Lily fumed in a temper unlike one she had ever been in before. "You.you.SICK BASTARDS."
"And very nice tits they are too, love! We just loveeee flashes!" James replied in between his fits.
"Well, Sirius.looks like the jokes on you, and your bloody mutated dick!! I'll get you back for this you bastards; I am not finished with you!"
"Ooooooooooooooooooo! Scary! Listen to that James, she's threatening us!" Sirius said from his corner will a slight trace of amusement back in his voice having just got over the initial shock of his prank backfiring and his scar on full view for all.
"Shit Sirius, the whore's right, that is one fucked up dick you have there! What happened to that!? James asked in-between his laughs. Remus (once again) wore a disapproving look and was trying to force his eyes to look elsewhere!
"Dog bite. Bad stitches." Sirius murmured almost inaudibly. James and Remus cracked up once again, falling over themselves in hysterics. Sirius groaned loudly. "Shutup you prats!"
"Mind you Sirius... the whore's tits were more interesting! No offence, I mean, your dog bite was really . "
James trailed off as Lily spun Sirius around and slapped him full across the face before turning to James and Remus who's eyes immediately fell to her upper chest. Bastards!
Tears now streaming down her cheeks Lily fled from the compartment leaving the boys in a mixture of total shock and fits of laughter from her outburst and Sirius's dick. *How could so much go wrong in one day?*
*****
Like it or loathe it? It is my first fanfic so please review! I want to hear all comments, good and bad! So hurry up and review so I can see if it's worth updating. I hope to carry on riting this fic but I am havig a writers bloc so bear with me and I'll defin8ly have upd8ed b4 octoba.
