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Author's note: I have lots of beliefs. Other authors (I forget who) believe that Sonic and friends were once human. I believe this too, and here is my version of the story of how they became what they are today.
Remember when reviewing: Say what you honestly think. I can even take flames.
Chapter 1: Captured!
This story begins around four 8-year-olds. Their names were Alex, Mike, Dan, and Amy. Alex, Mike and Dan were quite good at sports for boys their age.
Alex and Mike were excellent at running. Alex always won the school track championship, and thus earned the nickname "Sonic." Mike always came in second, and got the nickname "Miles."
Dan wasn't too good with running, but when it came to boxing he always came in first. It was with these skills that he earned the nickname "Knuckles."
Sadly, Amy didn't seem to excel at any physical activities. She, therefore, didn't get any nicknames. She spent her time chasing after Alex, as she was in love. Alex wasn't too happy about this.
Despite all these troubles, 'Sonic,' 'Miles,' 'Knuckles' and Amy were good friends. They worked together so well that they were commonly known as "The Friendship Four."
One day, as 'Sonic' and his friends were on a walk, a mysterious obese man known as Dr. Robotnik examined them. "These juveniles are perfect for my experiment," Dr. Robotnik said to himself.
"Hold it, guys," said Amy, stopping suddenly. "Something seems wrong." "What is it now, Ames?" 'Sonic' said, stopping as well. "You're always suspicious about something."
"I think she's right, Sonic," 'Miles' said. "Something is very wrong around here." "Yeah," said 'Knuckles,' "but what?" The 'Friendship Four' got their answer sooner than they expected.
A net dropped from a tree branch and trapped all four of them without warning. Dr. Robotnik approached them, chuckling. "You four will come with me," he said.
Please review this story. While you're at it, review "Confusion" and "Fannterview" too. I need the opinions. Later!
Author's note: I have lots of beliefs. Other authors (I forget who) believe that Sonic and friends were once human. I believe this too, and here is my version of the story of how they became what they are today.
Remember when reviewing: Say what you honestly think. I can even take flames.
Chapter 1: Captured!
This story begins around four 8-year-olds. Their names were Alex, Mike, Dan, and Amy. Alex, Mike and Dan were quite good at sports for boys their age.
Alex and Mike were excellent at running. Alex always won the school track championship, and thus earned the nickname "Sonic." Mike always came in second, and got the nickname "Miles."
Dan wasn't too good with running, but when it came to boxing he always came in first. It was with these skills that he earned the nickname "Knuckles."
Sadly, Amy didn't seem to excel at any physical activities. She, therefore, didn't get any nicknames. She spent her time chasing after Alex, as she was in love. Alex wasn't too happy about this.
Despite all these troubles, 'Sonic,' 'Miles,' 'Knuckles' and Amy were good friends. They worked together so well that they were commonly known as "The Friendship Four."
One day, as 'Sonic' and his friends were on a walk, a mysterious obese man known as Dr. Robotnik examined them. "These juveniles are perfect for my experiment," Dr. Robotnik said to himself.
"Hold it, guys," said Amy, stopping suddenly. "Something seems wrong." "What is it now, Ames?" 'Sonic' said, stopping as well. "You're always suspicious about something."
"I think she's right, Sonic," 'Miles' said. "Something is very wrong around here." "Yeah," said 'Knuckles,' "but what?" The 'Friendship Four' got their answer sooner than they expected.
A net dropped from a tree branch and trapped all four of them without warning. Dr. Robotnik approached them, chuckling. "You four will come with me," he said.
Please review this story. While you're at it, review "Confusion" and "Fannterview" too. I need the opinions. Later!
