Ok, This is my first fanfic so; don't hurt me if it's bad. I'm soooooooooooo. Nervous. K, here we go

Oops forgot disclaimer: I do not own anything, NOT EVEN MY ROOM (my parents own it, they say it's on loan till I move out). But I do own myself, and all my lovely fanatic handmade key chains with character names on them. But I wish I owned Kurama or Kenshin. WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.

"So, Hiei," Kuabara gave the short man next to him a funny look as they sat on the airplane. "How did you find out that Kurama was some sort of bandit freak?"
"I'm psychic, you oaf, I can read people's minds, remember?" Hiei's red eye looked beyond his black bangs in annoyance as he replied to Kuabara.
"Don't start calling me names, shrimpy." Kuabara and Hiei began a heated staring contest.
"He does have a point," Yusuke said sitting across from them, waving his hand as if to push away the latest spat. "Hiei, you couldn't have been looking for Yoko, just for a thief. And, Kurama isn't exactly that obvious."
"I suppose that I would like to know the details of your discovery as well, Hiei. I wasn't exactly well informed."
'Kurama, this is a story from your past,' Hiei telepathically asked Kurama. 'Are you sure you're willing for THEM to know.'
'Might as well, I don't have anything very personal to hide. I'll tell some of the tale as well, when I need to interject some details.'
'All right, if you really want.'
Hiei nodded his head to Kurama and twisted his face, thinking where to start. " I don't see why you have to be so nosy, but it's better than listening to gigantic oaf's rambling."
"HEY, I DON'T RAMBLE!" Kuabara yelled.
"Maybe we should just start to tell it, before he get too restless," Kurama's calm voice cut in.
"Right." Everyone got into a comfortable position as Hiei and Kurama began their tale.

"GOOOOOOOOD MORNING LISTENERS! It's seven o'clock. To-" Kurama hit the clock and slowly got of bed. He groggily wiped his eyes as he stepped into the bathroom. After he took his shower, he rushed his school uniform on and quickly went down the stairs.
"Good morning mother." He bent over and kissed his mother on the cheek. He sat down next to her and started eating the waffles that were waiting for him.
It was so weird for a demon to live a human life but that is what Kurama was doing. Before Kurama was born, he was Yoko, a bandit fox demon that was known for his amazing thieving skills. One day he was almost killed in a botched burglary and managed to escape. He then began to recover his strength by merging with the human boy, Shuichi. He would have returned to the demon world, even if he was stuck in human form, but he had discovered love and caring in his mother. He cared for his human mother too much just to leave her.
"Better get going Shuichi, you don't want to be late for school."
"Of coarse mother." Kurama put down his knife and fork. 'Fifteen, time passes too quickly for me. It feels like it was only a short while ago that I was forced to run away.' Kurama stood up, grabbed his backpack and, kissing his mother one last time before leaving, he walked out the door. As he was leaving, he could have sworn he saw someone looking at him, but when he turned around, there was no one looking.

"Shut up Gouki, I'm looking," Hiei said as he glared angrily at his partner. "Give me time. I have to find the right person. Ever since that incident with Yoko's gang, everyone has learned to be careful. There is no point losing right when the game starts. Trust me I'll find someone."
Gouki looked smug but then looked up with an evil grin "Sure whatever, just remember, you better find someone soon. King Yama will be checking up on everything soon. I trust you Hiei."
"Goodbye." Hiei pivoted and disappeared due to his amazing speed.

"Hey Shuichi." A tall boy with short brown hair came running toward him.
"Hello Koji, how are you?"
"Great! Hey what classes are you taking this year?"
"The usual. All mandatory classes, then I decided to start gardening."
"Gardening? Ha, you'll be the only guy there!" Koji looked like he would choke.
"Yes well. I always thought of myself as having a green thumb."
"What about winter?"
"I'll wait until then to find out." Then suddenly the bell rang. All the kids filed into the school. Kurama took out a slip of paper that had all his classes and his locker number. Sadly, the administration forgot to put his lock code on the paper. He walked calmly down the hall and turned toward his locker, number seventy- one. He put his paper into his bag and made sure no one was looking. Then he furiously started turning the dial, his ear pressed against the locker. Within seconds the locker opened. He made a mental note of the combination as he unloaded his things.

Hiei slowed down as he reached the border between the human world and spirit world. 'Why would I look here? But then again, I've looked everywhere else. Maybe a demon snuck through.'
He snuck over the border and made his way into Japan. He found no point in just listening into people's minds. Minds weren't just an open book. He could only go so deep. It also depended on where their minds were at the time. If the thought was deeply not wanted out in the world, or they weren't even slightly concentrating on it within the last few hours, he wouldn't know a thing about it.
Children were running to school. 'Humans are a waste of time. They are to weak to do anything worth even my slight consideration.' He walked by a house where a teen with long pink hair was leaving his house. He stopped just to see what this person was thinking.
'I hope this day goes well. School is hard to endure with immature peoples around every corner. I would do better with home-school.'
"What a waste of my time," Hiei mumbled as he sped off in a different direction to keep searching. Well, what do you think? I know, it's not great, but I might get better! I'm willing to take all kinds of reviews. SEND REVIEWS!