HI! This is my first beyblade story, so be nice. I love reviews by the way. If you flame me, too bad for me. I will respond to reviews every chapter. And I just wanted to say:

HOWDY

Lily Hayes Buckled up her rollerblades and took out 2 beyblades and launchers. "Alright Lina, Delano, time for exercise. Let it rip" she said releasing both blades. She then took off. Her blades spinning next to her, keeping with her pace. She put on headphones and started to blade backwards, keeping an eye on her blades. One of them jumped over her head and leapt in front. The other stayed behind her and kept spinning fast. As she passed by shops, every one waved at her. She used a ramp and jumped one of the cars on the street and continued to blade. She turned around and stared at her beyblade behind her. It started glowing, causing her to grin. She was about to call out beast when she banged into some one, hard. "Oh my god, I'm so sorry" she said getting up and then helping the person up. "Its ok, but you might wanna skate facing front next time," said a boy with black hair and gold eyes. "Hey Ray, you ok?" asked a boy behind him with blonde hair. The boy named Ray nodded. A ringing from Lily's pocket caused her attention to wander. She picked up her cell phone and listened to person on the other line. She hung up the phone and saw that there were now 3 other boys behind 'Ray', one had orangey hair and glasses, one had a baseball cap and the other had very gray hair (?). "Sorry, didn't mean to cause a big bang" said Lily fixing her arm pads. "Its alright, No one got hurt" said the boy with glasses. She nodded, "Well, I have to go, Lina, Delano, back in form" she said to her beyblades which appeared going in circles around her shoes. She put back on her headphones and started to blade off. Her bit beasts behind her. The one who stayed in the back before leapt in front of her and started to go along the wall of the building next to them.

"Wow, chief, check it out," said Tyson pointing to her and her beyblades, which were going down the block. "That's amazing!" said Max staring at he blades as they started to jump side to side. "Its just a trick" said Kai Glaring at the girl who was now facing backwards and staring at her blade behind her. "That's a trick that takes skill," said Kenny opening his laptop. "About time you let me see," said Dizzy. "Can you analyze the blades?" asked Kenny showing her the now almost down the block threesome. "It seems that they have a blocking chip in them. I can't get any information till that's removed," said Dizzy Showing a picture of a green computer chip.

"Hey Lils, what took so long" asked a girl with long brown hair entering a Beyblade repair store. "Sorry Hazle, I had an accident at the corner of Bronyton. Banged into someone" Said Lily putting her long red hair up in a high ponytail and putting on some goggles to protect her green eyes from the job today. " Your in charge of beyblade repairs along with Jen, I'm at cashier today," said Hazle putting on a smock that had change in its pockets. Lily nodded and started to bring out materials onto the worktable. "Today at 2pm, we have an appointment from the Blade Breakers. That's a group of 5 and we are getting paid be the BBA. Jen will be here at 2:30 to help, she has a match to attend," she continued while putting on sunglasses to cover her brown eyes. As time passed several costumers entered the store. It soon turned 2 and the shop was bustling with bladers either sitting at one of the tables eating or practicing in the arena they had. "Hey Lils, can put on a CD?" asked a little boy to her who was holding a blade in his palm. She nodded and turned to the Stereo and put On 99 Red Balloons by Goldfinger.

"Welcome, To JLH Beybladeing store, You must be the Blade Breakers, please go further down the counter to get your Beyblades optimized, the café section is slow due to the fact that an someone will be late today, but ask the person fixing the blades, she can help" said Hazle sweetly to the people who entered. "So Damien, Where's your older sister?" asked Lily to the little boy. "She went to battle poppy face at the park," He said smiling. "Lily picked up the 5 year old and put him on the table. "You can help me with the repairs until Jen gets here," she said giving him a wrench. He started to cheer loudly causing the regular costumers to grin. "Excuse me miss, but the girl at the front said to deposit the blades her for optimizing" said a voice to her. She looked up to see.

Ok, what do you think so far? It gets better latter. So, please review.