Ok next chapter, but it'll need more than one review to get me to post
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Disclaimer: All Discworld is owned by Pratchett, all Tortall by Tamora Pierce, I just own my storyline . as long as it isn't in one of the book of the authors whom I mentioned some seconds earlier .. - all right ?
Ok now we will start with real action I think .
What about some Stormwings? A nest of Spidrens, Ozorne attacking the Eastern Countries with Uallaeles (is she spelled right?)-anyway with the help of the Chaos. Or what would you like?
Just starting chapter 7:
Alanna giggled and looked at Thayet "Sorry Thayet, but I haven't forgotten you either, what about a spider in your part of the bed?" Thayet smirk "Alanna I am afraid, I have to tell you, you are the one who dislikes spiders as much. I probably wouldn't even notice it."
"You win, Thayet" a new voice said laughing loud. Alanna smiled and hugged the newcomer. "Buri", she exclaimed.
Slowly the laughter died away. Jon resettled his cloth, earning another giggle from Alanna. "Back to topic. As you will stay here for a while, what would you like doing with your time? Our Mages will need time, to find out where your home is, and how to get you back there."
The three shrugged. Susan asked "What possibilities are there? We do not know your customs. Angua and Carrot worked as Guards back home, and I was a schoolteacher."
"Well," Thayet said "You and Angua could be ladies, enjoying court life, I will see to it, that you would be properly treated. Or you could all three join the riders for training. That means you can train work with horses, riding, archery, sparring, and fencing and fought while riding. You would also learn something about healing herbs, drawing maps and many other things. You could join the courses for the pages and squires as well, learning something our way. Or has anyone of you special talents? "
After a short discussion, all three decided, to join the Queens Riders, and also to attend the history classes and some other about customs.
They were shown to their quarters and happily went to bed.
The next day, they were all woken, by a real loud voice announcing that it was time to get up. The dressed and stumbled down to get breakfast. They found Daine sitting with an unknown older woman, and Buri, whom they had met yesterday. "Hey you three" Onua said. Daine grinned "Angua, Carrot and Susan, may I introduce you to Onua Chamtong? Onua, the blond one is Susan, and here are Angua and Carrot, a couple, as I believe..."Daine looked questionly. "Ehm, kind of, just ehm, I mean yes" Angua stammered.
"Ok Guys, this is Sarge, "Onua pointed to a big man with dark skin. "He is in charge of the Riders, as Buri, Daine, Queen Thayet and I are. Sarge will help you to find some breeches and shirts for everyday work. Keep your cloths for other times, and you'll get some cloths for visiting court meetings later. After having dressed in work cloths you please come down to the stables, where Daine and I will find you horses.
Onua shooed them and Sarge away, walking towards the stables with Daine. Daine coughed "Onua, we have a kind of a problem. Angua, she smells like a wolf, she is a werewolf that means parts of her are a wolf. The horses sense that, we need to fiend a real calm one or the horse Numair and I had with us, as we visited my pack." Onua sighed "Great, more problems. I'll ask Stefan for the horse, anyway.[please anyone, I have forgotten the name of the horse, and as far as I remember it would be hard for me to translate it into English, even if I found it- so what is this horse called??]
They got the horse, and two more calm horses, Daine told them to be calm and help the two-leggers to learn riding. They showed the three ones to their two-leggers and Daine told Miri to explain Angua who to tend a horse, Evin got Carrot in charge and another girl called Tarja looked after Susan's work.
An hour later they tested them in archery. Angua was good in it, Susan too, but Carrot hit the target as accurate as possible. He was only a bit slower and less accurate as Daine in hitting a moving target. Suddenly Daine looked around, and starts screaming "Bow, Bow, Stormwings. I sense Stormwings in the air." All prepared their bow, they were seven, Angua, Carrot and Susan, who had never seen Stormwings before, included. Buri, Onua, Sarge and Daine were really alarmed. Onua was calling for help in a communication-Spell opened to the King and Numair.
The Stormwings arrived, the smell and the tension was nearly enough for letting them faint. 20 Stormwings, Daine screamed in anger. It was unusual to have such a big group at all. She hit her first target, other arrows, flowing beside hers. None missing its aim. 7 Stormwings were dead, the rest was stunned. They stayed out of reach to the arrows, and their leader started to talk "Stormwingmurderes, we will get you, both of you," spatting he pointed to Daine and Onua "Our new King wants to have you, little girl and Ozorne gets what he wants!"
Daine gasped, Ozorne, he should be dead by now, she thought Barzah and Rikash would have taken care of it by now. "You, go back to you so called King, formerly known as an emperor, I am not an easy target."
Three Stormwings attacked, two others started chanting. Three arrows caught the attacking monsters, black fire with white sparkles told that Numair has joined the fight. His fire, and the blue magic fire of the King stopped the chanting Stormwings, while arrows were piercing the rest of the enemies shot from crossbows shooting over longer distances. Help was there.
After some minutes there was no enemy left. They walked back to the palace, cursing the impudence of Stormwings entering Palace Grounds. Daine collapsed on the way, being caught by Susan, who was just walking next to her.
******************************************************Ok More later, I want to get some feedback please . and more than just people saying it should be a D/N pairing. It's my first fanfic, and it's on English - as I am German . so please review
Disclaimer: All Discworld is owned by Pratchett, all Tortall by Tamora Pierce, I just own my storyline . as long as it isn't in one of the book of the authors whom I mentioned some seconds earlier .. - all right ?
Ok now we will start with real action I think .
What about some Stormwings? A nest of Spidrens, Ozorne attacking the Eastern Countries with Uallaeles (is she spelled right?)-anyway with the help of the Chaos. Or what would you like?
Just starting chapter 7:
Alanna giggled and looked at Thayet "Sorry Thayet, but I haven't forgotten you either, what about a spider in your part of the bed?" Thayet smirk "Alanna I am afraid, I have to tell you, you are the one who dislikes spiders as much. I probably wouldn't even notice it."
"You win, Thayet" a new voice said laughing loud. Alanna smiled and hugged the newcomer. "Buri", she exclaimed.
Slowly the laughter died away. Jon resettled his cloth, earning another giggle from Alanna. "Back to topic. As you will stay here for a while, what would you like doing with your time? Our Mages will need time, to find out where your home is, and how to get you back there."
The three shrugged. Susan asked "What possibilities are there? We do not know your customs. Angua and Carrot worked as Guards back home, and I was a schoolteacher."
"Well," Thayet said "You and Angua could be ladies, enjoying court life, I will see to it, that you would be properly treated. Or you could all three join the riders for training. That means you can train work with horses, riding, archery, sparring, and fencing and fought while riding. You would also learn something about healing herbs, drawing maps and many other things. You could join the courses for the pages and squires as well, learning something our way. Or has anyone of you special talents? "
After a short discussion, all three decided, to join the Queens Riders, and also to attend the history classes and some other about customs.
They were shown to their quarters and happily went to bed.
The next day, they were all woken, by a real loud voice announcing that it was time to get up. The dressed and stumbled down to get breakfast. They found Daine sitting with an unknown older woman, and Buri, whom they had met yesterday. "Hey you three" Onua said. Daine grinned "Angua, Carrot and Susan, may I introduce you to Onua Chamtong? Onua, the blond one is Susan, and here are Angua and Carrot, a couple, as I believe..."Daine looked questionly. "Ehm, kind of, just ehm, I mean yes" Angua stammered.
"Ok Guys, this is Sarge, "Onua pointed to a big man with dark skin. "He is in charge of the Riders, as Buri, Daine, Queen Thayet and I are. Sarge will help you to find some breeches and shirts for everyday work. Keep your cloths for other times, and you'll get some cloths for visiting court meetings later. After having dressed in work cloths you please come down to the stables, where Daine and I will find you horses.
Onua shooed them and Sarge away, walking towards the stables with Daine. Daine coughed "Onua, we have a kind of a problem. Angua, she smells like a wolf, she is a werewolf that means parts of her are a wolf. The horses sense that, we need to fiend a real calm one or the horse Numair and I had with us, as we visited my pack." Onua sighed "Great, more problems. I'll ask Stefan for the horse, anyway.[please anyone, I have forgotten the name of the horse, and as far as I remember it would be hard for me to translate it into English, even if I found it- so what is this horse called??]
They got the horse, and two more calm horses, Daine told them to be calm and help the two-leggers to learn riding. They showed the three ones to their two-leggers and Daine told Miri to explain Angua who to tend a horse, Evin got Carrot in charge and another girl called Tarja looked after Susan's work.
An hour later they tested them in archery. Angua was good in it, Susan too, but Carrot hit the target as accurate as possible. He was only a bit slower and less accurate as Daine in hitting a moving target. Suddenly Daine looked around, and starts screaming "Bow, Bow, Stormwings. I sense Stormwings in the air." All prepared their bow, they were seven, Angua, Carrot and Susan, who had never seen Stormwings before, included. Buri, Onua, Sarge and Daine were really alarmed. Onua was calling for help in a communication-Spell opened to the King and Numair.
The Stormwings arrived, the smell and the tension was nearly enough for letting them faint. 20 Stormwings, Daine screamed in anger. It was unusual to have such a big group at all. She hit her first target, other arrows, flowing beside hers. None missing its aim. 7 Stormwings were dead, the rest was stunned. They stayed out of reach to the arrows, and their leader started to talk "Stormwingmurderes, we will get you, both of you," spatting he pointed to Daine and Onua "Our new King wants to have you, little girl and Ozorne gets what he wants!"
Daine gasped, Ozorne, he should be dead by now, she thought Barzah and Rikash would have taken care of it by now. "You, go back to you so called King, formerly known as an emperor, I am not an easy target."
Three Stormwings attacked, two others started chanting. Three arrows caught the attacking monsters, black fire with white sparkles told that Numair has joined the fight. His fire, and the blue magic fire of the King stopped the chanting Stormwings, while arrows were piercing the rest of the enemies shot from crossbows shooting over longer distances. Help was there.
After some minutes there was no enemy left. They walked back to the palace, cursing the impudence of Stormwings entering Palace Grounds. Daine collapsed on the way, being caught by Susan, who was just walking next to her.
******************************************************Ok More later, I want to get some feedback please . and more than just people saying it should be a D/N pairing. It's my first fanfic, and it's on English - as I am German . so please review
