Ah he he he please don't kill me. I was seriously trying to get this story straightened out. I'm not perfect I'm only 13 and my writing skills (and my attention span) haven't fully developed that's why I need informational reviews to help me improve. I haven't fully decided who is going to be in this story but I got the main plot figured out. One note I won't be here for a week because I'm going somewhere without a computer I will hopefully post one after.
A New Member Joins The Troop
Once she was out of the village she slowed down to a slow walk and thought about the odd boy who saved her. "Geesh he was strange and were those doggy ears I saw on his head" she said out loud. Kagome stopped for a moment and stared into nothingness while having the thought 'He was sorta cute though, I can't deny that.'
Inuyasha was sitting in the tree watching the human girl walk out of the village. He watched as she stopped and just stood staring off into space. As she began walking he quietly slipped through the trees after her.
In a few moments Kagome could here the fire reptiles stomping around in the small cave. She bent over and looked into the dark hole. "Hey, I'm back. You can come out now." She listened as she heard them scrambling frantically trying to be the first one out.
Inuyasha watched as she bent down and began to speak to something in the cave. Then to his amazement three little fire reptiles stumbled out of the dark hole. He was so amazed that he jumped back to feel nothing but air at the bottom of his feet. "eel," was all he could get out before he went crashing to the hard punishing earth.
"Hen, what was that noise," said Kagome as she looked at the source of the commotion. The fire reptiles hissed and ran back into the cave. "Well, thanks for your guys help," she said before she went to investigate the noise. As she approached the area she heard it in she could here muffled mumbling that sounded like someone was cursing.
"Damn I just had to fall didn't I," he cursed as he began to pull his face out of the mud. "Uh oh I hope they didn't hear me," he spoke in a nervous tone. Then he could hear light footsteps as someone approached.
"Hello is someone there," Kagome said as it went dead silent. She bent forward and slowly moved the branch aside. "Kyaaaaaah," she screamed. "Oh it's just you," she mumbled as she clutched her chest as if her heart was gonna pop out any second. "What are you doing spying on me," she said before he had a chance to say anything.
"I should be asking you the same question," he growled. "Why in the heck do you have a bunch of fire reptiles their dangerous," He said as he glanced over to the cave where three heads could be seen watching them.
"I know but they are orphans and I just had to help them. Wait a minute you didn't answer my question," she said as she went from big puppy dog eyes to glaring at him with hands on hips.
"Uhhhhh.....I was making sure you weren't going to get in any trouble," he said trying to save himself.
They could here rustling behind them and they turned. The fire reptiles all cautiously stepped forward. Then Spark came forward and jumped on Inuyasha's head. Then he started clawing at his ears.
Inuyasha's face went red not out of embarrassment mind you. "You little pest get off," he hissed while he tried to pry him off.
But Spark had found a nice game and he wasn't going to give it up. He blew a spark at Inuyasha's hands. While Inuyasha pulled his hand back Spark got a nice hold on his hair. Embyr and Synge seeing how much fun Spark was having joined in on the wrestling match.
Kagome giggled as she watched as Inuyasha tried to get all the fire reptiles off him. After a minute she called them back. "Hey, to thank you why don't you travel with us on our journey," she said.
"I will but only so you won't get jumped on by any men," He said in a matter of fact tone.
"OK so it's a deal," she said triumphantly.
Again I'm so sorry for being late. Hope you review and if you want anyone in the story just ask. But that doesn't mean I can put them in.
Fire-Cat
A New Member Joins The Troop
Once she was out of the village she slowed down to a slow walk and thought about the odd boy who saved her. "Geesh he was strange and were those doggy ears I saw on his head" she said out loud. Kagome stopped for a moment and stared into nothingness while having the thought 'He was sorta cute though, I can't deny that.'
Inuyasha was sitting in the tree watching the human girl walk out of the village. He watched as she stopped and just stood staring off into space. As she began walking he quietly slipped through the trees after her.
In a few moments Kagome could here the fire reptiles stomping around in the small cave. She bent over and looked into the dark hole. "Hey, I'm back. You can come out now." She listened as she heard them scrambling frantically trying to be the first one out.
Inuyasha watched as she bent down and began to speak to something in the cave. Then to his amazement three little fire reptiles stumbled out of the dark hole. He was so amazed that he jumped back to feel nothing but air at the bottom of his feet. "eel," was all he could get out before he went crashing to the hard punishing earth.
"Hen, what was that noise," said Kagome as she looked at the source of the commotion. The fire reptiles hissed and ran back into the cave. "Well, thanks for your guys help," she said before she went to investigate the noise. As she approached the area she heard it in she could here muffled mumbling that sounded like someone was cursing.
"Damn I just had to fall didn't I," he cursed as he began to pull his face out of the mud. "Uh oh I hope they didn't hear me," he spoke in a nervous tone. Then he could hear light footsteps as someone approached.
"Hello is someone there," Kagome said as it went dead silent. She bent forward and slowly moved the branch aside. "Kyaaaaaah," she screamed. "Oh it's just you," she mumbled as she clutched her chest as if her heart was gonna pop out any second. "What are you doing spying on me," she said before he had a chance to say anything.
"I should be asking you the same question," he growled. "Why in the heck do you have a bunch of fire reptiles their dangerous," He said as he glanced over to the cave where three heads could be seen watching them.
"I know but they are orphans and I just had to help them. Wait a minute you didn't answer my question," she said as she went from big puppy dog eyes to glaring at him with hands on hips.
"Uhhhhh.....I was making sure you weren't going to get in any trouble," he said trying to save himself.
They could here rustling behind them and they turned. The fire reptiles all cautiously stepped forward. Then Spark came forward and jumped on Inuyasha's head. Then he started clawing at his ears.
Inuyasha's face went red not out of embarrassment mind you. "You little pest get off," he hissed while he tried to pry him off.
But Spark had found a nice game and he wasn't going to give it up. He blew a spark at Inuyasha's hands. While Inuyasha pulled his hand back Spark got a nice hold on his hair. Embyr and Synge seeing how much fun Spark was having joined in on the wrestling match.
Kagome giggled as she watched as Inuyasha tried to get all the fire reptiles off him. After a minute she called them back. "Hey, to thank you why don't you travel with us on our journey," she said.
"I will but only so you won't get jumped on by any men," He said in a matter of fact tone.
"OK so it's a deal," she said triumphantly.
Again I'm so sorry for being late. Hope you review and if you want anyone in the story just ask. But that doesn't mean I can put them in.
Fire-Cat
