A few comments
@crazyhorsefan88 well I am not quite sure if the story would work after the death of some important characters, but well maybe. What about letting Thayet die? She has no use in my storyline. @ Milla thanks for explaining the name of the winged horses . hurrocks oh well @ Bahja well also thanks for translation, and oh no do not see the plot as early . it isn't in the story yet. @ All three of you . well it's a pleasure that I have at least 3 readers who also review . even if I've got the feeling I would like to have more people reading my story. Maybe I should start another story . I promise not to stop this one as long as I have you three as fans .
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Chapter 11:
A few hours later they were all near exhaustion, they had killed the other immortals and had attended the wounded. They had lost 3 squires about 5 Knights 8 Riders and nearly 20 soldiers. Raoul had a bad wound in his left arm, the king had a cut from a wing in his side. Alanna was nearly drained both in strength and gift. Daine was sleeping after she had healed the animals. Angua had an arrow in her chest, but was healing fast, due to the fact that the arrow was not out of silver. Carrot had some bruises, a dying hurrock falling from the sky had hit him. Susan was covered in blood but had just had a cut from a fallen stromwingfeather. Onua was all right, well except for the hurt in her heart, Tahoi her dog died in the fight, cut in two pieces by a stormwing. Onua was crying silently. And all were anxious about Thayet, she was cut really bad by a Stormwing wing and then hurt by the poison of the apes. The healers were fighting for her life, first Alanna was with them trying to heal Thayet, but she fainted from exhaustion and now she waited amongst their friends.
Then Susan remembered her gift and rose to the bedside of Thayet, holding her life as longs as the healers were working. The healers were relieved. They could work without loosing her.
As Susan left the room, Thayet was sleeping. And her wounds were healed.
Everyone was relieved and went to bed to regain strength.
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Ok short chappy, I know. But next will be up soon, maybe even today .
@crazyhorsefan88 well I am not quite sure if the story would work after the death of some important characters, but well maybe. What about letting Thayet die? She has no use in my storyline. @ Milla thanks for explaining the name of the winged horses . hurrocks oh well @ Bahja well also thanks for translation, and oh no do not see the plot as early . it isn't in the story yet. @ All three of you . well it's a pleasure that I have at least 3 readers who also review . even if I've got the feeling I would like to have more people reading my story. Maybe I should start another story . I promise not to stop this one as long as I have you three as fans .
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Chapter 11:
A few hours later they were all near exhaustion, they had killed the other immortals and had attended the wounded. They had lost 3 squires about 5 Knights 8 Riders and nearly 20 soldiers. Raoul had a bad wound in his left arm, the king had a cut from a wing in his side. Alanna was nearly drained both in strength and gift. Daine was sleeping after she had healed the animals. Angua had an arrow in her chest, but was healing fast, due to the fact that the arrow was not out of silver. Carrot had some bruises, a dying hurrock falling from the sky had hit him. Susan was covered in blood but had just had a cut from a fallen stromwingfeather. Onua was all right, well except for the hurt in her heart, Tahoi her dog died in the fight, cut in two pieces by a stormwing. Onua was crying silently. And all were anxious about Thayet, she was cut really bad by a Stormwing wing and then hurt by the poison of the apes. The healers were fighting for her life, first Alanna was with them trying to heal Thayet, but she fainted from exhaustion and now she waited amongst their friends.
Then Susan remembered her gift and rose to the bedside of Thayet, holding her life as longs as the healers were working. The healers were relieved. They could work without loosing her.
As Susan left the room, Thayet was sleeping. And her wounds were healed.
Everyone was relieved and went to bed to regain strength.
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Ok short chappy, I know. But next will be up soon, maybe even today .
