So even if I said, I would be happy about reviews first a comment to one of
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@Luvli Guurl I dare to and such a review will do one thing, I think I'll get Numair to bed Susan .Sorry to crazyhorsefan, but you'll get your pleasure, too. And I simply show what I dare to do:
So let's get them into one bed.
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While Daine was still sleeping, Numair met Susan in one of the training fields, trying to improve her archery. It was near enough to feel as save as it would be possible these days. Kitten and Tkaa as well as some human mages were looking out for the immortals.
Numair stared at Susan, she was so lovely, tall, blonde hair, nearly white with one black streak, and she was self-confident, proud and not at least shy. He admired her strength and her rational head.
Susan was thinking about Numair while she trained. He was such an attractive man, and so good-looking with dark hair and all. And he was charming, but well it was obvious from her first minutes in this world, that he had a crush on this Daine. Daine wasn't bad looking, but she had mouse-brown hair, and wasn't as attractive as Thayet or Susan herself. Numair and Daine weren't together at least not in public knowledge. So she would just try to get him. She wasn't such a mouse as Daine. And well he wouldn't be backing away, because of her hair or her grandfather, Daines father was a good as well. She had made up her mind to track Numair down.
Susan had the feeling of being watched. As she looked behind she saw Numair staring at her. ~Great, he finds me attractive~ Her heartbeat fastened. "Hi Numair, how are you? Everything's OK at the palace?" She greeted him.
"Hi Susan, yes everything is working. Well, uhm, you look lovely." He blushed and walked away fast.
Susan was stunned ~ Well it just starts working without my help. I should use the time, this Daine is sleeping. Someone said, she would sleep for more than two days.~
Susan followed Numair into the gardens, where he was sitting on a bench deep in thoughts. Susan sat down next to him. Silently for some time, then asking "Numair why did you leave so fast after making a compliment? It was a nice compliment. And to be honest, you are looking rather good and really charming, too. I really like you."
Numair blushed but didn't say anything. Susan put her arm around his waist pulling him to her. Automatically his arms went around her waist, her faces were nearly colliding. Numair said huskily "Look up Susan, Look into my eyes!" and kissed her fiercely. The stroked her back and hugged her tight. After some minutes someone stopped them, biting Numair in his arm.
He shrieked "Cloud, what the hell you are doing here. Release my arm or I will cause a fire under your tail." Cloud bitted a bit harder then released his arm and shook her had looking at him, as she would like to kill him. ~Cloud was angry more than a bit angry, the storkman was cheating on her Daine. But after his thread she left him. She had stopped the kiss and hoped he would regain his senses.
Susan looked confused. Numair stroked her chin. "Come let us go inside, into my chambers, it's a bit more private." She nodded and they went to his chambers.
In his chambers he pulled her into a tight hug again kissing her with passion. She felt like she could fly. It was great, he was great and he desired her, not this kid Daine. After some more kisses he pulled her on his bed. He was burning, he hadn't slept with anyone, since he first met Daine. He had missed kissing and well other things as well. He pulled of her shirt, she was trying to get his shirt off, as he was opening her breeches and tries to undress her completely. After a short struggle, they were both naked. He was stroking her silky skin. Playing with her reactions to his touch. First he only touches her arms, and legs, than he moved to her waist and resting his hand there, he kissed her again. Moving his kisses on, he stroke her chest, playing with them. She was breathing hard and fast, making small sounds, purring like a cat. His lips followed his hands.
//well we will let them do the rest alone. And yes they will have sex. Good sex.//
As Numair woke the next morning, Alanna was standing in the doorway, scolding. He blushed, Susan was sleeping in his arms. Alanna hissed, "We are awaiting you in the council hall. As fast as possible, and you, too Susan. " Alanna left the room furious.
~How could Numair do this~ Alanna thought ~ He is so stupid, cheating on Daine, when she is ready for his love. How could he change his mind as fast? I hate this Susan! Numair and Daine belong together. Daine, oh Goddess, Daine would be so upset- upset well Daine would be broken when she would get a word of this. Poor Daine. How could he do it? He lost his last brain cells.~
Furiously she stampeded into the Council Hall. Everyone looked at her in astonishment.
Numair was feeling bad, ~he had cheated on Daine. And Alanna had caught him doing it. Was this night worth loosing Daine? He was sure it wasn't.~ He sighed. Susan turned to him, pleadingly she said "No, oh no, you are not regretting it. Please say, you are not regretting this!" "Well, as a matter of fact Susan I do regret it. I should have never cheated on Daine this way. I am sorry." Susan tears falling running down her cheeks, left the room half clothed, only to run into Daine, right outside Numairs room..
Daine was shocked, this half naked Susan was coming out of Numairs room. He wasn't in love with her, Daine, no he loved this stranger this Susan. She burst into tears. Running into the stable to be comforted by Daine.
Half an hour later Numair was entering the Council hall. Everyone was here, except for Daine. Susan had red eyes and was hugging herself saying nothing and didn't dare to look into anyone's eyes. "Where is Daine?" The King asked. Everyone shrugged. Then Susan said, with a voice full of tears "I ran into her just outside Numairs rooms." Alannas eyes grow wide, she snapped "And I doubt you weren't properly closed at that time. Shame on you, on both of you. Onua do you mind helping me. We have to find Daine, as our Mage here has cheated on her with the Chosen of the Dark God." Everyone gasped. Onua and Alanna left the room. Numair was fainting. ~Daine knew. Everything went wrong~
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Ok chapter done, well please do not hate me. She will forgive him for once. And they will be together at least for a time. Please review, and do not flame. Or I will take it the other way round. Though I still can't believe it myself, letting Numair cheat on Daine. I had just planned to let him flirt with Susan.
@Luvli Guurl I dare to and such a review will do one thing, I think I'll get Numair to bed Susan .Sorry to crazyhorsefan, but you'll get your pleasure, too. And I simply show what I dare to do:
So let's get them into one bed.
***************************************************** Chapter 12:
While Daine was still sleeping, Numair met Susan in one of the training fields, trying to improve her archery. It was near enough to feel as save as it would be possible these days. Kitten and Tkaa as well as some human mages were looking out for the immortals.
Numair stared at Susan, she was so lovely, tall, blonde hair, nearly white with one black streak, and she was self-confident, proud and not at least shy. He admired her strength and her rational head.
Susan was thinking about Numair while she trained. He was such an attractive man, and so good-looking with dark hair and all. And he was charming, but well it was obvious from her first minutes in this world, that he had a crush on this Daine. Daine wasn't bad looking, but she had mouse-brown hair, and wasn't as attractive as Thayet or Susan herself. Numair and Daine weren't together at least not in public knowledge. So she would just try to get him. She wasn't such a mouse as Daine. And well he wouldn't be backing away, because of her hair or her grandfather, Daines father was a good as well. She had made up her mind to track Numair down.
Susan had the feeling of being watched. As she looked behind she saw Numair staring at her. ~Great, he finds me attractive~ Her heartbeat fastened. "Hi Numair, how are you? Everything's OK at the palace?" She greeted him.
"Hi Susan, yes everything is working. Well, uhm, you look lovely." He blushed and walked away fast.
Susan was stunned ~ Well it just starts working without my help. I should use the time, this Daine is sleeping. Someone said, she would sleep for more than two days.~
Susan followed Numair into the gardens, where he was sitting on a bench deep in thoughts. Susan sat down next to him. Silently for some time, then asking "Numair why did you leave so fast after making a compliment? It was a nice compliment. And to be honest, you are looking rather good and really charming, too. I really like you."
Numair blushed but didn't say anything. Susan put her arm around his waist pulling him to her. Automatically his arms went around her waist, her faces were nearly colliding. Numair said huskily "Look up Susan, Look into my eyes!" and kissed her fiercely. The stroked her back and hugged her tight. After some minutes someone stopped them, biting Numair in his arm.
He shrieked "Cloud, what the hell you are doing here. Release my arm or I will cause a fire under your tail." Cloud bitted a bit harder then released his arm and shook her had looking at him, as she would like to kill him. ~Cloud was angry more than a bit angry, the storkman was cheating on her Daine. But after his thread she left him. She had stopped the kiss and hoped he would regain his senses.
Susan looked confused. Numair stroked her chin. "Come let us go inside, into my chambers, it's a bit more private." She nodded and they went to his chambers.
In his chambers he pulled her into a tight hug again kissing her with passion. She felt like she could fly. It was great, he was great and he desired her, not this kid Daine. After some more kisses he pulled her on his bed. He was burning, he hadn't slept with anyone, since he first met Daine. He had missed kissing and well other things as well. He pulled of her shirt, she was trying to get his shirt off, as he was opening her breeches and tries to undress her completely. After a short struggle, they were both naked. He was stroking her silky skin. Playing with her reactions to his touch. First he only touches her arms, and legs, than he moved to her waist and resting his hand there, he kissed her again. Moving his kisses on, he stroke her chest, playing with them. She was breathing hard and fast, making small sounds, purring like a cat. His lips followed his hands.
//well we will let them do the rest alone. And yes they will have sex. Good sex.//
As Numair woke the next morning, Alanna was standing in the doorway, scolding. He blushed, Susan was sleeping in his arms. Alanna hissed, "We are awaiting you in the council hall. As fast as possible, and you, too Susan. " Alanna left the room furious.
~How could Numair do this~ Alanna thought ~ He is so stupid, cheating on Daine, when she is ready for his love. How could he change his mind as fast? I hate this Susan! Numair and Daine belong together. Daine, oh Goddess, Daine would be so upset- upset well Daine would be broken when she would get a word of this. Poor Daine. How could he do it? He lost his last brain cells.~
Furiously she stampeded into the Council Hall. Everyone looked at her in astonishment.
Numair was feeling bad, ~he had cheated on Daine. And Alanna had caught him doing it. Was this night worth loosing Daine? He was sure it wasn't.~ He sighed. Susan turned to him, pleadingly she said "No, oh no, you are not regretting it. Please say, you are not regretting this!" "Well, as a matter of fact Susan I do regret it. I should have never cheated on Daine this way. I am sorry." Susan tears falling running down her cheeks, left the room half clothed, only to run into Daine, right outside Numairs room..
Daine was shocked, this half naked Susan was coming out of Numairs room. He wasn't in love with her, Daine, no he loved this stranger this Susan. She burst into tears. Running into the stable to be comforted by Daine.
Half an hour later Numair was entering the Council hall. Everyone was here, except for Daine. Susan had red eyes and was hugging herself saying nothing and didn't dare to look into anyone's eyes. "Where is Daine?" The King asked. Everyone shrugged. Then Susan said, with a voice full of tears "I ran into her just outside Numairs rooms." Alannas eyes grow wide, she snapped "And I doubt you weren't properly closed at that time. Shame on you, on both of you. Onua do you mind helping me. We have to find Daine, as our Mage here has cheated on her with the Chosen of the Dark God." Everyone gasped. Onua and Alanna left the room. Numair was fainting. ~Daine knew. Everything went wrong~
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Ok chapter done, well please do not hate me. She will forgive him for once. And they will be together at least for a time. Please review, and do not flame. Or I will take it the other way round. Though I still can't believe it myself, letting Numair cheat on Daine. I had just planned to let him flirt with Susan.
