I am having a kind of a writers block, being sooo dammed slowly right now.
Sorry to all my (maybe three or four) readers- wanna REVIEWS!!!
Disclaimer: No it's not mine.
@crazyhorsegirl88 you are the best reviewer, someone can get. Thanks a lot.
But there have been an - um well - misunderstanding ;-) I will answer those questions. ;-P Not you .
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Alanna seriously had enough. She could not let Jon starve himself to death. So the Champion went yelling at her king again. She was really angry with him. His kingdom needed him right now. They were in a bloody war, with immortals and an army from the copper isles on the side of the enemy. And this enemy seemed to be a Goddess. They need all their strength for the upcoming fight.
Numair was still standing in Daines room. He had not moved. He just stood there like someone had turned him into stone. And he felt nothing. Daine struggled away from him and then ran away. She could not stand his presence any longer. He was in a shock.
He was still in the same spot as Daine was coming back into her room. She had never seen him this way before. He was looking lost and helpless and well - just sad. She could not resist her urge to wipe away the look on his face. She gently touched his mouth with her hand, then caressed his frown away. Numair stood as still as he could. He was taken. She was touching him, not running away or fighting him. He let her continue caressing his face for some minutes, then he pulled her into a hug, caressing her cheeks now.
"Oh dear Daine, my precious one, my little Love." He whispered. "I have waited for this so long." He kissed her again and this time, she wasn't struggling. As his tongue demanded to be let in, she welcomed it and after some seconds returned him the favour and kissed back, their tongues clinging together.
Daine had the feeling of being in heaven (well the tortallian equivalent of heaven of course). She could not remember being so happy ever. "Oh Numair, don't let me go and don't go away from me. Never leave me." She whispered. "And do not hurt me, please."
Daine liked the way, Numair was acting towards her, but she didn't forget Susan as soon.
They were hugging each user, and kissing until Daine felt into sleep being exhausted again. Numair sat on her bed, her head in his lap, gently caressing her hair. He did not want to leave her and wake up from this dream.
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I know this chapter was rather short, but 1.) I do not have much time right now 2.) I am writing on a second story and want to update both 3.) I have a kind of a writer's blockade. 4.) I nearly got myself hurt while training with the fire department and the ambulance men.(well they were training on me and some other extra trained people. We played injured people after a car accident)
But I wanted to get on with my story, even if it is only a small step and I really really wanted to give Crazyhorsegirl88 her D/N stuff Crazyhorsegirl88 Are you happy about it?
Disclaimer: No it's not mine.
@crazyhorsegirl88 you are the best reviewer, someone can get. Thanks a lot.
But there have been an - um well - misunderstanding ;-) I will answer those questions. ;-P Not you .
***************************************************************** Chapter 17
Alanna seriously had enough. She could not let Jon starve himself to death. So the Champion went yelling at her king again. She was really angry with him. His kingdom needed him right now. They were in a bloody war, with immortals and an army from the copper isles on the side of the enemy. And this enemy seemed to be a Goddess. They need all their strength for the upcoming fight.
Numair was still standing in Daines room. He had not moved. He just stood there like someone had turned him into stone. And he felt nothing. Daine struggled away from him and then ran away. She could not stand his presence any longer. He was in a shock.
He was still in the same spot as Daine was coming back into her room. She had never seen him this way before. He was looking lost and helpless and well - just sad. She could not resist her urge to wipe away the look on his face. She gently touched his mouth with her hand, then caressed his frown away. Numair stood as still as he could. He was taken. She was touching him, not running away or fighting him. He let her continue caressing his face for some minutes, then he pulled her into a hug, caressing her cheeks now.
"Oh dear Daine, my precious one, my little Love." He whispered. "I have waited for this so long." He kissed her again and this time, she wasn't struggling. As his tongue demanded to be let in, she welcomed it and after some seconds returned him the favour and kissed back, their tongues clinging together.
Daine had the feeling of being in heaven (well the tortallian equivalent of heaven of course). She could not remember being so happy ever. "Oh Numair, don't let me go and don't go away from me. Never leave me." She whispered. "And do not hurt me, please."
Daine liked the way, Numair was acting towards her, but she didn't forget Susan as soon.
They were hugging each user, and kissing until Daine felt into sleep being exhausted again. Numair sat on her bed, her head in his lap, gently caressing her hair. He did not want to leave her and wake up from this dream.
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I know this chapter was rather short, but 1.) I do not have much time right now 2.) I am writing on a second story and want to update both 3.) I have a kind of a writer's blockade. 4.) I nearly got myself hurt while training with the fire department and the ambulance men.(well they were training on me and some other extra trained people. We played injured people after a car accident)
But I wanted to get on with my story, even if it is only a small step and I really really wanted to give Crazyhorsegirl88 her D/N stuff Crazyhorsegirl88 Are you happy about it?
