Ok big sorry to all of my readers (all 4 as I suspect .)
I wasn't home the last days and neglected my stories a bit.
My boyfriend is using a Mac and is going online by modem, so I don't
continue my work when I am with him.
And the weekend was a bit busy. With good friends, disco and so on. But I
am back again.
Until next weekend and more parties . I like holidays .
But just now, the story needs action again. Prepare for a big battle
starting.
Disclaimer: I do not own the work of Terry Pratchett and Tamora Pierce, but I own the plot, well at least part of the plot. The idea of chaos rising a war with the help of Ozorne also belongs to Tamora Pierce.
Comments:
@ Crazyhorsegirl88 my one and last reviewer thanks
Hey is nobody reading this story or are all of you too shy to send me a review? I would like to know your opinions about my story . please.
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Chapter 21 [wow I had only planned 20 chapters, but the story is living and making its own way]
It was time to strike, Ozorne was sure about this. He had to do it now, as everyone of Tortalls heroes was mourning about the death of the Queen and the husband of the champion, while the Rogues were mourning more about the death of the husband of the champion, there beloved former King. They would all be easier to kill in times of sorrow. So it has to go fast. He had to speak to Usuaelle. [I'll never learn to spell it right or the same way twice]
// Usuaelle was pleased with the thought of striking when the grief was strong. But she didn't like the thought of Alanna seeking a revenge on her strongest human mages. That was an idea Ozorne had developed alone. She like the thought of a grieving Alanna but she hated and feared the thought of a revenge seeking Alanna and nearly more, the thought of her activating a revenge seeking Court of Rogues. It was more than difficult to predict the rogues, or to spy on them. Even if Ozorne uses his new gift of spies made of his own blood, good. //
Ozorne was using his gift. He created his little spies out of his blood. He went to a cave in a lonely part of the realms of god, to do it. He would fail, if someone would disturb this.
Some dark little spots were shrieking, as he put them into bags. He gave one of the bags to a hurrock, telling him to throw the three little things into the palace grounds, so that he could get information from there. He gave similar bags and instructions to other winged immortals. He himself teleportated one of the creatures to Numair, as he was the one Ozorne feared. He suspected that this one could also watch the wench, Daine, as she and Numair were so close. But why did he feel like he had forgotten some important thing about the new plan.
The Council was meeting again, all looking sad and tired. They were in a courtyard, together with the dragons, making plans about stopping the copper island army. After a long discussion, they set up a trap in which the dragons should kill some enemies and getting the rest scared enough to yield.
They did everything as it was discussed, removing their own troops to another part of the wood, but covering their tracks, some of them making a trap track.
But they failed, the Copper Island army went after the real troops and caught them off guard. The Tortallians loose many of their soldiers in the battle, before the dragons came to their aid and the enemy went back into the woods, leaving the Tortallians to care for their dead and wounded comrades and friends.
The next day the council meeting was a sad thing. Everyone was aware of their loss and they knew that they were betrayed, not by magic - the dragons would have sensed any spell - but by someone. Someone was a spy. And the spy had to be a member of the group, as no one has sensed or seen a human who did not belong to them there. Alanna and Jon were in a rage. Jon was brooding, who would betray them. He was sure that Alanna and Gary were innocent, they were his close friends since his time as a page. Numair and Daine were trustworthy, too. They were both loving the country which gave them a knew home and would both die to save it. And they were both enemies of Ozorne and would not work with the man they hate. Well and then there were his ministers and secretaries, but they were working for him for years, and they were all tested before they started working. And what about the strangers? He had recognized Susan's love for Gary. And he knew they had killed Stormwings on their first day at court. And they had killed some Immortals since then. And Carrot was a naïve trustworthy man, or was he a good actor?
Alanna was fuming, treason. She hated traitors, she had fought such a desperate fight to stop Rogers attempts for murdering his family to get the throne. She had lost her brother, Faith and Liam in this fight. She was thinking about the who. Who was the traitor? Jon was the King, he wouldn't betray his own throne. Gary was her old friend, he helped them against Roger, and he was the Prime Minister, she trusted him. Numair, Numair loved Tortall his shelter. They helped him, knowing they would have an enemy in Ozorne if they do so. He would not betray them, plus he hated Ozorne who had kidnapped his student and love, Daine. Daine would not do that. They were a kind of Daines family. Daine had protected her(Alannas) family as her own. The secretaries and ministers were tested, so the only ones left were the strangers. What did they know about them? Was it one of them? She knew they had all helped them, in many ways. They had the horse which could go everywhere, Susan had helped Thayet as she was near death the first time. It hurt to think about Thayet. And she knew that Susan liked Gary very much.
Gary was thinking about the traitor in their rows as well. Jon was the king, he was innocent without any doubts, and Alanna had killed a traitor. The secretaries and ministers were tested and every move of them was known. Then there were Numair and Daine, they love the country which gave them shelter. And the strangers. He loved Susan, surely she would not do such things. And Carrot was naïve but trustworthy he stands to his word.
The secretaries and ministers were afraid, they had heard stories about how traitors were treated. Susan was furious. Who had done that? She was sure she could trust Gary and Alanna and Jon was the King. Daine and Numair also seemed to love the country. And she knew Carrot good enough to know, that he barely know the meaning of the word traitor, cause he was much to straight forward and much to honest. And Angua was to much his, and to much an honest person to. She was afraid someone would suspect them and send them away, just after she had the feeling of having found a new home.
Carrot could not understand that someone could do such a thing. A traitor, he hated the word, he hated its meaning. He was sure humans were not supposed to act this way.
Angua was afraid. They were strangers here. They would suspect them of it. They would say, they were the spies. She was afraid of the punishment.
Daine was stunned, who could do that to Tortall, who was so mean? She was considering the question. She knew Alanna, Jon and Gary well enough to know, they were innocent of it. They were her friends, and Tortalls heroes. And Numair, Numair was her love he would do no harm, to the country he loved as much as she loved it. Well, the strangers seemed to be trustworthy and she really liked them, but the rest was tested, so who was left?
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No D/N fluffy stuff this chappy, sorry to crazyhorsegirl88 .
I saw, I forgot to comment on the reviews for the last chapter. Emboss I am not evil, you'll see! And no they wont return to carthak , and it's a pity that you see what I am planning with Jon, it's too early for it,
Crazyhorsegirl88 George had to die I needed some dead main characters, and I had plans for the others, ... And you'll get more D/N stuff, I promise
Disclaimer: I do not own the work of Terry Pratchett and Tamora Pierce, but I own the plot, well at least part of the plot. The idea of chaos rising a war with the help of Ozorne also belongs to Tamora Pierce.
Comments:
@ Crazyhorsegirl88 my one and last reviewer thanks
Hey is nobody reading this story or are all of you too shy to send me a review? I would like to know your opinions about my story . please.
******************************************************************
Chapter 21 [wow I had only planned 20 chapters, but the story is living and making its own way]
It was time to strike, Ozorne was sure about this. He had to do it now, as everyone of Tortalls heroes was mourning about the death of the Queen and the husband of the champion, while the Rogues were mourning more about the death of the husband of the champion, there beloved former King. They would all be easier to kill in times of sorrow. So it has to go fast. He had to speak to Usuaelle. [I'll never learn to spell it right or the same way twice]
// Usuaelle was pleased with the thought of striking when the grief was strong. But she didn't like the thought of Alanna seeking a revenge on her strongest human mages. That was an idea Ozorne had developed alone. She like the thought of a grieving Alanna but she hated and feared the thought of a revenge seeking Alanna and nearly more, the thought of her activating a revenge seeking Court of Rogues. It was more than difficult to predict the rogues, or to spy on them. Even if Ozorne uses his new gift of spies made of his own blood, good. //
Ozorne was using his gift. He created his little spies out of his blood. He went to a cave in a lonely part of the realms of god, to do it. He would fail, if someone would disturb this.
Some dark little spots were shrieking, as he put them into bags. He gave one of the bags to a hurrock, telling him to throw the three little things into the palace grounds, so that he could get information from there. He gave similar bags and instructions to other winged immortals. He himself teleportated one of the creatures to Numair, as he was the one Ozorne feared. He suspected that this one could also watch the wench, Daine, as she and Numair were so close. But why did he feel like he had forgotten some important thing about the new plan.
The Council was meeting again, all looking sad and tired. They were in a courtyard, together with the dragons, making plans about stopping the copper island army. After a long discussion, they set up a trap in which the dragons should kill some enemies and getting the rest scared enough to yield.
They did everything as it was discussed, removing their own troops to another part of the wood, but covering their tracks, some of them making a trap track.
But they failed, the Copper Island army went after the real troops and caught them off guard. The Tortallians loose many of their soldiers in the battle, before the dragons came to their aid and the enemy went back into the woods, leaving the Tortallians to care for their dead and wounded comrades and friends.
The next day the council meeting was a sad thing. Everyone was aware of their loss and they knew that they were betrayed, not by magic - the dragons would have sensed any spell - but by someone. Someone was a spy. And the spy had to be a member of the group, as no one has sensed or seen a human who did not belong to them there. Alanna and Jon were in a rage. Jon was brooding, who would betray them. He was sure that Alanna and Gary were innocent, they were his close friends since his time as a page. Numair and Daine were trustworthy, too. They were both loving the country which gave them a knew home and would both die to save it. And they were both enemies of Ozorne and would not work with the man they hate. Well and then there were his ministers and secretaries, but they were working for him for years, and they were all tested before they started working. And what about the strangers? He had recognized Susan's love for Gary. And he knew they had killed Stormwings on their first day at court. And they had killed some Immortals since then. And Carrot was a naïve trustworthy man, or was he a good actor?
Alanna was fuming, treason. She hated traitors, she had fought such a desperate fight to stop Rogers attempts for murdering his family to get the throne. She had lost her brother, Faith and Liam in this fight. She was thinking about the who. Who was the traitor? Jon was the King, he wouldn't betray his own throne. Gary was her old friend, he helped them against Roger, and he was the Prime Minister, she trusted him. Numair, Numair loved Tortall his shelter. They helped him, knowing they would have an enemy in Ozorne if they do so. He would not betray them, plus he hated Ozorne who had kidnapped his student and love, Daine. Daine would not do that. They were a kind of Daines family. Daine had protected her(Alannas) family as her own. The secretaries and ministers were tested, so the only ones left were the strangers. What did they know about them? Was it one of them? She knew they had all helped them, in many ways. They had the horse which could go everywhere, Susan had helped Thayet as she was near death the first time. It hurt to think about Thayet. And she knew that Susan liked Gary very much.
Gary was thinking about the traitor in their rows as well. Jon was the king, he was innocent without any doubts, and Alanna had killed a traitor. The secretaries and ministers were tested and every move of them was known. Then there were Numair and Daine, they love the country which gave them shelter. And the strangers. He loved Susan, surely she would not do such things. And Carrot was naïve but trustworthy he stands to his word.
The secretaries and ministers were afraid, they had heard stories about how traitors were treated. Susan was furious. Who had done that? She was sure she could trust Gary and Alanna and Jon was the King. Daine and Numair also seemed to love the country. And she knew Carrot good enough to know, that he barely know the meaning of the word traitor, cause he was much to straight forward and much to honest. And Angua was to much his, and to much an honest person to. She was afraid someone would suspect them and send them away, just after she had the feeling of having found a new home.
Carrot could not understand that someone could do such a thing. A traitor, he hated the word, he hated its meaning. He was sure humans were not supposed to act this way.
Angua was afraid. They were strangers here. They would suspect them of it. They would say, they were the spies. She was afraid of the punishment.
Daine was stunned, who could do that to Tortall, who was so mean? She was considering the question. She knew Alanna, Jon and Gary well enough to know, they were innocent of it. They were her friends, and Tortalls heroes. And Numair, Numair was her love he would do no harm, to the country he loved as much as she loved it. Well, the strangers seemed to be trustworthy and she really liked them, but the rest was tested, so who was left?
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No D/N fluffy stuff this chappy, sorry to crazyhorsegirl88 .
I saw, I forgot to comment on the reviews for the last chapter. Emboss I am not evil, you'll see! And no they wont return to carthak , and it's a pity that you see what I am planning with Jon, it's too early for it,
Crazyhorsegirl88 George had to die I needed some dead main characters, and I had plans for the others, ... And you'll get more D/N stuff, I promise
