Ok Just end this story. My muse is running wild with other stories but my
time is running low . so this will be the last chapter .
For all my faithful reviewers (the three or four I have) maybe I will write
a sequel in the future, but not in the next month.
Comments:
@intelligent fangirl. What do you think, stealing the biggest fish on the marriage ocean . it is a crime . considering you have the viewpoint of a court lady ..
@ kit49: well not much more, last chapter -now. But maybe you would like my second story - stuck with the slayer .. . And you really have to go to Scotland it is a wonderful country, beautiful landscape, magnificent old buildings fascinating Ancient Monuments much space . so lovely . I am in love with this country .
@ Crazyhorsegirl88: what do you think what time I spend on the story. Not only trying to develop the plot but also making good real sentences, not violating the grammar and finding the right words . I think I should be better considering the grammar part. And I hate having a dictionary beside me, for rarely used words I want to use. But I do my best ..
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Chapter 24:
Did you know, court ladies could be like harpies (however you write this). They can be cruel, they smell the blood and they get for it. They have no rules, no mercy no human feelings for their enemy. They are like monsters.
And Alanna would experience all their cruelty all their mischievous plans, all their evil ideas.
They gossiped about her sexlive (George was the only one with an excuse) they digged up the old Liam story, made stories up between her and Raoul, her and Gary, her and Hakim, they also involved some common soldiers and Bazhir in their stories, as well as some Tusain warriors at her time in the Tusaine prison at the Drell war.
They gossiped about people she had spelled for evil, made up stories about her, making Josiane mad, Delia into a traitor, the late king into forgiving her, some cheating ex-lover into Faithful and last but not least giving a bad luck spell to the queen and a love potion to the king.
Alanna hated the stories, hated the court ladies hated the court. After a week she just wanted to run. As fast as possible and as far as possible, before she would kill one of those damned sluts.
She went mad as he heard the story of her sending her husband to death as fast as the king was a widower. She boiled with anger. Rushing into Daines room she slammed the door shut. "I hate them! I hate all of them. I did love George! They should shut up! Make them shut up!" Alanna begun to sob and collapsed on the floor, "Make them shut up! I can't hear more of it!" She pleaded.
Daine was shocked by a crying and sobbing Alanna sitting on her floor. She hurried to her side and tried to comfort her. "Shh, Alanna, calm yourself I know they are harpyes. You know as good as I know that they are poor jealous creatures who are up for mischief. Kitten go and get Angua, Buri and Susan."
As Buri, Angua and Susan arrived they were shocked to find a sobbing Alanna in Daines arms at the floor. "What happened?" Asked Buri who recovered first. She went to Alannas other side and hugged her.
"The court ladies" Daine sighed. "They are telling everyone, Alanna had planned to kill George."
Buris hand went to her sword-hilt. "They are so dead. How could they? Now it's enough! Someone has to teach them a lesson." Buri who had suffered enough from them, too was more than angry.
Alanna was still sobbing. "I can't marry Jon, I can't stand them every single day. It would kill our love. How could Thayet stand this?"
"Well," Buri considered it. "She had us, you and me, and George and Eleni and Myles. And after she was married to him, and truly the Queen, the ladies were afraid of making her angry. You know, it is a game for power. None of them would gain any power of your marriage to him, and nearly none of them could hope to get any favours from you, as none of them likes you or has acted like liking you."
"Short version?" Susan asked grinning.
"Short version: They will be as friendly as they can the moment Alanna is married to Jon. They would not risk anything just for making the queen angry."
"So it's just their game." Susan sighed. "I remember it from my times as the daughter and heiress of a Duke, at home as well."
At that moment the men, who were searching for the four were at Daines door. "Here they are, we found them." Gary announced, stopping dead in his tracks as he saw Alanna at the floor. Jon, Gary. Raoul and Carrot behind him, pushed him in the room. Jon running to Alannas side as fast as he saw her sitting on the floor.
He got her in his arms. "What happened?" he asked angry and afraid. Alanna hid her face in his shirt. Still sobbing she answered "I can't go on this way, make them stop!" Jon looked at the other women for enlightment. Daine started to explain." It's about the court ladies. They gossip about Alanna killing George on purpose, after looking to the death of Thayet. They hit hard this time. I just don't want to mention all the other mud they are throwing .. " Jon growled. "Damned jealous bints. How can we stop them."
"No way," Buri sighed. "They tried some of their games with Thayet, too as you proposed to her, but Thayet was used to court ladies, and she was no widow. And she had Alanna, Myles, Eleni and me at her side." "So we can just wait till the wedding is over?"
"No," Susan interjected. "We can make them be better. I have a plan. We will not let Alanna alone for the next weeks. But be subtle. Some work for the Champion, some questions of the bridesmaids and such things. No visible guards. And we will announce, that she is still in search for some bridesmaids out of the noble crowd. Every court lady would kill to have her daughter in the rows of the queen's bridesmaids. So they will try to make good friend, for their daughter's sake and will have a battle between themselves which will occupy them."
Buri clapped her hands. "That's an idea. That should work. Let them kill their own kind, not us."
After that they were all occupied with the plan to turn the battlefield into the women chambers, where Buri, Daine, Susan, Angua and Alanna were rarely seen.
The wedding went well and as prophesied the court ladies were nice to Alanna afterwards.
Alanna and Jon had two more children George Francis and Thayet Eleni with their kids from their first marriages they were a big happy family. Roald as the heir was becoming a page as his sister Kalasin and Alannas son Thom and one of her Twins Arianna. The other twin and George and Thayet were having a real strong gift and a healing gift about everything known before.
Daine and Numair had three kids. Her twins Sara and Aram were both wild mages while her youngest Jonathan was strong gifted with both wild magic and the gift.
Susan and Gary had four kids. Francis, Mort, Ysabella and Gareth. Gareth and Ysabella had the gift, too and all four of them had Deaths handprint on their cheek.
Carrots and Anguas kids were a bit of a problem, she had quadruplets like a wolf and they were all part werewolves. But fortunately the help of the wild mage was available during their whole youth.
Buri and Raoul had just one daughter, they really spoiled. Her name was Onua Thayet after dead friends and she was really lovely.
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Would like some reviews about this . Then, maybe, I'll write a sequel.
Comments:
@intelligent fangirl. What do you think, stealing the biggest fish on the marriage ocean . it is a crime . considering you have the viewpoint of a court lady ..
@ kit49: well not much more, last chapter -now. But maybe you would like my second story - stuck with the slayer .. . And you really have to go to Scotland it is a wonderful country, beautiful landscape, magnificent old buildings fascinating Ancient Monuments much space . so lovely . I am in love with this country .
@ Crazyhorsegirl88: what do you think what time I spend on the story. Not only trying to develop the plot but also making good real sentences, not violating the grammar and finding the right words . I think I should be better considering the grammar part. And I hate having a dictionary beside me, for rarely used words I want to use. But I do my best ..
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Chapter 24:
Did you know, court ladies could be like harpies (however you write this). They can be cruel, they smell the blood and they get for it. They have no rules, no mercy no human feelings for their enemy. They are like monsters.
And Alanna would experience all their cruelty all their mischievous plans, all their evil ideas.
They gossiped about her sexlive (George was the only one with an excuse) they digged up the old Liam story, made stories up between her and Raoul, her and Gary, her and Hakim, they also involved some common soldiers and Bazhir in their stories, as well as some Tusain warriors at her time in the Tusaine prison at the Drell war.
They gossiped about people she had spelled for evil, made up stories about her, making Josiane mad, Delia into a traitor, the late king into forgiving her, some cheating ex-lover into Faithful and last but not least giving a bad luck spell to the queen and a love potion to the king.
Alanna hated the stories, hated the court ladies hated the court. After a week she just wanted to run. As fast as possible and as far as possible, before she would kill one of those damned sluts.
She went mad as he heard the story of her sending her husband to death as fast as the king was a widower. She boiled with anger. Rushing into Daines room she slammed the door shut. "I hate them! I hate all of them. I did love George! They should shut up! Make them shut up!" Alanna begun to sob and collapsed on the floor, "Make them shut up! I can't hear more of it!" She pleaded.
Daine was shocked by a crying and sobbing Alanna sitting on her floor. She hurried to her side and tried to comfort her. "Shh, Alanna, calm yourself I know they are harpyes. You know as good as I know that they are poor jealous creatures who are up for mischief. Kitten go and get Angua, Buri and Susan."
As Buri, Angua and Susan arrived they were shocked to find a sobbing Alanna in Daines arms at the floor. "What happened?" Asked Buri who recovered first. She went to Alannas other side and hugged her.
"The court ladies" Daine sighed. "They are telling everyone, Alanna had planned to kill George."
Buris hand went to her sword-hilt. "They are so dead. How could they? Now it's enough! Someone has to teach them a lesson." Buri who had suffered enough from them, too was more than angry.
Alanna was still sobbing. "I can't marry Jon, I can't stand them every single day. It would kill our love. How could Thayet stand this?"
"Well," Buri considered it. "She had us, you and me, and George and Eleni and Myles. And after she was married to him, and truly the Queen, the ladies were afraid of making her angry. You know, it is a game for power. None of them would gain any power of your marriage to him, and nearly none of them could hope to get any favours from you, as none of them likes you or has acted like liking you."
"Short version?" Susan asked grinning.
"Short version: They will be as friendly as they can the moment Alanna is married to Jon. They would not risk anything just for making the queen angry."
"So it's just their game." Susan sighed. "I remember it from my times as the daughter and heiress of a Duke, at home as well."
At that moment the men, who were searching for the four were at Daines door. "Here they are, we found them." Gary announced, stopping dead in his tracks as he saw Alanna at the floor. Jon, Gary. Raoul and Carrot behind him, pushed him in the room. Jon running to Alannas side as fast as he saw her sitting on the floor.
He got her in his arms. "What happened?" he asked angry and afraid. Alanna hid her face in his shirt. Still sobbing she answered "I can't go on this way, make them stop!" Jon looked at the other women for enlightment. Daine started to explain." It's about the court ladies. They gossip about Alanna killing George on purpose, after looking to the death of Thayet. They hit hard this time. I just don't want to mention all the other mud they are throwing .. " Jon growled. "Damned jealous bints. How can we stop them."
"No way," Buri sighed. "They tried some of their games with Thayet, too as you proposed to her, but Thayet was used to court ladies, and she was no widow. And she had Alanna, Myles, Eleni and me at her side." "So we can just wait till the wedding is over?"
"No," Susan interjected. "We can make them be better. I have a plan. We will not let Alanna alone for the next weeks. But be subtle. Some work for the Champion, some questions of the bridesmaids and such things. No visible guards. And we will announce, that she is still in search for some bridesmaids out of the noble crowd. Every court lady would kill to have her daughter in the rows of the queen's bridesmaids. So they will try to make good friend, for their daughter's sake and will have a battle between themselves which will occupy them."
Buri clapped her hands. "That's an idea. That should work. Let them kill their own kind, not us."
After that they were all occupied with the plan to turn the battlefield into the women chambers, where Buri, Daine, Susan, Angua and Alanna were rarely seen.
The wedding went well and as prophesied the court ladies were nice to Alanna afterwards.
Alanna and Jon had two more children George Francis and Thayet Eleni with their kids from their first marriages they were a big happy family. Roald as the heir was becoming a page as his sister Kalasin and Alannas son Thom and one of her Twins Arianna. The other twin and George and Thayet were having a real strong gift and a healing gift about everything known before.
Daine and Numair had three kids. Her twins Sara and Aram were both wild mages while her youngest Jonathan was strong gifted with both wild magic and the gift.
Susan and Gary had four kids. Francis, Mort, Ysabella and Gareth. Gareth and Ysabella had the gift, too and all four of them had Deaths handprint on their cheek.
Carrots and Anguas kids were a bit of a problem, she had quadruplets like a wolf and they were all part werewolves. But fortunately the help of the wild mage was available during their whole youth.
Buri and Raoul had just one daughter, they really spoiled. Her name was Onua Thayet after dead friends and she was really lovely.
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Would like some reviews about this . Then, maybe, I'll write a sequel.
