Disclaimer: Same as last chapter.
Ho hum. Character switching.
Reviewers:
Inuyashachic515: Thanks so much! ^^ Glad you like it. Also, thanks for reviewing!
umm......: Yes, I know the first chapter is dreadful, but I wrote it about two years ago, and I will be fixing it right away. Thanks for expressing what you truly think. Always love good feedback!
WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE: Um . . . alright.
b : Thanks a lot! I will keep going with it!
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Cinder Sakura Version Two
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Sakura woke up to a banging on her door. When she opened it she found her two stepsisters with big bundles of clothes, which they immediately dropped in front of her.
"Sakura I expect these to be washed CAREFULLY by noon!" Meilin yelled at Sakura.
"Yes, Meilin." Sakura smiled weakly. She had to smile; otherwise they would get pleasure from making her distressed. And why should she let their ego's grow. It would only result in worse treatment on her part.
"What is with you and always smiling?" Tomoyo screamed, "If I don't have my laundry washed and folded nicely by ten-o-clock I will see to it you never have a spare moment alone ever again!" Sakura stepped back; Tomoyo had spit all over from her rage. Sakura just gave her a huge smile and proceeded into her stepmother's room.
"Good morning Yelan," Sakura grinned.
"It's about time, make sure you clean the entrance hall floor! I must say you have let it get very dirty!" Yelan screeched.
"I'm sorry ma'am it wont happen again!" Sakura said walking out and going to start on the laundry.
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Halfway though her cleaning there was a knock on the door. Sakura brushed herself off before opening it.
"Good day miss," the man at the door said, "tomorrow night there will be a ball at the palace and all young women must attend."
After he said that the man left. Sakura was so excited she ran upstairs to tell her stepmother.
"Can I go?" Sakura said with pleading eyed. Yelan looked over at Tomoyo and Meilin who shook their hands furiously.
"I'm afraid not. They don't allow poor, ugly, horrid women at balls!" Yelan laughed as Sakura ran into her room crying.
"I don't care, I guess it's best that I really don't know what I'm missing. The man said it was to find the prince a wife. I have only seen the prince once, many years ago, and he was very handsome," Sakura sighed to herself before going into a deep slumber.
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She woke up the next morning to screams and yells coming from the hallway. She got dressed and looked outside. Meilin and Tomoyo were fighting over a beautiful necklace they both wanted to wear.
"It looks great on me and horrid on YOU!" Meilin cried yanking the necklace.
"Maybe so, but it's not like the prince will even notice your there so I should wear it!" Tomoyo argued. The kept pulling on the necklace until . . . crash! The beautiful beads from the necklace went pouring onto the floor. It had broken.
"Look what you did you FREAK!" Tomoyo yelled, spitting all over Meilin.
"It was all your fault you stupid little girl!" Meilin yelled grabbing a lock of Tomoyo's hair and started pulling it.
"Excuse me . . ." Sakura said, cautiously coming between them, "I can fix it and make it into two necklaces if you would like . . ."
Tomoyo and Meilin glared at each other.
"Just don't make it ugly!" Meilin said before her and Tomoyo went into their rooms and slammed the doors shut, shaking the whole house. Sakura frowned.
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After two hours of messing up and working on the necklaces Sakura finally finished them and gave them to the girls. Who grabbed them out of her hand and immediately started to get ready for the ball.
When the time finally came they simply left Sakura in the house. She ran out into the back yard and sat on the bench next to a huge fountain.
"It's not like I REALLY wanted to go anyway!" Sakura tried to convince herself as a tear ran down her cheek.
"Well that's a lie!" A voice came from behind her. Sakura flipped around looking around the yard, but saw nothing. She turned to face back the direction she was originally facing and screamed.
"Oh, did the little girl get scared?" The person taunted.
"Who are you?"
"I am your fairy godmother, otherwise known as . . . Yue!" He smiled.
Sakura was confused. "Aren't godmothers supposed to be GIRLS? Like a mother?" She asked, looking at the man with silver eyes and hair, in some sort of a shabby dress.
"Not anymore, they are starting to run out of people. So they give the jobs to guys now. But enough of this. Do you want to go to the ball or not?"
"Yes! So very much!" Sakura said, excitement was easy to see in her eyes.
"Okay, then I'll help you."
Sakura's eyes widened and she jumped on Yue, rapping her arms around him to hug him. Yue finally managed to pry her off.
"Don't touch the outfit! Alright then," he pulled a wand out of his "dress" "Abra Kadabra!"
"I don't remember fairy godmothers saying . . ." Sakura stopped mid- sentence and looked down at her clothes. Her outfit had changed into a beautiful pink dress, with cherry blossoms scattered on it. She looked to her right and saw a watermelon turning into a beautiful carriage. (AN: He he, watermelon!) She gasped, and turned to give Yue another hug, but he glared, so she didn't dare. "Oh my gosh! It's . . . It's . . ." Sakura was at a loss of words.
"Wonderful will do."
Sakura smiled, "It's wonderful!" She looked into the fountain, admiring the dress and how it fit her perfectly. Yue sighed.
"Girls," He said, and rolled his eyes, "alright, go have fun. But you must be back before midnight, or everything will turn back to normal." Sakura just nodded, and Yue pushed her into the carriage and she was off.
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When she arrived at the ball, she found no one dancing. Everyone was just standing there while Prince Syaoran sat, glaring at every girl that would come within ten feet of him. That was, until he spotted Sakura. She was wandering around, a bit lost, and was startled when she felt a hand on her shoulder. Turning around quickly she immediately blushed as the saw the prince holding his hand out to her.
"Would you like to dance?" He asked. Sakura blushed even more and nodded, taking his hand. They danced for a while, and Syaoran lead her out into a garden, and they sat under a Cherry Blossom tree. He took her hand and opened his mouth to speak, right as the clock gave off a loud ding. Sakura looked up, it was midnight. She gave a frightful look at Syaoran and began to run, he chased after her, wondering what was wrong with this crazy girl.
During her run one of Sakura's pink slippers fell on, she ran back to get it, but saw Syaoran gaining speed, and she turned around and began running again. She took a trail through the woods and completely lost him. Syaoran cursed, and returned slowly to the castle.
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Sakura awoke to a load rapping on the door, she got dressed fast and went to answer it. And there he was, Syaoran, he stared at her for a moment.
"Do I, know you?" He asked. He knew he had seen her before, but he couldn't place his finger on it. That is until he saw what was in her pocket, her other slipper! She had put it there last night while running through the woods and forgotten to take it out. He gasped and stared at her. There was no way this ugly servant could have been. . . He looked into her eyes, the same sparkling green as the girl from before.
"Miss, would you mind sitting down and taking off your shoes?" Syaoran asked. Sakura obeyed, and he came up and slipped the slipper on her. It fit perfectly. She smiled a huge smile as he helped her out of the chair and pulled her into a deep kiss. Tomoyo and Meilin came downstairs just in time to see them in the midst of a kiss, and they screamed. Sakura and Syaoran pulled apart and Sakura flinched at the two death glares she was currently receiving.
Syaoran whispered something in her ear, and she nodded. Both of them walked out of the house hand in hand.
And Lived Happily Ever After!
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Did ya guys like it? I'm sick, so I thought I might as well just surprise you with a redo of this chapter.
Now if you want more all you gotsa do it click dat button.
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Ho hum. Character switching.
Reviewers:
Inuyashachic515: Thanks so much! ^^ Glad you like it. Also, thanks for reviewing!
umm......: Yes, I know the first chapter is dreadful, but I wrote it about two years ago, and I will be fixing it right away. Thanks for expressing what you truly think. Always love good feedback!
WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE: Um . . . alright.
b : Thanks a lot! I will keep going with it!
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Cinder Sakura Version Two
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Sakura woke up to a banging on her door. When she opened it she found her two stepsisters with big bundles of clothes, which they immediately dropped in front of her.
"Sakura I expect these to be washed CAREFULLY by noon!" Meilin yelled at Sakura.
"Yes, Meilin." Sakura smiled weakly. She had to smile; otherwise they would get pleasure from making her distressed. And why should she let their ego's grow. It would only result in worse treatment on her part.
"What is with you and always smiling?" Tomoyo screamed, "If I don't have my laundry washed and folded nicely by ten-o-clock I will see to it you never have a spare moment alone ever again!" Sakura stepped back; Tomoyo had spit all over from her rage. Sakura just gave her a huge smile and proceeded into her stepmother's room.
"Good morning Yelan," Sakura grinned.
"It's about time, make sure you clean the entrance hall floor! I must say you have let it get very dirty!" Yelan screeched.
"I'm sorry ma'am it wont happen again!" Sakura said walking out and going to start on the laundry.
~~**~*--------*~**~~
Halfway though her cleaning there was a knock on the door. Sakura brushed herself off before opening it.
"Good day miss," the man at the door said, "tomorrow night there will be a ball at the palace and all young women must attend."
After he said that the man left. Sakura was so excited she ran upstairs to tell her stepmother.
"Can I go?" Sakura said with pleading eyed. Yelan looked over at Tomoyo and Meilin who shook their hands furiously.
"I'm afraid not. They don't allow poor, ugly, horrid women at balls!" Yelan laughed as Sakura ran into her room crying.
"I don't care, I guess it's best that I really don't know what I'm missing. The man said it was to find the prince a wife. I have only seen the prince once, many years ago, and he was very handsome," Sakura sighed to herself before going into a deep slumber.
~~**~*--------*~**~~
She woke up the next morning to screams and yells coming from the hallway. She got dressed and looked outside. Meilin and Tomoyo were fighting over a beautiful necklace they both wanted to wear.
"It looks great on me and horrid on YOU!" Meilin cried yanking the necklace.
"Maybe so, but it's not like the prince will even notice your there so I should wear it!" Tomoyo argued. The kept pulling on the necklace until . . . crash! The beautiful beads from the necklace went pouring onto the floor. It had broken.
"Look what you did you FREAK!" Tomoyo yelled, spitting all over Meilin.
"It was all your fault you stupid little girl!" Meilin yelled grabbing a lock of Tomoyo's hair and started pulling it.
"Excuse me . . ." Sakura said, cautiously coming between them, "I can fix it and make it into two necklaces if you would like . . ."
Tomoyo and Meilin glared at each other.
"Just don't make it ugly!" Meilin said before her and Tomoyo went into their rooms and slammed the doors shut, shaking the whole house. Sakura frowned.
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After two hours of messing up and working on the necklaces Sakura finally finished them and gave them to the girls. Who grabbed them out of her hand and immediately started to get ready for the ball.
When the time finally came they simply left Sakura in the house. She ran out into the back yard and sat on the bench next to a huge fountain.
"It's not like I REALLY wanted to go anyway!" Sakura tried to convince herself as a tear ran down her cheek.
"Well that's a lie!" A voice came from behind her. Sakura flipped around looking around the yard, but saw nothing. She turned to face back the direction she was originally facing and screamed.
"Oh, did the little girl get scared?" The person taunted.
"Who are you?"
"I am your fairy godmother, otherwise known as . . . Yue!" He smiled.
Sakura was confused. "Aren't godmothers supposed to be GIRLS? Like a mother?" She asked, looking at the man with silver eyes and hair, in some sort of a shabby dress.
"Not anymore, they are starting to run out of people. So they give the jobs to guys now. But enough of this. Do you want to go to the ball or not?"
"Yes! So very much!" Sakura said, excitement was easy to see in her eyes.
"Okay, then I'll help you."
Sakura's eyes widened and she jumped on Yue, rapping her arms around him to hug him. Yue finally managed to pry her off.
"Don't touch the outfit! Alright then," he pulled a wand out of his "dress" "Abra Kadabra!"
"I don't remember fairy godmothers saying . . ." Sakura stopped mid- sentence and looked down at her clothes. Her outfit had changed into a beautiful pink dress, with cherry blossoms scattered on it. She looked to her right and saw a watermelon turning into a beautiful carriage. (AN: He he, watermelon!) She gasped, and turned to give Yue another hug, but he glared, so she didn't dare. "Oh my gosh! It's . . . It's . . ." Sakura was at a loss of words.
"Wonderful will do."
Sakura smiled, "It's wonderful!" She looked into the fountain, admiring the dress and how it fit her perfectly. Yue sighed.
"Girls," He said, and rolled his eyes, "alright, go have fun. But you must be back before midnight, or everything will turn back to normal." Sakura just nodded, and Yue pushed her into the carriage and she was off.
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When she arrived at the ball, she found no one dancing. Everyone was just standing there while Prince Syaoran sat, glaring at every girl that would come within ten feet of him. That was, until he spotted Sakura. She was wandering around, a bit lost, and was startled when she felt a hand on her shoulder. Turning around quickly she immediately blushed as the saw the prince holding his hand out to her.
"Would you like to dance?" He asked. Sakura blushed even more and nodded, taking his hand. They danced for a while, and Syaoran lead her out into a garden, and they sat under a Cherry Blossom tree. He took her hand and opened his mouth to speak, right as the clock gave off a loud ding. Sakura looked up, it was midnight. She gave a frightful look at Syaoran and began to run, he chased after her, wondering what was wrong with this crazy girl.
During her run one of Sakura's pink slippers fell on, she ran back to get it, but saw Syaoran gaining speed, and she turned around and began running again. She took a trail through the woods and completely lost him. Syaoran cursed, and returned slowly to the castle.
~~**~*--------*~**~~
Sakura awoke to a load rapping on the door, she got dressed fast and went to answer it. And there he was, Syaoran, he stared at her for a moment.
"Do I, know you?" He asked. He knew he had seen her before, but he couldn't place his finger on it. That is until he saw what was in her pocket, her other slipper! She had put it there last night while running through the woods and forgotten to take it out. He gasped and stared at her. There was no way this ugly servant could have been. . . He looked into her eyes, the same sparkling green as the girl from before.
"Miss, would you mind sitting down and taking off your shoes?" Syaoran asked. Sakura obeyed, and he came up and slipped the slipper on her. It fit perfectly. She smiled a huge smile as he helped her out of the chair and pulled her into a deep kiss. Tomoyo and Meilin came downstairs just in time to see them in the midst of a kiss, and they screamed. Sakura and Syaoran pulled apart and Sakura flinched at the two death glares she was currently receiving.
Syaoran whispered something in her ear, and she nodded. Both of them walked out of the house hand in hand.
And Lived Happily Ever After!
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Did ya guys like it? I'm sick, so I thought I might as well just surprise you with a redo of this chapter.
Now if you want more all you gotsa do it click dat button.
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