Ok this is my 1st fic so if it sux tell me I'm open to all opinions!
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I sat on my bed my keens tucked under my chin hoping that that my presents would go unnoticed, I listened to my parents go at it in the next room sighing I looked out the window. I now understand why my brother had run away he hated to listen to it just like I did. When he left his last words had been I come back for you. He never did I hated him for it leaving me to this place these horrid people I called mom and dad. "I HATE YOU" I cried at the night sky I hope he heard it where ever he was. But my anger at my brother had brought my dads wrath on me. I knew he was coming before I heard his footsteps before my door smashed open the way he always comes. "Who do you hate?" he asked. I knew he was drunk other wise he wouldn't have wasted time on fake sympathy. "You!" I gritted between clenched teeth. Those tense moments where the father makes a remark like you little something or other those don't happen or at least they didn't to me. My father was to drunk to think of anything but he didn't have to his hate for me got across in the smack that landed across my face leaving my cheek burning red. My father drop drunk on the floor as I slowly started to cry. I tried to stop them but hot tears flowed down my face freely. *that's it I have had enough!* I grabbed my travel bag and began stuffing clothed in it, I ran to my bathroom and grabbed the necessities and stuffed them in to. Looking at my father for what I hoped would be the last time I thought *you where right I did end up just like my brother.* I stepped out of my room and on to the fire escape sighing I looked at the bright full moon and out loud for gave my brother for everything and prayed he was okay because now my life depended on his. And I made my last word walking down the fire escape and dropping onto the road "I'll find you Kid Blink where ever you are!" **************************************************************************** ********Is it okay does it suck should I never write again? You tell me PLEASE review!! - Galaxy
I sat on my bed my keens tucked under my chin hoping that that my presents would go unnoticed, I listened to my parents go at it in the next room sighing I looked out the window. I now understand why my brother had run away he hated to listen to it just like I did. When he left his last words had been I come back for you. He never did I hated him for it leaving me to this place these horrid people I called mom and dad. "I HATE YOU" I cried at the night sky I hope he heard it where ever he was. But my anger at my brother had brought my dads wrath on me. I knew he was coming before I heard his footsteps before my door smashed open the way he always comes. "Who do you hate?" he asked. I knew he was drunk other wise he wouldn't have wasted time on fake sympathy. "You!" I gritted between clenched teeth. Those tense moments where the father makes a remark like you little something or other those don't happen or at least they didn't to me. My father was to drunk to think of anything but he didn't have to his hate for me got across in the smack that landed across my face leaving my cheek burning red. My father drop drunk on the floor as I slowly started to cry. I tried to stop them but hot tears flowed down my face freely. *that's it I have had enough!* I grabbed my travel bag and began stuffing clothed in it, I ran to my bathroom and grabbed the necessities and stuffed them in to. Looking at my father for what I hoped would be the last time I thought *you where right I did end up just like my brother.* I stepped out of my room and on to the fire escape sighing I looked at the bright full moon and out loud for gave my brother for everything and prayed he was okay because now my life depended on his. And I made my last word walking down the fire escape and dropping onto the road "I'll find you Kid Blink where ever you are!" **************************************************************************** ********Is it okay does it suck should I never write again? You tell me PLEASE review!! - Galaxy
