I do not own Yugioh I'm righting this for my own selfish pleasure,
bla bla bla .
MAHAHAHAHHA did you guess who he was, well did you, cause it issssss
dududududu HA I'm not going to tell you you'll haft to read the story! YAOI
warning!
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"OH shit It's him" I think, as I duck for cover .Him why him! The last
person I want to see .To day my feelings for him are so confused! I fear he
will find out how I feel about him, so I hid my feelings. But now look at
me I hide my face out of fear . I guess He who lives in fear will never be
free. Guess I am not free I'm CAGED . I wonder what that pharaoh would
think of me if he saw me crouched beneath this bush. He would probably
think ...Ummm...I DO NO KNOW, THE PHAROS IS COMPLACATED! Enough about the
pharaoh though, he is nothing compared to HIM!
I see him walk by the bush covered in snow that I am hiding in .I love
every thing about him. The way he walks white the swing of curved slim
hips, he walks like he owes the world. His eyes as purple as the most
beautiful rare flower! And his name MALIK ,it rolls of you're tong with
elegance . Unlike mine Bakura hard edged no beauty . How could Malik like
me my personality is plain boring, and I'm albino! It's obvious really that
I'm albino , really how many people have white skin and hair !I don't dress
with class ether . Plain t-shirts and jeans for me!
"Whoo that was close" I say as he walks around the corner! That it no more
hiding my feelings I will talk to him to night! But before that I need a
verrrrryyy cold shower ! I get up and start home. This are confusing new
feelings for me. You may not believe it but I'm virgin .Yah yah yah I know
I'm 5,000 . So What I deserve to keep my innocence ac lest that is what I
thought I wanted? Till I meant HIM Malik .
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Time to answer reviews, and today to help me is Kiba (because he is left
out of this story!)
Kiba: HEYYYY I HEARD THEAT!!!!
Ricka: Watt?? I said nothing
Kiba: ERRRRRRR
Ricka: You should be horned you're left out of the story! Seee being left
out of Yaoi fict means you is not gay!
Kiba: I'm gay! I mean I am not (blush) *#_#*!
Ricka: Be quiet gay boy! Cuse it is time to answer reviews!
(Now for our 1st review By Akkei !
Akkeil: Great so far! It's Marik! I knew it! Muhahahahaha...he's my favorite!! Vincent: I thought I was your favorite! Akkeil: Of course! You are my most favorite!(gives Vincent a hug) Vincent: Aw...I'm loved! Akkeil: Of course you are! Ayame: I thought I was your favorite! Shigure: No, I'm her favorite!! Eclipse: You pathetic humans have it all wrong, I'm her favorite!! Akkeil:@_@ To many bishounens! Um... your all my favorites! All 345 of you!( I like to many people)@_@ Can't wait for the next chapter! Bye! Ricka: HEYYYYY I Know You!!!! That is Cheating I told you It was Marik!! Kiba: Some people some people Thy alllllllway cheat! This makes me depressed my best friend cheats and spoils it! Kiba: You always say you're depressed ! Ricka: (HAHAAH)VERY FUNNY SETO _ .I would love to fight with Seto more but time to get to the next review!
Hi ya, Sry this took so long but I forgot you asked me to check out your stuff, I forget a lot of things -_-;. Anyway I read this one over and its a good start though there are some problems. First off you really, really need to use a spell checker and if not then get someone to read it over. Also make your chapters longer; you'll hook your readers in better. Ricka: Thank you for reviewing my fict Buuuttt! My spellchecker dos NOT work and I have like 4th Grade spelling! Kiba:I have 12th grade spelling ability Ricka: SHUT UP! Next time I will get some body to check my spelling for me. This chap was longer too! Ricka: Next review from Sakura30 Sakura30: ahahahaha! Bakura in love! ^0^ Bakura:it's NOT ME! Yami: don't try to hid it! YOU'RE GAY! Bakura:NO! Ryou: T-T Sakura30:anyway good and funny chapter we don't usually read YAOI fics (please warn in future) Ryou: and run a spell check pretty please Sakura30: RYOU! that was not nice, it was a good story Ryou: I said pretty please ^_^0
Ricka: Again with the spell check ! Thanks for reviewing any way!
Yuki KIKI (hers4u2c@yahoo.ca) Anonymous Cute! I can just imagine where poor Marik (Malik's yami... am I right?) got frostbite! o.O As for the pairing...is it (crosses fingers as it is my fav couple)...Bakura? Possibly...maybe...perhaps...unlikely...yea -_- (hey, a girl can still dream!) Anyhow, real cute, can't wait to see the rest ^^ Ricka: YESSSS you got it right WITH OUT CHEATING !( Casts evil glare at Akkeil!) This is a Malik's yami ,yami Bakura paring! The next two chapters will be emailed to you ahead of time !!WE GOT A WINNER!!!!!! Your dream is my dream! Ill email you!! A week after this fict is updated!!!
Akkeil: Great so far! It's Marik! I knew it! Muhahahahaha...he's my favorite!! Vincent: I thought I was your favorite! Akkeil: Of course! You are my most favorite!(gives Vincent a hug) Vincent: Aw...I'm loved! Akkeil: Of course you are! Ayame: I thought I was your favorite! Shigure: No, I'm her favorite!! Eclipse: You pathetic humans have it all wrong, I'm her favorite!! Akkeil:@_@ To many bishounens! Um... your all my favorites! All 345 of you!( I like to many people)@_@ Can't wait for the next chapter! Bye! Ricka: HEYYYYY I Know You!!!! That is Cheating I told you It was Marik!! Kiba: Some people some people Thy alllllllway cheat! This makes me depressed my best friend cheats and spoils it! Kiba: You always say you're depressed ! Ricka: (HAHAAH)VERY FUNNY SETO _ .I would love to fight with Seto more but time to get to the next review!
Hi ya, Sry this took so long but I forgot you asked me to check out your stuff, I forget a lot of things -_-;. Anyway I read this one over and its a good start though there are some problems. First off you really, really need to use a spell checker and if not then get someone to read it over. Also make your chapters longer; you'll hook your readers in better. Ricka: Thank you for reviewing my fict Buuuttt! My spellchecker dos NOT work and I have like 4th Grade spelling! Kiba:I have 12th grade spelling ability Ricka: SHUT UP! Next time I will get some body to check my spelling for me. This chap was longer too! Ricka: Next review from Sakura30 Sakura30: ahahahaha! Bakura in love! ^0^ Bakura:it's NOT ME! Yami: don't try to hid it! YOU'RE GAY! Bakura:NO! Ryou: T-T Sakura30:anyway good and funny chapter we don't usually read YAOI fics (please warn in future) Ryou: and run a spell check pretty please Sakura30: RYOU! that was not nice, it was a good story Ryou: I said pretty please ^_^0
Ricka: Again with the spell check ! Thanks for reviewing any way!
Yuki KIKI (hers4u2c@yahoo.ca) Anonymous Cute! I can just imagine where poor Marik (Malik's yami... am I right?) got frostbite! o.O As for the pairing...is it (crosses fingers as it is my fav couple)...Bakura? Possibly...maybe...perhaps...unlikely...yea -_- (hey, a girl can still dream!) Anyhow, real cute, can't wait to see the rest ^^ Ricka: YESSSS you got it right WITH OUT CHEATING !( Casts evil glare at Akkeil!) This is a Malik's yami ,yami Bakura paring! The next two chapters will be emailed to you ahead of time !!WE GOT A WINNER!!!!!! Your dream is my dream! Ill email you!! A week after this fict is updated!!!
