Hullo! This is moi story. I dont know A couple things in here so tell me what they r..please

CHAPTER UNO

A GREAT LOSS

BY: ALLYKAT1991 ^_^

Inuuyasha, Sesshomaru, Miroku,Sango, & Kagome all sat in a fighting stance about 6 yards from Naraku.

" Kukkukukukukukuku," Naraku cackled ( Naraku's in his new body)," So, u have finally gained the courage to come against me."

" Shut up!" Inuyasha shouted. Naraku summoned his demons to attack. Thats what they did.

" We can deal w/ them." Sango said as she, Miroku and Kagome raninfront of Inuyasha and Sesshomaru, who ran after Naraku. Oh, but, Naraku was all too familiar with there plan and sent out Kohaku, who obayed. Sango saw him, as did Miroku.

" We can deal with them sango. Go save your brother."

" Thank you." He nodded at her and she ran off to her lil' bro.



When she got there Kohaku threw his....thing at her( Pleeeeaaasssseeeee tell moi what it is ^-^ i be happy if u do) She dodged and threw her Boomerange. He jumped over it and threw his thing at her. She jumped aside. Sango jumped up and caught Hirakatsu. Unable to keep her balance, she landed on her back. Hirakatsu in her right hand. Kohaku summond his thing back, but immidiatly threw it at Sango, taking advantage of the situation. When Sango opened her eyes , her bro's weapon was well on its way to her. she had less then a second to dodge it . She rolled to the side but, the weapon slit her back. Making a half- an - inch deep wound on her back. Unfortunantly, the way she held Hirakatsu didn't let her hand move that way. So, she snapped her bones in her wrist.

Kagome shot an arrow ai a Bird Of Paredise(SP??) desentagrading (sp?) it & all the other demon by it while Miroku fought. Miroku didn't see any of the bee's so he used his windtunnel. He sucked in many demon. He was surprised to see it sucking in more and alot faster. Right then a tremendouse pain shot threw him. He knew what was happening. He started to yell from his discovery.

" NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!" Everyone including Kohaku, Naraku ,& Many demons looked at him. It took them all a minute to relise what seriouse danger he was in. Sango was the first to react.

" Noooo! Miroku!!!!" She shouted. A huge crator was being created around Miroku. Sango ran to him, dispite the pain in her back and wrist, She dove right in.

" No! Sango!!! Go back up there!! Save yourself!!" Miroku shouted

" No way Miroku!" She shouted. tears poured fromher eyes. 'why does she cry so much for me' " I love u too much Miroku!!!! If u go so do I!" Miroku had tears brimming his eyes. Sango ran next to him & hugged him. As his windtunnel started to consume them he said ,"Ilove you too Sango." Tears were inboth there eyes. They were put to rest Knowing they loved eachother. Kagome stayed outside of the crater and watch the scene play infront of her. Tears poured from her eyes. " SANGOOO!!! MIROKUU!!!" She shouted. The wind stopped. It was silent for a moment before Naraku's laughing cut in.

" Stupid humans. Good.Two down 3 more to go." Inuyasha was know pissed, Sesshomaru wasn't affected by it & Kagome was crying a sea.

" You BASTERED!" Inuyasha shouted. Inuyasha ran with Sesshomaru right behind him. Inu raised Tetsuiga and swung it down. Naraku just jumped to the side, but Sesshomaru took out his whip and slung it at Naraku, who glared at the Lord of The Western Lands. Naraku dodged him and jumped at him. Sesshomaru dodged a punch that could of proved fatal. Naraku got up immidiatly & kicked Sesshomaru. Sending him back 20 feet. Inuyasha cut in and swung his sword at Naraku, who again dodged, but a root came out of Naraku's arm and shot threw Inuyasha's stomache. Naraku pinned him to the ground. All of a sudden, a white streek went threw Naraku's "arm". Naraku looked over to see a very attractive youkai standing about 6 feet away from them. Red power radiating around her. Her long,passed her waist to her knees,red hair flayling around her. In long,bellbottom pants, a red shirt saying 'Cute,In a crush ur skull kinda way' And a picture of pretty girl with dead youkai around her, holding a BIG gun. Clear Silver eyes, blue lips& red eye shadow. Her Silver & Red swirl^_^ colored wings spread out behind her. She held a still vibrating bow in her left hand & her right still in the postion of after she let the arrow fly. Her beauti entranced Naraku but he couldn't show it( GAH! whats with men and there 'pride'. They just make themselves look more stupid) Naraku glared at the women. She still had tears running from her eyes.

" Naraku!" She shouted." If you want a challenge! Challenge me!" She shouted. Inuyasha used his sword as a cane to help him up. Naraku smiled

" Fine. But, may I ask who you are?" Naraku couldn't identify her 'cause she tottaly changed. Same personallity but differ smell. It smelt more of roses and pinetrees ( oy, what a cool smell.! I love the smell of pinetrees!)But,Naraku still had to admitt, that was a very uniqe smell for a youkai. Most would be smelling like blood. When,I said uniqe i mean he likes it. Anyways,The women looked somewhat taken aback.

" Naraku, dont mock me. You know who I am!" She shouted. pointing her bow at him.

" If you r Kagome, tell me why u smell and look differ from her." He asked, smirking.

" What do you mean?" She looked down at herself & saw her clothes.

" Wha.." She looked at her nails..er..claws. She felt her hair. It was WAY to silky and smooth for her. She pulled it in front of her and starred at its color.

" Kyaaa, what happen to me, im a-" She was stopped in mid-sentence when she saw Silver & Red swirl beside her. She looked and saw...

" WINGS!?" She shouted,"Since WHEN did I have WINGS?!" Naraku snickred at her as Inuyasha just gapped at her beauti. Sesshomaru just hid it but he liked the way she looked. Naraku was very good at keeping how much he liked her new look inside.

" Well,its apperent to me that you r now full demon." Sesshomaru said. Kagome was blank for a second,tryin' to let all this stuff sink in.

" Really?" Then, she felt she neede something. A hunger. Fighting!" Ok, so tell me when i all-of-asuddden wanna fight."

" We shouldn't be doing this in the middle of a battle!" Naraku shouted as both his arms stretched out to grab Kagome. His eyes turning red. Kagome jumped over it and unfortunantly landed next to him. He looked at her.

" Ha! of all the friggen' places to land I land by him." She said. Alil' frustrated by the predicament. He shot his tongue out at her. She moved to the side as it passed her. She saw that the poisen in his mouth.. his er spit. She herd somthin' & turned around to see his tongue coming back at her.

" Eeeeek!!" She shouted & jumped out of the way. It crashed into the ground.

" Wow,that would a been a bummer if I it touched me." She said calmly." Now wheres Inu boy?" She said to herself. She searched around thou still in the air. She saw him & Sesshomaru fighting a mass of demons.' Maybe I should help?' She thought. Then, she felt a huge pain on her stomache. She looked up to see Naraku with his feet at her stomache. Plunging her to the ground. Right before she hit the ground Naraku gave her one last push and jumped off her ,doing a flip as she smashed into the ground. Rubble flew off the ground into the air. Inuyasha & Sessshomaru looked around to see what happen just to catch Kagome jumping out of the hole. Naraku ranto her and continued to try and hit her as she dodged.

THIS CONTINUED ALL DAY TIL IT BECAME MID-NIGHT

Naraku punched & punched & punched Kagome until she couldn't stand. Kagome fell to the ground. Her clothes were ripped & tainted wit blood. Bruises & cuts, Blood seeping out of many huge gashs. Tears flowing freely as she saw Inuyasha & Sesshomaru on the ground. Dead.

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There was a campfire in the middle of the forest.

"Yo, Jin,earth to Jin." Yuske was waving his hand infront of the cute red heads face.

" Huh?" He said.( Ughhh, Jin is soooooooooooooooooo cute.)

" Hey,you been spacin' out all day." Kuwabara asked.

" Iye, imgunnago fora walk." Jin said as he got up a walked away.

"Why?" Yuske asked.

" Idunno." He sighed and walked away.

" Was it me?" Kuwabara askedn

" Im sure." Heie answered

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" Ugh!" Kagome said as she tried to blockhis punches. He punched her arms again & again til her arms felt like they were gonna break. Naraku insteadof hitting her arms he came up below her arms and punched her stomache. She put her arms down to cover her stomache but Naraku elbowed her face and sent her back at least 3 feet making deep sked marks inthe sand. Rubble. As she lay on the ground Naraku jumped in the air and came down super fast his feet infront of him. He came down and crushed Kagomes stomache under his feet, breaking a couple rib bones. Kagome was tired of this & a red swirled around her and Naraku. She punched his feet as he came down to land on top of her she punched his face sending him out of the hole.

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Jin was in the forest smelling the clean air, When he herd a soft sobbing. His ear twiched.

" Whats that ?" He folowed the sound & found a little kitsune sobbing by a small dead kitten (KILALA!!!!) The little kitsune looked up to see a curiouse Jin.

" Hello Ther." Jin said waving his hand. The kitsune sucked himself back against atree.

" Oy, littleman,oinotheretoscarj'ya." Of course , The kitsune didn't understand him.

" MoynamesJinofhteShinobi." It took a second for the Kitsune to understand but he eventually figeured it out.

" Sh-Sh-Shippo."

" Nocetomeetya." Jin looked behind him at the badly scared kitten. His ears flopped down.

" That a frienda yas." Shippo started to bawl.

" Oy, Idientmeantomake ya cry." He said trying to comfort Shippo. Then, Jins ears perked up & a smile was put on his face at an idea he had.

" Hey,iav a Kitsune freind who moight be able to help." Shippo looked up at him. He put his hands up to be held. Jin smiled & picked up the little Kitsune. Before Jin left, he looked at the near dead kitten.

On the way he kept on hearing strange sounds.

When he got to camp Touya was the 1st to see the small helpless kitsune.

" Jin, who's that?" Touya asked.

" Oh him," Jin pointed at Shippo," He'sakitsuneifound in the forest. OI thinkitsmother died. I was hoppenthiskitsunecouldhelphim." Jin pointed at Kurama. Jin slowly put his hands down on the floor. They all saw a bundle of fur. It didn't move for a sec, but then it twiched. Everyone moved closer. For a better look. Then, his head popped out of his tail. Shippo moved his tail out of the way. ( Shippo's a lot more cautiouse because everyone he knows is dead. well,thats what he thinks.^_~) His face was covered in dirt. He had scars & bruises and some severe gashes. His clothes were tornto bits to. He no longer has a shirt, he DOES have pants, & ha was tainted in blood. Anyway, Shippo slowly put a paw out. Then, another. Soon, he was out walking on all fours( SOOO KAWAIII!!!) and slowly walking around and smelling the air for Kagome & chacking out the new people to see if they were dangerouse.' They dont smell dangerouse.' Shippo thought.

" ITS SOOOOO CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE!!!!!!" Kuwabara screamed. Shippo bolted behind the now sitting Jin.

" Good job, You bowzo!!! U scared it!" Yuske shouted at Kuwabara.

" What!? I couldn't hold it in!"

" Oi brung this one to. She will probly die but i wont to do something to save it." Jin said as he pulled out Kilala. Shipo ranup to her as Jin put her on the ground.

" Is that her mother?" Yuske asked.

" Not likly," Kurama answered," I cant smell any ca-" Kurama's speach was cut short when there was a huge crash behind them. They turned around to see Naraku landing on the grond next to a female body. They ran to attack him but was stopped when the young woman,torn & battered, flipped up. She ran up to Naraku and punched him but he put his hand up next to his face & blocked herpunch. He then, punched her in the face. She flew back. Naraku came to her and punched and kicked her.

Shippo watched. Naraku was fighting some youkai woman, but she was some what familiar to Shippo.

Naraku kicked the side of her face,sending her threw trees. Naraku landed on the ground.

" Hey, isnt he the guy were suposed to destroy?" Kuwabara asked.

" Ya, I think so." Yuske said.

" Kagome," Naraku said," I will put u out of your misery." Shippo froze as Naraku said Kagome's name. Naraku formed a sword. The YYH gang got readytorun butnot before Shippo screamed," MOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!"

Well,THAT took along time. My parents kept stopping me while i typed. Grrrrrr.... *sigh* But of course I cant talk back T.T. NONSENSE!!! I guess, wait, that took,what,ALL DAY!!!!!! We're making BROWNIES!!!!!!!!!!! HAL-LE-LU-YA!!!!!!!!!!! I have a plan for those Brownies. :}

Anyway,read & reviews.;) Chow.

log-off........................................................................................................ Yuske:She gone? Kuwabara: Ya. I think so. Kitten: Meow* Rubbsagainst Kuwabaras leg. Kuwabara: OOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! YOUR SOOOOOO CCCCCUUUUUTTTTTTEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yuske: -_-#####