Hi all. This is my first Edward fic., and first poem fic. (I've been writing poems since I was oh, I don't know 7? I've just never posted any.) I'd really appreciate it if people would let me know what they think. So if you wonderful 'gents and lasses would be so kind as to let me know what you thought, I'd be much obliged, savvy?
Well, happy reading!!!!
Revenge
I see you every day now,
At your hideout on the hill.
I want to know why you're all alone,
And I assure you that I will.
I don't think you know me,
But I know you quite well.
You're lonely and you're hurting,
That much I can tell.
Did you love another?
Did they break your heart?
Was it just not meant to be,
Or were you torn apart?
I ask the neighbors questions,
But all I get is lies.
I want to hear it strait from you,
Please come open up my eyes.
I think they're hiding something,
I can feel it in my gut.
They're guilty of an unpunished crime,
And I have to know just what.
I know they're hiding something,
The answer's getting close.
I'll right the wrongs they've done to you,
I'll avenge your ghost.
For although you are still living,
To them, you've disappeared.
They pretend it never happened,
This is worse than I first feared.
All you saw was beauty,
All they saw was you.
But looks don't count for anything,
They judged before they knew.
They ran you out of town,
For what reason, you didn't know.
All you did was cut their hair,
Trim their bushes, and bring them snow.
All I see is betrayal,
All I see is hate.
I guess it was my anger,
That brought me to your gate.
I told you I was sorry,
That they couldn't just leave you be.
I said I would stand up for you,
And then… you smiled at me.
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Okay, would anyone like me to continue???
I've still got lots to say.
So just write me nice review,
And then be on your way.
Sorry. I don't usually speak in rhyme. I was just being weird. Anyways, as I was saying, if anyone would like me to continue, and make this a bit longer, all I need is a little encouragement, and suggestions in which direction this should go. (Any of the said characters dying or being mortally wounded is not an option just incase your twisted mind was hoping for something like that.) But I think we can all agree that Edward deserves a happy ending.
So long mates!!!
Sincerely,
Pirate
