Hey everyone thanks for the reviews, I'd especially like to thank Talaco
for being very helpful with your suggestions, and sorry about the "u"
thing, I talk on aim a lot so its kind of getting me into bad habits and
sorry about the repetition of hot and all the words like it. I'll try to
improve in my writing skills and read over the chapter a few more times
before I post them. And Tomoe might be in later chapters with her brother.
And sorry I guess you can't really shout under your breath, what I meant to
say would be something like emphatically thinking it. And PLEASE review!
Your suggestions are incredibly helpful. Thanks again everyone its
encouraging to get some reviews. I hope you enjoy this chapter!
Disclaimer: I do not own Rurouni Kenshin.
Chapter two: The Rest of Kaoru's Day
Kaoru came back feeling disappointed and conquered. "Oh well Jou- chan, you'll get another chance." Misao stated optimistically as they continued down the hall to their next class. But although being scolded and told to pay attention about ten times in that class she just couldn't get her mind off of the cheerful face of Kenshin. The rest of the day went on in the same way; no matter how hard she tried she just wasn't able to focus. When she got home she was still thinking of Kenshin, and it was starting to bug her, I mean sure she liked him but it was starting to seem like she had an obsession. She decided that she'd go and practice her sword techniques to try to get her mind off him. So she got her bokken and went to a small dojo run by her parents that was just a few blocks away. She got there and started to train using the techniques of the Kamiya Kashine(sp?) style. Well, Kaoru couldn't stop thinking about Kenshin even at the dojo. Instead Kaoru was thinking over the day and got very angry when she realized that she would have been able to talk to Kenshin at least once if it weren't for that rooster head Sano. She quickly walked over to a closet, pulled out a hitting dummy (sorry I don't know what they're called) and scribbled SANO on it with an ugly little stick figure that had a prickly hair dew under the name. Kaoru then bashed the thing as hard as she could, (don't get me wrong she didn't hate him; they were actually friends maybe not close ones but friends none the less) he was ok I guess but she was just in a bad mood.
Five o'clock rang a bell in the dojo. "Well I guess an hour and a half is good enough for today" Kaoru said to herself putting away the hitting dummy and heading home to eat dinner and do her homework. As she came up to her house she saw one of her annoying neighbors, Yahiko, a boy who's life was bent on making Kaoru's day a living nightmare. "Hey Ugly" he'd often yell out of his window when he saw her walking by and then make some other kind of insult knowing that this'd extremely aggravate her but knowing she couldn't do a thing about it when he was in his house. Well when she walked by this time he blurted out "whatsup, you look mad and that just makes you uglier then ever." But before he could even laugh at his own stupid little joke Kaoru picked up a rock and chucked it at the young lad hitting him in the head and knocking him down. "If that little brat thinks he can tease me he's got another thing coming, why cant he just get a job and leave me alone? YOU HEAR ME YOU JERK, GO GET A JOB!!!" After shouting that she stomped into her house ate some food and proceeded to go do her homework. "But I do have a job." the injured boy said to himself in a daze. After finishing her homework she decided to watch some TV before going off to sleep. As she got into bed she inserted her Zwan cd into the cdplayer and began to doze off.
Sorry everyone I know that this was a really really short chapter and the next one probably will be too but after that don't worry I'll try my best to give all you guys some good long quality chapters and sorry if its getting off to a slow start I'll try to get going into the story better soon. And sorry if I missed any "u"s in the editing part. Thanks for reading. Bye!
Disclaimer: I do not own Rurouni Kenshin.
Chapter two: The Rest of Kaoru's Day
Kaoru came back feeling disappointed and conquered. "Oh well Jou- chan, you'll get another chance." Misao stated optimistically as they continued down the hall to their next class. But although being scolded and told to pay attention about ten times in that class she just couldn't get her mind off of the cheerful face of Kenshin. The rest of the day went on in the same way; no matter how hard she tried she just wasn't able to focus. When she got home she was still thinking of Kenshin, and it was starting to bug her, I mean sure she liked him but it was starting to seem like she had an obsession. She decided that she'd go and practice her sword techniques to try to get her mind off him. So she got her bokken and went to a small dojo run by her parents that was just a few blocks away. She got there and started to train using the techniques of the Kamiya Kashine(sp?) style. Well, Kaoru couldn't stop thinking about Kenshin even at the dojo. Instead Kaoru was thinking over the day and got very angry when she realized that she would have been able to talk to Kenshin at least once if it weren't for that rooster head Sano. She quickly walked over to a closet, pulled out a hitting dummy (sorry I don't know what they're called) and scribbled SANO on it with an ugly little stick figure that had a prickly hair dew under the name. Kaoru then bashed the thing as hard as she could, (don't get me wrong she didn't hate him; they were actually friends maybe not close ones but friends none the less) he was ok I guess but she was just in a bad mood.
Five o'clock rang a bell in the dojo. "Well I guess an hour and a half is good enough for today" Kaoru said to herself putting away the hitting dummy and heading home to eat dinner and do her homework. As she came up to her house she saw one of her annoying neighbors, Yahiko, a boy who's life was bent on making Kaoru's day a living nightmare. "Hey Ugly" he'd often yell out of his window when he saw her walking by and then make some other kind of insult knowing that this'd extremely aggravate her but knowing she couldn't do a thing about it when he was in his house. Well when she walked by this time he blurted out "whatsup, you look mad and that just makes you uglier then ever." But before he could even laugh at his own stupid little joke Kaoru picked up a rock and chucked it at the young lad hitting him in the head and knocking him down. "If that little brat thinks he can tease me he's got another thing coming, why cant he just get a job and leave me alone? YOU HEAR ME YOU JERK, GO GET A JOB!!!" After shouting that she stomped into her house ate some food and proceeded to go do her homework. "But I do have a job." the injured boy said to himself in a daze. After finishing her homework she decided to watch some TV before going off to sleep. As she got into bed she inserted her Zwan cd into the cdplayer and began to doze off.
Sorry everyone I know that this was a really really short chapter and the next one probably will be too but after that don't worry I'll try my best to give all you guys some good long quality chapters and sorry if its getting off to a slow start I'll try to get going into the story better soon. And sorry if I missed any "u"s in the editing part. Thanks for reading. Bye!
