(Midnight Raven again. Damn Sunny won't review who's the damn killer. Oh god damn it!)
Does this story seem to be to quick on the suspense? Or do you like it like that because it makes the novel more interesting? The evil "thing" keeps following Izumi around. Why is that? It's a bit freaky if you ask me. Anyways, here's chapter 5.
Chapter 5"Where'd you find this, Takuya?" asked Kouichi, holding onto the weapon within the plastic bag.
"In…Izumi's room." He slowly answered.
"You're suggesting she's…."
"The killer." Finished Takuya.
"Interesting." Kouichi was fixing the medal cups. The cups were lying next to the living room door.
"Izumi didn't kill Junpei and I know it!" cried Tomoki. "She wouldn't do anything like that!"
"I agree with you, Tomoki." Said Kouji.
"I wonder what she intends to do now." Growled Takuya.
"Maybe it isn't Izumi. It could be the person we least suspect." Reminded Kouichi.
All four of them stared at each other. A suspect was amount all of them, including Izumi herself. Right now none of them know whom to trust anymore.
Could it be Izumi who killed Junpei? Or the innocence of the young kid? Maybe it was Kouji, he always excludes himself, he always exclude himself from the others. Could it possibly be the sensible Kouichi, or the hotheaded jerk?
"If Izumi is the killer, I will assail her with my own two hands." Threatened Takuya.
Kouichi got mad. "What the hell are you saying? Are you threatening her?"
Takuya smirked. "Yea. That's right. I'm going to go after that bitch."
Kouichi punched him on the face and Takuya fell backwards.
What the hell is wrong with you, you bastard!?" screamed Takuya. "What kind of slave are you, defending her? She deserves to die!"
Kouichi's eyes flickered. "Watch your mouth, you son of a bitch! You might be the next to perish light Junpei!"
"Guys, stop it!" whimpered Tomoki.
The fight got even worse. They had their hands on each other's collar. Kouji ran in between them, separating the rage.
"Stop fighting, damn it! Now's not a very good time." Kouji spoke.
Takuya spat. "So what are we gonna do now? Wait for the eradicator to get us one by one? Screw this bullshit! I'm not going to wait here for my death to come upon me. I'm going to do something about this shit."
"Hope you go to hell, Takuya!" announced Kouichi.
"Yea, and you're coming with me!"
Kouji broke the fight again. "Argh! I said stop quarreling. This is all rubbish! We can settle this by compromising like people do, or fight like babies do!"
Takuya replied, "Maybe I rather fight like a baby."
"Then you need to grow up, jackass!" shouted Kouji.
"Stop fighting…" Tomoki repeated once more. "Please, just stop fighting."
Takuya's face softened. Just then Izumi entered the living room.
"Well, well." Said Takuya, "If it isn't the murderer who finally has the guts to show her face."
Izumi glared at him. "For the last damn time…. I didn't murder Junpei!"
"I didn't murder Junpei," mimicked Takuya. "What a bunch of bullshit!"
Kouichi clenched his fists. "Hey, you leave her alone."
"Will, it's Kouichi to the rescue isn't it?" Takuya sneered. "Why don't you slit my throat Izumi? You're good at that, aren't you?"
Izumi was flustered and irritated. She slapped him hard across the face.
"Mother—" He screamed. He raised his palm and Izumi tightly squeezed her eyes. She knew Takuya was going to hit her back. She waited for the stinging pain spread throughout her face. She waited. Nothing happened. Slowly she opened her eyes. Kouji grabbed tightly on his wrist and stopped Takuya from smacking her.
She ran behind Kouji, hiding herself from Kouji.
Takuya sneered. "What's with you twins trying to rescue her?"
Kouji released Takuya and walked away. Izumi followed him and murmured, "Thanks again, Kouji."
He didn't' answer, but was looking down at the floor. All of a sudden the lights turned off.
Tomoki screamed, "Turn the lights back on!"
"Who turned the lights off?" someone asked. "Let's search for the damn switch!"
Someone else said, "Whoever did that isn't funny at all unless they want me to beat the crap out of them!"
Izumi's heart was pounding real hard. She spread her hands out searching for a switch. Suddenly someone whispered past her ear, "Come to me…. To me…."
She walked forth banged against something. She felt around and realized it was the door. She would open the door and let some light in. She heard a "clicking" sound.
As she turned open the knob, someone screamed. As if some kind of practical joke, the lights were turned on and blood was stained on the floor.
Blood! Blood! And more blood! Yes, yes, I'm freaky and weird.
Masked Dude: ~grabs a knife~ Behold! I am the murder! ~stabs Takuya~
Takuya: Oh, real original. Nice plastic, though.
Junpei: I'm dead on chapter 2! Why so short damn it! I want the fans to love me more!
Masked Dude: that's it! I'm quitting my career!
