RikkuFF10- o man….is my story that bad? ~ sniffles~ why isn't ppl reviewing…why???
Cloud- hey, don't turn into a sora!!
RikkuFF10- (blinking up and drying tears) huh? Why? Is that bad or sumthing?
Cloud- no… sigh, whatever. No offense, but you made sora in that last chapter weird.
RikkuFF10- sorry sora! Was it that weird? Ok, I promise to make this story cool from now! Please review… I feel great everytime I have one- you can swear at the story and everything and everyone- just please please please review!!
Cloud- You sound way too desperate. Here, this is how you do it-
' YO guys!! Review and you'll get a prezzie!!'
RikkuFF10- snorts- Cloud, you're the one who sounds desperate! And I'm not going around bribing everyone! Ok, I'm annoying ppl, I can just tell. Here's the next chapter!
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Sora woke up in a whirl of colours. Arghh! Where was he? There were some spiralling colours all around him…so many spirals. He tried shutting his eyes, but they seemed to exist in his eyelids as well…
"Get AWAY!!' His mind was dazed, and he was going to faint under all these swirls when suddenly, everything became black.
'Huh?' Sora muttered, confused. 'Where am I?'
' You are in eternity my boy! MWAHAHAHAAH!! You stupid boy, an easy target! But you're the one who holds the key… within your very own UNKNOWING SOUL!'
'WHAT!? WHAT ARE YOU TALKINGABOUT? COME OUT AND SPEAK TO ME LIKE A MAN, WHY DON'T YOU?' Sora whirled around, glaring at the blackness that twirled annoyingly around him, as if it was daring him to strike out…but at what?
'Confused are you little one? But you would be…such a pity that you're such an innocent being, or I could've used you! But such a weakling…'
'SHUT UP!' yelled Sora, his face red and his heart pounding like mad.
'YOU'RE THE WEAKLING! You're the one who won't come out to meet me like a man! YOU '
" I am tired of this game. Give me the key…or I will force it out of you…and that won't be pretty…trust me!'
'Why should I trust YOU? You've given me every reason to despise you. You're crazy if you want me to give you something without a fight! Bring it on!! Just try and force it out of me!'
' As you wish…but you'll regret it! Mwahahahah…'
Suddenly, torrents of blackness lurched themselves at Sora, tripping him over and stabbing themselves at his body.
'OWWW!! What is this…WHAT'
The black torrents of black suddenly changed to black spears with points as sharp as knives, and again hurled themselves at Sora. On target, one struck right into his heart…
'NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO…ARHHHHHHHHHHH'
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The scream woke Riku from his slumber, and he sat up, gasping for breath.
'What the? What was that? And…I saw Sora! And that blackness? Hang on…'
A whisper of words drifted along in his mind again…
' But Sora is the one you should be scared for…leaving him there, what did you expect your dear little friend to do?'
Riku's heart jumped into his mouth as he realised what Sora had done. 'NO! That can't happen!!'
'But it already has…MWAHAHAHAHAH!!'
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RikkuFF10- ok! So…what do you think? Is it all right?
Cloud- yeah, that's all right..but don't ask me! Ask your reviewers!!
RikkuFF10- ok! Please review and tell me if this is al right..if it sux, then I quit! I swear, this IS only my first fanfic! Please R&R!!
