Scenes cut from TSR and TSR2
Written by: Jesscheaux
Disclaimer: I did not invent, nor do I own, DB/Z/GT or any of the characters except for the ones
I created (Jesscheaux, Reyanne, etc).
Author's Notes: Welcome to another of the TSR special extras. My original copies of TSR and TSR2:TNS
were written in long hand in a notebook and/or binder. Never in a million years when I started writing
my first DBZ fic did I think that I'd ever put it on the web. Guess I was wrong. My story was originally
on a Nail shrine site and then I put it on Dragonworldz.net (the webmistress, Nekochan, inspired me and
was the one that made me want to put my story on the net) and then I discovered fanfiction.net which is
the perfect idea when you think about it. You put up your stories for everyone to read and they in turn
do the same thing. There is instant feedback and if people review your stories, you'll go review theirs.
Ok, so on to the point. When I typed out TSR and TSR2 on my computer, I had to take out alot of errors and
stuff that sounded stupid. I had to cut a few scenes also, but here's where I'm going to share them with
you. Most of them are from TSR. I'll also put what part of the story it occurs at. I hope you ENJOI!!!
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The opening scene:
"You're cheatin' heart........" the old radio drawled into the clear night air. In the background, the
Clickety-click of fingers typing on the computer keyboard could be heard.
Bulma looked up: "Vegeta? What ARE you listening to?"
"Oh nothing," he replied, "Just a little 'old school' country'."
(A/N BWAHAHAHAHA As IF Vegeta would listen to country music, especially Hank Williams! Good thing I cut that
scene)
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When I did the original draft of my fic, Future Trunks was supposed to be in it. Consequently, the original
title I picked for it was "Two SSJs and a Genius" it was supposed to be a V/B/T family fic because I was
nuts about Trunks at the time...oy vay... Anyway, this was the original part where Vegeta checks on Trunks:
".....why don't you see what Trunks is up to?" Bulma suggested and then that was all she said for at least a
half an hour....you know Bulma! She turned backt o her computer and typed away as if she had never stopped.
Vegeta searched for his son but he wasn't inside. (Typical Trunks,) he thought (Always outside training away
to please me. If only he knew howproud I am of him already, afterall he has saved the world a couple of times)
The old saying came to his mind that made him swell with even more pride 'Like father, like son'.
He stepped out into the cool night air to find Trunks just standing there staring at the star-filled sky.
Vegeta came and stood behind his son. Trunks turned his head halfway and smiled, "Father, isn't it a beautiful
night?"
Vegeta didn't reply, he just just kept silently searching the sky in hopes of an answer.
Trunks' smile vanished as he saw that look in Vegeta's eyes. (He's thinking about battles) It had been many years
since any kind of evil threatened teh earth and Vegeta's Saiyan blood thirsted for adventure. But tonight, there was
something new in his eyes. Trunks could feel the tensionrising as his father continued to stare into space.
"Is something wrong?" Trunks asked.
"Hmmmm?" Vegeat started from his reverie and replied: "I sense something, Trunks. Something as never was before felt"
(A/N talk about your screwed up wording)
"What is it?"
"It isn't clear to me yet, but I think something catastrophic will soon occur."
"Is is one of our old enemies?"
Vegeta finally looked at Trunks, "No my son, it is a power far greater." (A/N: Aagh! I can't believe it, Vegeta is
almost being nice right there! and he called Trunks his son instead of his brat!)
As Vegeta drifted off again, he wondered why he hadn't felt this before. Perhaps he should ask Kakarott if he also
sensed it. But maybe it was just wishful thinking in hopes of an adventure; something to be conquered.
(Only time will tell.) thought Vegeta.
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Dude, I do not know what possessed me to put this next scene in my first draft! It's iNsAnE!!!! This is right after
Jesscheaux and Piccolo reach the lookout and are bored. The day right before they start their 'intense training'
(et al, right after J's sparring match with Vegeta):
"......Sounds good, hmmmm. Hey wait here a second, Piccolo!" Jesscheaux ranto her roomon the lookout for a minute
and returned witha portable CD player and a mound of CDs and Tapes. She placed a disk in the machine and waited a
few moments. A DCTalk song (A/N My favorite band is DCTalk they are a contemporary Christian band, alot of the
scenes I cut-and some I even kept-have references to DCTalk) blared over the speakers and she started dancing and
singing.
Piccolo stared at her with his eyes wide open. "What ARE you doing?!" he asked incredulously.
"What does it look like, moron?" Jesscheaux retorted.
"Uhhh, some kind of weird exercise?"
"NO! Well, nevermind. This is my favorite music group DCTalk (A/N: see? told ya!) She flipped(turned) it off and s
started rummaging through the stack of CDs "Anything you want to hear? I've got *NSYNC, Backstreet Boys, Brad Paisley,
Alan Jackson, Beethoven, Supertones, Carman...... Well?" she asked expectantly.
Piccolo handed her a cassette of his own and said: "Here, put this on, it's MY favorite."
She placed the cassette in the player and pressed play (A/N: ooooh yeah, real tough, go figure that one out) Soft music
flated through the air.
"Hmmm...you're quite a classy guy!"
"It's my meditation music." he answered.
She let the music play and walked over to Piccolo who ws sitting crosslegged on the floor....
(A/N: I TOLD YOU IT WAS INSANE! Oy vey..... oh well I hope yougot a kick out of it)
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A scene where Reyanne is suppossed to mispronounce Yamcha's name to Yamucha and begin calling him that right after
R and Y's sparring match:
"Oh no!" cried Reyanne, "Are you allright, Yamucha?" she said, acidentally mispronouncing his name.
"Yeah," he said and stood up. "What did you call me?"
"I think I said 'Yamucha'sorry, Yamcha!"
"Yamucha, Yamucha...." He said, rolling the name over his tongue. "I like it! You can call me that if you want."
"Really? I rather like it too."
(A/N: So you see that was foolish of me to want to make her MISPRONOUNCE his name so that it would be his ORIGINAL
name! Silly me! I couldn't have that could I, but I really like the name Yamucha although I use Yamcha. Yep I'm a
FUNi dubber!)
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Right after they tell Yamcha and Tien about Newton and spar and now they're heading to meet up with the other's
at Capsule Corp:
"Wait!" cried Reyanne, "There's a strange noise coming from those bushes!" She locked her ki to the bushes and spread
her hands, causing the greenery to separate. There was nothing there. "Whew! I thought Newton may have come early!"
sighed Reyanne.
"Well, let's get going now." said and impatient Krillin.
(A/N: Well, you can see why I cut that scene! HAHAHA! It was totally pointless! Originally, I was going to have
Reyanne find a little kitty cat, but hey! this is DBZ, not Barney, we don't need more cats because we already
had Puar.)
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Another one of my "DCTalk moments" that really didn't need to be in there. It's right before Piccolo and Jesscheaux
enter the Hyperbolic Time Chamber:
"Ya'll will be spending a year in here so get everything you need now." Dende urged.
Jesscheaux rushed away and returned moments later with her CD player and CDs and tapes. "I couldn't live a year
without DCTalk." she explained.
(A/N: Yes, I really do love DCTalk! I mean they rock! But that didn't need to be in there so I cut it.)
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A scene from the hyperbolic time chamber where Jesscheaux and Piccolo are talking. A needless Spectronian trait is
introduced and kinda dumb, so I cut it:
.....Piccolo told her.
She looked over at him through her rainbow vision eyes, the world and him appearing glazed over in a rainbow. He was
so kind to her...well, most of the time.
(A/N: Haha, well I got that idea when I was wearing this pair of sunglasses and when I turned a certain way, I would
see a rainbow over everything and I thought Spectronians should have this ability.)
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OMG, do you guys know what the 'cup game' is? Hehehehe, Well, in this scene--right before the Z warriors go off to
find Newton--a few of the Z warriors are playing it. You'll see, if you recognize it, good. If not, Oh well:
The Z fighters walked towards the edge of the lookout, passing Dende and Gohan who, still being children, were
playing the cup game. A happy rhythm sounded as they tapped, clapped, and passed the paper cups to each other.
Goku walked over and his shadow fell over Gohan. The game stopped abruptly. "Hiya, son." Goku said softly,
"Whatcha playin'?"
"The cup game, dad." he answered and then demonstrated again.
Goku's eyes lit up, "Coool!!! I wanna play! Where'd you get this from anyway?" He asked as he joined in.
"Jesscheaux taught us!"
Jesscheaux looked over at the three and smiled then came to join them with her own cup. This went on for a few
minutes with the laughter and speed of the rhythm steadily increasing, when Vegeta shouted:
"ENOUGH! Kakarott! I can't take anymore of this foolishness!"
The four dropped their cups and stood. "I'm sorry." Gohan said and looked down.
"That's ok, son." Goku reassurred him, "It's ok to have fun, but now we have to go."
"Right." Gohan answered and the joined the others.
"Bye Gohan!" called out Dende as he waved to his friend, "Be careful!"
"I will." Gohan repiled and saluted his Namekian friend.
(A/N: So you see the pointlessness? But yes it was kinda funny, just not necessary.)
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Ah, here we have Yamcha and Reyanne's wedding plans before I had them decide to elope. This occurs right after the battle
with Newton and they all go back to the lookout to greet their families:
And so began preparations for their (Reyanne and Yamcha's) wedding. They planned it for about in a month (A/N: another
screwed up wording but I wanted to stick with the original draft) Jesscheaux was to be the maid of honor; Tien, the
best man.
Goku, Krillin, and Vegeta would be ushers and Gohan was going to be the ringbearer. Presiding, over the service
would be Dende. (Yes, he is a legally ordained minister now. Hello people! The internet!)
Jesscheaux tried to get excited but she was so lonely without Piccolo. Reyanne tried everything she could think of to
make her feel better. They even had a 'ladies day out' with Bulma, Chi-chi, 18 and the two sisters. No use, Jesscheaux
would just go back and sit on the edge of the lookout searching......
(A/N: Since I twisted the plot and had them elope, I figured that planning the wedding was pointless! So, that's what
would've happened...)
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Another DCTalk reference and I even sing a huge verse. It's funny actually! The first time they try to wish back Piccolo:
Jesscheaux was bouncing off the walls, literally, and she had her DCTalk "Nu Thang" playing as she sang along:
"Word up people, we ain't about sin no more! As a matter of fact, we called boycotting sin right off the face of this
earth! Yo Kmax! You down with that? 'I'm steppin to that' Yo T! You got my back on this boycotting sin thang?
'You know it, home' Word up, sin you are HISTORY!"
(A/N: hehehe, that is a rappish type part off of the song called 'No more'. I pictured Jesscheaux hanging from the
ceiling like Spiderman and yelling it out at the top of her lungs. They're not sung, they're said and Kmax and T's
comments are in the ''s those would be the 2 other members of the group)
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This happens right after Isacc makes his wish from the dragon and blasts Jesscheaux into a crater. Jesscheaux does
a Special Beam Cannon(Makankosoppo):
From out of the crater her voice cried: "Not so fast, Isacc!" She stood up shakily and prepared to blast him.
"SPECIAL BEAM CANNON!!!" She hurled the tunnel at him but he quickly dodged.
(A/N: I just didn't want Jesscheaux to use that attack because it's Piccolo's signature one.)
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The original making of Pulsar as THE legendary Spectronian. I had him be regular and go legendary a LONG time ago,
as you'll see. I reworked the idea and did it more indepth and had Pulsar go Legendary on the battlefield; and
it turned out much better. Here's the first draft of Isacc and Pulsar's battle:
"....But you won't live to regret it!" (Isacc)
"That's what you think!" he (Pulsar) retorted and removed his large, capelike coat to reveal what he'd never told anyone:
a pair of blue wings!
Isacc's body turned white as a sheet as he stared on in wonder, "W-w-w-w-what??? You're Legendary?!" He was at the point
of fainting when Pulsar began to tell him of his transformation:
"That's right, Isacc, I am the legendary Spectronian; I've been one for quite some time now, but I've never told anyone.
The secret of my past, never told, I can now reveal. You and Newton aren't members of the royal family, my parents were.
Your parents had overthrown the kingdom so they could turn our people to the darkside. You and your brother are only
peasants thrown into power by overwhelming evil! I was the lone survivor of the royal family, taken in by Jesscheaux
and her clan who knew of what happened."
"This isn't possible! You're a liar, Pulsar!" Isacc screamed in rage.
"No, it's true!" a female voice said from behind him.
Isacc turned rapidly to see Reyanne standing there with Yamcha in the background (A/N: Poor Yamcha, always in the background)
"Reyanne?!" he asked incredulously, "You survived? I'm so glad!" (A/N: hahaha, he's glad! look like Isacc has a crush on
Reyanne)
"Hush, what Pulsar says is true, you are not a prince of our planet, just a low-down thief! He is our true king!"
"All this time, I've been living a lie, my whole life is a myth!" Isacc cried. (A/N: Looks like he's come to terms with
it but seconds later he accuses Pulsar of lying.)
"I am sorry, my friend." Pulsar said solemnly, "But it is true. My wings are blue, and only royal family members are
known to have them (A/N: see how dumb? hahaha! "I have blue wings nyah nyah :P) I went legendary a few years a few
years back before I went to the darkside. I had been training with my master Yahoshi for quite sometime; he told me
of the importance of a pure heart. I had been told I had one since I was a child, back when my parents were still
in power. That day while training I was able to concentrate my energy and was able to achieve legendary status.
For all these years I've been holding back, waiting for the time when I would need them. The time has come."
(A/N: Man, I love that last line! I have alot of lines that my character say that I love. And if you're a alternative
music fan you'll find alot of song phrases in the story (and Inside the Chamber) if you look closely)
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Hehehe, I really liked this next scene but all it was really doing was taking up space and had nothing to do with
any of the main characters, just some of the inhabitants of New Namek. Right before Pulsar does his speech in the field:
A group of Spectronian girls were talking as a group of young nameks passed by.
"Ooh, he's cute!" one squealed.
"Which one? They all look the same!" another girl answered.
"I'm going to talk to him!" the first girl announced.
"Go for it!" the others said.
She walked up to him, batted her eyes and said: "Hi! I'm Aimee, what's your name?"
He smiled a her tentatively, not sure what to think, and answered: "I'm Tigre, nice to meet you."
"You're really cute!" Aimee exclaimed.
A puzzled look crossed his face, and it hit him: She liked him! He began to blush and she said: "Do you wanna hang
out sometime?"
He looked up and stammered: "S-s-sure, I'd love to!"
"Great! I'll see you later then!" she exclaimed, then kissed him on the cheek and ran back to all her friends where
they giggled profusely.
His namek buddies all clapped him on the back. "She likes you, man!" one said.
Tigre touched his cheek where she kissed him and sighed. A heart appeared over his head; he had fallen in love!
This was a very new thing to the Nameks, but after awhile, many Spectronian girls began dating and marrying into
the Namek race.
(A/N: Another reason I took this out was because I wanted Jesscheaux and Piccolo to be the first 'official'
Spectronian/Namek couple. And it might screw up my sequel in which the first Namektronian is born--half Namek, half
Spectronian--so it's a good thing I took this out and this is why I'm doing this special extra thing anyway, so
you can see it!)
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Okey doke, that's the end for the TSR cut scenes now we're onto TSR Part 2 scenes that were cut. There won't be as
many because I stopped writing TSR2 longhand at the middle of chapter 13. This part was right in the beginning, after
the Gohan and Goten interlude to begin with. I originally wanted this story to lead up to the Tenkaichi Boudakai, but
when I came up with my villain, it didn't fit, so I may end up putting the tournament in "Twisted Fates" the third
installment to my trilogy. On with the show:
At this time, the warriors were all training for the upcoming Tenkaichi Boudakai. It was finally back on (after much
pleading from Goku) (A/N: I don't know what possessed me to think that it was cancelled for a long time....maybe it
was, I really don't know) and they all looked forward to it, even though they might have to fight each other.
Since some of them were training partners, this would be too easy, because they knew each other so well....
(A/N: Did that make any sense? They spar with each other all the time? Why would they care if they have to do
it again? The next part gets worse)
Ok, the judges wouldn't let them fight each other because of this situation. (A/N: What the heck? haha, I'm so silly!
Now onto a cute Brief's family vignette that happens right after this part:)
"Darn it!" growled Vegeta, "That was my big chance to beat up Kakarott!"
"Oh Vegeta," Bulma said, "You can beat him up on your own time."
They heard a noise coming from the kitchen, there was a crash and as they rushed in, the sight that greeted them was
that of a giant mound of pots and pans all over the floor. From underneath a shout was heard: "AAAAAAAHHHHH!"
The pots and pans flew in all directions, nearly missing Vegeta and Bulma.
Little Trunks stood there, his aura glowing, arms outstretched. He was extremely proud of his feat and folded his arms
(much like his father) and smiled.
"That's my boy!" Vegeta exclaimed.
"VEGETA!" Bulma cried as she smacked his arm, "Don't encourage him! Now listen here, Trunks. You're in big trouble!"
Trunks gulped and flew past his parents as fast as possible. Vegeta doubled over in laughter as Bulma chased after
her son.
(A/N: Bwahaha! Awwww that was cute! But looking back, Vegeta would never say: "That's my boy" and 3 year old Trunks
can't go SSJ! heh, actually I have Trunks and Veggie do a high-five later on, but it seemed appropriate at the time.)
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*laughs* Well, it looks like that was the only scene omitted from TSR2 HA HA HA!
Coming next: Spectronian weddings! A story that takes place after TSR in which Jesscheaux and Reyannd demand
proper Spectronian weddings from their spouses. Chi-chi and Bulma become intrigued with Spectronian culture
and demand that Goku and Vegeta do a Spectronian wedding with them also. Things get interesting when Vegeta
and Goku decide to cause trouble. Until next time, JA NE!
Written by: Jesscheaux
Disclaimer: I did not invent, nor do I own, DB/Z/GT or any of the characters except for the ones
I created (Jesscheaux, Reyanne, etc).
Author's Notes: Welcome to another of the TSR special extras. My original copies of TSR and TSR2:TNS
were written in long hand in a notebook and/or binder. Never in a million years when I started writing
my first DBZ fic did I think that I'd ever put it on the web. Guess I was wrong. My story was originally
on a Nail shrine site and then I put it on Dragonworldz.net (the webmistress, Nekochan, inspired me and
was the one that made me want to put my story on the net) and then I discovered fanfiction.net which is
the perfect idea when you think about it. You put up your stories for everyone to read and they in turn
do the same thing. There is instant feedback and if people review your stories, you'll go review theirs.
Ok, so on to the point. When I typed out TSR and TSR2 on my computer, I had to take out alot of errors and
stuff that sounded stupid. I had to cut a few scenes also, but here's where I'm going to share them with
you. Most of them are from TSR. I'll also put what part of the story it occurs at. I hope you ENJOI!!!
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The opening scene:
"You're cheatin' heart........" the old radio drawled into the clear night air. In the background, the
Clickety-click of fingers typing on the computer keyboard could be heard.
Bulma looked up: "Vegeta? What ARE you listening to?"
"Oh nothing," he replied, "Just a little 'old school' country'."
(A/N BWAHAHAHAHA As IF Vegeta would listen to country music, especially Hank Williams! Good thing I cut that
scene)
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When I did the original draft of my fic, Future Trunks was supposed to be in it. Consequently, the original
title I picked for it was "Two SSJs and a Genius" it was supposed to be a V/B/T family fic because I was
nuts about Trunks at the time...oy vay... Anyway, this was the original part where Vegeta checks on Trunks:
".....why don't you see what Trunks is up to?" Bulma suggested and then that was all she said for at least a
half an hour....you know Bulma! She turned backt o her computer and typed away as if she had never stopped.
Vegeta searched for his son but he wasn't inside. (Typical Trunks,) he thought (Always outside training away
to please me. If only he knew howproud I am of him already, afterall he has saved the world a couple of times)
The old saying came to his mind that made him swell with even more pride 'Like father, like son'.
He stepped out into the cool night air to find Trunks just standing there staring at the star-filled sky.
Vegeta came and stood behind his son. Trunks turned his head halfway and smiled, "Father, isn't it a beautiful
night?"
Vegeta didn't reply, he just just kept silently searching the sky in hopes of an answer.
Trunks' smile vanished as he saw that look in Vegeta's eyes. (He's thinking about battles) It had been many years
since any kind of evil threatened teh earth and Vegeta's Saiyan blood thirsted for adventure. But tonight, there was
something new in his eyes. Trunks could feel the tensionrising as his father continued to stare into space.
"Is something wrong?" Trunks asked.
"Hmmmm?" Vegeat started from his reverie and replied: "I sense something, Trunks. Something as never was before felt"
(A/N talk about your screwed up wording)
"What is it?"
"It isn't clear to me yet, but I think something catastrophic will soon occur."
"Is is one of our old enemies?"
Vegeta finally looked at Trunks, "No my son, it is a power far greater." (A/N: Aagh! I can't believe it, Vegeta is
almost being nice right there! and he called Trunks his son instead of his brat!)
As Vegeta drifted off again, he wondered why he hadn't felt this before. Perhaps he should ask Kakarott if he also
sensed it. But maybe it was just wishful thinking in hopes of an adventure; something to be conquered.
(Only time will tell.) thought Vegeta.
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Dude, I do not know what possessed me to put this next scene in my first draft! It's iNsAnE!!!! This is right after
Jesscheaux and Piccolo reach the lookout and are bored. The day right before they start their 'intense training'
(et al, right after J's sparring match with Vegeta):
"......Sounds good, hmmmm. Hey wait here a second, Piccolo!" Jesscheaux ranto her roomon the lookout for a minute
and returned witha portable CD player and a mound of CDs and Tapes. She placed a disk in the machine and waited a
few moments. A DCTalk song (A/N My favorite band is DCTalk they are a contemporary Christian band, alot of the
scenes I cut-and some I even kept-have references to DCTalk) blared over the speakers and she started dancing and
singing.
Piccolo stared at her with his eyes wide open. "What ARE you doing?!" he asked incredulously.
"What does it look like, moron?" Jesscheaux retorted.
"Uhhh, some kind of weird exercise?"
"NO! Well, nevermind. This is my favorite music group DCTalk (A/N: see? told ya!) She flipped(turned) it off and s
started rummaging through the stack of CDs "Anything you want to hear? I've got *NSYNC, Backstreet Boys, Brad Paisley,
Alan Jackson, Beethoven, Supertones, Carman...... Well?" she asked expectantly.
Piccolo handed her a cassette of his own and said: "Here, put this on, it's MY favorite."
She placed the cassette in the player and pressed play (A/N: ooooh yeah, real tough, go figure that one out) Soft music
flated through the air.
"Hmmm...you're quite a classy guy!"
"It's my meditation music." he answered.
She let the music play and walked over to Piccolo who ws sitting crosslegged on the floor....
(A/N: I TOLD YOU IT WAS INSANE! Oy vey..... oh well I hope yougot a kick out of it)
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A scene where Reyanne is suppossed to mispronounce Yamcha's name to Yamucha and begin calling him that right after
R and Y's sparring match:
"Oh no!" cried Reyanne, "Are you allright, Yamucha?" she said, acidentally mispronouncing his name.
"Yeah," he said and stood up. "What did you call me?"
"I think I said 'Yamucha'sorry, Yamcha!"
"Yamucha, Yamucha...." He said, rolling the name over his tongue. "I like it! You can call me that if you want."
"Really? I rather like it too."
(A/N: So you see that was foolish of me to want to make her MISPRONOUNCE his name so that it would be his ORIGINAL
name! Silly me! I couldn't have that could I, but I really like the name Yamucha although I use Yamcha. Yep I'm a
FUNi dubber!)
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Right after they tell Yamcha and Tien about Newton and spar and now they're heading to meet up with the other's
at Capsule Corp:
"Wait!" cried Reyanne, "There's a strange noise coming from those bushes!" She locked her ki to the bushes and spread
her hands, causing the greenery to separate. There was nothing there. "Whew! I thought Newton may have come early!"
sighed Reyanne.
"Well, let's get going now." said and impatient Krillin.
(A/N: Well, you can see why I cut that scene! HAHAHA! It was totally pointless! Originally, I was going to have
Reyanne find a little kitty cat, but hey! this is DBZ, not Barney, we don't need more cats because we already
had Puar.)
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Another one of my "DCTalk moments" that really didn't need to be in there. It's right before Piccolo and Jesscheaux
enter the Hyperbolic Time Chamber:
"Ya'll will be spending a year in here so get everything you need now." Dende urged.
Jesscheaux rushed away and returned moments later with her CD player and CDs and tapes. "I couldn't live a year
without DCTalk." she explained.
(A/N: Yes, I really do love DCTalk! I mean they rock! But that didn't need to be in there so I cut it.)
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A scene from the hyperbolic time chamber where Jesscheaux and Piccolo are talking. A needless Spectronian trait is
introduced and kinda dumb, so I cut it:
.....Piccolo told her.
She looked over at him through her rainbow vision eyes, the world and him appearing glazed over in a rainbow. He was
so kind to her...well, most of the time.
(A/N: Haha, well I got that idea when I was wearing this pair of sunglasses and when I turned a certain way, I would
see a rainbow over everything and I thought Spectronians should have this ability.)
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OMG, do you guys know what the 'cup game' is? Hehehehe, Well, in this scene--right before the Z warriors go off to
find Newton--a few of the Z warriors are playing it. You'll see, if you recognize it, good. If not, Oh well:
The Z fighters walked towards the edge of the lookout, passing Dende and Gohan who, still being children, were
playing the cup game. A happy rhythm sounded as they tapped, clapped, and passed the paper cups to each other.
Goku walked over and his shadow fell over Gohan. The game stopped abruptly. "Hiya, son." Goku said softly,
"Whatcha playin'?"
"The cup game, dad." he answered and then demonstrated again.
Goku's eyes lit up, "Coool!!! I wanna play! Where'd you get this from anyway?" He asked as he joined in.
"Jesscheaux taught us!"
Jesscheaux looked over at the three and smiled then came to join them with her own cup. This went on for a few
minutes with the laughter and speed of the rhythm steadily increasing, when Vegeta shouted:
"ENOUGH! Kakarott! I can't take anymore of this foolishness!"
The four dropped their cups and stood. "I'm sorry." Gohan said and looked down.
"That's ok, son." Goku reassurred him, "It's ok to have fun, but now we have to go."
"Right." Gohan answered and the joined the others.
"Bye Gohan!" called out Dende as he waved to his friend, "Be careful!"
"I will." Gohan repiled and saluted his Namekian friend.
(A/N: So you see the pointlessness? But yes it was kinda funny, just not necessary.)
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Ah, here we have Yamcha and Reyanne's wedding plans before I had them decide to elope. This occurs right after the battle
with Newton and they all go back to the lookout to greet their families:
And so began preparations for their (Reyanne and Yamcha's) wedding. They planned it for about in a month (A/N: another
screwed up wording but I wanted to stick with the original draft) Jesscheaux was to be the maid of honor; Tien, the
best man.
Goku, Krillin, and Vegeta would be ushers and Gohan was going to be the ringbearer. Presiding, over the service
would be Dende. (Yes, he is a legally ordained minister now. Hello people! The internet!)
Jesscheaux tried to get excited but she was so lonely without Piccolo. Reyanne tried everything she could think of to
make her feel better. They even had a 'ladies day out' with Bulma, Chi-chi, 18 and the two sisters. No use, Jesscheaux
would just go back and sit on the edge of the lookout searching......
(A/N: Since I twisted the plot and had them elope, I figured that planning the wedding was pointless! So, that's what
would've happened...)
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Another DCTalk reference and I even sing a huge verse. It's funny actually! The first time they try to wish back Piccolo:
Jesscheaux was bouncing off the walls, literally, and she had her DCTalk "Nu Thang" playing as she sang along:
"Word up people, we ain't about sin no more! As a matter of fact, we called boycotting sin right off the face of this
earth! Yo Kmax! You down with that? 'I'm steppin to that' Yo T! You got my back on this boycotting sin thang?
'You know it, home' Word up, sin you are HISTORY!"
(A/N: hehehe, that is a rappish type part off of the song called 'No more'. I pictured Jesscheaux hanging from the
ceiling like Spiderman and yelling it out at the top of her lungs. They're not sung, they're said and Kmax and T's
comments are in the ''s those would be the 2 other members of the group)
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This happens right after Isacc makes his wish from the dragon and blasts Jesscheaux into a crater. Jesscheaux does
a Special Beam Cannon(Makankosoppo):
From out of the crater her voice cried: "Not so fast, Isacc!" She stood up shakily and prepared to blast him.
"SPECIAL BEAM CANNON!!!" She hurled the tunnel at him but he quickly dodged.
(A/N: I just didn't want Jesscheaux to use that attack because it's Piccolo's signature one.)
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The original making of Pulsar as THE legendary Spectronian. I had him be regular and go legendary a LONG time ago,
as you'll see. I reworked the idea and did it more indepth and had Pulsar go Legendary on the battlefield; and
it turned out much better. Here's the first draft of Isacc and Pulsar's battle:
"....But you won't live to regret it!" (Isacc)
"That's what you think!" he (Pulsar) retorted and removed his large, capelike coat to reveal what he'd never told anyone:
a pair of blue wings!
Isacc's body turned white as a sheet as he stared on in wonder, "W-w-w-w-what??? You're Legendary?!" He was at the point
of fainting when Pulsar began to tell him of his transformation:
"That's right, Isacc, I am the legendary Spectronian; I've been one for quite some time now, but I've never told anyone.
The secret of my past, never told, I can now reveal. You and Newton aren't members of the royal family, my parents were.
Your parents had overthrown the kingdom so they could turn our people to the darkside. You and your brother are only
peasants thrown into power by overwhelming evil! I was the lone survivor of the royal family, taken in by Jesscheaux
and her clan who knew of what happened."
"This isn't possible! You're a liar, Pulsar!" Isacc screamed in rage.
"No, it's true!" a female voice said from behind him.
Isacc turned rapidly to see Reyanne standing there with Yamcha in the background (A/N: Poor Yamcha, always in the background)
"Reyanne?!" he asked incredulously, "You survived? I'm so glad!" (A/N: hahaha, he's glad! look like Isacc has a crush on
Reyanne)
"Hush, what Pulsar says is true, you are not a prince of our planet, just a low-down thief! He is our true king!"
"All this time, I've been living a lie, my whole life is a myth!" Isacc cried. (A/N: Looks like he's come to terms with
it but seconds later he accuses Pulsar of lying.)
"I am sorry, my friend." Pulsar said solemnly, "But it is true. My wings are blue, and only royal family members are
known to have them (A/N: see how dumb? hahaha! "I have blue wings nyah nyah :P) I went legendary a few years a few
years back before I went to the darkside. I had been training with my master Yahoshi for quite sometime; he told me
of the importance of a pure heart. I had been told I had one since I was a child, back when my parents were still
in power. That day while training I was able to concentrate my energy and was able to achieve legendary status.
For all these years I've been holding back, waiting for the time when I would need them. The time has come."
(A/N: Man, I love that last line! I have alot of lines that my character say that I love. And if you're a alternative
music fan you'll find alot of song phrases in the story (and Inside the Chamber) if you look closely)
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Hehehe, I really liked this next scene but all it was really doing was taking up space and had nothing to do with
any of the main characters, just some of the inhabitants of New Namek. Right before Pulsar does his speech in the field:
A group of Spectronian girls were talking as a group of young nameks passed by.
"Ooh, he's cute!" one squealed.
"Which one? They all look the same!" another girl answered.
"I'm going to talk to him!" the first girl announced.
"Go for it!" the others said.
She walked up to him, batted her eyes and said: "Hi! I'm Aimee, what's your name?"
He smiled a her tentatively, not sure what to think, and answered: "I'm Tigre, nice to meet you."
"You're really cute!" Aimee exclaimed.
A puzzled look crossed his face, and it hit him: She liked him! He began to blush and she said: "Do you wanna hang
out sometime?"
He looked up and stammered: "S-s-sure, I'd love to!"
"Great! I'll see you later then!" she exclaimed, then kissed him on the cheek and ran back to all her friends where
they giggled profusely.
His namek buddies all clapped him on the back. "She likes you, man!" one said.
Tigre touched his cheek where she kissed him and sighed. A heart appeared over his head; he had fallen in love!
This was a very new thing to the Nameks, but after awhile, many Spectronian girls began dating and marrying into
the Namek race.
(A/N: Another reason I took this out was because I wanted Jesscheaux and Piccolo to be the first 'official'
Spectronian/Namek couple. And it might screw up my sequel in which the first Namektronian is born--half Namek, half
Spectronian--so it's a good thing I took this out and this is why I'm doing this special extra thing anyway, so
you can see it!)
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Okey doke, that's the end for the TSR cut scenes now we're onto TSR Part 2 scenes that were cut. There won't be as
many because I stopped writing TSR2 longhand at the middle of chapter 13. This part was right in the beginning, after
the Gohan and Goten interlude to begin with. I originally wanted this story to lead up to the Tenkaichi Boudakai, but
when I came up with my villain, it didn't fit, so I may end up putting the tournament in "Twisted Fates" the third
installment to my trilogy. On with the show:
At this time, the warriors were all training for the upcoming Tenkaichi Boudakai. It was finally back on (after much
pleading from Goku) (A/N: I don't know what possessed me to think that it was cancelled for a long time....maybe it
was, I really don't know) and they all looked forward to it, even though they might have to fight each other.
Since some of them were training partners, this would be too easy, because they knew each other so well....
(A/N: Did that make any sense? They spar with each other all the time? Why would they care if they have to do
it again? The next part gets worse)
Ok, the judges wouldn't let them fight each other because of this situation. (A/N: What the heck? haha, I'm so silly!
Now onto a cute Brief's family vignette that happens right after this part:)
"Darn it!" growled Vegeta, "That was my big chance to beat up Kakarott!"
"Oh Vegeta," Bulma said, "You can beat him up on your own time."
They heard a noise coming from the kitchen, there was a crash and as they rushed in, the sight that greeted them was
that of a giant mound of pots and pans all over the floor. From underneath a shout was heard: "AAAAAAAHHHHH!"
The pots and pans flew in all directions, nearly missing Vegeta and Bulma.
Little Trunks stood there, his aura glowing, arms outstretched. He was extremely proud of his feat and folded his arms
(much like his father) and smiled.
"That's my boy!" Vegeta exclaimed.
"VEGETA!" Bulma cried as she smacked his arm, "Don't encourage him! Now listen here, Trunks. You're in big trouble!"
Trunks gulped and flew past his parents as fast as possible. Vegeta doubled over in laughter as Bulma chased after
her son.
(A/N: Bwahaha! Awwww that was cute! But looking back, Vegeta would never say: "That's my boy" and 3 year old Trunks
can't go SSJ! heh, actually I have Trunks and Veggie do a high-five later on, but it seemed appropriate at the time.)
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*laughs* Well, it looks like that was the only scene omitted from TSR2 HA HA HA!
Coming next: Spectronian weddings! A story that takes place after TSR in which Jesscheaux and Reyannd demand
proper Spectronian weddings from their spouses. Chi-chi and Bulma become intrigued with Spectronian culture
and demand that Goku and Vegeta do a Spectronian wedding with them also. Things get interesting when Vegeta
and Goku decide to cause trouble. Until next time, JA NE!
