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It was 10 minutes before Suih recovered herself. When she did, her, and her two guardians walked out of the Cloister of Trails, and back into the temple. The priest from before was standing there waiting.
"So," He said with disgust "Did they accept you?" He continued with a hint of doubt.
"Why don't I show you?" Suih said as she stepped into the Summoner's Circle. Mira handed Suih her staff. Suih took it, and brought it in front of her, holding it with both hands. She tilted her head towards the sky, and closed her eyes. An icy wind began to blow around her. It began to solidify into ice, and that's when Suih lowered her head and opened her eyes. She spread her arms, her staff in her left hand. She knelt with one foot tucked under her body, and three huge shards of ice shot into the ground behind her. She ran off to the right side of the ice, and watched.
A silvery body floated slowly down from the sky. It went right into the center piece of ice, and solidified. It was the body of Shiva, the Ice Aeon. She opened her eyes, extended her right hand, and snapped her fingers. The ice around her shattered and everyone stared in awe at the Ice Aeon.
"You…You did it!" The priest exclaimed in utter surprise.
"You bet I did! Guess I was right, huh?" Suih said as she dismissed her new Aeon.
The priest lowered his head. "I admire your determination, Lady…"
"Suiheisan." Ohino finished.
"I grant you permission to proceed in you quest to defeat Sin." As the priest announced this, the monks standing in front of the door parted to let the summoner and her guardians through.
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Suih, Ohino, and Mira had almost gotten through the narrow path leading them to Macalania Woods. They had all grabbed their weapons before heading out. Suih wasn't a normal summoner, as she could do some pretty good damage with the claw she had attached to her right arm. She also carried her staff with her to summon Aeons and to cast defensive magic.Mira was the party's black mage, and she had been training for quite some time, as she already knew two Ra spells. Mira also carried a small dagger with her, in case she needed to physically attack. Ohino was the hard hitter, and could do some major damage with his huge sword. Despite the size of the weapon, it was very light. So Ohino needed to expend more energy to do a massive amount of damage.
Mira wore her light blue hair in a single brain that went down to her thigh. She wore a white shirt that laced up in the front. She had long, tan pants, and black shoes. She wore a tan over coat that flowed freely down to her knees. She wore a necklace around her neck that had a ring on it. Her blue eyes matched the blue of her hair.
They had fought many battles, and they were approaching the open field of ice that lay just before the Travel Agency. As they approached, the sky grew dark, and the ground began to rumble. Suih ran ahead of her guardians, and stopped in the center of the field. She looked up, and her mouth opened.
"Sin!" Ohino shouted as he dove to protect his summoner. He grabbed her, and fell to the ground. Mira also came, but she stood, staring at Sin with fear, and vengeance in her blue eyes.
"Mira!" Suih shouted from under Ohino. "Sin's getting closer!!!" But Mira didn't move. Her gaze was fixed on Sin. Ohino couldn't tell if she was frozen with fear, or just wanted to die. When Sin reached the summoner and guardians standing point, it ripped the ground from beneath them. Suih screamed, and Ohino gripped her tightly as they went fling into the air, followed closely by Mira.
'One day, I'll get you Sin…' Mira thought before blacking out.
'I can't die!! I just became a summoner! Someone!! Help! I don't wanna die yet!' Suih tried to scream, but she couldn't find her voice.
Suddenly, it was all over. Suih could hear the call of seagulls, and the waves of the ocean. She tried to get up, but pain shot through her body, and to her head.
"You shouldn't move." A familiar voice warned her. She opened her eyes to see her male guardian reclining in a chair.
"What happened?" Suih wondered out loud.
"Sin attack. We all blacked out I guess, and Mira still hasn't woken up."
"Mira!" Suih sat up, and quickly scanned the room before giving a small cry of pain, and lay down again.
"We're in Besaid. Just where we were heading." Ohino tried to cheer Suih up, but failed miserably.
"Hand me my staff." Suih reached her hand out, wincing a little. Ohino did as she said, and Suih cast Cure on herself. She gained some of her strength back, and some of her major wounds stopped hurting. She stood up and walked over to Mira. She brought out her staff, and cast Cure. As soon as she did, she shouted, "Mira!!!". No response. She retried this tactic over and over, 10 times to be exact. All of them gave the same result. Suih was now crying, and was about to cast again when Ohino touched her shoulder.
"You're going to exhaust your magic." He said in a gentle voice.
"Mira…" Suih sobbed.
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'Where am I?' Mira thought as she sat up. She looked around, and saw her childhood home in Bevelle.
"Mira! Over here!" A boy with blond hair was waving at her. The boy looked about 17.
"Hashi? Is…that…you?" Mira's eyes widened. She walked towards him.
"I have a present for you." The boy reached behind himself, and pulled out a box. "Happy 16th!" He said as Mira opened the small black box. Her expression changed from confusion, to happy surprise. She looked up from her present, and looked at Hashi, who was now kneeling on the ground.
"Hashi…" Mira managed through forming tears.
"Will you marry me?" Hashi held Mira's hand as he asked.
"…Y-yes!" She was crying tears of joy as her love put the ring on a chain. It was the traditional sign of engagement in their small town outside of Bevelle. Mira put the ring around her neck, and was embraced by Hashi. They shared a passionate kiss. Mira could feel Hashi's warmth travel from her lips, throughout her whole body. She wished they could be with each other forever, and forget Sin existed. He was all Mira wanted in life. And Mira was all he wanted. Suddenly, everything turned black, the ground began to rumble, and Hashi was engulfed in pyreflies. "HASHI!!! DON'T LEAVE ME!!" Mira called out as she tried to grasp the receding pyreflies. An image of Sin flashed, and Mira shook with hatred. She snapped back to reality, and saw Suih being embraced by Ohino.
"Mira!" Suih turned her tear-stained face to the blue haired girl.
"I'm alright…" Mira's face was also tear-stained. The horrible day that brought Mira so much pain could never be forgotten.
