I just checked my e-mail and I got a review from Rikki-the-fox (former
anime-child) so, I guess since this is the first review I've seen since
I've updated so I have noone else to dedicate to but him/her. And thanks
for offereing help.
IF any of you want to help, this is how: Publicize my fic to others.
A month later.
Joey suddenly jumps out of the bed. Its not yet midnight and not yet too late. Not yet too late for any murder. The rain is pouring down. Serenity, startled by it, questions him.
"Hey, where's the fire? Yugi ain't home 'til midnight."
Her lover just tried to put his clothes back on. Serenity continued to talk.
"You know, I don't like you to feel like I'm nagging or anything but its been a month since you said I could meet that maanager guy.I know cause that's the night Mai Valentine plugged her husband and her sister." She looked up at him and still had no response. A shot of fear found its way down to her body. What if Joey was about to leave her?
She went on about Mai.
"You know some people say she caught them doin' 'you know' together. Boy if I found out Yugi was messin around with someone I'd throw him a party." She kneeled over to Joey as he sat on the bed to put his shoes on and kissed his shoulder.
"A big going away party." she laughed a bit at her 'joke'. This time he replied but not the way she wanted him to.
"Its late." He said in a dead tone.
"I've been thinking a lot about my anthem. Whenever I get a really good idea, I
write it down at my diary before it puts off in my head. And you know what's
come to me?
"The other day, that all the really knock-out acts. Have something
more different going on, you know? Like, a signature bread. And I thought my
thing could be a loaf.
" Give them just enough to feel hungry but always leave
them one more.
"Once I get a name for myself. Maybe we can open up a club in
Varum, you know? You could run it, and I could be the headliner?" She talked on and on but he continued to ignore her. She wrapped her arms around him. Well, at least tried to but her pushed her away.
"Get of!" he said rudely.
"What's the big idea?"
"Wake up kiddo, you ain't never gonno have an act."
"Yeah? Says who?"
"Face it, Serenity, you're two big towers with skinny legs and I'm just a furniture salesman." He said while adjusting his tie. Serenity ran to his side not believing all this.
"But you've got conections! You know, that guy down in the club." she said.
"There is no guy."
Serenity froze for second. No guy??? What about her dreams? Her ideas? Was it all a joke? Joey must've read the dumb-founded look on her face so he tried to explain.
"Look, it was the first time I set foot in that joint.I did a bet with the trombone player."
"So, you never told anyone about me?"
"Sugar, you are hot stuff. I would've said anything to get a piece of that." He finished that sentence by slapping her ass.
"So.then, now what?"
"Look, we've had some laughs, sister let's leave it at that."
Serenity tried to pull him back. "You can't do this to me." She said sounding much like a poor puppy. She flung her arms once more around him and this time, he pushed her away more violently.
"Get of me! You touch me again, I'll put you're lights out!"
She was still on the floor at the corner where he pushed her. "Wait." she tried to say in between tears. But he paid no attention. He headed out to the door and told her, "Your husband will be home soon, why don't you watch yourself. And don't get into shit again."
"You're a liar Joey!"
"Yeah, so what?"
"You lied to me."
"Yeah, well that's life sweetheart, that's life."
Serenity stood up and opened a particular drawer in the dresser. She hated him. Hate. Hate. Hate. Her whole self was full of unmistakable hate. How could he lie to her like this? He just used her. That son of a bitch. She pulled the gun out and shot him twice. "You son of a bitch!" she screamed. He fell down to the floor. Dead.
Just now.another murder. Anywhere it would be an actual crime. But this is Domino.
This particular chapter sucks cause I was in such a hurry.
IF any of you want to help, this is how: Publicize my fic to others.
A month later.
Joey suddenly jumps out of the bed. Its not yet midnight and not yet too late. Not yet too late for any murder. The rain is pouring down. Serenity, startled by it, questions him.
"Hey, where's the fire? Yugi ain't home 'til midnight."
Her lover just tried to put his clothes back on. Serenity continued to talk.
"You know, I don't like you to feel like I'm nagging or anything but its been a month since you said I could meet that maanager guy.I know cause that's the night Mai Valentine plugged her husband and her sister." She looked up at him and still had no response. A shot of fear found its way down to her body. What if Joey was about to leave her?
She went on about Mai.
"You know some people say she caught them doin' 'you know' together. Boy if I found out Yugi was messin around with someone I'd throw him a party." She kneeled over to Joey as he sat on the bed to put his shoes on and kissed his shoulder.
"A big going away party." she laughed a bit at her 'joke'. This time he replied but not the way she wanted him to.
"Its late." He said in a dead tone.
"I've been thinking a lot about my anthem. Whenever I get a really good idea, I
write it down at my diary before it puts off in my head. And you know what's
come to me?
"The other day, that all the really knock-out acts. Have something
more different going on, you know? Like, a signature bread. And I thought my
thing could be a loaf.
" Give them just enough to feel hungry but always leave
them one more.
"Once I get a name for myself. Maybe we can open up a club in
Varum, you know? You could run it, and I could be the headliner?" She talked on and on but he continued to ignore her. She wrapped her arms around him. Well, at least tried to but her pushed her away.
"Get of!" he said rudely.
"What's the big idea?"
"Wake up kiddo, you ain't never gonno have an act."
"Yeah? Says who?"
"Face it, Serenity, you're two big towers with skinny legs and I'm just a furniture salesman." He said while adjusting his tie. Serenity ran to his side not believing all this.
"But you've got conections! You know, that guy down in the club." she said.
"There is no guy."
Serenity froze for second. No guy??? What about her dreams? Her ideas? Was it all a joke? Joey must've read the dumb-founded look on her face so he tried to explain.
"Look, it was the first time I set foot in that joint.I did a bet with the trombone player."
"So, you never told anyone about me?"
"Sugar, you are hot stuff. I would've said anything to get a piece of that." He finished that sentence by slapping her ass.
"So.then, now what?"
"Look, we've had some laughs, sister let's leave it at that."
Serenity tried to pull him back. "You can't do this to me." She said sounding much like a poor puppy. She flung her arms once more around him and this time, he pushed her away more violently.
"Get of me! You touch me again, I'll put you're lights out!"
She was still on the floor at the corner where he pushed her. "Wait." she tried to say in between tears. But he paid no attention. He headed out to the door and told her, "Your husband will be home soon, why don't you watch yourself. And don't get into shit again."
"You're a liar Joey!"
"Yeah, so what?"
"You lied to me."
"Yeah, well that's life sweetheart, that's life."
Serenity stood up and opened a particular drawer in the dresser. She hated him. Hate. Hate. Hate. Her whole self was full of unmistakable hate. How could he lie to her like this? He just used her. That son of a bitch. She pulled the gun out and shot him twice. "You son of a bitch!" she screamed. He fell down to the floor. Dead.
Just now.another murder. Anywhere it would be an actual crime. But this is Domino.
This particular chapter sucks cause I was in such a hurry.
