Disclaimer- still don't own yyh….

Author's note- why do you ppl have to review so fast!? Lol just joking…but seriously I had to start writing this two days after I posted the previous chapter!! …I'm getting lazy….better post this before the review number hits 50…

On the other hand, thanks for being such supportive readers!!

Anyway, this fic is going to be a script format at the beginning, then a *very* short reflection in a diary format at the end(so complicated!!)…well, enjoy…

Oh yeah, and I forgot to tell you this contest's in America ^_^ *sweatdrop*

Day ten - Six Flags

Yusuke- so…..early…..

Hiei- *wearing a white T-shirt with a blue collar and those blue stripes on the side of the sleeves* seven a.m. is not that early.

Kurama- if we're only three people why are we taking a charter bus?

Yusuke- don't ask such questions!! Everyone knows a charter bus is a luxury!!! It's got TVs and a VCR, and plush seats, personal lights, controlled air conditioning, and a bathroom!!

Kurama- I guess it's better than an airplane…

Hiei- what, are you afraid of heights?

Kurama- no, I-

Yusuke- nah, I bet it's that whole 9/11 thing that happened here in America.

Kurama- no, I-

Hiei- what 9/11 thing?

Yusuke- some phsyco used an air plane to blow up two tower things *though buildings collapsing is a cool site to see…*

Hiei- so he's afraid we're going to fly into a building?

Kurama- no, I don't want to have to go through all of that security…again…

Yusuke- oh I see…didya know they check your shoes now too?

Hiei- yes, moron, we were already there

Yusuke- I thought Botan flew you over- THE BUS IS HERE!! *plush seats, here I come!*

*at Six Flags*

Yusuke- We're here!! We're here we're here we're here!!

Hiei- what the heck is this?

Kurama- it's called an amusement park

Hiei- this is amusing?!

Yusuke- to me it is!!! Come on, come on, we gotta go on Batwing!!

Kurama- I don't do well on roller-coasters-

Hiei- what the heck is a roller-coaster-

Yusuke- what kind of childhood did you have!?

Hiei- a satisfying childhood, thank you-

Kurama- look, there's a snack store…

Yusuke- rides first, then food

*in front of Batwing*

Kurama- that looks…fast…

Hiei- it looks like a rickety old rod of metal.

Yusuke- why do you always look at the coolest things so pessimistically??

Hiei- …well it does…

*The three try to get on the ride, but*

Ride Usher person (what are they called??)- sorry, you're too young to get on this ride.

Hiei- excuse me?

RUP- you're too young to get on this ride! What are you, nine-

Hiei- I can assure you I'm older than-

Yusuke- he's older than nine! He's…uh….fifteen?

Hiei- Fifteen!?-

RUP- ok then, you can go ahead.

Kurama- I wish I looked nine…*then I wouldn't have to get on the ride*

Yusuke- you can't be telling me you're afraid of roller-coasters!!

Kurama- no, but I always end up throwing up…

Hiei- we have to sit in that?!

Yusuke- stop being a party pooper!

Hiei- seat belts!? In this thing??!!

Kurama- it needs seatbelts……..

Yusuke- I hope it goes FAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA*st*

*Hiei gives Yusuke a glare*

Kurama- it doesn't go upside down, right?

Yusuke- I'm not gonna die, I'm not gonna die…

Hiei- *grinning* this is pretty high, isn't it Yusuke?

Yusuke- n-no, I-I'm fine…it's not high……high………..high………………IS THAT A LOOP!?

Kurama- *looking around* where, where??

Hiei- if only Kuwabara was here…then we could've unbuckled him…hah hah

Kurama- *sweatdrop*

Yusuke- I'm fine, I'm fine, I'm fine *oh god oh god oh god oh god*

Kurama- oh there it is…I thought it would be later on…..*how high are we again??*

Hiei- bunch of saps *closing his eyes in "disapproval"*

*they go on the loop*

Yusuke- *phew* glad that's over!

Kurama- Uh, Yusuke-

Yusuke- that scared the crap outta me (don't tell Kuwabara)

Kurama- Yusuke-

Hiei- now I think we should have unbuckled you-

Kurama- YUSUKE!

Yusuke- WHAT!?

Kurama- look up ahead!!

*There're four loops up ahead (a/n: never actually been on this ride, so I don't have the exact count of loops…)*

Yusuke- ………………*pale faced*

Hiei- when does this end!?

Yusuke- YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!

*when the ride's over…*

Kurama- I think I'm sick…

Yusuke- I'm alive!! Woohoo!!!

Hiei- that was dumb. I want five minutes of my life back.

Yusuke- look, there's a food place…I'm…hungry…

Kurama- *walking out of the nearest bathroom* Where did Yusuke go?

Hiei- to buy food.

Yusuke- Look what I got!! A funnel cake!!

Hiei- a what?

Kurama- a funnel cake?

Yusuke- Yep!! Try some!! *not remembering the horror of day 2*

Kurama- *takes a very small piece and examines it* what kind of food is this again?

Yusuke- dessert, I guess.

Kurama- *after eating the piece* Not bad……*eyes slowly getting wider*

Yusuke- *putting his funnel cake on a table* who has the map? *Hiei gives Yusuke the map* ok, we should go to the water rides next…then we could go to the souvenir shops….where'd Kurama go?

Hiei- *looks away from the map* what was that white stuff on that…thing again?

Yusuke- oh, powdered sugar--oh.

Hiei- you idiot!

Yusuke- I forgot!! Oh no….

Hiei- what now??

Yusuke- he took the rest of the funnel cake…

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*meanwhile…*

*Kurama's doing cartwheels down the path*

Kurama- this is fun!! I wish I had more funnel cake….SUGAR!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!

*spots a candy shop* I've got money!! I can buy candy!! Hah hah!

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Yusuke- if you were a crazed sugar addict with a whole lot of energy, where would you go?

Hiei- far away from this place-

Yusuke- no……a candy shop!! *whips out the map* the closest one is…. Here!! We have to go that way! *points left*

Hiei- up that hill? I'm tired. We can find him later-

Yusuke- but think of what he could do in all that time!! All the destruction!!

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Kurama- thanks!!!!! *runs out of the store*

Store clerk- wait!!! That lollipop only cost two dollars!! You gave me twenty!!

Kurama- fine then….give me all the candy I can buy with that twenty dollars!!

Store clerk- ok……here you go *hands Kurama a bag of eight lollipops* (a/n: you've got to pay tax in amusement parks too…)

Kurama- thanks again!!! *bounds down the path*

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*Yusuke and Hiei have climbed up the hill*

Hiei- I'm not doing that again.

Yusuke- don't worry, we shouldn't have to…is that supposed to be Bugs Bunny?!

*bugs bunny walks up to the two* B.B.- *looking at Hiei* Hello little guy!!

*Hiei looks threateningly at B.B.*

B.B.- not very friendly, are we? Someone needs a hug!

*B.B. moves towards Hiei; Hiei moves to his left and trips B.B., making him roll down the hill*

Yusuke-…you showed him…

Hiei- let's go.

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*Kurama's drank 5 slushies*

Kurama- another, please!

Store clerk- I'm cutting you off, buddy.

Kurama- You can't cut me off!!!

Store clerk- you've had four too many already!!

Kurama- oh come on!!

Store clerk- you're not getting any more from me!

Kurama- FINE!! *walks towards another slushie stand*

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Yusuke- *asking the candy store clerk* did you happen to see a red-haired boy come in here?

Store clerk- yeah, he bought nine lollipops…he a friend of yours?

Hiei- just tell us where he went…

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Kurama- cool!! Another ride!!!

*rides it 5 times* (a/n: I did that with the scrambler in both six flags and kings dominion)

Ride Usher Person- sorry, but we have to let other people on too, you know…

Kurama- awww…..

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Yusuke- have you seen a red-haired boy anywhere?

Slushie store clerk- yeah, he bought five slushies…you know him?

Hiei- where did he go??

SSC- down the road, I think…

Yusuke- man, that guy moves fast…

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*Kurama's sugar rush ends*

Kurama- where am I? *looks at his arm (where he put his bag of what's now three lollipops)* oh no…..

*looks around* I wonder where Yusuke and Hiei are…I think I'm going to be sick…

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Relfections

Hiei- I learned amusement parks are not amusing. I also learned people in costumes roll fast ^_^.

That's all…

Yusuke- I love six flags!!! …oh yeah, eventually we found Kurama in front of a bathroom (well, actually he was running in and out). Hiei gave him some kind of lecture about how if he ever ran off again we'd leave him at Six Flags…Kurama just kept nodding…

Anyway, I learned I don't like loops, chasing someone around Six Flags takes a lot of energy…and that maybe we should try to raise Kurama's sugar tolerance *drat, Kuwabara was right for once*…he can barely eat a banana without getting even a little hyper active….of course it's not as bad as him eating a whole funnel cake and six lollipops…that's all!!!

Kurama- I feel nauseous…I'll never eat funnel cake again…drat, it was actually pretty good…I learned I get sick a lot at amusement parks….

I also learned I need to fix my sugar problem…soon….but until than I'm never going to try anything Yusuke asks me to try.

End of day 10

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