*reads reviews* hey guys thanks to for the great reviews,

Zip: thatÆs a great idea with the language bashing very good idea. Thanks for the words of support.

Siren:*stares at you and backs away* okay please don't point that flamethrower at me.

Irrelevant:*rolls on floor laughing* you have NO life, *looks to everyone* question...is it flaming someone if your writing a comment to someone who gives you "criticism" on your own review page? I mean come on! *back to Irrelevant* do you have anything better to do then read my reviews after you gave your opinion of my story? then comment on something I wrote on MY review page? if you don't like reading Mary Sues that much why did you read chapter two? any way this is the LAST comment I shall be writing about this, please people don't write anything about it either.

Since no one really remember the Rat king, I'm gonna say it now. The Rat king is human, not a rat. He thinks that he's a rat. (if any one want MSN me and I'll send you the episode "Enter the Rat king")





Disclaimer: You all belong to me, you are my Lackeys! *falls over laughing* sorry couldn't help myself. I only own myself.



Warning: language, weirdness MARY SUE

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"Let us out of this cage you freak!" Daydream screamed from inside the cage the Rat King wanna be had threw us in. "I refuse to be bait for anyone."



Ziptango, and I sat around trying think of a way to get out of there. Dancingfae sat, her knee's drawn up, rocking on the floor chanting "The turtles are real, the turtles will save us"(1). Lenni was still out cold when the modern Pied Piper walked up to the cage with a large bowl.



"Care for some Rattatui(2)?" he asked looking at us, ignoring the glare the four of us gave him.



"No, but I know I speak for all of us when I say we would care if you let us out of this damned cage." Zip stood, so did the rest of us. Day backed away from the bars and closer to the three of us. He just chuckled.



"I'm afraid I can't do that," He opened the cage door and walked in setting the bowl on the floor, leaving the door wide open. I noticed this and bolted for the door, not one of the brightest moves I'll admit but hey, you try being captured by someone who controls rats with a musical instrument.



In one swift move, he turned around and grabbed me by my arm, twisting it behind my back. "Now, now my dear it isn't polite to run away from royalty." he whispered in my ear



"Royalty? thatÆs a laugh." I spat.



"You dare talk to the Rat King that way?" he asked turning me around to face him, gripping my shoulders. I winced at how hard he was holding me, The look of anger in his eyes told me that he was able to kill me without a second thought I don't think I have ever been as scared in my life then I did at that moment.



"I-I'm s-s-sorry" I stammered, He just smiled at this.



"Good girl, now why don't you tell me your name." he loosened his grip oh my arms,



"HexAdecimal." I whispered, tears on the verge of falling.



"Well HexAdecimal, do you want to tell me why you and your friends over there..." he nodded to the others, "Were doing in my domain?"



"We were looking for the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles," I began but was interrupted by Ziptango.



"Don't tell him Hex."



"And why shouldn't she?" Asked the King. "She know's that I could kill her if I wished, I really only need one hostage." Zip closed her mouth, He turned his attention back to me. "I apologies for the rude interruption, please continue."



"My friends and I are really big TMNT fans, and we write fan fics about them." Letting go of one shoulders he put a hand up to silence me.



"What is TMNT? and Fan fics?"



"TMNT is Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles, the guys you want to use us as bait for. Fan Fics are Fan Fiction, its stories people write of their favorite shows, movies, books and so on."



He nodded, "Continue." I told him everything, not leaving out any of it. The tears were falling freely by the time I finished. He let go of my shoulders, and handed me his handkerchief. Thanking him I took it and wiped my eyes. He turned and left locking the cage door behind him.



I dropped to my knees and started sobbing. Daydream walked over to me and hugged me as I cried into her shoulder, "Shhh, its okay" She whispered, "We're going to get out of here, I promise."



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Five shadowed figures stood on a roof top, Four facing each other in two lines standing at attention as it they were soldiers, each wielding a different weapon. The other stood off to the side, watching over the others as if He was their commanding officer.



"Eda" The one shouted, when this word left the shadows being the four started attacking and defending the one in front of him. a pair of swords, a bo, a pair of nunchuckus and a pair of sais moved through the air as the owner of the weapon would block an attack from the other.

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"So where are they?" asked Michelangelo. The turtles had finished practicing and were now sitting on the same roof top, Splinter had walked off to a corner to meditate.



"I don't know, its not like they have signs over their head reading 'Ninja turtle fan'" Raphael sighed.



"Lets look at the facts" Don said, which made both Mike and Raph grown. Ignoring his two brothers he went on "fact, in this dimension we are very cool and popular fictional characters created by two guys named Kevin Eastman and Peter Laird." every one nods their head to say yeah, next. "Fact. Krang sent most of our enemies from our dimension to this one so to destroy not only the creators but the hardcore fans."



"Donny we already know this, what we don't know is why." Raph stood, and started pacing.



"Raphael non of us know. All we know is that we need to make sure they stay safe." Leo looked up at his hot headed brother. "so do we know who was sent where?" he said turning back to his brother in purple.



"Well, the Rat King was sent here. Shredder was sent to the UK, and Leather head somewhere in Canada." Don read off of a hand held computer.



"So if the Rat King is here in Manhattan why are we on a roof?" Raph stopped and turned to the rest of his brothers.



"You are on top of a roof because I wanted to see if your skills had lessened here, but they have doubled here. which means so have our enemies." Splinter said as he walked towards his sons.



The four ninja's stood at attention, the moon shining over head giving them a white glow. " I will not be able to help you to defeat this enemy. I ask you all to meditate, for in the morning you shall fight." The turtles nodded and sat down in the lotas position. Taking a few deep breaths they began meditating

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We were all sitting together trying to keep warm. Lenni had woken up a few hours ago and playing twenty questions about what was going on with her all answers being "The sewers, I don't know, you were there, again I don't know" and other answers being on that line. Daydream was now calm again, sitting with us munching on some Pocky that I had in my bookbag, Dancingfea was reading chapter twelve of cat paws that I was writing(3) and correcting the mistakes I made. Ziptango and I were talking about nothing, her slipping in German words now and then me slipping Japanese words in when I couldn't think of what to say in English.



A few brave rats would come into the cage once and a while to see the humans that their king had captured. I try to pet any that came near me, a few would let me others would run away.



"Why are you touching those gross animals?" Lenni asked as I started petting another rat that had come near me.



I shook my head. "Their not gross. Their cute, sweet, intelligent, cute." I said smiling as this one walked had the courage to craw up my leg. I giggled as I picked it up, "Hello," I looked into its red eyes. "Your not like the other ones are you? the others down here have black eyes, but yours are red." it squeaked an answer to me. "ItÆs a shame I don't understand your language, I know you can understand ours."



"Ewww, now she's talking to it." Lenni groaned and inched away from me. I just rolled my eyes



"Ignore her, even though she's eighteen she acts as if she's two, six if itÆs a good day." The rat squeaked again and smiled. "heh, I'm glad you like my sense of humor."



"How do you know it liked your sense of humor Hex?" Daydream asked me as she munched on another stick of Pocky.



"Easy, it smiled." I said setting it back onto the floor.



"How can a rat smile?" asked Lenniluvbrian, I sighed.



"you can see it in their eyes. live every living creature." I stated as I got up, it hurt to sit in one position for a long time.



The Rat king walked up to the cage, Zip noticing how upset I looked got up and walked over to me. "Don't worry Hex, I'm here."



I rubbed my arm where he had held me. "It's okay, I'll be alright as soon as we get out of here." She nodded as we walked back to the others who were now standing.

The Rat King opened the cage door. "HexAdecimal, come here." I shook my head, there was no way in the nine rings of hell I was going to go to him.



"She's not going anywhere. you Geistes Stoss"(3) Zip spat, placing a comforting hand on my shoulder.



"ThatÆs right," Dancingfae stood just a bit in front of me. "You've hurt her once today,"



The King just shook his head and walked in. "HexAdecimal, come with me now or I shall take someone else."



"Then take someone else." Lenni snapped. He kept his eyes on me, taking a step closer to us.



"If I take someone else, they shall not return. If you come with me, they will be safe." It was as if his eyes were peircing into my very soul. I nodded and started walking toward him, only to be pulled back by Ziptango.



"You are not going."



"If I don't he'll hurt you guys, if I go you'll be alright." I said and walked over to him. "Lets go."

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"My subjects tell me that you have been the only one of the girls who have treated them kindly, even though you are being held against your will." he said to me. We were inside a subcar that was made to look like a sitting room, I now had a metal collar around my neck with a chain that was attached to the wall. His "highness" was pacing in front of me



"I don't see why I should treat them bad, they're not the ones who captured us." I was visibly shaking, partly because of fear, the other being it was so cold.



He nodded, "This is true, they also tell me as if you talked to them as if they were your equal." it was my turn to nod.



"Every living creature is equal, just as God made us to be." The Rat king looked confused.



"But you are a human being, and humans believe that they are the better species. Even though this is wrong, the rats are the superior species and humans are meant to serve us." He looked proud as he said the last part. My knowledge of the Rat king was limited to three episodes of Ninja turtles, I remember him actually believing he was a rat and not a human.



I sighed, I wasn't about to tell him he was wrong. "Do you know why I have brought you here?" he asked stopping in front of me. I shook my head. "You are different then the others. I like this difference." he smiled, I didn't like this smile, it was a "You shall bend to my will" smile a smile that was truly evil.



"I'm not so sure I like being different." I gulped, he laughed.



"Oh but I do and that is what truly matters." He placed a hand on my shoulder as he looked down to me. "You know your cute when you are afraid, even if you are someone who has no fur."



"What do you want from me?" my fear was growing, I hated being afraid.



"That is not important." he put his face inches from mine, "What is important is that you know that you shall never be free again." he smiled evilly and laughed as he walked over to a chair and sat down.



That had did it, I was going getting out of here. I just had to think of a way to get out of here, with my friends.



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Ziptango was pacing around the room, LenniluvsBrian slept. Dancingfea and Daydream were now playing cards when his highness brought me back to the others, my face glaring at him the entire time.



"You alright Hex?" Ziptango asked after the man left. Dancingfea and Daydream had stopped their game and were now looking at us.



I shook my head, "No, I'm trapped in a cage with people who write stories about fictional characters, who I'm meeting in person for the first time by a man who should be in a mental institution" I shouted the last part. Lenni on the other hand woke up with a start.



"Guys, your not going to believe the dream.." Lenni looked around realizing where she was, and slumped putting her head in her hand. "never mind." I walked over to her, putting a hand on her shoulder and sat down beside her.



"Don't worry dude, at least your not alone." Another rat had chose this time to walk over to us, I pushed it away from us, but it just walked back to us. I picked it up and looked it in its little black eyes. "Go away, we don't want you near us." I put it away from us and turned back to the group. "were getting out of here, tonight."



"But how?" Dance asked standing up brushing away the dust off of her pants.



"By using what we know about that SOB against him, what do we know?" I asked gathering us together in one corner of the room.

All but Fae shook their heads no, I sighed "Well this Dude is bad news, his weapon of choice is his loyal subjects the rats and Soda can bombs. He is incredible smart, so we can't underestimate him." I rubbed my arm. "He's also strong and fast, as I found out the hard way."



"ThatÆs great, we know his strengths, but this guys doesn't have any weaknesses." Daydream complained. Dancingfae shook her head.



"No, he has a weakness."



"What? his love for cheese?" Lenni asked smiling at her little joke. I groaned,



"Lenni? how in the hell can you be so immature? YouÆre a year younger then me, and you acted as if your fourteen years younger. I mean come on!" I couldnÆt believe it. I had never in my life meet someone who was so childish.



"Well....Well at least I can write!" Lenni shot back. I couldn't help it I laughed.



"Oh my God! how big of a Baka could you be?! this is reality and your still talking about fics."



"I don't like reality! it scares me too much." she looked as if she was about to cry.



I took a breath to try to calm myself down. "It scares the shit out of me." I lifted my sleeves to show the hand mark on my arms. "I'm scared, we all are. I'm sorry for snapping at you, but please see it from my point of view. This guys seems to have taken a liken to me for some reason. either that or he thinks I'm the weakest out of us all. ThatÆs his downfall, I am Strong. we all are, I may look weak but I can take a beating a keep on ticking. Ziptango has her attitude," Zip. "Lenni you have the ability to separate yourself from reality so you can keep going. even though its driving me up the wall." Lenni smiled "Dance, you have your mouth." Dance frowned. "Dude, I've known you for what? thirty four hours? and you seem as if you could talk your way out of anything." I smiled as she and Daydream laughed. "And Day?...Day....I don't know what you have but you have something"



"okay so what? We Use Dancingfae's mouth and your ability to take a beating to fight this guy?" Zip asked, pointing to Fae then to me.



Dance smiled. "ThatÆs it! Ziptango youÆre a Genius." she hugged Zip who looked at me with a confused look. we use what we have. Zip, you have your attitude. and Hex here also has a major attitude,"



"Hey!" I snapped, trying to hide a smile.



"well, its true." Daydream said as Lenni and Zip nodded.



"Anyway, I have an idea" She pulled us closer and whispered her idea.





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Meanwhile in the UK Raphielle was sleeping soundly in front of her computer, when Shredder used his wrist blades to break pick the lock of her house. He walked into the house, seeing the girl sleeping on the keyboard, a little drool at the corner of her mouth.



He leaned over and read what was on the screen. It was the next chapter of a fic she was writing with Ziptango and HexAdecimal. Saki walked to the other rooms of the house. finding only RaphielleÆs sister he walked back to the sleeping girls body.



"Well young girl it looks like your coming with me." he grabbed her mouth to stop her from screaming as he lifted her up. She didn't scream, she kept sleeping. "well it looks like this will be easier then I thought." just then his com-link beeped. he turned it on to find a small brain with eyes and a mouth on the other end.



"Saki, whatÆs taking you so long?" The pink leader from Dimension X asked.



"Don't loose that cute little brain of yours. its all you have Krang." Shredder smiled behind his mask.



"I've changed my mind, Don't destroy The fans. Bring them back, we could use some new slaves." Krang said.



"WhatÆs wrong with the slaves we have already?" Shredder complained.



"Their boring, and for some reason they keep dying." Krang whined.



Shredder rolled his eyes. "well if you fed them once in a while they wouldn't die." Shredder pushed up the girl in his arm. "Open a Portal so I can come home."



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TBC: Dun Dun Dun!



1) *drops to knees in front of Dancingfea* I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry. I was watching Simpsons when I was writing that part and it kinda stuck.



2) the Rat king asked April that in "Enter the Rat King"



3) Its German for Demented ass. (Thanks Zip)



*holds up award* I want to thank everyone who nominated my story for most Realistic. And I really want to thank The people who voted for me, and the reviewers and the people who put me in their stories, if it wasn't for you I wouldn't have started this story. thank you thank you. *cries* you girls are so kind!